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I've not had alot of time to read through it but so far I really like it
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PostSubject: Re: Aurora's Story   Aurora's Story - Page 2 Icon_minitimeTue May 17, 2011 9:44 am

Part 46 - 50




Part 46




I slowly slithered back where I left Seliky and Jewlia when I went to go comfort Hitomi…I am still worried about Hitomi…she seems a little more calm but still…she’s very hurt inside and the pain is going to stay in there for a while…I really hope she will be ok…I really do…I looked up seeing Jewlia’s green eyes gazing down at me…in her arm was little Seliky crawling across it playfully…like she was exploring Jewlia’s body or something of that sort…
“So…How did it go?...” Jewlia asked me with a concerned look on her face…I sighed and covered my arm where Hitomi slashed me…
“…Well I calmed her down…but she is still really upset…” I mumbled…Hitomi patted me on the head and smiled…
“Well at least you helped her feel better…even it is just a tiny bit…” Jewlia said…I knew she was trying to make me feel a little better…
“Yeah…but…she still looks so hurt up…so beaten up inside…” I mumbled…
“Hey…if the worse happens…we can always offer Seliky to her…that’ll sure make her feel better…” Jewlia laughed…Seliky jumped up….
“Wha wha what?...No way…I don’t want to be her dinner!...” Seliky cried out…Jewlia giggled and patted Seliky on the head with her forefinger.
“I was only joking dear…we wouldn’t do that…” Jewlia told her…Seliky sighed in relief which was actually adorable to watch…
“Phew…that’s good…” Seliky said quietly…I smiled a little…this made me feel a tiny bit better…I then heard a few footsteps from my side…I turned to see Hitomi slowly walking into the area with her hands behind her back and her head hunched down…I could tell she has been crying…
“Hi Hitomi…ar…are you feeling any better?...” I said softly…Hitomi nodded her head slowly and looked up at me…
“I’m…fine…” she mumbled…she moved up to me and took me into a hug.. “Thank you…”…now I was speechless…the only thing that I though I should do was stroked her back gently as Hitomi cried against my shoulder…
“I’m…so…sorry…” she said…burying her face against my chest...felt awkward but I dealt with it…
“It’s ok…it’s ok…” I told her…Hitomi released me and looked over to Jewlia and Seliky…who looked as if they were in surprised by the display…Hitomi smiled a tiny bit…but then she looked back down at the floor…
“Aurora…Jewlia…I…I’m sorry I attacked you guys…I…I know you were only trying to help…me…...I...I was acting impulsively…” Hitomi mumbled…
“Ooh “Impulsively”…starting higher vocabulary I see…” Seliky laughed…
“Hush it tiny or I’ll have albino for lunch!…” Hitomi yelled…Seliky laughed…
“Yep…Hitomi is becoming herself again…” Seliky said while she giggled…Jewlia smiled and took Hitomi into a hug…glad it wasn’t me this time…
“Awwww…it’s ok Hitomi I’m not mad…” Jewlia said out…
“You’re…crushing me!...” Hitomi cried out….I giggled a little as Jewlia placed Hitomi down gently…
“Sorry…I couldn’t help it…” Jewlia said while blushing…
“You might want to go see a shrink for hat…” Seliky said giggling…
“Shrink?…I don’t want to shrink…” Jewlia replied with a confused look on her face…
“Ugh…no one here know what a shrink is... don’t they?...” Seliky mumbled…I giggled a little…
“Do they taste good?...” I laughed…Seliky gave me a cold stare…
“Right…I would know how a person tastes…” Seliky replied…
“I donno…maybe…” I said giggling…Seliky continued to stare at me…
“Yeah yeah…needs more salt and soy sauce…” she said sarcastically…Hitomi giggled a little…she seemed to be feeling a lot better than she was when I went to comfort her…she’s smiling a little…I slithered to her and patted her back…she looked up at me and smiled…
“When did you learn to have such good people skills Aurora?...or…um…Mantoid…um…Naga…um…argh you know what I mean…” Seliky asked…I giggled a little…I then started to thing a bit…and the only thing that popped in my mind was Thanh…
“Well…I don’t know Seliky…from Thanh I guess…from all the “Lectures” gave me…” I replied… “I guess I just…picked some of it up…” Seliky nodded and smiled…




Part 47




It was starting to get dark outside and Jewlia seemed to be looking a little tired. Hitomi wandered off to go hunt…I think she really needs something to keep her mind off her loss…hunting probably would do that. Seliky was lying down against my arms…she seemed to have exhausted herself playing with Jewlia…It was rather cute…her head was pressed against my arm as she laid there…taking tiny breaths…I looked up at Jewlia who seemed to look a little dazed…
“…Are you tired Jewlia?...you look as if you are going to fall asleep any second…” I asked…Jewlia looked down at me and gave a big yawn…
“A little…” she said back…
“Well I better get going back home…you know…to check up on things…like the traps and such…and let you get your sleep…” I sad to her…Jewlia nodded and patted me on the head…
“…Goodnight Aurora…” she said as she closed her eyes…I smiled and waved back as I slithered off…I slithered into the burrow I made that led to Jewlia’s territory and made my way through…I looked down at Seliky to check up on her…she opened her eyes and smiled seeing me looking at her…
“…Yes Aurora?...” she asked…I smiled…
“…Nothing…I just was admiring how cute you looked…” I replied…Seliky giggled for a bit and then sighed…
“…You know…I kinda still can’t believe that when I met you…I was so desperate…” Seliky said out…”…I mean…I actually wanted to…to…”
“…Yeah Seliky I know…but hey…if you hadn’t…I would have never met you…and Hitomi and Jewlia…so It’s kinda a good thing you know…” I replied…Seliky looked down at the floor for a while…which concerned me a little…she sighed as she slowly lifted her head till I could see her eyes…she was crying…but she was smiling at the same time…
“…Hehehe…I…I just wish I could just…stay with you all the time…and…and not have to go back…” Seliky said to me…I stroked her head with my finger…
“Oh don’t cry Seliky…maybe some day you will…” I replied…Seliky sighed and looked away…she wiped off her tears and looked back at me…
“That’s very unlikely Aurora…I mean…not without putting you in danger…and…I don’t want that…” Seliky mumbled…I lifted her to my face…she squeaked a little from the sudden movement…
“Now don’t be silly…I want what’s best for you…hey…if it means I have to move away from here for you to be happy then I’ll do it…” I said back…It was true…I would…it would be very difficult but I would…I really want the best for Seliky…
“…No…I know if you moved you are putting yourself at risk…” Seliky mumbled…”I’ll just have to deal with coming here from that…place…I’ll see Ti-Yen too…she’s always been so kind to me…”
“…Maybe I could meet this Ti-Yen person you always talk about…” I said…she seemed very interesting…though…it would put me at risk…
“I donno…” Seliky mumbled…”I think she’s a busy lady…she’s getting married after all…” Seliky replied…I gently set her on my tail as continued on…

The rest of the way…Seliky told me about some of the creatures mentioned in a book she’s reading…like Dridders and Harpies and all hat good stuff…I never even heard of any of the creatures before with the exception of the Dridders…and Dryads…she even red about Matoids…it was interesting to say the least…but I did feel sorry for the boy ones…they get eaten…which it made me wonder how Hitomi’s mate looked like…the Seliky started reading about neera’s…I didn’t recognize the name but Seliky told me it was a mouse like humanoid…which then made me think of Tiffany…I didn’t know she was a Neera…she always referred herself as a Chu…maybe she is a chu…but…what’s a difference between a chu and a neera then?...I really do miss the little mouse girl though…I must have really gotten on her nerves back in the day…eating her all the time…but yet…she always seemed to come to my rescue when I was in trouble or defended me when Thanh was angry at me…*sigh* I wonder where Tiffany is now?...I wish I was with Thanh right now…but…she’s gone…and I surely would never see her again…I…I really miss her…sure…she whipped me a bit and then some…but…she took care of me and loved me…she was like my mother…only if I didn’t get caught…I would still be with her…even if it is the afterlife…*sigh*…it hurts a lot…but…at least I have Seliky…that’s all the comfort I need…I closed my eyes and turned my head to look at Seliky…she was fast asleep on my wait…her arm dangled over the edge as she took tiny breaths…I smiled a little as I continued forward into the area where all the chambers were located…and again I saw the purple specs floating around…most likely from that strange plant…




Part 48 (this part was a colaberation with me and Zoekin3




I gently placed little Seliky on the floor… being careful not to wake her up…she turned herself over in her sleep after I placed her on the ground…It was absolutely adorable…I couldn’t help but smile…I sighed to myself as I slithered away…heading out to the entrance of my burrow…when I reached it…I moved the boulder aside and poked my head out to check the coast…there was nothing around…according to my green eye…but I used my purple eye just to be sure…that blob thing has been attacking us even more now…I have to be on my guard as much as possible…for Seliky’s sake…It seemed nothing was around…so I made my way out…it was a little chilly out and the stars were already gleaming in the sky…some being coveredby the trees…I smiled and fallowed my usual path to my traps…it took a few minutes untile I reached my traps…I looked through some of them…them being empty…I felt a little disappointed…I expected at least two humans to eat…now I need to go hunt…I’m not thee best hunter either…I failed many of times…I’m just lucky that the times I failed…the pray was gotten by another creature…unable to tell anyone about me…I slithered on through the forest path…looking around for a bit…some tiny creatures hid in the bushes as I slithered in…robably scared…but I didn’t bother…they were too small to make me not hungry anymore…I sighed as I moved on…nothing just seemed to be out tonight…really depressing…I might not be able to eat tonight…I continued to move on forward…I passed by Hitomi’s tree…I saw her sitting up there guarding her eggs with this most serius look on her face…she looked down at me…I waved to her and she gave a tiny smile…but it soon vanished as she looked back up…she must be pushing herself so none of her other eggs are lost...I could tell that she is...I may not be a mother...but I'm sure it hurts alot loosing a child...*sigh*...I wonder how Thanh felt when she found I was no longer there...I miss her so much...she treated me so great...sure...she punished me severly if I did somthing wrong...but I know she did it out of love...even tying my tail to a boulder and catapolting it into the sky...I wonder what kind of mother Hitomi is going to be...er...hope she's a liitle nicer to them then she is to me and Seliky...in the middle of that thought...I heard my stomach growl...begging me to fill it...I waved back at Hitomi as I slithered off...from there...I travelled deeper into the dense jungle...I still reconized the area sense I havent traveled out of my territory...the city isnt that far from here...it's a little dangetous for me to be so close to the city...I dont want to get caught and have Seliky all alone at my burrow...I made my way to the path that lead torwards the city...of course I stayed in the forest brush so I wouldnt be in the open...from here I could see the giagantic tree's shadow in the distance...I heard a tiny cry from the direction...I guess someone just had their meal...I sighed and moved on...just then...I felt a weak vibration in the ground...usually this vibration tells me there are normal small creatures near me...but this time...it detected the passage of something a bit larger... I turned and headed in that direction...a bit curious on what it was...after a while...I could hear the sound of voices...arguing about something...I used my purple eye to see what it might be...I saw several warm bodies moving around in the dark...I decided to get a little closer...I hid myself behind a group of trees...keeping my eye on the heat sources...suddenly...they seemed to have gotten into a fight or somthing...I was a little scared hearing alot of screaming...yelling and sounds of punches...but now I could tell they were a group of humans...I smiled to myself...now I could have somthing to eat...I made my way closer to them as quietly as possible...then I heard a loud crack...my tail seemed to have crushed a bush...my eyes widden as I looked over to the group...scared that they would see me from my clumsyness...I was never a good hunter and I make too much noise to hunt well...but...they seemed to have not heard me through all the chaos...I came a little closer...figuring it was safe...they completly missed seeing me until the last moment...they were some humans from the city that Seliky lives in...They all looked shocked seeing me...I just smiled...
“Hello peoples..." I greeted them as I smiled at their terrified faces...then I struck at them...I found it a little fun chasing them around and scooping them up...sure it too a while but...sense they were cornered and I blocked the only escape...they couldnt get too far...unless it was to my mouth...they tickled nicely as they slipped down into my belly...I guess that they might have probably been people who bullied Seliky...it just made it all sweeter...though...I wonder what they were fighting about...well...it led them into my stomach...so I shouldnt really worry about it...ugh...I feel so full now...it hurts a little...I have never tried eating so many before...my belly wall all bulgy now...which made me giggle a little...then I felt them start quirming around inside me...but it was more frantic...I guess they were fighting inside me...it kinda feels nice...I patted my new big belly and headed back home...I passed by Hitomi's tree again and Hitomi looked over to me...she smiled and gave a thumbs up...I blushed a little as I waved to her...when I finaly readed my burrow...I carefully closed it up and slithered back to the chambur where I left little Seliky...she was still sound asleep...I smiled as I laid a safe distance away from her so I could go to sleep...I dont want to accidently squash her if I decide to roll over in my sleep...





Part 49 (please take not that Ravana3k's haracters Jade and Tora appear in this story...and I absolutely did a horrable job at portraying them sadly >.<...I will most likely rewrite this section and the next section...





I awoke in the middle of the night to an unusual sound…I felt a shiver go down my back…scared to think that the blue blob creature could have returned…I turned towards Seliky to see how she was…she was still sound asleep…I sighed to myself as I lifted myself up and slithered quietly out of the chamber…trying not to wake Seliky up…I carefully made my way out and pushed aside the boulder and slithered out…it was still dark out but out in the distance…I could see a little light…the sun was just starting to rise…It was chilly out…I could faintly see my breath…but not too much…I looked around a bit…trying to find what caused the sound…I was scared a bit…I thought that that blob monster could pop up at any time…I then heard the sound again…it sounded like…faint…voices talking to each other…I turned towards the sound and closed my green eye…I saw two heat sources out in the distance that looked…human shaped…I opened my eye and looked down at my stomach…it was flat…I guess I should go hunt again…so I wont get hungry during the day and have to eat in front of poor Seliky…she always looks so uncomfortable when I do…I slithered towards the two humans…being careful not to make any sounds…as I got closer…I could hear their voices…sounded like two women talking to each other…finally I reached the area and I hid myself behind a large boulder…I lifted my head slightly so I could see my two targets…I suddenly felt a chill run down my spine…the two humans…were…giant…even bigger than I was…almost double my size…I froze in my spot…I was frightened now…these…creatures could attack me…I tried to move but…I couldn’t…I was scared…yet…interested…this…made me not want to leave…I continued to stare at the two women…one had short…bluish colored hair and blue eyes…the other one looked roughly the same size…she had long black hair and jade colored eyes…they had similar features…my guessing they are sisters of some sort…I couldn’t make out what they were saying…they were too far…I wanted to get closer but…something tapped me on the shoulder…my eyes widen as I turned quickly around…right there I saw a pair of larger blue eyes looking down at me belonging to a giant human with long blond hair…
“…What are you doing?...” she said to me as she placed her hands at her hips…she seemed smaller that that other two…but…she was still larger than I was…I remained still…I was scared out of my mind…I couldn’t move…I couldn’t even speak…
“Hey Jora…what’s going on?...” a voice said from afar…I shivered now…I saw the other two coming towards me…I felt like crying…
“I found this little naga spying on you two…” the human with the blond hair replied…apparently her name is Jora…
“Spying…on us…” the one with the black hair said rather softly…
“She’s so tiny…” the blue haired on said out…I tightly closed my eyes…scared on what was going to happen…
“So…what should we do with her…” mumbled one of them…
“…I’m kind of hungry…” another one said…my eyes widen…I felt like screaming but…I couldn’t…
“Now hold on…we should at least figure out what she was up to…no eating yet…” the blond one said out…she then looked over to me…”So?…”
…my body felt tense now…I tried to say something but…I kept on swallowing up my words…I tightened my eyes and pressed my hands into the dirt…
“…I…I heard a s…sound…and…I…I was just…s…seeing what was…g…going on…” I managed to say…the three women looked at each other for a second…they then looked back at me…
“So you’re not spying on us…” the blue haired one said…looking rather disappointed…”I hoped I could have something big to eat…”
“Don’t mind Nina…she just likes to act chaotic at times…she prefers eating predators than eating smaller pray like humans…” the blond haired one said to me…
“Yeah…at least I eat better than my sister!...” she said out…the black haired one nudged her and folded her arms.
“That’s Jade…she doesn’t talk too much…she prefers to be alone actually…she doesn’t eat humans and stuff like that…” the blond one said to me…I looked at her curiously…
“…w…why…” I said softly…
“She never told anyone…oh…I’m Jora by the way…” she replied…I looked over to Jade for a second…then I looked back to Jora…I was confused on how these three humans got so big…and…why they ate other humans…I wasn’t as scared but I still shivered a bit…
“W…what…what are you…” I mumbled…the three humans looked at me funny for a second…
“What are we?...” Nina echoed back…
“We’re Giantess’…” Jora said out…
“…Giant…what?...” I mumbled back…I never heard or such creatures…
“…Giantess…basically…giant women…” Nina said to me…I looked up…I felt very uncomfortable at this point…I haven’t been around so many strangers before…I couldn’t think of anything to say…
“What’s your name?...” Nina asked me…I stuttered for a bit…it was hard for me to breathe now…
“A…a…Aurora…” I managed to say out…
“Aurora…that’s a nice name…” Jora said to me…I just gave a smile and looked away…
“Aww she’s blushing…” Nina called out…my eyes widen…I didn’t even realize I was blushing…I tightened my eyes and curled into a ball…
“She…seems shy…” Jade mumbled…the other two girls looked at her for a second…I looked up for a second…
“I…I…Its nice to meet you…three…” I mumbled...”I…I’m sorry I…I was watching you…I…I was just…making sure…th…that you weren’t a th…threat…”
“It’s ok…sorry for scaring you a bit…” Nina replied as she platted my head…I shivered a little…but looked up…at least I know these three won’t hurt me…
“…Yeah…we were just wandering around…Jade got us lost…” Nina said out…Jade nudged her…
“You were the one who wanted to explore away from the great tree…” Jade said out…I looked at them in confusion…
“…you…you aren’t from around here…” I mumbled…they all looked at me…
“No…we live near the great tree…you know…where Crisis and Anna live…” Jora replied…
“…Um…I’m not familiar…” I mumbled….the only name I somewhat recognize was the name “Crisis”…
“You never been there!?!...” Nina cried out…I looked at the floor shamefully…I feel so embarrassed now...I sighed and turned away…
“I…I think I should be going…” I mumbled…they turned to me…
“Why?...” Nina asked…I didn’t want to tell them about Seliky…I couldn’t trust them just yet…




Part 50 (Same thing as the previous section....I did a bad job at portraying the characters >.<)





