A reclusive race of Succubi leaving in the gloomiest and creepiest areas of Hell; Phantom Succubi are not very numerous in Hell, or anywhere for that matter. They are quite an oddity among demons for that matter.

<b><u>Appearance</u></b>

Phantom Succubi look like shadowy ghosts of Succubi. They have very dark tones, the most common being gray. This applies for the skin, the hair, and the eyes. This is what they appear for most supernatural creatures such as demons and angels. For mortal creatures, they still retain their Succubus appearance, but the mortal will see the most beautiful creature he will ever see, shaped like a succubus of course. Phantom Succubi are usually 100' tall, but can shrink down to smaller size.

<b><u>Behavior</u></b>

Most Phantom Succubi have psychotic-like behaviors. They are usually playful, but their fun is usually malicious and mean. They are known as trickster demons, as they play usually mean tricks on people, which usually could kill them. They tend to be curious on how other demons react. Since they are often cut-off from other Succubi, they are fascinated by their behavior. Phantom Succubi are very unpredictable and twisted. Oddly enough, they come out more often on a particular day that happens every year on a remote and unimportant planet called Earth.

<b><u>Abilities</u></b>

All Phantom Succubi and Phantom Demons for that matter are masters of illusions. Their illusions are so real it can actually harm and kill people with them. For mortals, getting through is all but impossible. Their illusions can range from changing the landscape, disrupting senses, summoning creatures and stuff, cloning, etc. For supernatural beings, breaking through the illusions is difficult, but very possible. Simply thinking of something other than it can work. By using their illusions, they can alter their appearance for everyone else who sees them, including supernatural beings.

They can become semi-tangible, as well as fully solid. When semi-tangible, they gain some limited size-shifting abilities, mainly to stretch and extend their limbs to incredible length like rubber, move their body and facial features all around their body, and create/remove limbs on their body. They can stretch and swallow things that are about their size in that form, but the major problem is that they are entirely hollow when semi-tangible. They possess no organs in that form, thus can't digest anything. Some Phantom Succubi can turn solid after ingesting something when semi-tangible and digest it. But, very few can do that after vigorous training.

They have a huge weakness, which is their weak physical attributes. For demons, they possess very poor stamina, strength, agility, speed, senses, and durability. They also have weak resistance against magic themselves.



I made that a while back, but now I'm looking for brainstorming to make them even more up the standards of quality.

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Ah, okay. The HTML brackets make sense now. Anyways, thoughts incoming.

I was also thinking of giving them the ability of becoming intangible, just like a ghost. Except it's in that form they are the weakest against magic, and can't really physically interact with solid objects.

I think I have a little explanation to flesh your race.

The phantom succubis, are very rare and odd specie. They very tall specie, 100 ft.
The phantom succubis posses a phase-shift like ability, allowing her to be semi-tangible.
Where she is semi tangible she can shape her body at her will and giving the shape she wants, a smaller form of herself,altering her limb or take the the form of living being or inanimate objects. She can make her new shape tangible, to make it more real. That's why is difficult to recognize a phantom succubis when she shape shift herself. Due to the nature of her body the phantasm succubi are very weak against magic.

I try to link the different abilities you want to give her to make them more unique

What do you think

Yeah, illusion, phase-shifting, and shape-shifting is what I'm talking about.

I think I have understand your problem when you create a creature an OC.
You gives many abilities but they are vague and don't have any realtion with each other. In clear all the abilities are independant and look generic or if you try to link in a theme or concept they will look more natural

They are based on ghost like creatures. Some kind of demon specter.

Hence why I brought them back here so we flesh them out more.

How attached are you to the shapeshifting part? If it's not vital to the concept, I would recommend taking it out.

The main two reasons are because it's somewhat unrelated to the other powers (illusion, and intangibility); it kind of appears to be something extra that was added on, rather than something the concept it built around.

The other reason is that since they are extremely powerful illusionists, they can pretty much look like whatever they want; they don't need to physically shapeshift to change their appearance. As far as they're concerned, illusion might be more important than reality, because they have control over illusion.

A party in their area of Hell might be more about the way you appear to be dressed than the way you are actually dressed. Social status among them might revolve around who can create the most creative, realistic, frightening, etc. illusions. Am I making sense? I hope I am; I'm trying to give you some ideas you might find interesting and want to work with.

I thought of giving them shape-shifting, limited only by the shape. Kind of like their body is made of rubber. Only work when semi-tangible.

That works.