|
|
| Author | Message |
|---|
Anime-Junkie Great warrior


Posts: 425 Join date: 2007-12-17 Age: 16 Location: The Land
 | Subject: Hunger Demons Fri Sep 25, 2009 6:24 am | |
| Hunger Demons(Also known as Hunger Child, as they normally appear as children) Appearance: There are both make and female Hunger Demons. Females are much more common, as people are more likely to take pity on them. Hunger Demons usually take the form of small children, from about 8 - 13 years of age. However, they have been known to change their form to appear older, although only female Hunger Demons will do this, as a older male is usually seen to be able to fend for himself, but a knights or people with a strong sense of chivalry will easily fall for a lost, pretty teenage girl. Size: human size Hunting Techniques: Hunger demons are, as their name implies, hungry. They are constantly searching for food. They mainly do this by finding and observing a long adventurer or traveler and then being 'found' by them. The traveler takes pity on the 'child' as they seem to be lost and appear to be slightly dirty or ragged. The demon will then ask for food. (If the traveler has none they will have observed this and found another). When their victim has run out of food (which might take days or 1 day, as they will follow their victim, asking for food not constantly, as that might arouse suspicion) they will wait until the victim is asleep, assume their true from (which is very similar to their child/teen form) and eat them. Whole and alive, of course. Some hunger Demons will work with giant predators, the demon being 'found' by a merchant caravan or the like and being taken in. The demon will then wait until the caravan stops at night and cast a sleep spells any sentries before alerting the predator to the buffet, which they share. Some spellcaster predators will summon Hunger Demons for this very purpose. Powers: Hunger Demons have a limited shape-shifting ability, enough to allow then to appear younger or older. However, they will retain certain features no matter what their form, hair colour eye colour and general face and body shape remain constant. Hunger demons also have some spellcasting ability, sleep spells; to put their victim or sentries to sleep Weak confusion/coercion spells; to make their victim to give them more food. _________________
Humans are supposed to be supreme underdogs. They shouldn't have such devices that give them a good chance at survival. - Silent_Eric
Last edited by Anime-Junkie on Fri Sep 25, 2009 2:05 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : making thing more clear) |
|
 | |
FalconJudge Great warrior

Posts: 503 Join date: 2008-11-08 Age: 18
 | Subject: Re: Hunger Demons Fri Sep 25, 2009 8:03 am | |
| Scary. Since I'm a nice guy, these are my natural enemies... I think they fit in... |
|
 | |
Anime-Junkie Great warrior


Posts: 425 Join date: 2007-12-17 Age: 16 Location: The Land
 | Subject: Re: Hunger Demons Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:43 am | |
| | FalconJudge wrote: | Scary. Since I'm a nice guy, these are my natural enemies...
I think they fit in... |
Thanks. I was thinking the same thing as I was creating the idea. I would be easy prey for them. |
|
 | |
DeviantDiscordian Survivor


Posts: 854 Join date: 2009-04-07 Age: 19 Location: Rokkenjima
 | Subject: Re: Hunger Demons Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:12 am | |
| My first thought when I read this was "Lolicon bait" |
|
 | |
Anime-Junkie Great warrior


Posts: 425 Join date: 2007-12-17 Age: 16 Location: The Land
 | Subject: Re: Hunger Demons Fri Sep 25, 2009 11:51 am | |
| | DeviantDiscordian wrote: | | My first thought when I read this was "Lolicon bait" |
It's not my fault if some people are fall victim for reasons other than the "Poor kid, all lost & confused in this dangerous land. Here, have some food..." |
|
 | |
Malahite Cog in the Machine


Posts: 2007 Join date: 2007-12-12 Location: Old World
 | Subject: Re: Hunger Demons Fri Sep 25, 2009 1:38 pm | |
| Little surprised that they can shift from "needing a solitary person to fall asleep before they can eat them" to "eating multiple awake and armed guards". Seems a bit far of a jump. Have access to sleep magic, maybe? _________________ | Commander Fleyitch wrote: | | Ogryns. If we time it just right, the Eldar will all be going "What the..." just when what's left of the Company breaks cover over here and piles into them. No spreading out, no fancy stuff, just smash through. Let's see how those degenerate sophisticates handle a healthy dose of pure unreasoning violence. |
"We die standing." |
|
 | |
Anime-Junkie Great warrior


Posts: 425 Join date: 2007-12-17 Age: 16 Location: The Land
 | Subject: Re: Hunger Demons Fri Sep 25, 2009 2:07 pm | |
| | Malahite wrote: | | Little surprised that they can shift from "needing a solitary person to fall asleep before they can eat them" to "eating multiple awake and armed guards". Seems a bit far of a jump. Have access to sleep magic, maybe? |
They do, it's under 'Powers.'
I didn't make it clear enough that that is how they disable sentries. I also should have mentioned that they will often wait until night to do this. Fixed now, thanks for pointing that out. |
|
 | |
Sillysausage Seasoned adventurer


Posts: 142 Join date: 2009-07-01 Age: 17 Location: Ausfailia
 | Subject: Re: Hunger Demons Sun Sep 27, 2009 12:37 am | |
| Much as I'm partial to the idea of pedos getting what they deserve, I dunno, these guys just don't really stand out to me. Like, eating other creatres is one of Felarya's main points and practically everything does so, these guys just seem like another brick in the wall. |
|
 | |
Silent_eric Great warrior


