Name: Jason Rejonn

kown as : monster, tooth fairy (a little girl called me that and i have no clue of why she called me that lol),and even the boogy man somtimes

history:
1st phase he got when he was 6 years old
2nd phase he got when he was 9 years old
3rd phase he got when he was 10 years old but before he got it he had to enduer 4 moths after his 10th birthday of bad skin rash casses where unknown
4th phase he got when he was 13 years old but the samething happen to him when he got his 3rd phase but this skin rash was very bad that he was hospitaliz for 6 months
5th phase well he had two parts of it first he had mudsloth a slow but fast liquide creature he got that when he was 14. but mudsloth was destroyed in battle by some pyro creature but he didn't died mudsloth was actualy a larva stat for his real 5th phase he got that when he was 15

Age: 15

Gender:male

Rank: hes alone no one wan't to be around him

Species: hes a Demensional Creater

parints:he lives in a foster care his real parent unknown

Siblings: Unkown

Clan:unknown

status:Marryed(Me and Arcide are marryed to the same girl becouse i like variaty)

Power:Level 1 is called "revers sheild"-he has lines poping out of his body. the level one ability is to revers any attack right back at the opponets 10x stronger.

level 2 is called "doc-beast"-the line dispear and reapear around him taking the shap of any animal he wants.its the same thing as the first one but it dosen't repell it block it and also the line around him repriesents the bone that could brake.when one of the lines crack his bones crack when his it brakes his actual bones brake.

level 3 is called "winged-swordman"-his skine turns compleatly black but white lines comes up. Then 4 spikes come out of his back since the spikes are like a glider he can fly through the air and water. but the 2 lower spikes can be form to a boomerange so he can activate his altumat attack "slicing-wind"-he throughs the boomerrang while its been thrown he can control he can use the wind as a blade to slice 50 people in have with 1 swing of his boomerang or with the wind.

level 4 is called "Crafts-man"-looks like the same thing but except he dosen't have the spike but he gets black angel wings and the ability to make anything to a weapon of his chooce or he can take your weapon instead and use its ability aginst his opponet.

level 5 it dosn't have a name so its a new one-(the skin turns right back to narmal and there are no lines and there is no chang in collor in his skin. But her dose get metel wing her dosn't very fast but his wing woks as a big shield aginst anything. But his skin isn't harder then rock or steel but he uses his wings as a shield.he is able to use manna as a weapon and even use manna to recover him self and even collect manna to usa low beem is more like a punch in a distance but up closs its able to insinerat half of your body.and a high beem he has to collect even more manna to use it but this time its not like a punch its a energy gun but he dosn't have to get clost to you he can be 5000 mille and use that and get hit it will do some magor dammage.)

what he realy looks like before he activates his powers: he have short white hair,he has a 6 pack he also haves a birth mark of somkind of wing everyone dosen't realy know how he got it but he got it.Hes body is over heated then everyone even if its 50 degree he still wears short and shirt. but when it cold unof he wears a black leather cought (its a thing cought so making shur you don't think he wears a heavy cought) hes somewhat skinie.

weekness?:His weekness is magic like spells, sorcery,and he has also week points in the armer in level 3,and4

weapons: in third mode he has 2 big boomerrangs. in fourth phase her can make any weapons he wants at anytime mostly. in his final form in fith phase he can summun up manna from every person,plant,animal,ect to make his high and low been to fire at other people but he can also use the manna to form sorwds and ect but no fire arms her can mak only solid weapons not on that can fire bollets.and also finaly he can use his metal wings as a shield and also use them to cut people open

((Moved to Character Discussion))

I hope this is just a joke, because looking at it made my eyes melt out of my face.

Argh.... Oh boy, this needs a loooot of work.

For a start, I'd suggest typing it up in MS Word. That has a spell check, and this -really- needs it. I honestly don't think there is a single sentance in here that doesn't have at least one typo. That really effects the impression you get of a story or character. I've certainly had plenty of stories ruined for me because the authors were too lazy to type properly.

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History:he gain his powers by growing up.

Well... as well as having way more power than a single character has the right to have, how the hell does this work? You should tone down his powers so other characters have a fighting chance, and provide a reasonable explanation for them.

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Personality or Character traits:His pesinality is normal but what he dose is out of the ordinary he was the smartis kid in the school when he was in elimintry.He was even samarter then the high schoolers when he was 7 years old then he stop being smart and became an ardinary kid but still samart as ever

And I... I don't even know where to begin here. His personality is normal? What exactly is that? Does he care about his friends, is he vain, selfish, naive, pervy, what? You can't just have a 'normal' personality, I don't even know what that would be like. You really need to elaborate on that.

Starting off small, I'm going to suggest two things:

First: Try to put some grammar or spell-check into your post. Semi-literacy is tolerable, especially if english is not your first language. The first profile for the most part is understandable, but at some points in the second you bring stuff up that's irrelevant or the spelling gets worse.

Second: Try to limit the powers some, would you kindly? The first character's first power is enough to make him unconquerable by hostile intent - and if I had to guess about his physical capabilities, I'd assume something like a Punji Pit would pose no danger to him unless maybe thrown on it. When asleep. And bound.

They could work, the profiles, but work will need to be done.

On first looking at this, I wonder if this wasn't accidently posted on the wrong forum...

Regardless... Yeah. This is the worst spelt thing I have ever seen in my life. This goes beyond mistake typos into the realm of just... and you repeat them.. I'll actually stop here because maybe you have some sort of disability with this.

And...I don't really care about his powers. I barely know what he looks like, or what he's like at all. This is powers with a character attached. Not a character with powers even.