…I stared at the three women who were around me…I couldn’t possibly tell them that I was friends with a human…they might eat her…any I don’t want that…the three girls looked at each other for a few seconds…and finally the blue haired one spoke…
“Wha?...Neko got your toung…come let me eat her…she obviously wants nothing to do with us and it’s a perfect meal!...” she said out…I slithered back a little with my arms behind my back…secretly making my scales on them come out so I could defend myself in needed…the brown haired girl gave a short glare at her…
“Stop messing with her Jora!…she’s scared and she doesn’t need to tell us anything if she doesn’t want to…” the blond one said out…The blue haired one looked away and folded her arms…
“Not even a taste…” she mumbled…
“Just be quiet…” the brow haired girl said…I sighed and retracted my scales…I’m just not used to being around new people…especially a race I haven’t even seen before…
“Um…it…it was nice to meet you three…um…I should get back to my home…I…I have some things to do…” I mumbled…Jora gave me a funny look and grinned…
“Alright!...it was nice meeting you too um…Aurora right?...” she said to me…I nodded and gave a tiny smile…
“Ye…yes…that’s r…right…” I mumbled…
“Wow you act so much like Nina here…” Jora added…Nina nudged her and looked away…”She’s shy too…” she whispered…I smiled again as I slithered back a little…
“I…I really have to go…It…it was nice meeting you…um…b…bye…” I said out as I started to slither away…I looked back seeing Jora and Nina waving at me…Jade just stood there with her arms folded…when I slithered far enough…I gave a sigh of relief and headed back into my burrow…this was such an unusual start for my day…never expected to see anyone like them around my home...Nina seemed nice to me…but that Jora girl kinda scares me…and that one named Jade is…well…quiet…I’m glad it’s over though…I wonder though…they said they live near that…big tree and spoke about that naga everyone seems to know…am I the only one that has no idea who she is or what is over there…I guess I’m missing out a lot…but…I should just stay here…it’s dangerous out there for me…I could never fend for myself…I sighed to myself at this thought as I pushed aside the boulder that covered the entrance of my burrow…I slithered in and headed over where I left Seliky…I reached the room and I saw Seliky sitting upright staring at the wall…
“Seliky your awake…” I said out…Seliky looked over at me and gave a small smile…
“There you are Aurora…I was worried about you…” she said with a laugh…I smiled back and patted her head…
“You don’t need to worry about me Seliky…” I replied…
“Yeah yeah what ever you say Aurora…what ever you say…” she laughed…I glared at her playfully for a bit and nudged her with my finger…
“Just be happy you aren’t sleeping out there tiny…” I laughed…Seliky nodded and stood up…
“True true…” she replied…I gently picked her up and held her to my face…I saw that she looked a little tired…probably because it is still quiet early to be awake…and we did stay up a little late last night…I stroked her pretty whitish brown hair and placed her on my shoulder…
“Did you have a nice nap Seliky?...” I asked…she nodded as she scooted over closer to my ear…
“You bet…though I did wake up in the middle of the nice…for some reason I couldn’t stop sneezing…so I took a little walk around you…hehehe…my legs are still a little tired…I bet if I ran around you every day I would be a very fast runner…” she said giggling…I giggled a little too…
“But you already run very fast…fastest little human I’ve ever seen…maybe it’s because you are so tiny that you have less weight to carry around…” I laughed…
“Whatcha trying to say…I’m short?...” she mumbled…
“We all know you are short you silly girl…come on look at you…” I laughed…Seliky grumbled and folded her arms…
“Yeah yea I…GUESS your right…” she pouted…I patted her head with my hand and giggled a little…
“But I think it makes you more cute…” I said back…
“RIGHT…so if a predator happens to come across me they’ll be like “Awwww Your are so cute…I’m not going to eat you sense you are so adorable…glomp glomp chuckle chuckle GULP”…RIGHT…” she said to me sarcastically…
“What…maybe I didn’t decide to eat you because you were so cute…” I replied…
“What ever you say Aurora…” she replied as she messed with my hair…or at least one strand of my hair…then I heard a growl…I looked over to Seliky who’s face now just turned red…
“Let me guess Seliky…you’re hungry…” I laughed…
“Yeah I guess so…” She replied…I stroked her hair with my finger and looked forward…
“Come lets find you some fruit to eat…” I said out…Seliky nodded and held onto my shoulder as I slithered through the tunnel out into the open morning air…
“Wow it’s still dark out here…and cold…” she said out as she took a bundle of my hair and covered herself with it…my guessing to keep her warm…
“Don’t worry it’s not too dark…and I can see fine anyways…” I replied as I looked around a bit…I was trying to remember where that bush that grows the berries Seliky loves…I then remembered there was one a little north of my burrow…I started heading in that direction as Seliky continued to mess around in my hair…
“Hey Aurora…I’ve been wondering about this for some quite time…how did you ever find hair bands THAT big to fun in your hair like this?…I mean really!...” she said out…I giggled a little…
“Well you see…they were a gift for Thanh…you know…the Elf who raised me…she put some charm on them that make them get bigger as I grew…I guess she knew that I would be a big Naga when I reached this age…” I replied…
“You weren’t always big?...” Seliky called out…seeming a little shocked…
“Of course not you silly…I WAS a kid in some point of my life…I think I was a little smaller that you when I was about your age…” I replied…
“Awww I bet you were a cute kid…It would’ve been nice to have you as a little sister…but sadly I’m an only child…” Seliky replied…I giggled a bit…
“Little sister?...” I laughed…
“You know what I mean…sheesh…” Seliky mumbled…I laughed as I slithered on…
“Yeah I know I know…” I replied…just then I heard a voice from behind me…
“Hey it’s you again…” the voice said out…I froze for a second…I recognized the voice…it was the Jora girl…I quickly scooped up Seliky into my hands…she gave a short squeal when I did so but I muffled it with my palm…I turned around see the three women walking over to me…
“Oh…uh…um…Hi…” I mumbled as I balled up my hands…I felt Seliky squirm a little in my palms…I couldn’t let them see Seliky…they might try to eat her…
“Hi Aurora…you still being busy?...” Nina asked…
“Uh…yeah…uh…I’m just…looking for berries…yeah...that’s it…” I replied…trying to seem believable…Jade stared at me awkwardly…
“What’s that?...” she mumbled…I felt a chill run down my spine…
“Wh…what’s what?...” I replied…I felt a sweat drop run down the back of my neck…
“That…in your hands…” she added…
“Uh…uh…the berries I collected so far…” I mumbled…Jade kept on staring at me…
“Jora Oh your hiding something aren’t you…” Jora said out…
“Jora…stop teasing her…” Nina said out…I slithered back a little…only to be backed into a tree…
“Sorry…” she mumbled....I looked over to Nina who just walked over to me…
“Sorry about Jora…she’s just being chaotic like always…” she laughed as she playfully slapped my back…I fell forward a little and my eyes widened…I dropped Seliky…I saw her fell to the ground…landing between me and all the women around me…
“What’s this?...” Jora said out…My eyes widened…I quickly scooped up Seliky into my arms and held her to my chest…
“N…n…nothing!...” I cried out…
“Was that a human?...” Nina asked...I shivered a bit…Jora walked over to me and looked down at me…
“It is!...” she cried out…I looked at Seliky who was still dazed from her fall…
“Oh so you were hunt…I see…you wanted to catch her before us…didn’t you…” Nina said out…
“I…I…” I stuttered a bit…Then Jora snatched Seliky from my hands…
“Well I’m kinda hungry too…” she said out…my eyes widened…
“No STOP!...” I cried out…Jora looked at me funny…
“What?...” she relied…
“She’s my friend!...give her back!...” I cried out…Jora looked at me for a second and then looked at Seliky…
“Your…friend?...” She said in confusion…
“A naga…with a human friend…that’s unusual…” Nina said out…
“Not necessarily…what about Crisis and Leá…” Jade mumbled…
“True very true…but I thought she was the only one…” Nina replied…Jora looked at me for a second and smiled…
“I think it’s cute…” she laughed…she handed Seliky back to me and I held her close to my face…
“Seliky are you alright…” I asked her…worried about her fall…Seliky rubbed her head and looked up at me…
“Just had the wind knocked out of me…” she replied…she looked around for a second…
“Whoa what’s going on!... “ she cried out…seeing the three giant women…
“Nothing…” I mumbled…” these are people I met earlier…”
“I’m Jora and this is Jade…” Jora said out…
“And I’m Jade’s sister Nina!…” Nina called out…
“So you were just looking out for your friend weren’t you?...” Nina asked me…I nodded and sighed…
“So what’s her name?...” she then asked me…I looked up at her…
“Her name is Seliky…” I replied…
“I never seen a human so white before…are you sure she’s human…” Nina said out…
“She’s Albino…just born with pale skin…” Jora told her…
“You would know…” Jade replied...me and Seliky looked at her in confusion…Jora smiled and looked towards us and sighed…
“I was human before…” She said with a tiny blush…me and Seliky went into shock…
“WOAH!!!...How’d you get so big!...” Seliky cried out…
“It’s a long story…” she mumbled…
“I want to be big too!...” Seliky called out happily…the three women smiled…
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I've not had alot of time to read through it but so far I really like it

oh thanks...I am glad you enjoy it...
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part 51-55




part 51





I spoke to the three giant girls…Jora…Jade and Nina for a little while…they seemed very interested in me…but…I didn’t really know why…I mean…I seemed to get on one of their nerves because I couldn’t think of anything to say…it feels so awkward to be around new people…I’m just used to being by myself with Seliky…but nether less…I did have somewhat a good time…they told me about where they came from and such…near the giant tree…they didn’t stay long…they said that they didn’t want to forget their way back and never find their homes again…we said our goodbyes…but before they left…they said they might stop by again…to say hi and visit…Seliky seems to be looking forward to it…she looks as she enjoyed their company…even if Nina “Playfully” tried to eat her…Seliky sure wont forget that experience…when I saw that they left…I placed Seliky on my shoulder and started to look for the berries that we were looking for before being distracted…I could tell little Seliky was hungry…her stomach growled loudly occasionally making the girl’s pale face turn bright red…seeing that a few times really made me giggle a few times…Seliky seemed a little aggravated about me giggling…but it just made it seem cuter…eventually we reached a bush with the cherries…I gently placed Seliky on the ground so she could pick and eat all the berries she wants…as she did that I laid myself against a tree and tried to relax a little…I closed my eyes and took deep breaths as I laid there…I really needed to relax…all this stress I’ve been having really is taking a toll on my body…I could feel how tense I was…it was good to have some relaxing time…maybe when me and Seliky get back to the burrow we could take a little dip in the hot spring…I’m sure she’ll like that…she’s been looking stressed as well…
During this thought…I felt a tiny pair of feet climbing up my stomach…I opened my eyes seeing Seliky climbing me…moving between my breast and right at my face…I saw her mouth was smeared red from the berries she has been eating…
“You’re done Seliky?...” I asked her as I placed my finger on her head…Seliky nodded happily as she wiped away the smeared berries with a paper she kept in her pocket…
“Yeah I’m full…I kept a few for later…do you want some…” Seliky asked as she showed me a handful of berries…I smiled and shook my head no…
“Oh no…those are WAY too small for me…usually when I have to eat berries I have to eat a few bushes worth to be satisfied you know…” I replied…Seliky nodded as she placed her hands into her sweater pockets…
“Understandable…you being huge and all…” she said back…”But I bet Jewlia’s berries are big enough for you…I mean…those things are bigger than my head…”
I giggled remembering when Seliky was trying to eat one of those berries…poor girl…she barely got halfway through it…it was cute to see her try though…she must had one bad belly ach later…I gently picked Seliky up and brought her closer to my face as I hoisted myself up…I fought the temptation of stuffing the girl into my mouth for a bit…I don’t want to…but for some reasons…I’ve had the urges to…but I refused to…she’s my friend and I would hate to scare her…and I don’t think she would ever forgive me…I removed the though and gently placed Seliky on my waiting shoulder and headed back to the burrow…
“Hey Aurora?...can we stop by Jewlia and say hi?...” She said out…
“Oh sure…we can go see her…I bet she’ll be happy to see us…” I replied as I turned towards the direction Jewlia is in…I felt Seliky’s legs kicking back and forth as she sat on my shoulder…she seemed so adorable…with her long whitish hair gleaming in the morning sun…like a little angel…
I turned my attention forward as I continued on my way…I had to make sure nothing was fallowing me…I could never take my chances out here…especially having Seliky with me…I want to keep her safe…I don’t want anything to happen to her…she makes me happy inside…before I met her…I…I was miserable…and I wasn’t happy…I wasn’t happy with my life…I…had no purpose…but with her around…I know that I have to take care of her…no matter what it takes…
“Hey look there she is…” Seliky called out…I saw Jewlia out in the distance…and in front of her was Hitomi…
“Looks like Hitomi is visiting her as well…” I said back to Seliky…Seliky shivered a little…my guessing…remembering when Hitomi ate her…I smiled and patted her head with my finger…
“Come let’s say hi…” I told her…Seliky jumped for a second and then looked over at me…
“Oh right right…”She replied…I giggled as I slithered to Jewlia and Hitomi…as I got closer…I began to hear their voices…they were talking about something…
“Are you sure you haven’t seen any around here…” Hitomi said to her…
“No I haven’t seen any Dridders Hitomi…they don’t usually come around here…” Jewlia replied…for some reason…she shrugged a bit…she seemed a little look of unease…
“I could have sworn I smelled a Dridder around here…” Hitomi said back as she folded her arms…
“Well…it…it was probably just your imagination…” Jewlia replied…she then looked over to me…
“Oh Aurora…I didn’t see you there…” Jewlia said out…I smiled and waved my hand…
“Hey Jewlia…Seliky just wanted to have a little visit with you so…well…here we are…” I replies…Jewlia leaned closer and smiled…
“Oh Seliky…you’re so tiny I didn’t know you were there…” She said with a tiny laugh…
“Ha ha ha…very funny…” Seliky responded sarcastically as she folded her arms…I then felt a hand tap my other shoulder…I turned my head seeing Hitomi next to me…
“Hey Scale butt…nice to see you again…” Hitomi said to me… “How’s it going?...”
“Oh…well…I’m fine…today was really awkward…I met three humans…but they weren’t normal…they her big…I mean…bigger than me and you…but not bigger than Jewlia…” I said out…remembering them…
“Oh nonsense…they can’t get that big…” Hitomi replied…
“But it’s true I saw them too…” Seliky said out…
“Poppycott…” Hitomi mumbled…Jewlia smiled and crossed her hands…
“They are called giantess’…I met a very few of them…well…actually only one…but they are real Hitomi…” she said to us…Hitomi grumbled and folded her arms…
“They probably taste better than humans…” Hitomi said softly…I giggled a little and placed my hand on her back…
“I’d thin Nina would give you a challenge…” I laughed…
“What?...” Hitomi replied…me and Seliky started giggling.
“Oh nothing Hitomi…nothing at all…” I said out…



part 52




...Hitomi spoke to us for a little bit but she left soon after...saying that she needs to protect her eggs...she left in a rush...moving faster than I could see...when she vanished in the distant tree's...I turned torwards Jewlia...
"Did you two sleep well?..." Jewlia asked us...I knownisted her voice seemed...hesitant...and her body language was akward...
"Oh I slept great...I had an interesting dream..." Seliky said out...Jewlia nodded hesitantly...
"Um...Jewlia?...are you feeling ok?...I mean...you are kinda acting funny..." I said out...She seemed to be very nervous about somthing...
"Oh...n...I...I'm fine hehe...dont worry about me..." she repkied...I stared at her for a second and then looked away...
"Well...if you say so..." I replied...I felt Seliky move across my shoulder and slid down my arm to my hand...she smiled and looked up at Jewlia...
"Hey Jewlia...do you perform photosythinsis?..." she asked...I never heard such a weird sounding word...
"...Photo-what?..." I replied...Jewlia looked over at me and then at Seliky,..
"Oh...the act of transforming sunlight into energy by plants...hehe...I thought you might...you being part tree after all...I just wondered how it felt like..." Seliky added...
"Um...no...I dont think I do that..." Jewlia replied...she let out a tiny cough and smiled..."You sure like to ask unusual questions Seliky..."
Seliky giggled as she sat down on my hand...
"What can I say?...I'm eight...I'm a curious girl you know..." She replied...I patted her on the head making Seliky turn and look up at me..."I guess it was my curiousity which let me to be friends with Aurora..."
Jewlia nodded and vlosed her eyes...
"I see...well it isnt very commun to see humans being friends with large predators such as Aurora and myself...Aurora you are lucky to have such a wonderful friend..." she said to me...I notice she had a slight look of sadness in her eyes...I saw a tiny tear form just under her eye before she wiped it away with her finger...She then looked up and blushed a litlle...
"...oh...um...sorry about that...um...anyways...yeah...you two are such good friends..." she said out...I began to grow worried...Jewlia wasnt acting like this yesterday...and she seems a little...paler...
"Your our friend too Jewlia!..." Seliky called out..."And I like you...your sweet and havent tried to eat me yet..." Seliky laughed...Jewlia blushed...
"Oh no no no...I refuse to eat a friend or anyone who I helped before...and even if I ate you...I cant get you out unlike Aurora and Hitomi...I'm a Dryad...we can't regurgitate our pray..." Jewlia mumbled as she placed her hand at her neck...Seliky looked over at me for a second...then she looked back at Jewlia and smiled...Jewlia stared at her for a second...she stared at her blankely but soon I saw her pink lip quiver...gradually...a cute smile formed on her face...
"Oh how could I ever resist such a beautiful smile...oh come here..." Jewlia said happily and gently took Seliky off my shoulders...she then gave her a small hug and kissed her on the head...obviously it took up more than just her head...after she showed her affection she gave Seliky back to me...
"...Man I'm way too small for this..." Seliky mumblef as she fixed up her hair which got messed up from when Jewlia kissed her...I giggled as I used my finger to help her out...I knowtised Jewlia blushing again...
"Hehehe...sorry I got carried away..." She said back...
"Well you'll have some time to practice that...we'll come back later today ok?..." I said out...
"Alright...it'll give me y-time to catch somthing to eat...ugh...recently I've been getting hungrier..." Jewlia mumbled as she placed her hand on her stomach...she seemed skinnier for some reason...
"Anyways...I'm happy you came to visit...it gets very lonely here somtimes..." Jewlia said out...
"It's no problem..." I replied as I turned aroud...right then I felt a tiny vibration in the ground...as if somthing just moved passed Jewlia's roots...
"What was that?...somthing...just moved by or somthing" I asked...Jewlia shook her head...
"I...I didnt see anything..." Jewlia replied...
"Me neither..." Seliky added...I sighed to myself...it was probably just my imagination...I looked over to Jewlia and waved my hand...
"I'll see you later ok?...bye..." I said to her...She gave a tiny wave to me and Seliky waved goodbye as well...I then headed into the burrow...as I headed in...I could help to think somthing strange was going on...and I also had this weird feeling that somthing was going to happen today...er...I shouldnt think like this...today is a perfectly peacefull day and Seliky seems happy today...I cant ruin it because of my stupid thoughts...that's just...stupid...right then...a tiny voice interupted my thoughts...
"Hey Aurora..." I heard on my shoulder..."You seem tense...is somthing wrong...
I looked over to Seliky and smiled back...
"Oh it's nothing...I was just deap in thought that's all..." I replied as I placed my hand on Seliky's head...she giggled...
"You know what...I totally feel like playing a game right now..." She randomly blurted out...I giggled a little...
"What kind of game?..." I asked as I lifted little Seliky to my face so I could get a good look at her cute pale face...
"Hide-and-Seek...heard of it?..." Seliky replied...
"Oh of course...I used to play that with Thanh and played my own version with Tiffany..." I replied...remembering all the ganes I played so long ago with my family...
"Ok cool...I'll hide and you try to find me..." She said as I placed her on the floor.
"Alright...will do..." I said back giggling...
"Count to 100 then try to find me kay?...ok go..." Seliky said as she walked off...she then stopped and looked back at me..."And dont cheat and use that all seeing purple eye of yours..." She added...I started laughing...
"Ok ok fine...no purple eye got it...now...1...2...3..."
I heard Seliky give a short "eep" before running off...realizing I started counting...silly girl she is...but it only makes me love her even more...
I finally counted to 100 and opened my eyes...
"Ready or not here I come..." I called out as I began to look around the chambur...she's still in the burrow I know that...Seliky is too smart to do a stupid thing and run outside without me...I moved throughout the chambur looking for the child...she didnt seem to be in this one so I'll go search the next chamber...




part 53




I spent a few minuts looking for little Seliky…It was fairly difficult due to that I wasn’t allowed to use my purple eye…she wasn’t in any of the chambers that I check…and I really think Seliky is smart enough to not go outside to hide…so I don’t need to worry about looking up there…
As I slithered along…my nose felt a little scratch and I felt like I had to sneeze…I noticed also that there was purplish particles floating in the air…I remembered that there was tht strange mushroom I saw yesterday growing in the chamber…the little think made me sneeze…Just then…I realized..that room would be an ideal place for Seliky to hide…it’s the only room that you could hide behind something…being the mushroom…I smiled to myself as I made my way over to the chamber…I felt like I was hunting…but…wouldn’t that make Seliky the pray…no…I wuldnt eat Seliky…this is just hide and seek…heh…silly thought…
…as I got closer to the room…I noticed the number of particles in the air drastically increased to a sicly purple fog…I sneezed a few times…it was hard not to…the particals muffled my breathing area…after a few minuts of moving through the purple mist…I saw the enterance to the chamber…I slithered over and peared my head inside to see if I caoud see Seliky…I was shocked to see what I found…the entire chamber was filled with mushrooms…each glowing that dark purple glow…there was so many of them that they even grew on the ceiling…it was amazing in a creepy sort of way…I blinked…but for a spit second…I saw a hit of red for a split second…I must have closed my green eye first when I blinked…but…it’s unusual I would see a heat source in the mushrooms…plants don’t uusually have a body heat…I bclosed my green eye again to see what it was…there was asmall heat source in the center of the room…it was…human…shaped?...my eyes widened…it was the same size as Seliky…I quickled slither into the chamber…breaking through the mushrooms torwards the heat source…as I went past the mushrooms…they blasted me with a short puff of the purple spores…I ignored it and continued to the center…ther…I saw a cacoon of white thread that connected to several of the mushrooms around it…I swipped away the mushrooms and picked up the cacoon…I pealed off the threads with my finger…and I saw Seliky laying in the pile of cacoon parts…she was purple and wasn’t moving…but…I could see she was breathing…these mushrooms must have knocked her out and…were trying to digest her…what kind of fugi are these…I didn’t take the time to think about it…I quickly slither out of the chamber as fast as I could…when I got out…I gently placed Seliky on the ground…I whipped off some of the remaining purple spores on her…she seemed ok…maybe she’s just asleep…but…I’m not sure…I don’t know exactly what these mushroom things did to her…but I know they are bad and I need to get rid of them…I turned around and faced the charmbur enterance…Ihit the side of the wall causing the chamber to colaps on inself…burying all the mushrooms…this’ll get rid of them…the pressure of th dirt should crush them…I looked back over at Seliky…she started to look a little pale…I began to panic…she could be poisoned…I quickly picked her up and slithered into my storage chambure…where I keep all my berries I collect…it’s cool in the chamber so the berries last longer…I kept some of the berries Jewlia gave me…she said that they cure all diseases…maybe they cure poisons as well…it’s the only think I can do now…
I entered the chamber and I grabbed on of the berries…I brough it over to Seliky’s head…obviously the berry is larger than her head so making her eat it isn’t going to be easy…I gently placed Seliky on the floor and leaned over to her…I used the very tip of my fingernail to open Seliky’s mout and I squeezed the berry so the juice would fall into Seliky’s mout…it was a bit messy…Seliky’s face and hair wa now red…but I managed to get some into her mouth…I then took Seliky over to the hotspring and took her clothing off so I could get her cleaned up…as I dipped her into the hot water…she moved her head slightly…meaning she was comthing through…
“Seliky?...Seliky/…” I called out to her...one of her pink eyes opened and she gave out a big yawn…
“Ugh…where am I?...” she mumbled as she rubbed her head…I then took Seliky into a big hug…
“Oh my gosh Seliky I was so scared!...” I cried out as I embraced her…I then heard a slight squeal from her…I loosen my grip and placed Seliky back into the water… “Sorry…
“I just had a weird dream…that…we were playing hide and seek…and I hid behind some random mushroom thing…and…then I was inside a big ball…weird huh?...” Seliky said out…
“Oh…um…yeah that is weird…” Imumbled…I didn’t have the guts to tell her that it really happened…I just patted her on the head and slithered into the warm water…I need a bath myself…the spored are getting into my nose again and I really don’t want to be allergic to myself…




part 54




…I laid in the relaxing hot spring water with my back against the wall and part of my tail partially submerged in the water…sitting on my tail was little Seliky…gently kicking her legs back and forth in the hot spring water…her eyes were closed as she sat back…supporting herself with her arms…she seemed to be in deep thought…as if she had just entered a world of entirely her own…she seemed like the purest person I know…so intelligent…so…mirthful…even her body is pure…pale…glowing in the light…it’s really a shame that she’s…being hurt all the time…she disserves much better than that…I…I just hope I could give her that..give her the best of her life…Seliky…makes my life seem to have purpose…and…she makes me not feel so alone…in this very unfamiliar world…
“Hey Aurora…” I heard…I turned to look over at Seliky…she just opened her eyes and was looking over at the water…”I…just…don’t know Aurora…mixed feelings…like a balance you know…” I didn’t really get what she was saying…her words didn’t really make sense to me…
“What is?...” I asked as I picked her up gently and held her in front of my face with open palms…
“I mean…I’m like two people now…it’s hard what to feel now…like…when I’m at the city…I feel…so…so inferior…and…I feel so much pain…but…I understand more there…but here with you…I…I feel happy…useful…but… don’t understand anything…like…it just feels I belong to…two worlds with two me’s…” Seliky looked at me for a second…she turned red and then looked away…“Oh sorry…I’m just being stupid…I mean…what kind of person thinks such things…”
I smiled and tapped her head with my forefinger…Seliky turned her head and looked at me with those pink eyes…
“Well I’m happy you are open with me Seliky…it tells me that you trust me…” I replied…Seliky smiled as she placed her hands in her jacket pockets…
“Hehehe…yeah I do trust you Aurora…you’ve been so kind to me…why shouldn’t I trust you…” she replied…
“Well…I’m big…I’m a naga…and I have a…um…different diet…” I muttered as I looked away…I didn’t want to see her exception…Seliky was quiet for a second but she started to speak again…
“Aurora…is that the best you got…I mean…really…why would any of that stuff not make me trust you…I mean…I came to you remember…” Seliky replied…she was right…she was the one who chose to come back after I tried to eat her…even though I had to convince her that killing herself wasn’t good…she still came back…
“You’re right Seliky…it was stupid of me to think that…” I mumbled…Seliky smiled at me and winked her eye…
“It’s ok Aurora…I understand…I mean…I thought you would be worried about being a naga and me not trusting you…and I don’t blame you…what they say about Naga’s in the city…is…just horrible…you are nothing like what they say…” Seliky replied…she turned around and looked down into the water…”I mean…look at your reflection…I don’t see a monster there…I see a friend who is kind and loving and very brave…yeah this sounds very corny…like something cliché hero would say…but still…it’s true…”
I laid there quiet for a while…thinking about what she said…I stared into the reflection of myself in the water…I then looked at Seliky’s reflection…we…didn’t seem that much apart…human…naga…it was the same to me…but…one is still a monster for some reason…but…in Seliky’s eyes…there is none here…I smiled and brought Seliky to my chest and hugged her gently…
“Oh no…don’t go all Jewlia on me!...” Selky cried out…
“Would you rather have Hitomi…” I replied…Seliky stared t me for a second and then shook her head…
“I’ll take Jewlia…” she replied with a cute little giggle…




part 55





(Take note…this story will probably make you guys happy because…*Drum roll) this story takes place in the POV of the little Albino girl who hangs out with that one giant earth naga ^w^)


