The history of a protector - Jade

Ravana3k · Subject: The history of a protector - Jade Sun Oct 25, 2009 8:11 pm

For everybody who wants to learn more about the most protective giantess in Felarya ( the lovely Lady here: http://karbo.deviantart.com/art/Jade-the-giantess-135684490 ) just follow the link to read the most important story of my character Jade Smile

http://ravana3k.deviantart.com/gallery/#Jade

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Der Mond ist rot vom Sternenblut
Und auch in mir ist Fieberglut
Es glüht das ganze Firmament
Das kommt weil meine Seele brennt

Stabs · Newbie adventurer Posts: 70 Join date: 2009-10-15

I'll download this and read it, thoroughly, I promise. Sounds interesting...

Stabs · Newbie adventurer Posts: 70 Join date: 2009-10-15

I've read through your entire gallery, Ravana3k... and there's my feedback.

-You're probably self-aware about spelling and grammar, so not that.

-I've got no idea why Jade wins against anything else, frankly... you need to add something beyond suggesting that she works out a lot.

-Everything else's A-Ok.

Archmage_Bael · Subject: Re: The history of a protector - Jade Fri Oct 30, 2009 7:51 pm

this is weird. my sister is named jade. and she also has brown hair. and is protective. >.<

EliteCreature · Subject: sad Fri Nov 06, 2009 8:51 am

powerfulgiantess...with a brutally sad past... Crying or Very sad

these are good stories