It's posted!

6th chapter of Siva Stories: PANDEMONIUM

http://zoekin.deviantart.com/art/Pandemonium-119628567

Epic fight, and lots of copyright infrangement for Azrah, Siva and Quetzal!

i think that this story was fantastic cant wait for next.

Siva's worsening condition (necessary to fully understand the next chapters)

I quote Siva's mental words:
"It's happening again, alwais when I sleep,
Right after crossing the line
I dream to fall, for a time that seems eternal.
Then I'm there.
Where my soul is.
Where I face the others."

Siva's soul shrine

Siva would never admit she has direct contact and interacts with her others sides, Ripper and Beast here, it's her secret, and even if willing, Ripper prevents her to talk about it interfering in her mind.
It happens often when she sleeps, her primary personality dives deep inside to a strange place, with the appearance of an immense, dark cave, with walls infected by organic matter. Here and there, eyes and fangs pop up from the living flesh randomly.
The only source of light is this humongous statue on an elevated disc platform, which face resembles Sivas appearance. The statue, symbol of her soul, is partially covered by the flesh, indicating the worsening condition of her mind state and indicating the overwhelming will of "Beast"

Here is a picture of how the shrine should look like



Originally Ripper didn't exist. In the beginning, from Almeshian facts on, there were just Siva and Beast, there was nothing to be referred as Ripper.
Ripper, as said, was "born" during the years of sealing in the Ascarlin caves.
Actually, he/she's the succeeded will of beast to be self-conscious, so he stole Siva's knowledge and communication capability and the "Ripper" personality was created. Slowly the overthrow process against the entity "Original Siva" is growing, letting her fall every time easily into the berserk state so common when "Beast" is in charge.

(self-made question)
Then, how did she resist for so long into the cave, without passing the line and letting Beast take control?

It was because of Cassandra's godly seal. Actually, the "minion" meant in the third chapter, since the seal it's governed and kept functioning by a spiritual entity. Though that girl is really a bitch, unaware of Siva's real condition has made a good thing that granted Siva's survival, for she has placed a seal that limited Siva's potential. Every time she became beast, and tried to bring down the cave walls to get out, the seal was sending a blast of energy inside, where Siva was. As already explained, if phisically knocked down in the first minutes of berserk state, Beast personality is momentarily annihilated and Siva's body falls unconscious.
So Quetzal, breaking the seal, has unleashed this real peril around Felarya.

Kinassiahn deities, more clarifications

Hah-hem.
Since I don't want to look like one of those who create just uber-powerful stuff (that wasn't my intention) I decided to clarify a little the condition of the Gods I refer of in Siva stories...

Here is what was in my mind originally, tell me what do you think guys. There's even some bonus info about their magic.

Kinassiahn deities, like the pure demi-godling Quetzal, her father, Dios Tykos, and the demi-godlings affiliated to "Death" organization, are basicly not that powerful. Compared to Felaryan standards (the guardians) they're surely ridiculous. Talking about the pure demi-godlings, could be compared to A level mages, with the only difference that they have direct connection with the power of nature or source of magic they use, so they don't need to use any elemental evocation formula nor channel the elemental powers. They don't "cast" the spells, they "are" the spells.
The standard for the gods of the universe/dimension that originated them was kinda low because a lack of spiritual energy, caused by its uniformed distension in all the upsaid universe, without particular concentrations.
Pure Kinassiahn gods are just a little different, because they mastered the art of immortality, but even so, with a weakpoint: the ban from existence could dismember them into the outstanding chaotic currents outside of the multiverse (that's what Azrah tried to do in "Deaths: Ascent and Fall" special chapter, but due to his lack of potential, he epicly failed, starting the persecution of Deaths). A real completed God from another, more spiritually charged, universe system, could keep itself alive, though he couldn't come back with his own strenght from that condition.

It' s beautiful ! I think you are improving in every single aspects of drawing
And the idea is definitely interesting ^_^

Re-post of the Quetzal Bio I've posted just earlier on DeviantArt.

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°°ooOO++ QUETZAL BIO ++OOoo°°

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Complete Name: Quetzal Tykos (Manniskans)
Race: Kinassiahn storm demi-god
Element: thunder
Origin / Birthplace: parallel dimension 423, planet "Elevia". Born from a human woman (Renee Manniskans)
Height: 80"
Age: 1521 human years
Hair: short, light blonde
Eyes: azure.
Tail/frontal scales: Grass green tail, pale yellow scales
Likes: Siva (as a little sister in need of her protection), Vore human beings (doesn't like the taste and sensation given by nekos or other races), her element.
Dislikes / Hates: Cassandra, Azrah (before knowing the real events that happened to him from Almeshia to Kinassiah), unneeded bad acts, Beast (the source of Siva's mental problems), vulgarity.
BWH: in her old gone human form, 87-65-92. Same in Naga form, obviously proportioned
Living on: after discovering her divine origin, she lived mostly on Kinassiah with her godly father, Dios Tykos. She travelled on lots of planets and different dimensions. Now she established herself on Felarya, on Ascarlin mountains peaks, with Siva.