After me and Aurora took our little dip in the spring water…we decided that it was getting a little bit too late…well actually I decided…Aurora looked as if she had a few more hours left in her…me on the other hand…I felt like just dropping onto the floor and fall asleep…I’m not all that used to staying up late you know…well…staying up late without pain…anyways...me and Aurora went to sleep…but despite the fact I was exhausted…I could get any sleep…I kept on hearing strange sound…from Aurora’s light sleeping to all the weird sounds outside…I couldn’t help but to be freaked out a little…I don’t know why though…I know Aurora would protect me but…I just don’t know…I really need to get these thoughts out of my head…maybe if I take a little walk I would feel more tired to sleep…yeah I could do that…maybe I could stop by Jewlia…hopefully she wouldn’t be asleep…
I stood up and wipped off some of the dirt that was on my sweater and looked over at Aurora…she looked very cute to me…like…just the way she slept…I donno…she looks so innocent…the way she lied…how her arms were near her head and how she took these tiny breaths with her mouth slightly open…it just looks so cute…
After staring at her for a minut or so…I moved on through the tunnel…it’s a little hard to believe that Aurora dug all of this by herself…I mean…I think I would just give up after the first few feet…I guess Aurora has quite the number of time on her hands…at least she’s happy…she dosent have to go through all that I have to go through every time I return home…I mean…I feel safe with Aurora…like…the world is compeletely different when I’m with her…not so full of pain and misery…sometimes I wonder what would have happened if I never ran into Aurora in the first place…
By this time…I was inside the tunnel that led to Jewlia’s territory…it was pretty dark in here…my little handmade flashlight could only brighten my path so much…I remember reading once in one of Ti-yen’s books that there was a type of plant that lights up when something walks near them…maybe one day me and Aurora would go out and go look for these plants…it sure would help me when I’m walking through these tunnels by myself…I don’t have those keen eyes that Aurora has…I adventually reached the end of the tunnel after a good 10 minuts of walking…I felt the cold night air as I stepped out of the burrow…the moon was shinning above me…lighting up the area just enough where I could she Jewlia out a little ways ahead…she looked like she was sleeping…I cant really tell…she’s a tree thing…do tree people lay down?...if they do I guess she’ll have to scream “timber!” every time he does…hehehe…anyways…I had to get closer to make sure she wasn’t asleep…I walked slowly to her and looked up at her huge size…she’s a lot bigger that Aurora…and…she is bigger than any building I seen around the city…she’s very pretty too…and her eyes…oh…when I look into those big green eyes of hers…I don’t know…my soul just feels at piece…and…I just want into gaze into them…as if I was in some sort of trance…I really do like Jewlia…she’s very nice and she’s fun to play with…I happy me and Aurora met her…if we didn’t we would both be…*gulp*…dead…ugh…why did I have to think of such a thing…it makes me feel sick inside…I continued to look up at Jewlia…she was aslepp…I could she her eyes were closed and she was leaning to one side a little…breathing very gently…I smiled and turned around to head back to Aurrora…but just then…I heard a russling sound from behind me…I turned around but I didn’t see anything…I figured the wind must have blown some of Jewlia’s leaves…I continued to move on…I walked for a few seconds…but then…I heard the sound again…but this time…it was to my left hand side…I looked over there…but…I didn’t see anything…I started to get scared a little…I took out my flashlight and flashed it in the direction where I heard the sound…nothing was over there…I moved on…but I moved a little faster…I was scared…I wanted to get to the safty of the burrow as fast as I could…I looked over my should to make sure that nothing was behind me…all I could see was Jewlia out a little ways in that direction…as I looked back…I suddenly tipped over something…as if something just caught onto my leg…I tried to get up…but…I couldn’t…something was holding my legs down but…I couldn’t see anyting…I tugged on my leg…but…my leg remained caught on something…I began to sweat…I was was terrified now…I pulled out my flashlight and flashed it around…to see if nothing was near by…there was nothing…but…something caught my eye…I saw a glimps of white near my leg…I looked torwards it…but I saw nothing…I moved my flashlight…and then…I saw a white strand like thing wraped around my leg…the light from the flashlight reflected off of it letting me see it…it was like…a…web…At that thought…my heart sunk into my stomach…it was a spider web…I began to panic…I tried to pull my leg free…but the webbing was too strong…suddenly…I felt a tug come from the web…my eyes widen…it began getting stronger and stronger…and then…it began to pull me…I screamed…I tried to grab onto something…but…it was too strong and I could get anything to hold onto…
“Help!...Jewlia!...Aurora!...Help!...” I screamed as loud as I could…but…nothing happened…they were asleep…I began to cry as I tried to pull myself free…all I wanted to do was go for a walk…but…now…something bad is going to happen to me…I’m…probably going to be some snack…for some…big spider thing…or that…Dridder lady…i…I don’t want to die…now yet…not after how…how much joy I’ve had…
“Help!...Anyone!...Please!...” I screamed out…hoping a miracle would happen…again…nothing happen…I continued to be dragged across the floor…I noticed that I was being dragged closer to Jewlia…I grabbed my flashlight and flashed it to see where the webbing led to…I saw the ling white strand lead to a small dark opening under Jewlia’s trunk…suddenly…something hit my hand and…it hurt…badly…I dropped the flashlight…I felt…blood on my hand…I began to scream agin…something was going to kill me…and I’m helpless to go anything…I closed my eyes tightly as I continued to be dragged across the floor…after a few seconds of being dragged…I felt two hands grab me…I opened my eyes…and saw a pair of white eyes looking down at me from some dark figure inside to be what seemed to be a cave under Jewlia’s trunk …it was bigger than me…but…not much bigger than a human…but still…this…thing wanted to kill me…I struggled in the creatures grip but…it was much stonger than I could ever be…I pushed me into a wall near the exit of the cave…the moon was shining partially and I saw what was holding onto me…it was a Dridder…and human sized Dridder with white hair…white eyes and dark bluish skin…I wanted to scream but…she placed her hand over my mouth…muffling me…then she punched me in the stomach…I fell limp…the pain just…overcame me…all I could do was watch as this Dridder began to wrap me into a cacoon with her web…little by little…the cacoon got bigger…covering my legs…I felt helpless…I wanted to scream but…I couldn’t…looked around…trying to find a bit of hope…I noticed a thorn near me…it was one of Jewlia’s thorn…I reached over to it and grabbed it…I pulled on it hard till it broke off..I then turned to the Dridder andshoved her away with my other hand…shefell back a little and I took this opportunity to use the thorn to cut off the web caccon…I fell to the floor with a plop…I looked up…the Dridder looked mad…I really didn’t want to get caught by her again…I got up and ran as fast as I could…I ran out from under Jewlia and dashed to where the enterance of Aurora’s burrow was…I looked over my shoulder and saw her leap into the air...landing in a tree…then I saw something flash torwards me…I moved as fast as I could to the side…I fell over but the thing I saw landed near me…a bunck of needles were stuck to the ground near me…the Dridder was throwing these at me…I didn’t want to get get hit by one…I got up and continue running…maybe if I run into the tree’s I could loose her…I turned and headed to the tree’s…but suddenly a bunch of needles flew by my head and hit the tree infront of me…my eyes widen…that idea wasn’t going to work…I turned and ran the other way…torward the burrow…there was only a few yard till I get into the burrow…I ran as fast as I could…but then…I felt something slam me down from behind me and pin me to the floor…the Dridder jumped on me…I couldn’t move…she held both my arms down and her 6 lags pinned my cest and legs to the ground…I struggled but…I couldn’t even move…I began to cry now…it was hopeless…I am going to be spider food…I tried my best…but…I still…got caught…I should have left the burrow…I should of just stayed with Aurora…but…I had to be stupid and leave the burrow…Aurora told me so many times to not leave the burrow without her…this is what I get for not listening to her…I closed my eyes…I didn’t want to see what was going to happen to me…I waited…I felt the Dridder move off my back…but she still held onto me…I could feel she was holding me infront of her…but I refused to look…I refuse to look at my…murderer…during this thpough…I heard a vpice…a beautiful…familier voice…
“Her…what going on?what’s with the noise out here?...” it said…I opened my eyes and looked over my shoulder…Jewlia woke up…she looked over at me and the Dridder…
“Oh dear…” she said out…”Mimi…put her down!...she’s not food!...” she cried out…
Hearing that…I grew confused…Mimi?...who’s Mimi?...was…was it this dridder?...does Jewlia know this Dridder…I looked over at the Dridder…she looked at me…she gave a little sigh and released me…I was confused a little but I took no time to think of it…I ran as fast as I could to Jewlia…when I got to her…she picked me up and took me to her face…
“Selky…are you ok?...I’m sorry about this…really I am…” she said out…”I’m sorry for Mimi’s behavior…really…I am…please don’t be mad at her…I’ll take the blame…”
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Aurora's Story part 56-60




Part 56




At this point...I didnt know what to think...at once side...I had this dridder think just try to eat me...and on this other side...I have Jewlia saying that she's sorry for the dridders actions...I'm very confused...I didnt really want to stand next to the dridder...not after attacking me...she could try somthing...I ran over to Jewlia...Jewlia let down her hand and took me to her face...
"Jewlia...what's going on...who is that...monster?..." I asked...Jewlia gave a deep sigh...her eyes showed a look of sadness in them...she seemed very tense...she was saking a little making it difficult to stand in the palm of her hand...
"Well...you see...that dridder...I...she...she has no home...I'm taking care of her..." she said with a slight strain in her voice...
"What...why?...arent those...arent those dridders bad!..." I cried out...remembering the encounters me and Aurora had with them...
"No...not all...alot of them are good hearted...please...please dont judge Mimi just for her race...she's been through alot..." Jewlia mumbled...
"but she attacked me..." I replied...I showed Jewlia my bloody hand from when..."Mimi" hit me with somthing...
"...I'm sorry...I...she just...hunts at nigjt...she dosent know you...so...she thought...you were just...pray..." Jewlia mumbled...she looked down for a second...I looked in the direction where she seemed to be looking...that dridder was climbing up her arm onto her hand...I turned away...I didnt want to look at her...she's just like the others...
"Seliky...please dont be like that..." Jewlia said out...I felt movement around me...Jewlia brought her hands to meet each other...bringing that Dridder next to me...the dridder had long white hair that led to both of her shoulders and her back...she looked like a teenager...well...one with half a spider for a body...she wore a dark cape thing around her neck that covered her...ahem...upper female features...she didnt have anything else on...she had scary looking eyes...like...her pupils were whitish in color...her stare was blank those...it looked like she was in some sort of trance...she barely even blinked...and it almost looked as if she wasnt breathing...
The dridder placed her hands behind her back and she looked slightly away...she seemed to have been trying to say somthing...
"I...apologies...for...my...illrational behavior..." she said to me...her voice...was very...well...weird...it sound very...I donno...fake...not like fake as in she was faking her apology but fake as in...monotonish...like a robot I guess...she paused alot too...
"I guess I could...forgive you...only because you somehow know Jewlia..." i replied...I still dont really like this Mimi person...she strange...and her first impression wasnt the best one...
"I...thank you..." she replied slowly...she started to cough alittle...she then looked over at Jewlia...
"I...must be...going...now..." she the looked at me... "...goodbye..." she then started making her way back to the ground inti the darkness...I then looked back at Jewlia...
"She such a trouble soul..." she muttered...
"Ok Jewlia...so WHY do you have this Mimi girl?..." I asked...Jewlia closed her eyes...
"It's a complicated story..." she replied...I sat down...I knew this was going to be long... "...well...it was about two months ago...I was hungry...and I sensed a vehical moving not to far...so well...I caught it with my roots and well...ate the men in it...it was an armored vehical...it seemed they were delivering somthing...I looked in the back where I found Mimi in chains...she was thin and pale...I couldnt just let her die...so I took care of her..."
"Why would people be moving a Dridder around...
"I was getting there...Mimi wasnt the only thing I found...when I was looking in the truck...I found some files,..I was curios so I looked at them...aparently...a secret milatery orginization was developing a virus...a powerfull virus that only effect and kill Felaryan predators...and...they were testing it on verious of creatures...one being Mimi...they...were...successfull...the virus requires a host body to gros...so...they infected Mimi and were going to deliver her to Negav so they could make the virus kill the ones infected faster and then mass produce the virus...I kinda...well...stoped deliver...by accident...kinda..." Jewlia mumbled...I was speechless...to think all that happened...then I started to think...
"Wait...you said Mimi is infected...that mean..." Jewlia cut me off before I could continue...
"Mimi is dieing...I...I dont know how long she has to live..." Jewlia mumbled...I froze in my place...
"Is...is there anything that could be done?..." I said out...Jewlia let out a big sigh...
"...I'm trying my best to cure her but...the virus is man made...which means my berries are unable to cure it...they could if I could get a sample of the virus...but...that requires Mimi to...die..." Jewlia mumured as she looked at the floor...her face showed a deep look of shame..."I'm...I'm trying the best I can..."
"Why didnt you tell us this before..." I cried out...
"I may be isolated here but I am very much aware about the despute between the Naga's and Dridders...I...I thought you Aurora wouldnt...like me if you knew..." Jewlia mumbled...there she lost me...
"Despute?...betweed the Dridders and Naga's?..." I said in confusion...
"I dont remember the details...somthing about a queen..." Jewlia replied...I began to think a little...is this why the dridders are agressive to Aurora...Aurora isnt from Felarya...she dosent even know this world herself...
"Well you dont need to worry about Aurora...she dosent know about this dispuet...so you dont need to hide Mimi from her...Hitomi on the other hand..."
"Yes I know..." Jewlia mumbled...I closed my eyes...I felt like a total creep right now...I thought ill of Mimi...but...after what Jewlia told me...I...feel really bad...I...I feel real sorry for Mimi...I need to talk to her...




Part 57




Jewlia spent some time fixing up my injured hand from earlier…she wrapped it up with some sort of leaf that she told me would help keep the cut from being infected…I asked her where I could find Mimi right now…she said that Mimi spends most of her time living under Jewlia’s trunk and only comes out to hunt…even then…she only comes out at night…Jewlia placed me back on the ground…I couldn’t help but knowtise that Jewlia looked a little different…she seemed more pale then when I saw her a few hours back…maybe it’s just my imagination…the moon does make some things look pale at night…I mean…I pretty much glow from moonlight…
In that thought…I noticed a little movement from a opening that was under Jewlia’s trunk…I slowly walked over to it and peered inside…I saw Mimi sitting in the corner in a web…she was holding something in her hand…but I couldn’t tell what it was…it was a bit dark in here…I walked inside a little when Mimi looked at me…she stared at me blankly for a little bit…her gaze…felt as if it was piercing into my soul…it…sent a shiver down my spine…I had to turn away…I couldn’t help it…
“…Jewlia told me about…what happened to you…” I mumbled…I looked over back at Mimi…she was walking up to me slowly…she stepped into the moonlight letting me see her more…I finally saw what was in her hands…it was a little stuffed doll…it looked a little familiar…it had green hair a large green eyes…I then realized it was a little doll of Jewlia…it looked rather cute really…
“That’s a cute doll…where did you get it?...” I asked…Mimi looked at the doll for a second…
“A…ghost friend…made it…” Mimi replied…it made no sense…a ghost friend…what does she mean by that?…
“A ghost?...” I said back…she nodded and turned away…
“She…come sometimes…comes to say…hello…to..me…” she replied…I still didn’t really get what she meant…but I let it pass…Mimi started walking over to the other ride of the small room to the web…I wasn’t sure if I should fallow her or not…I mean…I didn’t want to make her feel uncomfortable…
“Um…I’m sorry I kind of…rejected you at first…” I mumbled… “I mean…I didn’t know that…you are…” I paused…I didn’t want to offend her…I mean…it must be real hard on someone that knows they don’t have very long to live…
“…There…is no need…to…apologies to me…I…understand the…situation that…happened…” she said back…I couldn’t tell if she was serious or not…her voice sounded…un-emotional…I feel so weird to listen to her…
“I still feel really bad…is there any way I could…well…make up for it…” I asked slowly…Mimi turned to me…she stared at me with her…unblinking eyes for a while…it…really creeps me out…she suddenly started to cough a little…she closed her eyes after she stopped coughing…she placed her hand on her chest and sighed…
“It…has pain…sometimes…” she said quietly…she then turned around and continued on her way…I sighed and turned away…I just feel…like a complete jerk right now…I mean…it hurts enough that I treated one in this kind of situation badly…but…to think that I can’t tell if she forgives me or not…it…it’s just so awkward…as I walked…I noticed Mimi walking past me…her hands were inside her black cape so I couldn’t see them…I wonder what she is going to do…
“Where are you going Mimi?...” I asked softy…she didn’t even look back at me…
“I…am going to…hunt…” she responded with her hesitantly monotoneish voice…I looked over at Jewlia for a second…she looked as if she was trying to go to sleep…when I looked back to see Mimi…she was gone…I was surprised…I didn’t even hear her move…yet…I was right next to her…so much for talking to her…she…doesn’t seem to want to be spoken to…I sighed to myself and walked back over to Jewlia…I might as well wait for Mimi to come back…
“*yawn*…not much luck huh Seliky?...” I heard from above me…I looked up seeing Jewlia looking down at me…I shook my head no… “Well…Mimi is a little…um…quiet and awkward to be around at first…but she is really a nice girl once you get to know her…”
“It just feels so weird Jewlia…just…how she is and stuff…I mean…it’s just so hard to try to talk to her…and the way she talks…it sounds like she isn’t even alive…” I said back…Jewlia let out a big sigh…
“well she unfortunately had no one to teach her how to speak…and kind of picked it up by herself at where ever she was being test on…you’ll get used to what she is trying to say when you listen to her…” she said back as she lifted me up and placed me on her shoulder…




part 58




It’s been a few minutes sense Mimi left to go hunt…during the entire time…I wondered how she must feel about this…knowing she’s dying and it can’t be helped…she must had to matured really fast…a…bit too fast…and in a way…where…she seems to be like a robot…without feeling…without anything…I can’t tell if she is feeling pain or not…it’s like she isn’t even a person at all…
“Seliky…are you still thinking about Mimi?...” Jewlia suddenly said to me…I looked over to her from her shoulder…even if she was half asleep…something about Jewlia is…so grand…so full of beauty…
“Yeah…I am…” I mumbled…letting out a big sigh before I turned away…”I mean…just how she is…it makes me wonder you know…”
“Well the only person she’s has been around most of her life was herself…I hardly thin she had interactions with her own kind when she was being studied…yet alone interact with anything…but she has changed a little…she does smile…she used to never smile…she even made a friend…this little girl that comes every so often…she so cute…she comes and plays dolls with Mimi…but…I just…have this weird feeling about her…I don’t really know what it is…I mean…maybe she relates to Mimi somehow…” Jewlia explained…
“What do you mean?...” I asked…
“Well…the girl…she just seems so scared all the time…” Jewlia said back.
“Scared?...” I replied…
“I can’t really explain it all that well…maybe you’ll meet her one day and you’ll understand then…” Jewlia said back…I turned away for a second and began to think a little…
“Have you ever tried to let Mimi interact with other people…her own race perhaps?...” I asked…Jewlia turned away and gave a big sigh…
“I’m afraid she tried that on her own…a few months back…she ran away wanting to be a Dridder an live in Dridder forest…she…said she hated me…I told her she couldn’t go in her health but she ran off anyways…after that…I haven’t heard from her for a week…then…she came back…hurt…weak and nearly starving…” Jewlia mumbled…
“Why did you take her back in?...” I asked…I mean…saying you hate someone is a pretty nasty blow…
“I…I just couldn’t let her die out there…and…I…I always did feel so alone…even if she doesn’t talk…at least I know that I have someone…” Jewlia mumbled…Jewlia began to give a little cough and then sighed…”Yeah…I know…sound a little pathetic…”
“Jewlia…don’t feel bad…you did the right thing…I bet if there were a lot of people like you…things around here would be as chaotic…” I said out…Jewlia is just so loving…so kind and gentle hearted…
“If you say so Seliky…” she replied with a yawn…I could tell Jewlia really wanted to go to sleep…I guess she is staying awake to make sure I get home safely…
“I think I should leave you alone for now…I kept you awake too long…” I said out…Jewlia looked over at me…
“Oh…right…right…” Jewlia replied…she lift her hand to me and I climbed on…she then lowered me to the floor where I hopped off…I turned and looked at Jewlia who was moving upright again…
“Goodnight Jewlia…sorry for keeping you up…” I said to her…Jewlia smiled and gave a little giggle…
“Oh no…I enjoy your company…thank you for coming…” Jewlia said back before letting out a big yawn…I smiled and waved goodbye and turned around…but then…I ran into something and my face hit something very soft like two small cushions making me fall back…I looked up…seeing I ran into Mimi’s chest…She stared at me for a second with her pales eyes and blank stare…but after a while…she let out her hand…
“Are…you injured?...” she asked…I looked at her hand for a second…and then took it…
“Yeah…I’m fine…” I replied as she helped me up…I wiped some of the dirt off my sweater and looked back at her…I couldn’t see her arms because they were behind her came but I saw a long arrangement of webbing leading from behind her cape where her arm would be to a large cocoon of webbing that she was dragging behind her…it looked like something…I mean…someone was struggling inside of it…I felt a slight chill run down my spine…
“Um…I see your hunt was…um…successful…” I mumbled…Mimi looked behind herself and looked at the cocoon for a few seconds before looking back over to me…
“I…should have no hunger for…the rest of the night now…” she replied slowly…right then…I saw her blink…it was the first time I have seen her blink for the first time I saw her…I was beginning to think she couldn’t blink at all…
“Well…I guess I shouldn’t really keep you from that…” I mumbled…Mimi stared at me for a long time…it creeped me out a little…
“Why don’t you go with Seliky Mimi…you could escort her to her home with Aurora…maybe you’ll be able to meet Aurora…” Jewlia called out to us…Mimi looked over to her and gave a shrug…
“Must I?...” she said softly…she then looked over at me before bringing her hand near her lip…
“I…guess…I could…I…Just need to place this in…my den…please wait a moment…” she said out…she started heading over to Jewlia where her den was located under Jewlia’s trunk…she disappeared into the darkness for a second…later she came back out…holding something in her hands…when she came close I saw it was her Jewlia doll…
“I’m…ready to proceed…Lets…head on…please lead…” she said to me…at first I couldn’t get my words to come out…so I just nodded…I looked back at Jewlia who seemed to had just fallen asleep…I began to walk…It was very quiet during the walk…so quiet that…the only thing that could be hear was my breath and the sounds from the jungle around us…I still couldn’t hear Mimi’s breathing…her chest didn’t move in and out either like she wasn’t breathing at all…Mimi held her doll close to her chest with one hand on the head and she stroked it gently…she must really like that doll…
“Who…is this…Aurora…that…Jewlia spoke of earlier…” Mimi said…breaking the silence…I nearly jumped up…I didn’t expect her to speak to me…
“Oh…she’s…she’s a really good friend of mine…more like a sister really…I live with her…well…most of the time…she’s really nice…you’ll really like her…” I said out…Mimi just nodded and looked ahead…continuing to stroke her doll…
“Um…so…you went to the Dridder Forest before…um…how was it…I mean…what made you leave…” I asked…remembering what Jewlia said about her running away…Mimi stared at me blankly…
“It…was…depressing…few of my kind were kind like Jewlia…most…just spoke in mean words and about some…Sineria person will…rise one day…some tried to eat me as well…I made a few friends…they were nice…but I had to leave…I couldn’t…stand such a place…” she replied with her blank voice…




