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PostSubject: Continue the story.   Fri Oct 23, 2009 8:04 am

Like the title says I challenge readers to continue the story the next post must include the last and they must not be as long as the first I shall start the only limitation is that jenny must not die you can have others eaten but not Jenny as she is one of the main charectors.

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The forest, the forest held many mysteries because all who entered them never returned and that was the biggest mystery of all where had all the people gone?

That was a mystery Jenny was going to find out, she put on her uniform tying her blonde hair back in a bun before she stepped out into the forest the sun shining down on her creamy white skin.

Jenny smiled confident that she would discover the mystery began to walk through the forest, enjoying the feeling of the grass beneath her feet.

She had been walking for a while now and the village was out of sight, Jenny was getting hungry so she decided that it would be best if she had a sit down and enjoyed the lunch she had packed for herself, Jenny soon found herself a nice log to sit down on, one that over looked a beutifull lake, once setteled Jenny began her meal.
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PostSubject: Re: Continue the story.   Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:21 pm

After eating, Jenny sighed and sat back a little. Everything appeared normal, normal forest, normal lake...

She got up and continued walking for a while. After about 30 minutes, she at last noticed something unusual: The trees directly ahead of her had skyrocketed in size! taking a closer look, then a look into the sky, she noticed that the trees had no visible tops, they just vanished at a certain point, like her vision was being blocked by the entrance to a cave.

Going closer, she realized it was more cave-like than she thought! Near the place where the large treeline started, the grass and undergrowth changed in an almost tangeable line in the ground, seperated by color and composition. It was as if something had just... replaced one part of the forest with a completely new patch of land.

Following the line marking the soil differences, she found that there was an end to it about 20 meters away. Going a little past the line, she noticed that the big trees had disappeared,blocked again, like the tops, by a wall of normal air and forest. Jenny had figured out by now that this was definately the cause of the dissappearences, and investigated pat the line and in to the area with the enlarged trees. She had the sensation of entering some kind of cave... Yet when she looked up once on the other side, saw patches of the sky! Between the leaves in the canopy formed by the giant trees above, anyways, which she could now see perfectly well. She immediately felt... something, something odd about the place. Her head was suddenly a bit clearer, as if something in the atmosphere had fundamentaly changed.

Her feet moved to turn her around. After all, she could tell that this place was somehow not natural, perhaps she should get the others to help investigate- Jenny stopped. The dirt line was gone. The normal trees were gone. The view of the lake was gone.

She heard a noise behind her.

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This WAS meant to be a Felaryan stroy, right Giantessfan?

Also, is English your primary language?

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PostSubject: Re: Continue the story.   Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:13 pm

(of course this is a felarya story and english is my main language)
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PostSubject: Re: Continue the story.   Fri Oct 23, 2009 5:50 pm

(Because, uh, you might want to double-check your writing... it can get kinda hard to read, with the nonexistant/misplaced caommas and periods, and the butchered sentence structure. Just constructive criticism, really!!)

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PostSubject: Re: Continue the story.   Sun Oct 25, 2009 1:58 pm

Jenny turned around to face the source of the noise, but she could not see anything there. Then she saw it, as the creature emerged from nearby bushes, Jneny noticed that this creature had a humanoid shape, but this person had cat like ears. The creature watched her closely, Jenny could tell that he was a big strong man, she could tell that he was male as he was naked and she could see his lower region's clearly, but what scared Jenny about the man was the lustfull look he had in his eyes.

Jenny got scared, she turned to run and as she did was knocked to the ground by the cat-man, she squirmed "get off me!" she yells to the cat man and then let's out a terrified scream as she feels him pull down her shorts to her ankles, then Jenny felt the man tug down her panties and turn her over so that she was face down in the ground.
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PostSubject: Re: Continue the story.   Sun Oct 25, 2009 8:50 pm

*IN PROGRESS*


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PostSubject: Re: Continue the story.   Mon Oct 26, 2009 12:27 am

(1. The Neko was normal size and was raping her. 2. It's been established that she is in a forest. 3. Most Nekos are human-sized, and she is human.)

(Also Giantessfan, thank you.)

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PostSubject: Re: Continue the story.   Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:58 pm

FalconJudge wrote:
(1. The Neko was normal size and was raping her. 2. It's been established that she is in a forest. 3. Most Nekos are human-sized, and she is human.)

(Also Giantessfan, thank you.)


Oops sorry I thought it was a mutant neko. I'll edit it to make it a bit more on topic.
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PostSubject: Re: Continue the story.   Tue Oct 27, 2009 5:08 am

(Sorry...)

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PostSubject: Re: Continue the story.   Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:44 pm

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(Also Giantessfan, thank you.)


Thank you? for what?
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