Posts: 458 Join date: 2008-02-18 Age: 19 Location: Location Location
 | Subject: Re: Hunger Demons Sun Sep 27, 2009 5:03 am | |
| | Sillysausage wrote: | | Much as I'm partial to the idea of pedos getting what they deserve, I dunno, these guys just don't really stand out to me. Like, eating other creatres is one of Felarya's main points and practically everything does so, these guys just seem like another brick in the wall. |
If nothing else, I have to disagree with that. Hell needs more demons than just succubi. Extra demons are always welcome. And demons based on the seven deadly sins are classic. We now have gluttony and lust, and I have one for envy, so 4 to go.
With that said, here are some points I believe would make this a better species.
First, why are these demons at all? What is their connection to Hell? What is their interaction with souls? Surely they don't go only to Felarya right? How would being on another planet effect their hunting habits? What is their hierarchy in Hell? See where I'm going with this? Give us a reason for them to be demons in the first place.
Second, You mentioned male hunger demons. Then said nothing else about them. So how do they feed themselves? Same way? _________________ This Week's Climax! November 3rd, 2009
Forgotten already. It's a Brand New Day, and the Sun is high. All the Fairies sing, that you're gonna die!
|
|
 | |
Anime-Junkie Great warrior


Posts: 425 Join date: 2007-12-17 Age: 16 Location: The Land
 | Subject: Re: Hunger Demons Sun Sep 27, 2009 5:38 am | |
| As always, I appreciate your input Eric. | Silent_eric wrote: | | Sillysausage wrote: | | Much as I'm partial to the idea of pedos getting what they deserve, I dunno, these guys just don't really stand out to me. Like, eating other creatres is one of Felarya's main points and practically everything does so, these guys just seem like another brick in the wall. |
If nothing else, I have to disagree with that. Hell needs more demons than just succubi. Extra demons are always welcome. And demons based on the seven deadly sins are classic. We now have gluttony and lust, and I have one for envy, so 4 to go. |
Agreed, hell isn't populated purely by succubi.
| Silent_Eric wrote: | With that said, here are some points I believe would make this a better species.
First, why are these demons at all? What is their connection to Hell? What is their interaction with souls? Surely they don't go only to Felarya right? How would being on another planet effect their hunting habits? What is their hierarchy in Hell? See where I'm going with this? Give us a reason for them to be demons in the first place. |
Their reason for being demons stems from the inspiration for them. But I see you point, there is no really GOOD reason for them to be demons. But if not demons what would they be? Their unnatural hunger, it's demonic; they can never have enough. Demons are inclined to go after humans, nekos etc. Why? because they are demons. If the hunger demons weren't demons, they would just eat everything, strip every fruit bearing tree and bush.
| Silent_Eric wrote: | Second, You mentioned male hunger demons. Then said nothing else about them. So how do they feed themselves? Same way? |
Everything in 'Hunting Techniques' and 'Powers' applies to both male and female. |
|
 | |
Anime-Junkie Great warrior


Posts: 425 Join date: 2007-12-17 Age: 16 Location: The Land
 | Subject: Re: Hunger Demons Mon Sep 28, 2009 5:50 am | |
| I just realised this is in the wrong forum. This should be in new ideas. Could a mod please move this topic? |
|
 | |
/Fish/ Survivor


Posts: 906 Join date: 2008-05-05 Age: 18 Location: The Stream of Consciousness
 | Subject: Re: Hunger Demons Mon Sep 28, 2009 3:37 pm | |
| | Anime-Junkie wrote: | | I just realised this is in the wrong forum. This should be in new ideas. Could a mod please move this topic? |
Seems like the best section for this to me is right where it is. |
|
 | |
Anime-Junkie Great warrior


Posts: 425 Join date: 2007-12-17 Age: 16 Location: The Land
 | Subject: Re: Hunger Demons Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:57 pm | |
| | /Fish/ wrote: | | Anime-Junkie wrote: | | I just realised this is in the wrong forum. This should be in new ideas. Could a mod please move this topic? |
Seems like the best section for this to me is right where it is. |
This fourm is to flesh out succubi and angels. This isn't a topic on either one. It's a topic on a new race, even though they are demonic, I don't think it belongs here since they aren't a sub-species of Succubus. |
|
 | |
/Fish/ Survivor


Posts: 906 Join date: 2008-05-05 Age: 18 Location: The Stream of Consciousness
 | Subject: Re: Hunger Demons Tue Sep 29, 2009 7:30 pm | |
| | Anime-Junkie wrote: | | /Fish/ wrote: | | Anime-Junkie wrote: | | I just realised this is in the wrong forum. This should be in new ideas. Could a mod please move this topic? |
Seems like the best section for this to me is right where it is. |
This fourm is to flesh out succubi and angels. This isn't a topic on either one. It's a topic on a new race, even though they are demonic, I don't think it belongs here since they aren't a sub-species of Succubus. |
Just think about it as 'angels and demons' sub-forum. |
|
 | |
FalconJudge Great warrior

Posts: 503 Join date: 2008-11-08 Age: 18
 | Subject: Re: Hunger Demons Wed Oct 07, 2009 1:11 am | |
| Also, I just noticed a double-standard: My Narez http://felarya.forumotion.com/new-ideas-f2/the-narez-rabbit-people-t1348.htm say, " It has been noted that they retain a cute, childlike face throughout their entire lifespan." Sombody replied and said that made them "I like this idea! Giving them childlike faces is an interesting idea, really makes them stand out instead of just being nekos with long ears." So... If it's rabbits its cute, if it's demons its pedo? |
|
 | |
|