Part 59




After a few minutes of walking…me and Mimi came to the entrance to Aurora’s burrow. Mimi stared at the entrance before looking over to me with her blank gaze…she stroked her doll gently as she let out a tiny sigh…
“Well…um…here we are…” I said uncomfortably…Mimi just stared at me as her reply…I sighed to myself as I walked inside…Mimi fallowed behind…as we walked…I began to think what I should tell Aurora when I show up with Mimi…I mean…first of all I snuck out of the burrow when she tells me all the time to never leave the burrow without her…second…I’m showing up with a person who’s race attacked her many times and she is…well…somewhat afraid of them…I can’t just be like…
“Hello Aurora…listen I snuck out when you said I shouldn’t and look what fallowed me home…” I doesn’t work like that…*sigh* I just hope that Aurora wouldn’t get angry at me…I feel I just Burdon her so much lately…I really don’t want to Burdon her…she’s done so much for me…she sacrificed so much for me…I don’t want her to think ill of me…I really don’t…
“Is…there something of…a trouble child?...” Mimi suddenly asked me…I shook a bit…
“Oh…no nothing is wrong…nothing at all…” I said back…Mimi stared at me for a second and shook her head slowly…
“You look to your left…the side...of which one…is making a story…I…appreciate…if you tell me…the truth…” she replied…a chill ran down my back…
“What…what do you mean?...” I asked…a little nervous…
“When one….looks…to the left…of…the seeing eye…they are…looking into…the past…and…to the right…of the seeing eye…they…are making a…story…” she replied…I recognize this somewhat…Ms. T did something like this before…she said that you can tell when someone lies on the direction they look when they say it…
“Well…I’m just a little worried about when Aurora see’s you…” I replied slowly…Mimi turned away and stroked her doll a little…
“…then…I…shall go?…” Mimi replied.
“No no no…it’s fine…don’t worry…” I replied…Mimi stared at me a little…but she just sighed to herself and walked over next to me…
“Then…I…shall continue…” Mimi said out…I sighed to myself and continued walking…this Mimi girl is getting stranger the more I spend time with her…I wonder if Aurora would like her…I closed my eyes for a little bit…thinking about the recent events…right then…I felt a hand on my shoulder…I opened my eyes and looked over to Mimi…she had an odd expression on her face…She seemed to have been staring at something…I turned to see what she was looking at…I froze in my spot…the tunnel seemed partially destroyed…the walls looked as they were collapsing and there were drag marks all over the place…as if there was a struggle that happened earlier…something bad must be going on…wait…Aurora…something must have happened to her…
“Mimi…fallow me…quick!...” I said out as I began to move ahead quickly…I had to see if she was ok…if she is still in the same place where I left her…who know what could have happened…I turned the comer and…then…my heart sank into my chest…the chamber that Me and Aurora was in…it…it was completely collapsed…I began to panic…I was unsure what was going on…I…I could only assume the worse…that…something broke in here…Mimi caught up to me and stood still for a while…she placed her hand on my shoulder and turned me around…
”I…hear noises…from afar…” she told me…I looked over to her…maybe it was Aurora…maybe she needs help…
“Where…where is it coming from…” I cried out…Mimi pointed to her left…
“I’ll…take you…” she replied…she walked over to me and lifted me up…she then placed me on her back…she then darted at great speed…faster than I…yet…any human could move…I had to hold on…to prevent myself from flying off and crashing onto the ground…we bounced off the walls of the tunnels like something you’d expect in some ninja movie…as we moved…I heard the noises that Mimi was talking about…it was the sound of crashing…and…shrieking…like…some monster…we came to the front exit of the burrow that led to the cold night outside…Mimi let me off and looked over to me…
“I…am unsure…if…it is safe to…move on…” she replied with her monotoneish voice…I didn’t care if it was safe or not…I had to see…if…Aurora is ok…I…I don’t want to think what…what could have happened to her…I really don’t…I ran ahead outside…but as soon as I exited…something crashed into the ground ahead of me…sending me clean off my feet…I couldn’t react fast enough…and I slammed into the ground and tumbled into a tree..I laid there in pain for a while…but I opened my eyes and lifted myself up…I turned around to see what just happened…my eyes widened…seeing Aurora face down on the ground…covered in bruises and…blood…she…was trying to get back up…but…she…she seemed that she was in too much pain to get back up…
“Aurora!...” I cried out…Aurora turned her head and saw me…
“Seliky?...Seliky get out of here!...get out of here now!...it…it’s back!...” she cried out…I was confused for a second…
“It’s back?...what is back?...” I said back…before I could even reach Aurora…my question was answered…a loud crashed filled the area…knocking me over…I looked up in horror…seeing a large…blue liquid like…monster with a seemingly transparent body with large tendrils ad a single yellow eye…it seemed…almost snake like…
“W…what is that thing!?!” I cried out…
“Seliky…you got to get out of here…that…that’s the…same creature that…attacked us before…it…it’s changing!...” Aurora cried out...I froze in my spot…staring in horror at the creature…it was scary before as the amoeba thing…but…but now…it’s…it’s a monster…Aurora managed to get herself upright and she stood between me and the monster…she looked like she was in extreme pain just to keep herself upright…
“I’…I’ll distract it…you…you go…please…go to Jewlia…go to Hitomi…go to anyone…please…I don’t…I don’t want to lose you…not after what I felt the first time!...” Aurora cried out…I couldn’t move…I…I was frozen in fear…I didn’t know what to do…I wanted to run…but…I couldn’t…Aurora wants me to run…but…what’ll happen to her…she’ll…she’ll get hurt…or even…die…I don’t want to lose her…she…she is one of my only friends in this miserable world…I can’t just leave her to die after all she sacrificed for me…but…but what can I do…I…I am only…a…human girl who can’t do anything right…I…I don’t know if I can even help Aurora…I…I don’t know what to do anymore…




Part 60




My heart fell completely into my stomach…seeing the creature slowly make it’s way to Aurora…who could barely hold herself up…I know Aurora wont be able to hold her ground for long…but…I…I’m nothing compared to that…monster…I stared into Aurora’s eyes…she…seemed so…weak…yet…even how much pain she must be feeling right now…she still is trying…to protect me…she sacrifice so much for me…and now…she’s sacrificing her life…I cant let her do this…I need to help…
“Seliky…what are you waiting for!...run!...” Aurora cried out…my arms began to sake…I cant leave her behind…I need to think of something…right thenI saw a tendril lashing out at me from the creature…my eyes widened…it was moving too fast for me to try to dodge it…but then…I felt something swish my me…as if something just zoomed past me at great speed…in a blink of an eye…something slashed the tendril and it fell to the ground just as it was about to impale me…there…next to me was Mimi…her arm was out from under her cape…revealing her claws at her fingertips…her arm was covered in small glops of blue goo…that seemed to be burning her skin…but…she seemed as if it didn’t bother her…she just hid her arm under her cape and looked over to me…
“…Go chiled…I will…help…your friend….” She said to me…I just stared at her for a bit,,,but then I turned to Aurora…who was in a arm lock with the creature…before I could say anything…Mimi zipped off at great speed….she leaped high into the air and landed on Aurora’s shoulder…she then lashed out at the tendril that was pinning Aurora to a tree with her claws…the tendril fell to the floor…but then slowly…the gooey mess crept it’s way back to the main body of the creature…forming into a new tendril…Mimi then pulled out two dagger looking things that curved down…they seemed familier for some reason…almost like…thorns or something…as Aurora tried to regain her balance…Mimi jumped into a tree…only to use the branch to propel herself directly at the creatures face…before she could make contact a tendril bursted out of the ground and struct her to the side…sending off course and crashing onto the ground…The creature turned it’s attention to her…arms seemed to be forming on the creature with large claw on both of them…making it look like a transparent demon with a long snake like body and pointed face…It slowly made it’s way to Mimi…Mimi quickly turned around a threw something at the creature…it struck the creature in the it’s single yellow eye…it’s like…Mimi was some sort of ninja…she moves so fast and she seems to pull things out of nowhere…while the creature was blinded…Aurora tackled it from behind and they both fell to the floor…The creature gave a loud shriek as tendrils formed on it’s body and wrapped themselves around Aurora’s neck…Aurora began to screm…it seamed as if…the tendril was…burning her…I couldn’t stand to look at this…I turned around and ran into the burrow as fast as I could…I had to help somehow…Mimi might be able to hold off that creature for a while but I don’t know for how long…I need to find something that would even things up…I must have something here…something here to help…something that could do enough damaged…I ran into the chamber that I left all my inventions…I made a few weapons inventions…but…they are only proto-types…and are untested…I have no clue if they would even work…but I have to try…I need to do all that I can to help Aurora…I grabbed my backpack and ran over to the small pile of cylinders on the ground…I stuff them into my backpack and ran over to the water-gun I got as a gift from Ms. T …I grabbed it and ran over to the area where I made the attachables to it…I modded it to be able to shoot liquid Nitrogen instead of water…sadly I only have one container of the stuff that Aurora found for me…so I can only use one tank of it…but it’ll have to do…I then moved over to where I left the plasma launcher…it should help…hopefully it’ll work…it’s been having a lot of bugs lately…I picked it up and got the strap…I hung it around my side as I headed over to the ammunition for it…I only have 15 rounds of it…so that means I can use it 3 to 15 times…after stuffing that into by backpack I headed over to prototype shields I made…I grabed the small one and and attach the cahin to my pocket and then put the main part into my pocket…I then took the larger shield and placed it on my back…this should help me not get myself killed…it’s crazy enough I’m going to take this creature on…lastly I ran over to the only prototype that I actually know work…the plasma rod…I grabed the small cylinder and placed it in my pocket…now I am ready…I…I just hope Aurora and Mimi are ok…I just hope I am not too late!...
I flew my backpack over my shoulder and ran as fast as I could…it was heard…being weighted down by my gear…I nearly fell over a few times…which would have been bad if I did…falling down could trigger all the cylinders in my bad…which would pretty much make me all over the walls…I headed outside again…but instead of seeing an ongoing fight…I just saw the reminents of a battlefield…The fight must have moved elsewhere…I have to find them…that creature looks like it can take both of them on easily…I ran to the left…the debree seem more scattered there…they must have moved in that direction…I ran as fast as my little legs could…I ignored the cramps I felt from my over running and my out of shap body…all I cared about was my friends who are risking their lives for me…from afar…I heard crashing…that must be them…this is it…time for me to show that monster all I’ve go…no one attacks my friends and gets away with it!...
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Aurora's Story part 61-65




part 61





...I ran through the thick thicket of fallen tree's a rubble...trying to get to Aurora...Mimi...those who are risking everything for me...I...I cant let them die...I...I just cant...I would never be able to live with that burdon on my back...I have to swallow my fear and gather all the strength my frail human body has to offer agains this...this horrible monster...
...Suddenly somthing flew by and crashed onto a nearby tree and fell right to my feet...It was Mimi!...I quickly ran to her and kneeled torwards her...she looked badly injured...her skin was bloody red with purple spots from bruises...her lip was busted and she was drooling out blood...
"...Mimi...Mimi are you alright...please say somthing!..." I called out...She opened her blank eyes and looked torwards me...
"...Seliky...why are you...here...please head for shelter..." she told me with her robotic like voice...
"...No Mimi...I cant...I have to help!..." I said back...I began to hear crashes from not too far away...It has to be Aurora...she must be still fighting...I have to help her before ehe gets killed!...
"Mimi stay here and rest...I have to help Aurora...dont worry ok?..." I sais to her as I dropped a few First-Aid supplies infront of her and then started running torwards the crashing sounds...
...as I ran...the sound of fighting grew louder and louder...the closer I got...the more dibris there was...I then entered a small open area...I reconize it because it's not too far from Negav...there I saw Aurora...hunched forward while leaning against a tree...she look hurt...injured so much that it even hurts me just looking at her...across from her was the creature...It looks as if it barely taken any damage at all and still ready to fight...but Aurora looks as if she cant barely hold herself up...
...The creature slowly made itself closer to Aurora...ready to do the finishing blow...and Aurora looks too weak to even defend herself...I have to do somthing...I grabbed my Plasma Launcher and placed five cylinders into it as fast as possible...this is it...time for me to show what I can do!...
"...Hey you...Blue blob thing!...no one messes with my friends and gets away with it!..." I yelled out...the creature slowly turned torwards me..."...Yes I'm talking to you...you big jerk!...if you want to mess with someone...mess with me!..."
...The creature shot out a tendril at me at high speed...giving barely any time to react...I jumped out of the way as the tendril came crashing down...I started running as fast as I could torwards the creature as I activated the launcher...I set the delay time and tossed it like a frizbee as hard as I could torwards it just as it shot out more tendrils at me...I tried to leap out of the way by the tendril struck me in the side...sending me clear into the air and crashing down onto the floor...I felt an exstreme burning sensation on my side...the goo was burning through my sweater and my skin...I looked up seeing the creature looming over me...ready to strike me down...and I smiled...
"...lets see how you like super heated plasma!..." I cried out...just then...the launcher which was directly inside the creature lactivated and launched five Plasma charged cylinder straight into the monster...they all the blew up at the same time..lblowing the right side of the monster entirely apart...sending it's blew goo all over the place...the creature cried in pain while it staggering about and crashed onto the floor...I took this time to run over to Aurora...
"...Aurora...are you alright?..." I asked...
"...*cough*...Seliky...w...what are you...d...doing here..." she said back...I could tell she was is great pain and it was hard for her to speak...
"...I cant just sit back let you die Aurora!...I had to help!...I dont care if I die...I cant live with knowing I could had helped!..." I replied...
"...Seliky look out!..." Aurora cried out...I turned around to see a Tendril coming right at me...
...Right then I seen a flash sliced the tendrill and it splattered onto the floor...I looked over seeing Mimi struggling to get up with blue goo all over her arm...
"...Mimi..."
"...I...can still fight..." she said out as she regained her balance...I then turned torwards the monster...I saw that it's body was slowly reforming as all of it's parts that were blown of crept it's way back to tge main body...
"...Aurora...this thing has to have some sort of weakness!..." I cried out...
"...the...the first time we encountered it...I...made contact with one of the orbs inside it...it seems to injure it if the pink orb is hit..." Aurora replied...
"...That must be it's weakness!..." I called back.
"...The sphere is...to deep...we cannot...strike...without...being injured...ourselves..." Mimi replied...It's true...any contact with the creature causes serious consequences...and entering it is suiside...
...before I could think some more...I saw a tendril shoot out at me...I lept out of the way and quickly pulled out my Plasma Rod...I activated it causing it to exstrend out and reveal it's plasma charged blade at the end...I then quickly sliced of the tendril before it could strike Aurora...the tendril splatterd onto the floor and began to creep its way back to it's main body...
"...Thanks...Seliky..." Aurora said yo me...
"...no problem...now lets beat this guy down!..." I replied...
...Aurora lunged forward and tackled the monster while Mimi jumped into to air...landing on a tree branch...leaving behind a long sticky web...saw a tendril heading torwards her so I quickly pulled out my Liquid Nitrogen Squirt Gun and sprayed it...the Tendril froze completely and the monster let out a cry in pain...
"...I see this guy dosent like Ice very much...maybe we can stand a chance against this thing after at..." I told myself...I grab hold of Mimi's web and used it to swing closer to the creature...more tendrils shot out at me...but I sprayed them freezing them in their tracks...for the ones I missed...Mimi sliced off with her claws...but before I could get close to where the sphere was...a stray Tendril struck me sending me high into the air...I began to fall and knew that this fall could kill...the ground was getting closer and closer...but suddenly I felt a big force push on me...I was dazed for a bit but I then realized Aurora just lunged herself and caught me...she crashed onto the ground as slid a bit but we were alright...for the most part...
"...thanks Aurora..." ...I said to her...she only gave a small smile as she placed me on the floor...from here on I know this fight is going to be tough...but I know that I have to use everything in my power to make sure we win this fight...if not surely we arent going to make it out alive...and I am not about to let that happen!...





Part 62





I knew that from how this battle was turning out so far...that me, Mimi and Aurora wont stand a chance against this unusual blob creature that is stalking me and Aurora...and the only thing we know is that seems to be able to injure it is that...it sphere things seem to be a weakness and that it dosent like to be frozen...but even then...it sees like this creature could regenerate somehow...so even if we could injure it...it'll just come back later on will all wounds healed while we still are suffering from this battle...it's almost like...we are just trapped in a corney by the constant abuse of this creature...I mean...what does it want from us?...we didnt do anything to it...and Aurora dosent have anything in particular that it could want...why is it attacking us...this makes no sense...and now we brought Mimi into this...she's already dying...all I know is that...I have to somehow end this battle before one of is killed...I do have a hunch about his creature...but...I dont know if it's actually correct...but it's the only thing I really have to work by and the onlly thing we can actually do...
"...Aurora...we...we have to manage to hold off this...this THING untile dawn..." is said out...Aurora slowly turned torwards me...I could see it in her eyes...she didnt have the fight left in her to last her untile sunup...she looked utterly horrable...she had open wounds all over her body fallowed by blue bruises and burn marks that went deep into her skin...it's so bad that...even I could almost feel her pain...Mimi wasnt much better...but she seemed to not be effected by the pain at all...just standing there with her almost...blank face...the only thing diffrent was I could actually see her breathing now...
"...Seliky...h...how are we...going to manage to do that...this...creature is...to strong..." she said out...I staired at her for a second...then looked over to the creature which was slowly creeping closer to us...killing all the plants and tree's that happen to be unlucky enough to be in it's path...to be honestly had no idea how we were going to be able to do that...even with this creatures weaknesses...we cant really do much...I mean...my Liquid Nitrogen Squirt Gun barely has half a tank left and it's nearly impossible to strike that inner core hing without one of us losing an arm or somthing...and we barelly made it out alive with the first enc ounter with this...thing...the only reason we came out ok wasx that...Aurora went into that...Tsuin Hitogara thing...and despite on how much of a beating she has taken now...it hasnt even been triggard...maybe is I find a way to trigger it...Aurora would be able to stand a fighting chance against the creature...but...how am I so post to do that?...
Before I could think on it more...suddenly a Tendril shot out of the ground ahead of me and shot torwards me...I had to ack fast...I quickly took out the DMB Watch that I inveted...it floated infront of me and quickly generated a barrier...hopefully this prototype works or else I'm going to have a big hole in my chest...
The tendril crashed into the barrier...making the tendril stop in it's tracks and it retreated back into the main body...
"...Seliky?...h...how did you do that?..." ...Aurora asked me....
"...there isnt time to say...we have to hold off this thing before it kills us!..." I replied...
"...I will...attempt...at...slowing it down...you two...devize a plan..." ...Mimi spoke with her soft...almost robatic voice...before I could say anything...she lept off to attack the monster...there isnt much to be done now...so looked over to Aurora who was trying to hold herself up by using a tree...I cant let her fight anymore...not in the condition she is in...the only way she could put up a fight is if she was in that state...
"...Aurora...you are too hurt to continue on...we'll hold it back...you have to get to Jewlia so she can raise you back to health..." I said out as I reactivated my plasma rod...
"...N...no Seliky...I...I cant...let you get yourself hurt...I wont leave you alone...with...that...that thing..." she responeded...I could tell she was struggling...her breaths were deep and her words almost...seem jumbled...but I can force her...she's giant aftger all and I'm just...well...me?...
"...well...just...just try to rest a little...only fight if you need to protet yourself...we'll handle this Aurora......I...I just dont want you hurt..." I replied...I could see it Aurora's eyes that...she didnt want me to do this...and I dont blame her...this is pretty much suiside...but I know what I need to do...even if I will end up being killed in the process...Aurora is much more important that me...she has her life ahead of her...but 'm exspendable...I'm not nearly as much worth than Aurora is...so I must do anything I can to save the only person in this unforgiving world who was wlling to help me when I didnt even diserve her kindness...
before Aurora had the chance to answere...I heard a cry...I turned my eyes widdened...Mimi was pinned down by one of the creature's tendrills...I could tells it was burning her...she was crying out in pain and her robe was disolving...I had to act fast...I ran to where she was as fast as my little legs could carry me...charging up the plasma rodc as I ran and slashed at the tendrill...I splashed onto the ground and then krept it's way back to it's main body...
"...Mimi are you alright!?!..." I said out as I looked over to Mimi...her stomach was so burned up...it was bleeding and tissue was showing...but I was surprised to see Mimi picking herself up...how is she doing this?...it's almost as if the pain dosent bother her that much...
"...I am...Fine...we must move...." she replied...she grabbed me suddenly and lept high into the air...I her then a loud crash...looking back I saw a larg tendrill slaming ontothe ground where we once were...if Mimi didnt react...we might have been killed...I then suddenly saw another tendrill shooting out torwards us....before I could warn Mimi...it grabed her by one of her legs and flung us aross the area...sepperating us as we crashed onto the floor...I felt dazed a bit...but luckely before I hit the ground...I manage to use the sheild I made to asorbed some of the fall...if I didnt I could have broken a bone or two...I hoisted myself up...I could feel all my muscles tensing up...I was bleeding all over...it hurt...it hurt so much...but...I have to push on...I looked up seeing the creature creeping its way to Aurora...like it was ignoring me and Mimi...Aurora was barely holding herself up with a nearby fallenn tree...she cant possibly get away...If I dont think of somthing fast...Aurora is done for if I dont...I picked up my stuff and ran torards the giant monster...I cant let that thing get to Aurora...
"Hey you...big drip!...I'm not through with you yet!..." I called out...the creature didnt top moving as if it was ignoring my insaults...I need to stop it...or at least hold if off till AUrora could get away...I grabed one of the few Plasma gernades I had left and chucked them at the creature...blasting a chunk of it's body apart...the monster just stopped...the blue goo that was splattered all over the place just crept it's way back to it's main body...If this thing regenerates...it'll surely get to Aurora...I quickly tossed more gernades at it...hoping it would do enough damage...blast more and more of it's body apart to the point there was hardly anything left...but before I could ontinue my barrage...I just came to a realization that I just used up all my gernades...and all the cylanders that was for the launcher fell out of my bag when I was knocked into the air... have no more fire power...then suddenly...I saw that grass around me begin to turn brown...as if it was dying beneath my feat...a huge blue hang burst out of the ground before I had the chance to react...and it grabbed me...evuloping me in it's blue slime...A...horable agonizing fill my entire body...I could feel my skill burning...I screamedbut the gooey mess muffled mycries...is it over for me...is this really how I am going to die...inside this monster...I...cant...if I die...Aurroa would die too...as the agonizing pain fill my body...I fell tsomthign cool near me...it was one of ther gernades I threw at the creature..it aparently hasnt been activated to denonate...I painfully reached for the plasma gernade...seeing my cloths disolve into nothingness as my skin began to burn more...Finally I managed to reach the gernade...this was the onll thing I could think of to do...nothing else...I...i really hope that...I provided at least...I hope that I oculd...provide enough time for Aurora to get away...I tightly closed my eyes as I hit the detonate button....





