It explain better how her power works on other people and how they can digested many times someone.
Thanks I will work on that soon

You are welcome.

New exxplanation of the domino succubis, Iuse some of your explanation Quantum

Domino succubi
Domino succubi are a very rare species of Succubi, their skin are ivory with black spots in all their bodies and large horizontal black line on their belly.They are physically stronger and more endurance than their cousins.

The domino succubi are expert in manipulation of space and time more precisely in bilocation. When they use their powers on themselves, they can multiply themselves allow them to different actions at the same times. They can make another whole version of themselves appear in an open space, or make another set of arms appear sticking out of a wall behind someone. When they use their power on themselves the domino are very vulnerable to surprise attack, even if they have a great physical strenght and how powerfull they can be. If one of her double is hurt or kill the other would be, the more she uses her power, the more dangerous the situation becomes for her. That's why they are always under the protection of another demon.

Domino succubis are very efficient in teleportation and summoning magic, so if they are attacked they can call use the powers coming from the realm of their master or send their opponents to face their master. In general it's very harsh to defeat a demon in his realm.The domino succubi are highly desired, they are in charge of the management of the realm of their master and they serve loyally their current master. To become the master of a domino succubi you have just to kill her current master, that's why a dominos succubis can have different master in their life.

Their power change when they use it on another target than themlseves. When they touch something or someone they can split into different copy for a limited time, each copy experiences everything either of his selves experiences. Unlike when she use her power of herself, however, for whom all of her selves share the same "real" existence, only one can be considered the "real" one. The others are merely clones, that share the physical, mental, and magical traits of the original. All of the clone are still linked, so they all experience the same thing, as long as the "real" one is not destroy. its existence won't end from no matter what happen to the clones. Unfortunately the original remains linked to any of the clones the Domino Succubi "splits" from it, even if she splits a clone into a clone into a clone.

The hell of the dominos

If a domino succubi makes just one copy of her victim, and swallows the copy and she can split the copy to fill up her stomach, the "real" victim is going to experience being digested many times over. However, a copy maintains the state the original (or clone it was copied from) was in at the moment it was copied so a Domino Succubi can't "split" a half-digested person into a fully healthy clone to digest all over again. She would have to copy the original person again, and then swallow the copy to digest it. However, if she swallows the original, and leaves a copy running around outside her stomach, that copy will vanish after the normal duration has expired, or the original dies from being digested; whichever comes first.

What do you think

Very nice explanation, I think it works very well.

gwadahunter2222 wrote:

Domino succubis are very efficient in teleportation and summoning magic, so if they are attacked they can call use the powers coming from the realm of their master or send their opponents to face their master. In general it's very harsh to defeat a demon in his real.The domino succubi are highly desired, they are in charge of the management of the realm of their master and they serve loyally their current master. To become the master of a domino succubi you have just to kill her current master, that's why a dominos succubis can have different master in their life.

I particularly like this part here; it establishes a lot of character, and helps me visualize Domino Succubi as Hell's efficiency experts.

It must come as a rude surprise to those Demon Lords during coups, when someone else is overthrowing them, that their loyal servant doesn't seem to be bothered at all.

"The palace is being overrun! Quickly, <Insert Domino's name here>, to my side! We must flee and regroup, so that we can gather my forces and return to crush the fool who challenged me."

"Excellent plan, my Lord. Unfortunately, I fear I won't be joining you."

"What?! Why not?"

"I estimate with a 95% probability that the majority of your forces will defect, and that you will be defeated."

"What? Those... traitorous filth! When I retake the palace, I'll have them all flayed for their treachery!"

"Very good, sir. I, of course, will always remain absolutely loyal to my Lord."

"Of course, my dear. Loyalty such as yours is a rare thing to come b- wait... you said before that you wouldn't be joining me."

"As you said, sir. I won't be joining you."

"But, whyever not?"

"Because, I'm afraid that in approximately twenty seconds, my new Lord is going to walk through those doors. I, of course, shall welcome her with open arms. For your own sake, it may be best if you fled now. Best of luck with your plan to retake the palace; if you succeed, your loyal servant shall be waiting here for your return."

gwadahunter2222 wrote:

What do you think

I think you did a very good job with this revised explanation.

One suggestion, though, might be to make it so that only Domino Succubi (and Demons who might be "special exceptions") are able to get sustenance from digesting the 'clones'. Otherwise, the Bottomless Pit also known as Menyssan, would just have to become Best Friends Forever with a Domino Succubi and she would be set for the rest of her life for meals. ;D

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Haha nice little conversation between the succubi and her "master" XD

When the succubie separates, do the "clones" have the original personality or does it change into a new one?

By the way great Idea for a succbi!

Do they vist Felarya often?