darkoscorpio: the dark terror

darkoscoprio are demons of unknown origin. the locations they live in are jungle of perils,miragia forest,dridder forest,and pyrale mountians. knowone knows where they came from. this species is highly dangerous,one bite can kill you in minutes. there stingers have been modified into razors for tearing through dense jungle growth. with no natural predators,this species has 4 legs witch are actualy 8 legs fused together in evolution. this species is highly dangerous not because of their venom,but because of their stealth,intelegence,and speed. they can run as fast as a automobile and are as smart as dolphins.once you are spotted by a darkoscorpio, there is nowhere to run or hide,you will just get mauled to death by a darkoscorpio. the reason why they arent overrun in felarya is because they only breeed in their larval stage when they are on the bottom of the food chain at that time.

heres a picture http://john-the-ant.deviantart.com/#/d30p79z

Why are they so smart? Doesn't seem very necessary given their other formidable features. Also why do they lack natural predators? Finally, exactly how big are these and what makes them demons?

P.S. I doubt evolution works with demons.

Jasconius wrote:

Why are they so smart? Doesn't seem very necessary given their other formidable features. Also why do they lack natural predators? Finally, exactly how big are these and what makes them demons?

P.S. I doubt evolution works with demons.

well the ones on planet centaurea (a planet me and my friends made up in school.) there the size of raptors. but on felarya they are as big as tonorians. they are called demons ny some of the tribes pf felarya. even though there just one of the many felaryan species. they lack natural predators because they attack in packs. (between you and me dude the felarya group denies my crappy deviations although my friends orcasnack garth and karbo like some of them).

Ok so if they have no natural predators why haven't they over run Felarya? If there is no natural control to their population why aren't we seeing them everywhere?

If you want to improve the quality of your work I'd anwser these questions. For example is their birth rate incredibly low, are their life spans very short? If so, you need to tell us this in the orignial entry otherwise we'll just call them over powered and move on.

Also don't bother trying to throw digs at the community if your work isn't being accepted, if anything it is counter-productive.

CauldronBorn24 wrote:

Ok so if they have no natural predators why haven't they over run Felarya? If there is no natural control to their population why aren't we seeing them everywhere?

If you want to improve the quality of your work I'd anwser these questions. For example is their birth rate incredibly low, are their life spans very short? If so, you need to tell us this in the orignial entry otherwise we'll just call them over powered and move on.

Also don't bother trying to throw digs at the community if your work isn't being accepted, if anything it is counter-productive.

ok thanks for the tip

This is a pretty cool concept, I would work on the name a bit though.. Maybe you could name it after where they were first discovered? Something a little more original perhaps. Anyway, thanks for sharing your idea!

The Rev wrote:

This is a pretty cool concept, I would work on the name a bit though.. Maybe you could name it after where they were first discovered? Something a little more original perhaps. Anyway, thanks for sharing your idea!

thanks