part 63





...Everything was suddenly dark...so dark that I couldnt even see my hands infront of my face...I couldnt even feel my own body either...did my gernade...kill me?...am...am I dead?...just a ghost is some sort of...afterlife dimention?...I cant be dead...who would be there to save Aurora from the blob creature...from afar I heard a soft...elegantvoice...I looked around to try to find the origin of the voice...I then saw a woman far into the darkenes...she was coming closer to me...but even as she got closer to me...I couldnt make out her appearance...It's as if the closer she got...the more blurry she appeared...adventually she was right infront of me...I felt really scared...what if this person is some sort of reaper...coming to take me to wherever people go when they die...I closed my eyes tightly...and turned away...as my eyes were closed...I felt her hands touch my face gently...they were soft and smooth...almost as if she was untouched by time...I felt her hand pass across m face untile I felt her fingertip pull away from my face...
Just then...I felt a pain slowly grow throughout my body...it first started very small...but it was fading in and slowly it became almost agonizing...my eyes flung open...seeing the canopy of the trees high above me...I'm still alive...I tried to hoist myself up but my body responded with exsteme pain. My body was completely messed up...almost all my cloths were dissolved away...I was bleeding an large area's of my body was were disolved slightly when I was inside that monster...I felt incredibly weak...not only it hurt badly when I move...but...I dont even thing I have the strength to even move anymore...I'm completely exausted...I tried my best to hoist myself up using the base of a nearby tree...as I painfully hoisted myself up...I could see the path of which I took after I detonated my gernade in the middle of the creature...there was a bloodstain on a nearby boulder and a small impression in the ground near it with more bof my blood...I must have been blasted away...hit the ground and then smashed into the boulder...how am I even alive?...a human surely would die from that...especially after being inside that monster and taking a full blow from a compressed Plasma gernade...it makes so sense at all...
I then knowtised from afar...was the blob creature...and infront of it was Aurora...but...somthing about her was completely diffrent...her head hung down and her fists were tightly closed...I could swear I could feel this...energy pulsation from her body...I...I cant help but to feel terrified...what's going on with Aurora?...
...It was then that Aurora looked up...A chill ran down my spine as I saw somthing that I wished I would never see again...her eyes...were completely yellow...having this cold dark....evil stare...she...she's no longer the Aurora I know and love...now she's...she's that monster!...
...The blob create struck at her at blinding speed...but...before I could even blink...Aurora struck down each tendril mercilessly...swipping through them with the spines on her arms and ripping them out with her bare hand...She then charged at the creature head on and slammed into it...slamming her fists into it's gooey boy and striking at one of the orbs...the creature let out a loud cry of pain as it frew back...right at me!...I painfully dived behind the boulder...falling onto my chest in pain as I heard a loud crash from the creature crashing onto the ground...after that I saw Aurora charging in witha fully derooted tree and...proceeded to pumble the creature wdown with the tree mercilessly...with no signs of hessitation...just pure bezerk rage...I...I dont know what to think...I feel afraid...the first time seeing Aurora like this frightened me out of my mind...but now...it's even worse that the last ime...just seeing this...uncontrollable rage being unleashed is just...terrifying...
...Aurora showed no sign of letting up as she screamed in anger...even her voice was diffrent now...it was darker sounding...almost sounding like it had an echo to itshe just yelled angerly as she struck down onto the creature...every time she struck the creture with the tree...it got smaller and smaller due to that it's being dissolved every time it makes contact with the creature...adventually there was nthing left...after that she because striking the creature with her fists...it almost seems as she is completely uneffected by the pain of her arms being burned...
...Aftrer taking a serious beatdown...the creature shot up some tendrils to fling Aurora off of it...It's gooey body seemed very bubly now...as if it's less stable...perhaps Aurora somehow managed to weaken it...It's attacks are also alot slower...If Aurroa keeps this up...maybe she could get rid of this monster once and for all...but...iwhat would happen after that?...is she going to be stuck like this?...
...The creature let out a roar weak roar before shooting out more tendrils at Aurora...but Aurora just swipped them away with her spiked covored arms as shse dashed at the creature...striking it down with great strengh...the battle almost seems one sided now...Aurora is bezerkingly destroying the creature...to the point where I kinda want to feel sorry for the creature...but not really...not after all the suffering it caused me and my friends to go through...but...why do I not feel better about this...Aurora is winning the fight...it's this Tsuin Hitogara thing...it isnt Aurora at all...it turn her insto a brainwash monster...I wonder if Aurroa is even aware what is going on right now...
...The creature seemed very weak now...it's attacks werent doing a thing to Aurora and it seemed more sluggish...It looks almost like it's trying to retreat...but even then...Aurora continued to strike it down with no signs of letting up at all...after a while...the creature managed to strike Aurora away with a tendril..knocking Aurora into a tree...toppling the poor tree over when she crashed into it...before Aurora could get up and contiinue her wrath onto the creature...the creature painfully crawled away and phased into the ground...leaving only a large patch of dead plants and grass...Aurora did it...she won!...




Part 64




I couldn't believe Aurora pretty much...single handedly defeated the blog creature and made it retreat all by herself...but...at what cost...she is no longer herself...nothing about her feels the same...and...even if the blob creature is gone now...I'm scared...more scared than I have ever felt before...my body felt stiff...as if my very being was fossilized with this deep fear that my heart feels...
...I stood motionless...staring at the person I know as Aurora...just...motionless across the area with her back turned at me...her spines were sill out from her arm and she seemed to be shaking...almost as if she was a time bomb that as ready to explode any second...I don't know what I should do...I don't even know if it is safe to even go near her...she might attack me if I try...but...but Aurora is my friend...I need to see if she's ok...I closed my eyes tightly as I swallowed my breath...moving very slowly towards Aurora...
"...A...A...Aurora..." I said with hesitation...Aurora didn't seem to respond...she just remained motion less..."Aurora...it's...it's me...Seliky...your friend...remember?..."
...Aurora again didn't respond...I was starting to get really afraid...but despite my fear I took a step closer to Aurora...even through all my pain...as I got closer...the more menacing Aurora looked...it's already terrifying enough that she's so much bigger than I am...but like this...she has no sense of mercy...she could rip me apart in an instant...
...I then accidently stepped on a twig...and suddenly Aurora turned right at me...I nearly had a heart attack...I froze completely still as her cold yellow...demon like eyes looked right at me...she was breathing heavily and her body was very tense...as if her body was pulsating with unimaginable energy...I have to figure out a way to get the Aurora I know and love back...this person in front of me isn't Aurora...I want my Aurora back...and if I don't figure out a way...she...she might stay like this forever...
"...Aurora...it's me...S...Seliky...please...you have to calm down..." I said to her...she didn't reply......just continued to glare at me...like the only thing she wanted was to rip me apart...
"...Aurora please...you won...the blob monster is gone now...you...you can calm down now...you have to..." I cried out as I got a little closer...I know Aurora is still in there...if she want I'd be dead no...but how am I so post to get her out without getting myself killed...last time Aurora snapped to her sense on her own...but this time...it doesn't seem she can...
...Suddenly without warning...Aurora swiped me with her arm...knocking me clean into the air and I plumbled down into the ground...It felt as if a fully armored car with jet boosters attached to it just ran me over...my chest was in so much fain...and i became very difficult to breath from the sharp pain...making each breath almost a gasp
...the pain was unbearable as I tried to hoist myself up...but the pain was so great that I could only sit up...When I did...I saw Aurora lunging at me...she...she was going to kill me!...
"...Aurora...NO!..." I scream as I tightly closed my eyes...tears streaming out from my eyes...then I heard a loud crash...I opened my eyes and I saw that Mimi has struck Aurora...diverting her attention to her and instead of me...Aurora struck a her wildly...destroying anything that was unlucky enough to be in her path...
"...Mimi get out of here!...go and get help..." I cried out...before Mimi could have the chance to respond...Aurora swiped her...Mimi somehow avoided a full blow but she was still knocked into the air...sending her across the field and slamming strait into a tree...falling limp onto he ground...
"...MIMI!..." I cried out as I watch her body hit the ground...she wasn't moving...is...is she dead...did...did my friend kill Mimi...no...the person I see in front of me...it's not my friend...it's not Aurora...and...I don't think Aurora is able to break free...
...Aurora screamed angrily...as if her body was unable to suppress the massive amount of unimaginable blind rage that seems to be almost as if it was radiating from her body...she then turned and looked at me...her pearsing yellow eyes felt almost as if they were actually ripping into my entire being...she began to slowly make her way towards me...this is it...she's going to kill me...and...I...I can't do anything about it...Aurora seems to have completely faded away from this...THING that I see before me...but...Aurora has to be in there...I want to believe that...
"...Aurora...please...I...I know that you don't want to do this...you have to calm down!...please....p...please!..." said out as my eyes began to tear up...She has so much anger...so much anger at me...I don't even think she can even hear anything anymore...
...I began to painfully crawl back as Aurora grew closer and closer to me...eventually...she was directly in front of me...I could see her cold mindless eyes glaring down at me...her muscles tightening...preparing to strike me down in one....final...bloody strike...I guess this is it for me...but...I....I never imagined that I would die like this...by my own friend...even if she is no longer in control of herself...I tightly closed my eyes...I can't take this anymore...I really can't...
"...GO ahead...do it!....Kill me!...You aren't my friend...you...you aren't anything...you taken away my only friend!...the only person that...that accepted me...the thing that...made...life worth living... take that away from me...so go ahead...KILL ME!!!..." I screamed out...Aurora rose up her hand up...preparing to finish me off...she lunged her arm at me...but right then...I felt the ground shake beneath me...Suddenly roots shot out of the ground and coiled around Aurora's arms...halting her in her place...what is going on?...where did these roots come from?...
...Aurora screamed angrily as she pupped at the roots holding her back...she swiped at me with her other hand...I fell back as her deadly claw like hand came down on me...but then more roots shot out and coiled around her other arm...pulling her back even further...she screamed even more...pulling at the roots like a wild animal trying to escape from chains...she pulled so hard that some of the vines snapped...and she literally came to my face...I screamed but more roots shot out...coiling around her newly free hand and her stomach...dragging her back some more...she ripped her way from some more roots but it seemed the more ha were ripped out....the more would coil around her...
...I then realized what was happening...is...is this possibly...Jewlia's doing?...I looked over to my left...I saw Mimi slowly lifting herself up...but that's not all that I saw...in the moons light...I saw a long thread coming from her finger tips....this thread seemed to headed towards the burrow...but what does it mean...did she somehow contact Jewlia with that?...
...I turned my attention towards Aurora...she...seemed like...she was getting weaker...she continued to pull at the roots...bu...she seemed to be getting weaker...her pulling was getting weaker as her cries of anger was fainter...and eventually...she collapsed onto the ground...I then realized what happened...Jewlia's thorns contain sleep toxins...sh...stopped Aurora from attacking me...and...put her to sleep...but...at what cost?...




part 65




…Mimi painfully carried me through the burrow…heading towards where Jewlia is…I could tell Mimi was in great pain…she was limping on her eight legs and breathing heavily…but I am so badly hurt…I can't even move anymore…my legs feel like rubber and it hurts when I take deep breaths…my chest was in great pain…I…think that I might have broken a rib or too…often times…I found myself cringing every time Mimi took a step…I also have the taste in my mouth…I….must have some sort of bleeding somewhere in my body…I…I might not last much longer…but…none of that mattered to me…next to me and Mimi…was Aurora…she was wrapped up like cocoon…being dragged towards Aurora by the root system…she was unconscious…but…what will happen when the sleep toxins wear off?...I…I can't get the horrifying image of Aurora out of my mind…those…piercing yellow eyes…her screaming…her…attacking me…it's as if the scene is permanently embedded in the back of my mind…seeing her like that…ready to kill me in any second…she was so angry…so angry…at me…I…I don't know what to do…I don't even know what to think…she…she was…i…is a monster….who was ready to kill me without hesitation…I tightly closed my eyes…I…I just want Aurora back…I want my friend back…not this…THING next to me…
"…don't…be…doughtfull…S…Seliky…" I suddenly heard out…it was Mimi…her voice seemed very weak and staggerfull…she still kept her monotonic voice…but…it seemed very weak…she must be in very much pain… "…Everything…will be…alright…"
"…No…No it won't Mimi!...Aurora just tried to kill us…she…she tried to…kill me!...and…there wasn't anything I could do about it!...I tried to get her back but she wouldn't…and…now I don't know if I would ever get my friend back…I…I can never look at Aurora the same now…I…I just can't!..." I cried out…suddenly my body was in so much pain from my yelling that I starting coughing loudly…tasting the metallic taste of blood in my mouth…
"…Seliky…you must…keep calm…if not…you…will seriously…harm…yourself…" Mimi said to me…I felt tears start to seep out of my eyes and run down my cheek…burning as they passed over my wounds…
"…Mimi!...the only person who ever loved me is gone!...She's gone!...that monster is NOT AURORA!..." I screamed…Mimi sop moving and stood quietly as is began to cry…burying y face into the torn up remains of Mimi's cape…it just hurt so much…nothing is going to ever be the same anymore…I can see Aurora as the same person I know and love anymore…I can only see…that…that monster…that horrifying monster ripping away to try to kill me…I…IU would have rather been killed by that blob creature than to go through that…and If I lose Aurora forever…i…I might as well just die…I looked over to the person that once called my friend…she seemed so…pale…as if she was just a different person entirely now…I can't even see Aurora anymore…
"…You need…to…focus…on the…positives…If not…then…the negatives will occur…more often…"… Mimi said to me…I sighed to myself and turned away from her…I heard Mimi sigh for the first time…I then felt her smooth cold hands brush against my hair and across my cheek…her hands were warm…which surprised me from how pale she looked…
She placed her hand to the side of my head and gently brought me over to her chest…I could hear her heart beating as she took me into an embrace…I could hold my tears back as she held me…
"…Little one…let out…the tars now…and…just hope that…your friend…will recover and…you will be as one...again…I am confident…that she…will awaken with…her normal conscience…" She added…I rubbed my tearful eyes with the reminisce of my sweater and looked up at the dridder…
"…h…how do you know Mimi?..." I asked…she just looked at me and gave a small sigh…
"…I…Do not…"… she answered… "…but…Jewlia has…always told me that…if…you look at the light side of…the situation…then…you will be just fine…"
I stared at her for a bit…I thought about what she said for a bit…but…what is the light side of this situation…I know that…we managed to escape from that horrible monster…but…but Aurora…she tried to kill me…I just don't know what to think anymore…
…before I could think on it more…the moon light glistened into my eyes as cool air blew against me…we made it outside to where Jewlia was…in the distance I could see Jewlia…she has a look of worry across her face…she must have been scared of the situation…
"…Oh no look at you three…It's even worse than I have thought…" she said out…I guess I can feel her worry…me and Mimi look utterly horrible…and Aurora…she…
"…you three need treatment right away…" she added…she plucked a few barriers from her hair and began to mash them up into a gooey mess…suddenly I felt something wrap around my waist…it was a root…one of Jewlias roots came around me and lifted me into the air towards Jewlias face…it was a little painful since it was where some of my wounds was but I tried my best to endure the pain…
"…here…this will make you feel a lot better…at least till I can do full treatment…" she said to me…she put some of the berry mush on the tip of her finger and began to gently rub it onto my wounds…it was very painful…but after a while…it actually began to feel really good…I then saw Mimi slowly climb up Jewlias arm…I could tell it was very painful…she even fell but Jewlia caught her…Mimi done so much for me and Aurora and I just met her…I can believe not too long ago…I just saw her as some monster who was trying to eat me…
"…here…you two help each other get the medicine on…I…I really have to look at Aurora…she…she's really concerns me…her wounds look almost fatal…I need to act right away…" she said as she lowered me and Mimi to the ground…giving us both a large amount of berry mush…
…Me and Mimi looked at each other for a moment before I looked back up to Jewlia…she was slowly lifting up Aurora into her arms…holding her almost like how a mother would hold a child…a few roots rising up from the ground as well...each holding a tool of some sort…I could have sworn that one of them was a scalpel…is she using…surgeon equipment?...
"…don't worry sweetie…everything will be just fine now…I'll have you fixed up in no time…" Jewlia whispered to the unconscious Aurora…I sighed to myself…there is no dought in my mind that Jewlia will be able to heal Aurora…but what I am worried about is…what is going to happen when Aurora wakes up?...