+++STORY+++

Past: from 1521 human years ago to (+ - ) 800 years ago

- Quetzal was born from the union of the God "Dios Tykos" and a human woman named "Renee Manniskans" on a far away medium-level fantasy based world, on a little village near to the sea. obviously, this planet was one of those under the influence of the Kinassiah. Her first years were peaceful, even though she didn't knew her father, but she already knew naturally that she was kinda different from the others. Countless times she gave proof of her innate magic powers, originally during the night when she was still a baby, little thundering light spheres (alike globular lightnings) floated around her bed. Quetzal, in her human life, was a heartful and cute girl, a trustful person and a fierce hater of evil acts.
Her mother, a poor shop owner, when Quetzal reached the age of 10, has sent (actually, selled her to keep on feet her activity) to the nearest magic academy, where Quetzal has lived all her remaining time as a human being, studying and applying every thunder magic formula known on that place. That time, she noticed that she was able to cast many of those spells even without speaking, or thinking,and without almost consumption of her magic potential... but kept it smartly secret, to not show herself even more different than how she was.
At the age of 17 years old, a huge war menaced to burn down all the nation, elvish barbaric hordes (on this planet - elves were the naturally violent race, alike orcs in many other worlds) were getting closer every day, burning the villages, raping, killing and leaving just ashes behind.
Even the students from the magic academy were mobilitated, and during the violent battle, seeing every of her friends fall, slayed by the arrows and axes of elves, the poor Quetzal, until that moment refusing every kind of violence even though her was an offensive element, had the worst emotional breakdown of her life.
This event caused her to unleash immediately every still of thunder magic sealed into her godly soul (during this exceptional condition, the amount of energy unleashed was like the cast of a hundred "Tempesta" spells, burning everything around her in a gigantic electric sphere 1 km-wide)
The sudden awakening of her godly powers revealed even her true form, half-way phisical and ethereal. The one so well-known of a beautiful, winged giant Naga.
The shock erased istantly every memory from her (the awakening process was meant to do that from the beginning) and she started hearing the call of the Kinassiah and her father, who, noticed her awakening as a godling, opened a portal in the sky over the battlefield. Following the call, Quetzal ascended in the light of million sparkles and disappeared from Elevia planet forever.

- From there on, she lived as a carefree and gentle goddess, even if her father Tykos trained her to be the most powerful Kinassiahn storm entity. Seeing her as a failure as a deity of such violent element, stopped her training almost at 70% but kept her with him anyway, for he became really affectionate and caring about her.
She was given the chance to travel through dimensions from her 300th birthday (referred to the day of her ascension, so that makes actually 317 years and a half) and flied freely from a place to another, fulfilling her curiosity about every kind of thing into many places. The first time she came to Felarya, a little more than 1000 years ago, was to study the Nagas, beings with a body so similar to hers, and learn more about them. She became really close with a giant Naga called "Irya", a really strong who taught her how to use properly her body, accept the violent side of her powers, hunt, and made her take the habit to vore, even if she has not such problems like hunger due to her nature. She enjoyed quite the feeling of little beings going down her throat alive, just to be dismembered and digested by thundering strikes in her electrified stomach (actually, most of those where ancestors of Nergavians).
Irya died heroically 700 years ago in a great battle against a dridder tribe, more than 100 years after Quetzal was gone back on Kinassiah again, this time, ready to fulfill her duty as a deity and make her father proud of her.

Recent past: from (+ -) 800 years ago to her appearance in Siva stories

- Until the rebellion of Cassandra Quetzal worked under her father's guidance as a Storm Goddess.

- Quetzal faced the events of the overthrow plans of Cassandra and her attack at the gods in first line, with her father. She was into the battle that wiped away most of one of the cities of northern Kinassiah, against the Death organization betrayers (like Azrah and Cassandra) who lost the battle. After this event, Gods started a huge repression and a control plan against the mostly innocent and unaware other Deaths, that have been pratically enslaved and now work costantly controlled by the Kinassiahn authority, and are severely punished, many even banned from existence, at every minimal indipendent act.
Quetzal firmly tried to oppose this decision from the beginning, such fierce repression was unneeded and would have bringed just more anger for the Gods into Deaths, but her enraged father didn't hear her advices.

- Quetzal came back on Felarya, after so much time, to take a break from her exhausting "work" as a storm goddess in many planets under Kinassiahn influence, and percepted the godly seal casted by Cassandra to imprison Siva, on the peaks of Ascarlin mountains... and so another important, vital part of her life began.

so basically siva has a multiple personality disorder which is cause by 3 things stress, lonelyness and amnesia

then best solution to control siva's power would be to seal the beast in a manner similar to the nine tailed fox

I finally got to reading Pandemonium, and I must say it's a wonderful chapter. Really loved it.

And I agree with the others. You are indeed proffessional level writer/artist.

when the seal of the nine tailed fox was made it used the demons own power to seal it and allows the host to tap into this power but only under certain circumstances it seems your study on the seal was not thorough enough which would allow this type of seal to work

also I have some unique ideas for future chapters