A few hours past as Jewlia was fixing up Aurora…I couldn't see what was going on from this height but it seemed to be that it was something very complicated…there were many roots that were lifted up where Jewlia was holding Aurora…and each had a tool of some kind…they had very précised movements as if Jewlia knew exactly what to do with each and every one of them…It was almost as if…Jewlia was performing surgery…was she?...if so…then each root is like…some sort of extra limb that allows her to have so much maneuverability…I can't even imagine how Jewlia would be able to do this at all…I mean she would have to be full aware of every single root…and I know that a human would not be able to do such a thing…even me…Jewlia surely is an amazing women…
"…I think…I have done all that can be done here…" Jewlia muttered out as she kissed Aurora on the forehead and gently placed her down…"I managed to stabilize her condition and I have given her some berries both eternally and on her wounds…so that should help her feel better…I believe she should awaken by morning…but I am unsure…it really is up to Aurora's will…" I sighed to myself…I wasn't even sure if I even wanted Aurora to wake up…
"…ok Seliky…let me take a closer look at you…to get you all patched up…" Jewlia then said out…I then felt a root wrap around my waist and lift me up into the air towards Jewlia face...her large emerald green eyes focused in on me…as if she was looking at every single detail of my body…
"…The berries seemed to have made your wounds decently better…but I will still need to close them up with stiches…Mimi if you will?..." Jewlia said out…I then saw Mimi climb onto Jewlia's shoulder…she spun a thread of webbing as one of Jewlia's roots came close to her…Mimi then plucked one of the tinier brambles that was on her root and dug a little hole at the bottom of it…I figured out what they were doing…they were making a needle and thread to act like stiches…how very cleaver…
…Jewlia's root then took the needle and threat from her and it then came over to me…the needle came close to my stomach where I have a fairly large wound on it…
"…now Seliky…this will hurt for a bit…but I need you to try to hold still aright…I don't want to accidently poke something that shouldn't be…" she told me as she took a strange looking fruit and squeezed it near my stomach…the juices from the fruit squired onto my stomach…and somehow…numbed the area…it's almost like Jewlia is her very own hospital…it's really amazing…
…Jewlia's root then began to start threading the wound close…it was rather painful and I couldn't help but yelp in pain a little…but I am sure the pain would have been far worse if she didn't use that unusual fruit…after she closed off that wound…she proceeded to close off the other open wounds I've had and then proceeded to patch Mimi up…after that…she wrapped up my chest tight with some leaves that were woven together to act as a cast,…apparently I broken a rib and she was trying to make sure it can heal properly by wrapping up my chest…I guess it's to make sure I don't injure myself…after she did everything…she placed me on the ground and gave a smile…
"…here you go…you are all done…you should be feeling better in no time…I have done what I could do so now the rest is up to this worlds natural healing properties to complete your healing…" Jewlia said o me…I let out a little smile…
"…thanks Jewlia…you are really amazing…I would have never thought you could do things like this…" I said back to her…Jewlia blushed a little before turning away a bit…
"…well…I've had a good teacher…" she said back…I smiled as I turned away and looked over at Aurora…who was laying lifelike on a bedding of roots that Jewlia made for her…
"…you are worried about Aurora…aren't you Seliky…" I then heard out… I guess Jewlia knowised me looking over at her…I just sighed a little…"…well…I assure you…that Aurora will be just fine…"
I looked up at Jewlia and just gave a tiny smile…showing that I understood what she was saying…but really…I wasn't worried about her being ok…I was worried about…if…she wakes up…what…what will she do?...but I didn't want to worry Jewlia…so I tried the best I could to try to hide my worries…
"…Seliky you should head to sleep…if you want to get better faster…sleep will be the best thing for you…she said to me…
"…I guess you are right…" I mumbled as I looked around a bit…"but where am I going to sleep…the burrow isn't safe if…Aurora is…" ….before I could finish Jewlia interrupted me…
"…oh…pardon me…sorry I interrupted you…but you can sleep with Mimi…" she said to me…I looked over to where Mimi was…she under Jewlia's turn in the darkness… the only way I could see her was the moonlight reflecting off her white hair…
"…alright…goodnight Jewlia…thanks for all the help…" I said to her…she just smiled as one of her roots patted me on the head…
"…just try to get some sleep ok Seliky…" she told me…I just nodded as I walked over to Mimi's "home"…when I peered under the trunk I saw Mimi siting silently in her web…holding up her Jewlia plushie to her chest…she looked over to me for a second with her pale eyes before slowly coming off her web…
"…Do…you need…assistance?..." she asked with her robotic voice…
"…oh…um…Jewlia said I could sleep here for the night…um…where am I going to sleep?..." I asked…Mimi stared at me for a bit…I guess she was thinking about what to do…after a while she picked me up and stuck me onto her web…I kind of squirmed a bit…I had no idea what she was doing…
"…You will sleep…here…" Mimi said to me…I kind of felt awkward being stuck onto the web like this…I mean typically when one gets stuck to a web…they are food…
"…Do you need…Cover?..." she then asked…I didn't understand what she meant by cover…
"…you mean…like…a blanket?..." I asked…
"…Correct…" she replied…
"…oh…um….sure I guess…it is kind of chilly in here…" I replied…right then she stared spinning a cocoon around me…I kind of panicked for a bit seeing how…it was almost as if she was going to eat me like how a spider spins their pray…but she then stopped halfway…
"…Please…raise up your…arms…so I can continue…" Mimi said to me…I stared at her for a bit in confusion…but I did what she said…she then continued to spin till the cocoon reached my neck…she then stopped and moved over to the other side of the web…I guess this cocoon was going to be my blanket thing…it was a little warm…but kind of sticky…I turned towards Mimi who was getting settled into her spot…she really has done a lot for me and Aurora…I really do feel bad how I treated her earlier now…and the fact that she is slowly dying doesn't hemp either…
"…thanks Mimi…for everything…" I said out…Mimi looked over to me…I then saw something I thought I would never see…she smiled…I was a short quick smile but I was a smile nether less…
"…You are…Welcome…" she replied…I smiled back at her before closing my eyes to try to get some sleep…though it will be hard…every time I close my eyes…I see those…demon like eyes glaring at me…he demon eyes of a friend…a friend that…that I might have lost…forever…








(Ok...welll Aurora's Story is officially at the point where it is caught up to the sections on DA...I havent writen par 66 yet...so I am unsure how do you guys want it...do you want me to posts each part as I finish it or wait fr me o wrie 5 parts and post them by groups of 5 like how I have been doing it now...anyways...thanks for reading...your comments are greatly apreciated...)
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PostSubject: Re: Aurora's Story   Aurora's Story - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSun May 22, 2011 1:25 pm

Part 66





(Sorry…no more Seliky POV ^w^)

…Everything seemed pitch black to me as I laid in the seemingly unexisting ground beneath me…were am I…how did I get here?...I tried to move but my body was completely stiff…as if…I was unable to even control it at all…as I struggled to regain control as my body…I heard voices all around me…almost like whispers…there were so many of them that I couldn't make out what they were saying…I started to grow very scared…what is this place…what in Felarya is going on…
…right then…I heard a voice though all the voices speaking around me…a soft and familiar voice…but I couldn't make out who it was…
"…Aurora…Aurora…" the voice said…I looked around frantically…but I couldn't see anyone…the voice then grew a little louder... "…Aurora…you must get stronger…you…are the only one…"
"…only…one?...only one for what….what's going on!?!..." I cried out as I struggled to move…I looked around desperately to find the origin of the voice…but all I can see was sheer darkness…what did the voice mean by…only one?...
"…grow strong Aurora…you are our only hope…" the voice said as it sounded as it was fading away…but…what does it mean?...and what did it mean by I was their only hope?...
"…wh…who are you?...w…why are you telling me this stuff!?!..." I cried out as I strained myself to move…but with no prevail…all the voices seemed to have started to fade away as he voice faded…repeating my name before I could no longer hear it…right then…everything started to get brighter…I began to feel my body again…and cold air blowing against my skin…
"…I believe…she is…awakening…" I heard in the distance…I closed my eyes for a bit…then when I opened my eyes…I saw a large pair of beautiful emerald green eyes staring down at me…it was Jewlia…her face was full of beauty and grace…as if she was an angel…
"…Oh thank goodness…I was beginning to worry that you wouldn't awaken…" she said out…I tried to hoist myself up…but my body was in pain…it hurt too much so I just sat on my tail and looked around for a bit…I was very confused about everything…how the heck did I get here?...why is my body so sore…and…and where's Seliky…I looked up at Jewlia for a bit…letting my vision return to me…I then saw his…little dridder girl with white hair and bluish skin…she seemed really familiar but I don't know where I could have met such a girl…
"…What's going on?...how did I get here…" I asked…Jewlia looked at Mimi for a bit…she had a look of concern in her face as she let out a sigh…
"…this is no good…no good at all…" Jewlia said out…I grew very confused…what was she talking about?...
"…what Is no good…Jewlia…tell me what's going on?..." I said out…
"…Aurora…you…really can't remember anything that happened yesterday night?..." she asked me…I tried to remember…but…but everything was a big blur…the last thing I can remember was me and Seliky going to sleep…after that…everything is black…
"…I…I don't remember…I don't remember anything…but…me and Seliky heading to bed…" I mumbled…I started to get a little scared…if Jewlia is asking if I can remember anything…then surely something bad happened…I look around…looking for the person that really matters to me…
"…w…where is Seliky?..." I mumbled…Jewlia suddenly got a look on her face that sent my soul into the pit to my stomach…
"…Where is Seliky!..." I cried out…Jewlia let out a big sigh and pointed to her left…I looked where she was pointing and saw a little white blur in the distance…I squinted my eyes…and eventually saw what it was…it was Seliky…I smiled a little bit and began to slither towards her…but before I could get closer to her though …one of Jewlia's roots wrapped around my arm and pulled me back…I looked back at Jewlia who looked very concerned…
"…Aurora…I don't…think it…would be best to see her now…" Jewlia said to me…I pulled myself forward a bit…shaking a little…
"…Jewlia let me go!..." I cried out…Jewlia just gave a sigh and her root released my arm…I slithered over to where Seliky was…slowing down as I got closer…and eventually I could see her completely…she was sitting alone on a tree branch…she seemed to have been deep in thought about something as she gazed out into the distance…
"…Seliky" I said out quietly as I came to the tree…Seliky quickly turned around…her eyes were wide and she nearly jumped up…
"…G…Get away from me!..." she cried out…Did…did I just hear that right?...did…she just tell me to get away?...I slithered back a little in shock from hearing this…
"…Wh…what?..." I replied…
"…GET AWAY FROM ME!..." she screamed…my heart fell completely into my stomach as a cold chill ran down my spine…Everything that I knew and loved came crashing down onto me…making my body feel numb…
"…bu…but Seliky…" I murmured…Seliky didn't reply…she only hopped down from the tree and ran off…as if…she didn't want to have anything to do with me…I could feel the tears begin to build up in my eyes…as I stared off into the direction she ran to…why…d…does she hate me?...have…have I really done something so horrible to…to make Seliky hate me?...to…be afraid of me…I don't even know what's going on anymore!...
I felt something brush against my shoulder softly…I looked over o see it was Jewlia's root…I look back to see Jewlia looking at me with her large emerald eyes…I burst into tears as I slithered over to her…she took me into her arms and embraced me into her chest…
"…Sh…she hates me…w…why does she hate me" I cried out…I…I don't understand what is going on…everything is just so confusing…and now…Seliky seems to hate me…she…she doesn't want anything to do with me…and…I have no idea why…
"…Please Aurora…don't cry…really…it's going to be ok…this can be fixed…" she said to me…
"…How can this be possibly fixed…She…she left me!...the only person I had left in this…miserable world…It's not going to be ok!..." I cried out…Jewlia just rubbed my back and let me cry into her chest…Seliky is the only person who make my life worth living…and…now she suddenly…despises me…if…if she is no longer a part of my life…what am I going to do?...I can't go back to my old life…I was miserable…everything had no meaning to it and…and I was never happy…but with her … I was…and now it's all gone…
"…Aurora…you must understand…Seliky…well…she witnessed something that…well…you wouldn't be very proud of…and she's very…emotionally scarred from it…" Jewlia told me…I looked up at Jewlia in confusion…
"…Witnessed what?...I …I don't remember anything!..." I cried out…Jewlia signed and brushed her hand in my hair…
"…You seem to have suffered from short term memory loss from your…outburst…so…you wouldn't remember what you have done..." she replied… "…I wasn't there to actually see it…but…Mimi was…so I am sure she will be the best person to ask the details from…"…Mimi…who is Mimi…is it that Dridder girl I saw earlier…the one that seemed so familiar…I looked over to the dridder girl who was climbing up Jewlia's arm…
"…Aurora…is…your name…Correct?..." the strange spider girl said to me…I nodded slowly…the girl's voice seemed very unusual…it sounded mature…but a bit too mature…it made her sound really dull and monotone…her face matched her voice very well too…it was blank…her eyes showing no emotion along with a straight face…she appears to be nothing like the other dridders I have seen…especially the ones that attack me and Seliky…but how come this girls seem so familiar before…I surely have never met her…and I don't know is she is a friend of Seliky's…but something in my gut says that that can't be true…
"…Aurora…you recall…a strange creature that…may have attack you…and Seliky…before?..." the strange girl asked me…suddenly the image of the blue form of that…horrible monster appeared in my mind…seeing Seliky nearly dead in my arms…I felt the cold chill pass through my scales…why is this girl asking me about his creature…p…please don't tell me…it has to do with what happened…
"…When I was escorting Seliky…back…to your burrow…we discovered you…were being attacked by the creature…me and Seliky tried our best to…aid you in…combat…but…the creature…always had an…upper hand…"
…My eyes widened as I heard her say this…we…we were attacked by…that monster again?...how come I can't remember it…and…how did we survive?...and…what does this have to do with Seliky hating me?...
"…during the confrontation…Seliky…was taken into the creature…where…she detonated…a…device…and became critically wounded…after that…you change…you…"
…The girl then paused …Right then my eyes widened…I suddenly started to remember things…the image of Seliky lying motionless in the distance…covered in blood…so lifeless…could…could this have triggered the Tsuin Hitogara?...was this how we lived through the encounter?...
"…W…what did I do…when…when I was no longer myself…" I mumbled as I stared into my hands…I heard Jewlia take a deep breath…
"…You…tried to kill Seliky…" she replied softly…I slithered back in shock…I tried…to…to kill her?...the thing I feared the most has really happened…I…I knew that Seliky being with me would be dangerous…with my…other self…coming in…I…I don't know what to think now…I…I tried to kill my best friend…and I didn't even know what I was doing…
"…if it wasn't for Mimi pulling on her emergency thread to wake me up…She…would be dead…luckily…I awoken and stopped you from killing her just in time…" she continued…tears began to fill my eyes again as I stared up at Jewlia…this is why she hates me…I…I am no better than that goo monster…I…I tried to kill Seliky…I don't deserve to have her…I don't deserve to have anyone…I am nothing more than…a…horrible monster…
"…Aurora…I…I am sure this is just a big misunderstanding…you just need to give Seliky some time…I don't know exactly what the situation is…but I am sure it can be worked out…" Jewlia said out…I let out a deep sigh…I wish I could believe her…but…my world just came crumbling down onto me…and…I have nothing left to hold it up…and there is no hope of repairing the damage that has been done…even if Seliky came back…it…it won't be the same…it won't be the life that we had…Seliky is no longer safe with me…I looked over to Jewlia again….
"…Jewlia…please…take care of Seliky…" I mumbled…Jewlia stared at me with a confused look on her face…
"…What are you saying Aurora?..." she asked me…I just let out a sigh and turned away…and headed back into my burrow…
"…She's better off with you…"
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what do you guys think of the story so far?..
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It is pretty good so far and quite an introspective look into the characters' struggle for survival in a relatively small portion of the known map. There is a bit of overuse of the ellipses instead of the comma, though.
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I agree with Sean, though I haven't finished reading it yet, there's so much of it it's hard to keep up, and I also agree about the ellipses, though it could just be your writing style, it kind of reminds me of a dream sequence or something. It's different but not too distracting either.
I really like your characters.
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the elipses is part of my writing style...I use it while writing dialog...and he enire story is dialog so...yeah >.<
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Aurora's Story


Part 67






…I silently slithered into the darkness that is my burrow…alone…without the person that made my life meaningful with me…I…I just knew that it was too dangerous for Seliky to be with me…I just knew it…but…but I was blinded by…by how great my life was now…how great it was with…her…but…now all that is gone…I…I am just a monster…a monster who shouldn't even be allowed to have friends…I mean…I…I tried to kill Seliky…and I…I didn't even try to stop myself…I…I really am just a mindless killing monster…I have to make sure that…I could no longer hurt anyone anymore...I…I can't handle the pain of losing another friend again…not now…I don't want to hurt Jewlia or Hitomi…I just met them…I…I need to isolate myself…Isolate myself for everything…keep myself from hurting anyone ever again…
…I turned around and looked at the entrance that lead to where Jewlia was…I risen up my tail and slammed it into the side of the tunnel walls…collapsing the tunnel o collapse on itself…sealing off the entrance…If I seal myself in my own burrow…then…hen I wouldn't be a burden on anyone…I'll…I'll just live the rest of my life in the darkness…well…at least till I die of starvation…it's better off this way…if no one ever knew about me then…no one would know ha…I…was a monster…
…I began to head over to the next entrance to the burrow…thinking about…the life I just lost…the life I would have had…with…Seliky…but I ruined it…I…I crushed it after I…tried to kill her…and the funny thing is…I don't even remember it…that's just horrible…that…I…don't even remember the event that…ruined my life…I…just wish there was a way to stop the even from happening…a way to fix what was broken…but I know that it would never happen…it's…hopeless…
…I came to the next entrance to the burrow…and felt the warmth of the forest air come over my body…as I gazed out into the forest…I just let out a deep sigh before smashing my ail into the cavern walls…causing it to cave in…making the area pitch black…once again…now there is only one entrance left…then I can live the rest of my life in here…alone…
…I began to head over to the main entrance of my burrow…it wasn't too far…I could just vanish off the face of Felarya and no one will mess me…Seliky hates me now…she wouldn't give a second thought…Hitomi has her children to worry about and Jewlia…she has all her patients…I'm a nobody…I thought I could…be meaningful with Seliky…but I know now that it was a big lie…just a fantasy dream of mine…I should have known I would have been too good to be rue…I mean A human being friends with a monster like me…it can happen…I learned that the day I lost Thanh…a Naga is allowed to have friends like that…they are just meant…to be alone…
I finally came to the last entrance of the burrow…I gaze out into the morning light for a last time…my body felt numb…as if someone ripped my entire being from my body and just…walked all over it…I feel so sick inside…so sick of my life…so sick of everything…I just want it all to end…
…I was about to slam my tail into the wall when I then heard a voice…
"…what do you think you are ding scale butt?..." I heard…I looked up and Saw Hitomi staring down at me from the entrance of m burrow…
"…I…I'm just…renovating my home a bit…" I replied…Hitomi let out a big sigh and shook her head…
"…Renovating you say…Aurora…I'm not stupid…to me it looks more like barricading yourself in your own home…" she replied as she hopped into my burrow…"…I saw what you did with the other two entrances…so I figured this would be a perfect time for me to visit…"
"…Hitomi…I don't think…" before I could continue she put her finger on my lip and stopped me from talking.
"…I won't take no for an answer…now come on show me around this…um…dirty home you have here…" she said to me…I just sighed…I won't be able to get her to leave…I just have to wonder what she is planning…
"…ok fine…fallow me…I guess…" I sighed and slithered deeper into my burrow…
"…Glad you see it my way scale butt…" she laughed…I guess I will just have to wait till after Hitomi leaves to…cut myself off from the world…

…We moved on quietly through the tunnel for a bit…Hitomi seemed too have had a hard time maneuvering in the tunnel since it was too dark for her…I made sure to warn her about any bumps that might cause her to trip over with her four legs…eventually Hitomi decided to break the silence…
"…So…what's going on with you and your little albino friend…what's her name again…Selitastey?..." she asked… I didn't want to reply…it's already too painful to even think about what happen…I can't talk about it…it'll only make me feel worse…
"…It's…it's nothing…" I mumbled…Hitomi let out a laughed and placed her hand on my shoulder…
"…Ha that's funny…this coming from a person who was about to completely block herself from the surface of Felarya…sorry to say this Aurora…but you really are a horrible lier…" she told me as she turned me around to face her… "…you got to be more convincing…like you are luring a mate...yeah…can't be all timid like…that'll put them as the boss…wait no that's a bad example…because I'm always the boss in a situation…hmmmm…well anyways yeah you are a horrible Lier…no wonder Seliky can read you like a human running around with a dinner bell…"
"…am I really that easy to read…" I mumbled…Hitomi slapped my back…
"…like a group of humans camping out in the middle of the woods with…a Fire!...you know when there is a campfire involve that makes EVERYONE know what's going on…" she laughed "…now why don't you tell this Mantoid what's really in that pretty little head of yours…" she added as she rubbed her hand into my hair…messing it up a bit…I just let out a sigh as tears started to fill up my eyes…
"…I…Tried to…I tried to kill Seliky…" I cried out…Hitomi stared at me for a second…
"…how is that bad…I mean don't you know…trying to kill each other a sign of…oh wait…you aren't a mantoid…oh…hmmmmm?…I guess that IS a bad thing….isn't it?…" she said out…
"…I…I honestly don't know Hitomi…I don't even remember doing it…but…but I did…because…I…I am a monster…" I cried out…
"…Oh Aurora…you aren't a monster…far from it…a little scrawny thing like you a monster in Felarya…hah…comparing you to like…A tonorion…now THAT'S a monster….but they do taste good if you dip them in Dridder blood…" she laughed… before putting her hand on my shoulder "…now Aurora…caging yourself in here like…I don't know…something I could use as an analogy that cages themselves in during situations like this just because you did something that you aren't proud of…knowing how close you are to that little white human snack thing…that you would never try to do anything to her…I am sure you can talk things out fir you try…and if that doesn't work there is always the more useful mantoid way…"
"…But…but she hates me now Hitomi…she…she doesn't want to do anything with me…I…I tried to kill her…why would she ever come back to me?..." I asked back as my eyes streamed down tears…
"…Hey you never know…something might come up …I mean…you REALLY never tried to kill her…right?..."
"…NEVER…Seliky is my best friend and I love her…she…she is the only thing in this world that really matters to me…that…that makes my life meaningful!...I…I would never hurt a single strand of her hair…It…it was this…this monster inside of me…this…horrible rage that I am cursed with…I…I don't know what to do!..." I cried as I buried myself into Hitomi's should…she just rubbed my back…allowing me to calm down… "…I knew I deep down inside that…Seliky would never be safe with me…but…I…I tried to ignore the feeling…and now everything that I wish would never happen fell on me…and now I lost her…nothing in this cruel world matters anymore…I…I'm empty now…"
"…Now now Aurora…see…you regret what you did…and you admitted that Seliky truly is the only thing that matters…showing you never wanted to hurt Seliky in the first place…as for her not being safe with you…that's something you need to talk with her you know…" she said back as she wiped the tear from my eye…
"…but Hitomi…she's gone now…and…I…I don't think she will ever come back…" I said out…Hitomi let go of me and let out a smile…
"…Oh you don't know that…heck who knows…seeing the bond you two have that seems almost sickening makes me know that you two can't be separated for too long…so I am confident that you two will work it out…" she said to me…I stared at her for a bit…trying to make out everything she had told me so far…I don't know if I feel better at all…Hitomi's "pep talk" was rather…odd…nothing like what Thanh used to to…but Thanh's usually included me being painfully punished afterwards…but…I can't help to feel a little bit better inside…but I still don't know if I would ever be able to mend my relationship with Seliky…
"…thanks Hitomi…I…I feel a little bit better inside…" I said to her with a tiny smile…she smiled back and turned around…
"…No prob scale butt…now tell me…how the hell do I get out of this dump…I think I am starting to smell like you…and seeing how you hunt I really don't want to be anything like you any time soon…" She said out…I slithered over to her and turned her towards the right direction of the ext.
"…that way…" I said to her…she smiled a looked over to me for a second…
"…thanks Scale butt…I'll see you later kay?..." she said to me as she headed off towards the exit…she went ahead for a little bit but then…she suddenly stopped and turned around…"…oh by the way…I believe this belongs to you…" she said out as she tossed something at me…I caught it and looked over to Hitomi…but she was gone…she moves very fast that I didn't even get to see her move…I looked down that the thing that Hitomi tossed over to me…and I was shocked to see it was Seliky…tied up with vines…
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Aurora's Story Part 68



…I stared down blankly at Seliky…who was tied up in vines laying in my arms…staring back at me with her large pink eyes…she was completely wrapped up but these vines…it even covered her mouth…muffling her voice to neat inaudible…why did Hitomi do this…did…did she purposely force Seliky here and...make her listen to me and Hitomi talk?...
…I slowly removed he vines from Seliky's body till she was completely free…then I gently placed her on the ground and slithered back a bit…to give her room…I…I don't want to scare her…his…this might be my only chance to make up with her…
"…So….y…you heard all of that…didn't you?..." I said softly…Seliky looked up at me with her pink eyes…
"…yeah…I heard it…" she replied back…Hitomi must have planned this from the start…making me express how much I regret…almost…killing my best friend…and have Seliky secretly hearing in on it all…why would Hitomi do such a thing to help me and Seliky make up our friendship…she never really seemed like the person to really help others out…why is she making an exception to me and Seliky?...
"…I…guess I don't need to repeat it…huh?..." I said back…Seliky nodded slowly…I could see it in her eyes…she looked so uneasy…s…she really afraid of me…that much…I have to make this right…I have to fix our relationship…
"…Listen Seliky…I…I never really wanted to hurt you…I would never do such a thing…I's just…this monster…deep inside me that I am curse with…I…I couldn't control it…" I paused for a moment…my eyes were beginning to fill with tears…I slowly wiped them away and looked down at Seliky…I really don't want to lose her…Seliky is…everything to me…
"…Aurora…" Seliky replied softly… "…were you…really going to…trap yourself inside your own burrow…just because of me?..."
"…If…if this evil…thing inside me tried to make me kill my best friend this in this cruel and miserable world Felarya…and I lose her forever…then…I…Might as well just sit here and be forgotten forever…I…I really don't want to accidently hurt anyone…or even worse…try to kill them…so the best thing I can do is just…drop off the face of Felarya…then I can't hurt anyone else like I did to you Seliky"…I replied…I slowly reached over to Seliky but then she took a step away from me…I quick brought my hand close to me…afraid that I scared her…I let out a deep sigh and turned away…wiping the ears from my eyes…
"…Seliky…I…I understand if…you…no longer want to be with me anymore…I'm too unsafe…and…I don't deserve a wonderful friend like you…I am a…monster after all…" I said to her…it was silent for a while…I didn't turn back to look at Seliky…she's afraid of me still…I can tell…so…I have to make her choice…and if she leaves me…I…I honestly don't know what I will do…I really don't want to lose my best friend…it hurts so much even knowing she is afraid of me…rips my soul out of my very being…but…she's so young…I don't even want to imagine what she may have witnessed when I…I was in the Tsuin Hitogara state…
"…Aurora…" I heard from behind me…I looked over to Seliky…who was staring up at me with her large pink eyes and pale face…
"…It was terrifying…seeing you…like that…you weren't you anymore…I… couldn't even call you Aurora anymore after seeing you like that…you no longer seemed like the same person…that…I know and love…but…" she paused…and turned away for a while…Seliky is so young…she should have all these things going on in her life…it will bring so much stress to her and that is something someone of her age should have…I just wonder if I am really the best thing for Seliky…I then saw Seliky look back up at me…her eyes were filled with tears…she then ran over to me and hugged the base of my tail…
"…I'm just…so happy to have you back Aurora…" she cried…I couldn't help to break out in tears too and lifted Seliky up and gently hug her too…
"Seliky…I'm so sorry…" I said to her softly…I held her in my arms for a bit quietly until Seliky was looked up at me…with a small smile on her face…
"…It's not your fault Aurora…if anything…it was that evil blob monster thing's fault…" Seliky replied…
"…Seliky…was…I able to defeat the monster this time?..." I asked quietly…I don't remember a single thing from the encounter…except for seeing Seliky in the ground lifeless…which probably triggered the Tsuin Hitogara…but everything else is a big blur…
"…Sadly…no…you injured it very badly…but it managed to retreat…after that…you attacked me…" Seliky mumbled…we were silent for a bit…then Seliky decided to break the silence…"But I did figure out a pattern though…I noticed that this…monster…thing…only attacks every other day…" she said…
"…What do you mean?..." I asked…I was really unsure by what she meant…
"…Well I noticed a pattern in this monster's attacks…have you notice that one day it'll attack…then the next day it will never show up…then the day after that it attacks…as in only shows up once every 2 days or something of that sort…" she said…after I thought about it for a bit…I realized that it was true…it didn't attack the day before yesterday…and it attacked yesterday…and I am pretty sure it didn't attack 3 days ago…so…does that mean we are safe from it today?...
"…what do you think it means Seliky?..." I asked…Seliky stared at me for a moment…
"…well…I guess it means we are safe rom it today…but then…we will have to expect it to show up tomorrow…I guess since we know I's pattern that we can be better prepared for it the next time around…perhaps it uses a day to regenerate or something…and it has been changing its shape…I donno…something very familiar about it too…" she said back to me…I let out a deep sigh and smiled a little…
"…well…a least we know…that we are safe today…" I said to her…she nodded slowly…
"…Yeah I am pretty sure…but...anyways…even then we have a new ally to help us…" she said out…does she mean that strange person that I saw when I woke up…
"…do you mean that strange spider girl who was with Jewlia when I woke up?..." I asked…Seliky nodded…
"…yeah…that's Mimi…it turns out that Jewlia was hiding Mimi from us…she was scared that we wouldn't like her…apparently there is a bit of conflict between the Dridders and Naga's…" Seliky said out…
"…that would explain why the other Dridders attacked us…" I said back…Seliky nodded…
"…yeah…but Mimi is not like them…she may be a bit…unusual but she is really kind…in fact…when we found you being attack by that horrible monster…Mimi stepped in and helped you fight it…she was amazing too…" she sad back to me…is that why this Mimi girl seemed so familiar to me when I first saw her?...since she helped me fight the giant blob monster…
"…well…I guess I owe her a big thanks…" I said back… "….not to mention Jewlia…without her I surely be dead…and Hitomi…if she didn't come…I…I may have lost you forever…"
"…well…Yeah I guess you are right…I just hoped that Hitomi would have at least be a bit nicer about it…she tied me up very tight…" She mumbled as she rubbed her arm…"but I guess it was worth i…since well…she did help us you know…I donno if I would have been wiling o come back myself…I mean…it was scary…very scary…"
"…are you still sure that…you want to stay with me Seliky…I mean…if it happens again…I…" I paused and stared at my hands…the hands that blindly try to kill my best friend…
"…I am sure Aurora…I mean…I was freaking out….thinking I was going to lose you forever…that…you were going to be stuck as that…other Aurora forever…I was really scared…because every time I looked at you…all I could see were those…evil eyes…glaring at me…I'm sorry if I ran off earlier…I guess…I guess it's just traumatized me a bit…forming into some sort of crazy phobia…heh…that's kind of silly…Auroraphobia…nah too generic…needs to be more complicated…Déménserpensfeminaphobia…yeah I like that one better…" she laughed…I giggled too…even though I had no idea what she was talking about…
"…I guess I should head back to Jewlia…and say thanks to her and Mimi…for everything they have done…" I said back…
"…yeah…and to show that you and I made up…" she added…I smiled and continued on my way to where Jewlia lived…I guess I will have to redig the exit again…since I made it collapse when I was going crazy over Seliky hating me…I really am glad she is giving me a second chance…I just hope that…this would never happen again…I really would never be able to handle it…all I know is that now…me and Seliky's friendship will change forever…because there will always be that dought…in both of us…I sighed to myself as I continued on…
"…Aurora…" I head from little Seliky…I looked over to her…
"…Yes Seliky…I replied…
"…I'm sorry…and….Thank you…"
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Well, I finally reached the end thus far. The interaction between characters is great which greatly adds to their credibility. It's obvious that the characters are your priority when it comes to writing a chapter. You made a fine story so far and I await what you have next in story.
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Part 69






…I slithered down the tunnel with Seliky sitting on my shoulder…It was somewhat quite…I guess there was still that awkwardness

lingering from the past event…I just hope that…that would never happen again…I really don't want to lose Seliky…I know that she isn't the only

friend I have now…I have Hitomi and Jewlia too…but for some reason…I feel more…complete with Seliky…how strange that sounds…I mean…

me and Seliky aren't really alike that much…I mean…I am much bigger than her…at least with me and hitomi…and I guess Jewlia in a way…even

though she is much bigger than I am…I guess me and Seliky have some sort of…I don't know…a some sort of supernatural connection with one

another…and I just want her to be with me always…she's like a sister to me…like the sister I never got to know…


…After a few minutes of slithering…we came upon the collapsed entrance of my burrow…I remained motionless for a bit as I stared into

the large mound of dirt in front of me…I looked over to Seliky who was looking over at me…


'…you really were planning on caving yourself in here…" she said over to me…I nodded slowly and turned away from the young girl…


"…like I said…I was a monster who scared you off…I didn't want to hurt anyone else…so…I felt the only way to do that…" I mumbled…I

sighed to myself and looked over to Seliky again with a small smile… "…but…since…I didn't lose you…we don't have to worry about that…

right?..."

"…Yeah…I guess so…I just feel a little bad though…putting you through all that pain you know…" Seliky said with a low voice…

"…its ok Seliky…it's all over now…it's behind us now…" I replied…Seliky gave a small smile and slid down my arm and stopped at my
fingertips…
"…Yeah I guess you are right…" she replied…I slowly brought her down to the floor and placed her down...then I looked over to the large

mound in front of me…


"…well…looks like I have some digging to do…I don't want you getting hurt so you say here…ok?..." I said out…Seliky stared at me for a

second with her large pink eyes…she began to smile a little and started to walk over to the large mound…


"…how about I help you dig Aurora…I mean…I always just sit back and watch you know…so this time I want help…" She said out…I looked

at her for a second…I guess it would be very good quality time…even if she is so tiny and wouldn't really be much help…her tiny hands can't

move as much dirt as I could after all…but I don't want her to feel left out….


"…well…ok…just be careful ok…I don't want to accidently bury you or anything…" I told her…


"…Oh alright Aurora…I'll start digging over here…so you won't smack me hehehe…" she laughed as she headed into the pile of soil…I

giggled a little as I patted her head with my forefinger before slithering over to my side and beginning to dig…I then looked at Seliky again…she

was taking off her gray shirt like thing that she calls a hoody…my guessing so it wouldn't get dirty…though it looks somewhat newer than I

remember…I figured it would have been torn up and all messy from how much she wears that thing…especially through all the near death

situations we have been…I guess she knows how to fix clothing or something…but I really never seen her doing that…maybe someone else is

doing it…perhaps Jewlia…she seems like the type of lady who would do that…I'll ask Seliky later on…


…but after she took of her hoody…I couldn't help to notice all the scars and bruising that were all over her harms…even some stiches…big

ones too…like the one I had when I was little when I was living with Auntie Thanh…I was playing when the wind suddenly blew very hard and

some of the leaves from a nearby tree blew off…and the leaves cut be up really bad and auntie had to give me stitches right there because

how deep they were…I think she said that the tree was a blade leaf tree or something…a type of tree that grows in Felarya…but that's in the

past…I am just shocked how beaten up this little girl is…and I am sure that some of those bruises are from that evil man she calls a father…I

makes me wonder though…if Seliky did not to stay with me…would…she go back to that man…and return to her old life…it's a horrible thought

but still…she was trying to kill herself from the horrible life she had…would she try that again if she no longer wanted to be with me?...


"…Hey Aurora…you there?..." I heard…I shook my head and realized Seliky was staring right at me… "…you ok Aurora…you seemed like…

spaced out or something..."


"…oh…sorry…I guess I was deep in thought hehe…" I replied…


"…hehehe…it's ok Aurora…I just didn't want to do this all alone while you slack off…I mean really...I can't do this entire thing all alone…it'll

take me days when you could probably do it in seconds…" she added…I laughed a little…


"…hehehe…well yeah…I could do it in seconds…but if I did it that fast then it would probably collapse…when it comes to building

passageways for the burrow…it takes a bit to make because I need to dig it just right and makes sure that everything is supported so it won't

come caving in you know…" I replied…


"…hehehe…looks like you got this down as sciences haven't you…" she laughed…


"…Oh…well…I guess so…I mean…it's the only thing I really know how to do…I mean…I've been stuck here for a really long time…and I

never really liked to come outside because of all the predators and stuff…so I spent a lot of my life in this burrow…digging…" I mumbled… "…it's

a skill not nearly as impressive as yours Seliky…"


"…What do you mean?..." Seliky said back with a puzzled look on her face…


"…well…you like to make things…you create all these crazy gizmos and stuff...and you are really smart…I mean…REALLY smart…just as

smart…if not…even smarter than my auntie…and you are only 8 years old Seliky…that's really saying something…" I replied as I slid my tail

across the dirt…smoothening out the surface and pushing the soil against the walls…


"…Oh…well…I guess me being really smart was just me being lucky I guess…I mean…to me everyone can be smart…that everyone is just

the same…but just some people are able to see things another way…or are fortunate to have the resources or the education…" She said out as

she fiddled with her fingers…looking a bit unease…

"…so…which one of those are you?..." I asked…Seliky looked at her hands a bit…staring blankly at them…as if she was trying to think…


"…Well…I don't know…I guess my "skill" was developed like yours Aurora…" she said out…


"…Developed like mine…oh Seliky…you are comparing your super smarts to my dumb little digging thing…" I laughed…


"…Hear me out…well you see…back with my father…I wasn't really allowed to do anything…and had nothing…it was just…miserable…then

I went to the library…and met Ti-yen…yeah meeting her was kind of…special I guess…so now I have books…and I can't really do anything else…

If I wasn't being beaten or crying or something like that…I would read…it was the only thing I could do you know…" she paused for a

moment...then let out a big sigh and looked up a me…"So I read and read…lots of books…sometimes I spent days just reading…and learning…I

often time read the same book over and over again…"


"…I see…" I replied…I couldn't really think of anything to say after hearing that…


"…you must think I am some big nerd or something after telling you that…don't you…" Seliky added…


"…oh well…tell me what a nerd is and I can tell you…" I replied with a small smile…I have no idea what a nerd is after all…


"…hehehe…Aurora you really are such a clueless dork…" Seliky laughed…I giggled a little as a pushed aside more soil…I thought about

Seliky's words…how she developed into the great little girl I know today…she really had a hard life…a very hard life…surprisingly…she reminds

me a lot of myself for some reason…I guess that's why we have this sort of…connection…even if she is a young human girl and I am this giant

naga…thing…even if she is the "pray" and I am the "predator"…I guess a special bond like that can bypass these crazy rule that this crazy world

has…but still…I still don't know if I am what is really right for Seliky….if I am truly the right person to look after such a sweet and amazing child…

I mean…'d do anything for her…I would love to see her grow up…but…then if she does….she might not even need me anymore…then I would

be all alone again…like how I was before…it's just a lot to thing about…a lot of pressure on me…I just hope that whatever this crazy world has

in stored for me and Seliky...that…Seliky will be happy…that's all that really matters to me…


"…your spacing out on me again Aurora…are you sure you ok…did you hit your head in the fight too many times?..." I heard…I looked

back at Seliky…


"…Oh…sorry again…I guess we should get back to work on this…" I said back…


"…yeah we should…if not we would be here for hours because of you and your random spacing out episodes…" Seliky laughed…I giggled a

little as I gave Seliky a gentle shove with my forefinger…


"…hehehe…you shouldn't be talking all like that about me Seliky…you may be smarter but remember…I am still bigger than you…" I

giggled…


"…yeah yeah…you and your nagaishnees…which is probably isn't even a word…but all well…" she said with an annoyed look on her face


as she pushed aside some dirt…
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I don't think these two had much of an opportunity to talk more about themselves to each other until now. Nicely done.
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Part 70




…Me and Seliky continued to dig though the dirt that has caved into the burrow after I
almost willingly isolated myself inside my burrow…though Seliky’s small size…she didn’t really help
all too much…since I could move so much more earth she could…but still…it was nice having her
with me…especially after I thought that I lost her…forever…and I enjoyed the conversations
were having during this little bonding time…I It’s nice to know a little bit more about this wonderful
little girl that I consider family…I decided to try to keep this moment as long as I could by
purposely digging slower…I mean…I don’t know when I will have a moment like this with Seliky
ever again…and this world is cruel…so I need to cherish every moment I have with this wonderful


girl as much as I can…

“Hey Aurora…” I heard down below me…I looked down at Seliky who was wiping the dirt off
of herself… “Remember when you asked me to…look up that Thanh lady?”…

“…Yeah I remember…” I replied…remembering how she told me that…the one who raised
me had died…

“…she raised you…right?...” she asked…

“…oh…yeah…she raised me like I was her own child…heh…I remember even called

her “Auntie Thanh”…” I replied…she giggled for a little bit…

“…I hope you don’t mind me asking about her…but…can you tell me about her?...” she
replied softly…

“…Oh…not at all…I mean…you are my friend…I might as well tell you a little about my
childhood…” I replied…I leaned myself against the wall of the burrow and started to think a bit…
tying to remember everything from when I was a mere nagling…

“…well…there is so much to say about her…I mean…she was like the mother I never got to
know you know…”

“…Mother you never got to know?...” Seliky said back in confusion…

“…yeah…remember that tablet…and…how that…the humans came and killed them all…well…
Auntie Thanh came to the battle site…and found my sister near death…with me…and…before my
sister died…she gave me to Thanh…and Thanh decided to raise me…my…mother and father were
amongst the dead…I was too young to remember them…or even my sister…” I replied slowly…

“…so…you really are like me?...” Seliky replied…I looked down at her in a little confusion…

“…Aurora what do you mean?...” I asked...being curious about her words…

“…We both…never knew our mother…both…too young to even remember them at all…it’s
rather depressing…” she said in such a quiet voice…

“…I see…heh…but that allowed us to be friends…right?…since that made us who we are
today…I mean I would take the Seliky I know right in front of me over anything else…” I said back
as I rubbed my finger against Seliky’s pale hair…She smiled a little bit as she placed her tiny hands
onto my fingers…I lifted up my hand and Seliky was hanging onto it…I just giggled a little bit and
lifted her over my shoulder and lowered onto my shoulder…

“…Comply?...” I said with a short giggle…Seliky held onto a stand on of my hair…I am
guessing to keep herself from falling…

“ …hehehe…yeah…I am…” she replied as she kicked her legs back and forth…

“…well…like I was saying…Thanh…she raised me ever since I was a nagling…so she was like
my mother…she even taught me how to hunt…: I told her…Seliky looked over to me with her
large pink eyes…

“…how was she like?...” she asked me…I let out a big sigh and looked over to her…

“…well…she was very kind…funny…she was very beautiful…even if she was known for her
combat skills…oh….she was very strict…heh…I remember all the times I got into trouble…boy…I
would never forget those moments…I remember once…she stuffed me in a hole and tied my tail
into a knot so I wouldn’t be able to get out of it…then there was they time she shaved my hair…
and the time she launched me out of a catapult…” I giggled…

“…whoa…launch you out of a catapult…isn’t that a bit extreme…you surely over
exaggerate…” Seliky replied in disbelief…I just laughed a little…

“…hehehe…I’m not exaggerating…but I loved her…she treated me so well and made sure I
didn’t get into trouble…boy…I really do miss her…” I said with a sigh…there was a long and
awkward silence hat seem to emanate from the room…I began to remember all the things that
happened when I was with Thanh…all the memories that I have had with her…I couldn’t help but
cry a little…feeling the tear run down my cheek…

“…I’m sorry I brought it up…” I heard on my shoulder…I looked over a Seliky who I guess

noticed my tears…

“…Oh…no no no…don’t worry about it…I mean…it’s good that we are talking about stuff like
this…I mean…it allows us to get to know one another you know…I’m just being emotional you
know…so don’t feel bad…” I said back as I gave a small smile.

“…Well if you say so…I just don’t want to hurt you…you know…since this is a relatively…
sensitive topic” Seliky said back…I poked her nose with my forefinger and she began to giggle…

“…don’t worry about it Seliky…we need to know more about each other after all…we are
friends…” I replied…Seliky just smiled and looked away at me…

“…anyways…back to my childhood…I remember I’ve had a friend…her name was Tiffany…
she was a little Neera girl…” I said out…

“…Neera?...aren’t they those Mice people who live all over the place…” Seliky asked me…

“…yeah she was one of those…but she called herself a Chu…though I never knew what the
difference was…since you know…it’s something new or something…” I said out…

“…yeah I never heard it before too…maybe I’ll look it up when I get the chance…” Seliky
replied…I giggled a little…

“…well anyways…I guess…she was more of a plaything to me more than a friend…I mean…
all the things I put her through…thinking back to it…I kind of really feel bad for all the things I put
her through…I mean…even the first day we met…I was kind of a bit cruel to her…” I mumbled…

“…you cruel…you are lying…” Seliky said with a laugh…

“…No really…I pretty much tortured the little mouse girl…I did every mean thing you can
think of…from eating her to using her has a mere doll or tying her to a Frisbee and throwing it…” I
said out…I looked down at the floor for a bit…remember how even though Tiffany must have
really hated me…she was always there for me when I got in trouble…”…though…even though…I
was so mean to her…she was still…a really good friend…she made sure I didn’t get into trouble…
and…if I did…she’d do everything she could to bale me out…she even once convince Thanh to
not punish me…*sigh*…I really wish I could see her again…to at least apologies to her about…
everything that I have done…”

“…what ever happened to her?...” Seliky asked…I took in a deep sigh and looked over at
Seliky…

“…Well…I…When…the elves capture Thanh…I knew that the only way to save her was to
run away…so…I…I decided to set Tiffany free…I opened her cage and told her…that…she no
longer was my pet and she can just leave…after that…I ran away…and I never heard from her
ever again…” I said back slowly…I let out a big sigh and turned away…”sometimes…I do wonder
where she is right now…sometimes…I regret doing that…sometimes I…think she might have been
eaten or something”

“…You really miss her…don’t you…” Seliky said back to me…

“…yeah…I…I really do miss my family…I wish all the time that…I could just see them one
more time…” I said back…I closed my eyes…feeling a lone tear run down my cheek…Seliky just
remained quiet on my should…I guess…she just felt that she must have hurt my feelings or
something…I looked over to her and let out a tiny smile... “…but you know what…you are my
family now…”

“…oh boy Aurora…that was incredibly cheesy….” Seliky said with a laugh…

“…gee Seliky…what a way to ruin the moment…I probably should have bothered…” I said
back…

“…It was a joke Aurora…don’t be so uptight…” She said with a giggle…I smiled and rubbed
my finger in her hair…

“…hehehe…ok ok…just this once…” I replied…I laid still for a bit…I began to think about
what I just said…that Seliky was my family now…and started to think about my old family…both
Thanh and my people…what they have given me and what they have done to keep me safe…
from sacrificing their own lives to just…raising me like their daughter…and now I have Seliky…who
is almost like sister…or even a daughter to me…and I really do love her…and…I will try everything
I could to keep her safe…she has been so good to me…and I have to return that to her
somehow…I looked over at Seliky pretty pale face…

“…hold on Seliky…I have something for you…” I said out as I lifted her up…

“…something for me?...” she said back…a little confused…

“…Yeah…a present…” I added…

“…oh Aurora…you don’t have to…I mean…you already have done so much for me…” she
replied…I lowered her onto the ground and patted her head with my finger…

“…You wait here…I’ll go ahead and get it…” I told her as I slithered away into the main
chamber…leaving little Seliky behind…once I reached the chamber…I slithered over to the corner
of the room and dug a little bit…after a second or two…I came to a small cloth that I dug up
many years ago…I used it to wrap up something very dear to me…after finding it I slithered back
to where I left Seliky…I found her siting on the pile of dirt where I left her…kicking her legs back
and forth as she waited for me…

“…I’m back…” I said out as I slithered in….

“…that was fast…” Seliky replied as I laid onto my chest so I could be at eye level with her…
having my hands in a ball to keep her from seeing what I had…

“…Seliky...I want to give you something…” I told her…She looked up at me with her large
pink eyes…

“…give me what…” she asked…I smiled and open up my hands and moved them towards
her…she looked at the cloth for a bit and took I from me after a while…

“…you’re…giving me a piece of a torn up shirt?...” she said in confusion…

“…no silly…that’s what is covering it…open it up…” I replied…Seliky looked down at the cloth
and slowly began to open it up…revealing what was hidden in it…

“…a…a pendent?...” Seliky said out…

“…when Thanh found me…she told me…that…that pendent was around my neck…it has
been…very dear to me ever since Thanh gave it to me…and I considered it my lucky charm…and
now…I’m giving it to you…” I told her…Seliky looked at me in disbelief…

“…Aurora no…I…I can’t take this from you…” she said back…

“…please Seliky…I insist…I…I really want you to have it…” I replied…

“…But…but I can’t…not after knowing how dear this is for you…” she said back…

“…Seliky…it’s yours now…you are my family and I feel that…you should have it…it’s not like
I can wear it anyways…after I started to grow…I just had to keep it in a safe place…so I
wrapped it up in my old shirt…” I told her…Seliky stared at the pendent for a while silently…I
could see a small tear coming from her eyes…she then looked up at me with a smile on your face…

“…th…thank you Aurora…” she said out…”it…it really is beautiful… I will cherish it…forever…”

She then walked over to my chin and gave me a little hug…

“…go on Seliky…put it on…let’s see how it looks on you…” I said to her…

“…*sniff*…oh…aright…” she said back as she unhook the chain and put it around her neck…
after hooking It back up….she looked down at the pendent as it hanged from her neck…

“…It look great on you Seliky…” I said with a smile…

“…are…are you sure…you want me to have this…I…I mean…knowing how important it is to
you…” she asked again…I let out a sigh…

“…Yes I am sure…you are very special to me…and…I just feel that…you deserve it now…so
please just take it…” I replied…Seliky held her hands against the pendent…feeling it with her
thumbs as they passed against it…she stood their silently for a moment…almost like a statue…I
guess she was just deep in thought…after a few minutes of a long and awkward silence…Seliky
looked up at me…with tear filled eyes…

“…Aurora…” she said silently…

“Yes Seliky?...” I replied…

“…I love you…” she said softly…

“…I love you too…My little albino midget…” I laughed…

“…Gee Aurora…what a way to ruin a moment…” she laughed…

“…only because you did it first…” I replied with a giggle…
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Part 71




….It's been rather quiet ever since I gave Seliky the pendent I used to wear as a child

Seiky just sat in the corner of the area…gazing down at it…Since she stopped digging…it

somewhat gave me time to dig by myself without having to worry about accidently burying

Seliky in dirt…and just leave her be for now…I am really happy that she seems to love that

pendent…I have always considered it my lucky charm…hopefully maybe it will give her the

luck that she needs…since this would is so cruel…especially to a girl like her…even in the city

she suffers…and the city is so post to be the safest place for her….but she is constantly hurt

there…I wish that I could go in there and protect her…but that would never happen…the

humans would just kill me…just like they tried to do the first time I went there…


…After a few minutes of silent digging…a beam of light penetrated the darkness…

showing that I broke through to the surface…I looked over to Seliky who was squinting a little



was having her arm near her forehead… guess Human eyes need to adjust to the Darkness…

I find that a little strange too…


"…Looks like we broke into the surface…" I said out…


"…hehehe…we?...you did most of the work…at best…I only shoveled up a mere fraction

of the amount you put in…" Seliky replied… "…I mean really…you are so huge…you can like…

lift up a tone of dirt…I'm scrawny and only move like…a few pounds…"


"…well every little bit helps Seliky…" I said back to her as I lifted her tiny body up with

my hand and placed her safely onto my shoulder…


"…but it was fun…sorry for not helping out too much towards the end there…I…got a



bit distracted…" Seliky added as she looked back down at the pendent I gave her…


"…you sure like looking at it don't you…" I laughed… Seliky looked up as me and smiled a

little bit…


"…Oh…hehehe…well it is a very pretty pendent…I never seen anything like this…even

in the jewelry stores in Negav…well I guess it makes sense…since you know…you aren't a

Felaryan Native…so perhaps this pendent is made up of some alien ore or gem…" Seliky

replied…


"…Yeah I guess that makes sense…" I said back as I pushed aside the soil that was in

front of us…


"…I wonder how you home world is like…like…is it the same like here in Felarya…since

you know…having snake people running around and stuff…" Seliky asked…


"…Well…I don't really know mean…I was born here in Felarya according to that tablet…

so I have never had any contact with my home world and such…though I agree with you…I

do wonder now how it was like over there…" I replied…begging to try to imagine people like

me living in an area that was specifically made for us…but as much as I tried to…I couldn't…I

still don't know much about my people….and who they were…I let out a big sigh as I looked

over to Seliky…


"…I guess it'll just remain a mystery…" I said to her…Seliky just smiled as she look up at

me with her beautiful pink eyes...that seemed to almost glisten in the sun beams that were

peeking through the holes that led into the surface…


"…but you live here now Aurora…with me…and that's what really matters after all…

right?..." she said back to me…I smiled and nodded a little…making sure I didn't knock Seliky

off my shoulder…I hen looked over to the wall of soil that was in front of us…


"…Seliky hand on alright…I don't want to accidently knock you off ok?..." I warned her…

Seliky nodded as she took hold onto my air…I guess …to use it as a rope to hold onto…I

looked back over to the wall of soil and began to dig my way through it…making sure I don't

knock down Seliky …and at this high…she could get seriously hurt…and I know that she is still

recovering from what ever happened during the confrontation…even I am very sore…but I

know this has to be done so I did my best to ignore it…


…after a bit of digging…the entire back entrance of the burrow was opened once

again…out in the distance I could see Jewlia I waved to her…but she didn't seem to respond…


"…perhaps she can't see us from here…" Seliky said…"…Try getting closer…"


…I nodded and continued to slither over to Jewlia…as I got closer…I realized that

Jewlia's yes were closed…I looked over to Seliky…who was looking up at Jewlia…


"…She's sleeping…" Seliky said out…I looked back up at Jewlia again…she was sleeping…



her eyes closed…her might slightly opened…breathing softly as she slept…even in her sleep…

she seemed to have this Aura of beauty that surrounded her…I don't know why but Jewlia

just seems to have this…elegant beauty in her that makes me feel…safe to be around her…


"…She must be exhausted from everything from last night…from me waking her p in the

middle of the night to her staying up the rest of the night healing you…me and Mimi…" Seliky

said to me as she looked up at Jewlia…I began to feel a bit bad…


"…We completely exhausted Jewlia…I can't help to feel a bit bad for this now…I mean…

she must have not gotten any sleep at all…" I said out…


"…Jewlia…did not get…any Sleep…she must rest so that…she can rejuvenate…as well…

as……regrow the supplies she…has…exhausted while…healing us…" A voice said from below

us…me and Seliky looked down…seeing the Dridder girl looking up at us from under Jewlia…


"…Mimi…I didn't expect you to be still awake..." Seliky said out…


"…I…am awake…to make sure…Jewlia…get her proper rest…and that…no one…disturbs

her…" Mimi replied with a unusually monotone voice…this Dridder girl seems not like the other

Dridders…all the other ones seems to always try to kill me… but this one seems…well I

wouldn't say nice…since her unusual…personality…but…she hasn't tried to hurt me or Seliky in

any ways…she actually helped us fight the blob monster if what Jewlia said was true...maybe

not all Dridders are bad…I mean I never thought all of them were bad or anything…but all

the Dridders I met always tried to kill me…and I kind of lost hope that there were Dridders

different from them…but this little one shows me that the ones I encounter aren't the only

ones…even if this dridder girl is very unusual…it gives me a little more hope…


"…Mimi…thanks again…for helping me and Seliky…I…I really appreciate all the help you

have done…I mean…if you haven't showed up…I…I don't know if I would still be here right

now…" I said softly…Mimi looked up at me with her blank eyes…she didn't seem to show any

sort of emotion though her blank face…


"…you…are welcome…I…was just doing what…I…felt…was the best…that I could do…"

Mimi replied…


"…are you going to get your rest Mimi?..." Seliky asked…Mimi shook her head "No"

slowly…


"…I must…watch over Jewlia…to make sure…no one disturbs her slumber…" Mimi

replied…I looked over to Seliky…who had a slight bit of worry in her face…


"…well…Mimi…just try to be careful…since Hitomi is around…and she likes to eat

Dridders for breakfast…and with Jewlia around…she can't protect you…" Seliky told her…Mimi

nodded as she slowly climbed up Jewlia's trunk…making sure not to wake her up…


"…I apologies…but…I do not wish for…Jewlia…to awaken…so…I must ask for you two

to leave…" Mimi said out…


"…oh…alright…um…again…thanks for everything Mimi…if you ever need anything…just

let me know alright…" I said to her…Mimi nodded as she leaned herself against Jewlia's neck

and closed her eyes. I turned around and began to head back into the burrow…looking back

at Jewlia in the distance…sleeping peacefully…next time I see her…I really must thank her for

everything she has done for me…I really do feel bad for causing her so much trouble…she

seems to have been getting very pale lately…and I feel it is because it's because of me

putting so much stress on her…I let out a deep sigh as I slithered into the burrow…


"…Aurora?...what's wrong?..." Seliky asked me…I looked over to Seliky…


"…have you ever notice…that Jewlia…she's been getting paler every day…and I could

swear she looks skinnier…" I asked…Seliky looked down at the floor for a moment…before

finally looking at me…




"…you know…I have noticed that…do you think she's ill?..." she asked…


"…I…I don't know…I'm just afraid that…we might be putting so much stress on her…I…I

feel really bad you know…she's been nothing but loving to us…even raised us back to health…

TWICE…and even fought off the blob monster…I…I just feel that we are…just putting so

much pressure on her that she doesn't deserve…she is such a kind soul…I would hate to know

that I am causing her to suffer…" I said out…it went really silent for a moment…a long and

awkward moment of silence as we slithered through the tunnel…finally Seliky let out a sigh

and looked over to me…


"…what do you thing we should do?..." Seliky mumbled…


"…I…I really don't know Seliky…I mean…Jewlia…she seems to have been alone for so

long…that…when we came…she was so happy…but I really don't want to take that away

from her…but…but I'm really worried…" I replied…


"…Well…maybe all Jewlia needs is some sleep…I mean…if we are stressing her out…we

should just you know…let her have her rest…try to handle things without having to go to her

to fix us up…and surely once she has her rest…she will be all better…I mean…Jewlia is nice…I



really like her…but I would hate to just leave her all alone again…" Seliky said back…I

remained silent for a moment…thinking about what Seliky said…


"…I…I really hope that…that is just the case…I…I really like Jewlia too…she kind of and

loving…I…I just don't want to over burden her…" I mumbled…


"…Don't worry Aurora…we can handle this…I mean…we know that this blob thing only

comes every other day…so now we can prepare and everything…if we don't get hurt…we

don't have to over burden Jewlia…right?..." Seliky said out…


"…Yeah…but Seliky…even if that sounds easy and everything…we don't know what this

monster is capable of…and also…you have to go home today…so even if the monster comes…

I…I'll be alone…" I said in a love voice…Seliky went quiet…I felt my soul fall deep into my

stomach…getting the thought of…Seliky coming to visit me…but I wasn't there to pick her up…

because…I…was killed by that monster…it was very quiet again…filling the air with unease…


"…well…I…I'll try to…find out to get here more often…" Seliky said out…breaking the

silence…


"…but Seliky…your father?..." I said back…


"…Screw him…If I have to take a couple more beatings from him just so I can be with

you more…then so be it…" she said back…shocking me in with her words…


"…Seliky…you have to consider…your body can only take so much…you are young…I…I

just don't want you hurt or anything" I mumbled…


"…Aurora don't worry about me…after 8 years of my life…one thing I learned is that…I

can take hit…I mean come on…I survived years of abuse…2 encounters with that stupid blob

thing…and lived through all those wounds and stuff…been eaten…TWICE…so surely I will be

ok…trust me Aurora…" she said back…I let out a big sigh…I don't really know what to say

about that…I mean…I noticed that Seliky really is a very durable little girl…in fact…I don't

even think I can call her a little girl…she doesn't act like an 8 year old…she…acts much older

than that…she must have been forced to grow up very fast through her life…especially with

all the things I have put her through…I have to wonder if this is a good or a bad thing…I

mean…Seliky missed out on a large chuck of her childhood…it's almost like me…I…I lost a big

part of my childhood…I…I really don't want Seliky to turn out like I have…

"…Seliky…just promise me to not overdo yourself…ok?..." I mumbled as I lifted Seliky

towards my face…


"…alright Aurora…I'll try not to…as for now…we need to somewhat plan for tomorrow

night…s we can be ready for that nasty blob thing…" Seliky said out…


"…agreed…let's see what we can come up with…"
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Finished!

It is really sweet :3 Sure, quite gory and violent, but the interactions between the characters are quite endearing~
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anything of interest in any of the scenes you liked so far?
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It really is nice to see that Aurora cares for Seliky, always taking care of her wounds every time she gets herself into trouble. Their interactions overall are just really touching o:
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Part 72




…Me and Seliky spent most of the day in the main chamber that we sleep in…talking

about how we are going to go about dealing with this…monster that keeps harassing us…and

I honestly have no idea what we are going to do…the thing seems…almost invisible…no

matter what we do to it…it seems to just regenerate…reclaiming any of its lost body parts

that are damaged in battle…I mean…sure…we know that it doesn’t seem to like being frozen…

and even then…t can heal…and I don’t even know if striking that orb thing inside of it helps

much…it seems to go crazy if it is hit there…but…it just gets angrier and doesn’t seem to have

any long term damage on it…but Seliky keeps insisting that it has to have some sort of

weakness…that we have to do all that we can to find this weakness or else…we aren’t going

to last much longer…


…I looked over at Seliky…who was looking through her books as I waited for her…lying

down on my stomach on the cold soil…she looked through all the stacks of books she has

gotten from the library…looking to see if she can find any weaknesses in there…maybe just

something to at least know what we are dealing with…Confronting a monster that you don’t

even know what it is…s a horrible idea…but we have nothing…nothing to work with…we don’t

even know why this creature is after us…




“…Drat…this book has nothing that is use to us either…I am beginning to think this blob

thing isn’t even a Felaryan creature…nothing in the books here describe anything like it…the

closest thing here is those purple slimes…but they live far from here and don’t act like what

we are dealing with at all..” Seliky said out…


“…But Seliky…there has to be something…there just has to…I mean…it’s impossible that

no one knows a single thing about this monster…seeing how…how destructive it is…” I

replies “…I…I mean…every time I think of it…every time I enter an area where we

encountered it…I…I just have this feeling of emptiness…that…that nothing ever seems right…

like…my very being just was…sucked away…that isn’t normal Seliky…there has to be

something to tell us…to tell us how to get his thing to leave us alone…”


“…I know Aurora…” Seliky said softly. “…I…I’m doing everything that I can...


…an awkward silence filled the area…Seliky stared down at the flood blankly…


“…I…I’m sorry Seliky…” I mumbled… “…I…I didn’t mean to push you…”


“…no no…its ok…It’s understandable since we are in…such a crazy situation…” she said

back as she closed the book she had opened.


“…I just don’t know what we are going to do Seliky…” I mumbled…I know that it’s wrong

to think it is hopeless…but that is what it seems…I mean…f I run…it’ll just fallow me…it

already has my sent…and I can’t run forever…especially hear in Felarya…If that thing doesn’t

kill me…surely something else will…


“…Listen…Aurora…I…I’ll go back to Negav…maybe sell off some of the stuff I made

here…get some supplies to maybe make something…I donno if I could make something before

tomorrow night…seeing how I just started…but I donno…it’s the only thing I can think of…I’ll

go to the Library again…and do another search…” Seliky said out…


“…well…if…if you are going to do that…I…I guess I’ll try to come up with something…

maybe set up some traps…I don’t know if a pitfall would slow it down very much…” I said

back…rubbing my arm…I can’t help to feel useless…I mean I can’t do anything…the only thing

I could do is make little wimpy traps…Seliky is smart…she can build things and come up with

complex plans…




“…well sounds like a plan to me…we’ll meet back at our usual meeting spot in…let’s say…

3 hours?...” Seliky said back as she placed her stuff into her bag…


“…alright…I’ll take you to the city gate…and then go see if I can come up with

anything…” said to her as I hoisted myself up and lowered my hand…Seliky happily jumped

into the palm of my hand and sat down as I lived her up and made my way out of the burrow…


“…just be careful out there Aurora…remembers…this theory of ours…it’s only a hunch…

it could come out in the day…also...who knows what else is out there…” Seliky told me…”…

also you are still healing from yesterday…”


…I giggle a bit…I just find it funny that Seliky is concerned for my wellbeing…even

though she is so much smaller than I am…and that I live out here since I was a little girl…


“…hehe…ok Seliky…I’ll be careful alright…you do the same yourself ok?...I mean…I

don’t know what goes on in that city…” I replied…


“…Will do Aurora…it’s not like I am going back to my house…I’m just going to the library

to see Miss T…so I’ll be fine…the Bazaar might be a little hectic…but that’s only because it is

so crowded…” Seliky said back as she looked through her bag…


“…alright…” I replied as I finally reached the exit of the burrow……The warm morning

sun beams struck against my bare skin as I closed my eyes…enjoying the great feeling…I

stretched my aching scaled as I began to slither again…I looked over to Seliky in my hand…

she was laying down with her bag on top of her stomach…she must be exhausted…with

everything that has been going on…I don’t blame her…I’m exhausted myself…I wish I could

just go and sleep…but I can’t do that…not with this monster around…I know that we have to

get rid of it…if we have any hope of having a single bit of peace time…I just hope that Seliky

isn’t feeling the same strain I am having…a girl her age shouldn’t be going through things like

this…she should be home…with a family…living a normal life…the life I used to have…with

Thanh…


…I looked back down at Seliky…watching her as she laid there with her eyes closed…

was she sleeping?...if she is…she sure falls asleep fast…I decided not to disturb her just in

case she was sleeping…I continued on through the forest as smoothly as possible…to make

sure the ride wasn’t that bumpy…the forest was unusually quiet today…the only thing I could

hear are the birds chirping and the wind blowing against the Canopy leaves…I guess all the

animals are still sleeping…It is still a bit early…


…after a little more slithering…I heard a voice from above me…calling out my name…I

looked around a bit...realizing I was in the area that Hitomi lives in…I looked up at the

canopy…seeing Hitomi’s Silhouette in the tree tops…


“…hey scaly…” she said as she hopped down from the tree tops…revealing her pair of

wings as she floated her way down…this is the first time I have ever seen her wings…they

were surprisingly beautiful…she has in total 4 wings…two being a bright green color and the

second being red…with an oval shaped patter…almost as if she had yellow eyes on the back

of her wings…before I could admire them some more…her wings folded back behind her

abdomen…


“…I see you and Selitastey made up…” Hitomi said with a laugh…


“…My name is Seliky you big dope…” a little voice said out below me…I looked down

seeing Seliky hoisting herself up…


“…yeah yeah…what every Selitastey…” Hitomi laughed…Seliky grumbled to herself as

she folded her arms…”…I’m just glad you two are back together…”


…So…Hitomi really was trying to get us back together…I guess…she really does care for

us…even if she doesn’t really show it…I guess she just shows her love in a different way…


“…Hitomi…thank you…thank you for…helping me and Seliky…you know…fix what has

been broken…” I said to her as a looked down at the floor…


“…hey hey…it’s no problem at all…pfffft…It would be a lot more boring around her if you

were just…moping around all depressed…hiding in that little…dirt...hole...thing…sure Seliky

may be a bit sized snack…but it’s good to have her around…fun to tease you know…” Hitomi

laughed…


“…Ha ha...very funny Hitomi…” Seliky grumbled…


“….Hey it was a compliment…I could just go to insults…I’m sure you’d like that…and

believe me I know some good insults…I’ve had my fair share of Harpy…” Hitomi said with a

grin as she folded her arms…


“…well…I just really appreciate your help Hitomi…thanks for being…a good friend…” I

said out…Hitomi smiled and placed her hand on my shoulder…


“…hey no problem scale but…I was just returning the favor for when you helped me

out…I mean…I would probably been all depressed and angry if you haven’t cheered me up…”

Hitomi responded…was she referring to when she lost her egg to that blob creature…I guess

she was…I mean…that’s the only time I remember where I tried to help her out…I guess it

really did make a difference according to what Hitomi just said…


“…well I have to get back up in the old tree of mine…make sure my little guys are

alright…” Hitomi said as she looked down at Seliky… “…just be good to your friend there

squirt…you sure have a blessing there I’ll tell you that…”


…Hitomi then jumped into the air…where she disappeared into the canopy…I looked

down as Seliky who was still staring up into the canopy…


“…She seems to be opening up to you a bit Seliky…” I said to her…


“…pffft…yeah right…she’s just being a bully…” Seliky replied. “…but I guess…she IS

being a tiny bit nicer to me…I still really don’t like how she looks at me sometimes…like she’

going to gobble me up or something…”


“…well you are tasty…” I giggled…


“…wait…wha?...” Seliky relied…I turned red…


“…oh…um…nothing…” I quickly said as I turned away…to hide my guilty face…I don’t

want Seliky to know that I have urges to eat her still…


“…Aurora you alright?…your all red…” Seliky asked…I took a deep breath before looking

back at the little albino girl…


“…Y…yeah…I…I’m ok…don’t you worry about me Seliky…” I replied…


“…well…if you say so…well anyway…yeah…we should get going if we are going to have

much time to do our things and meet back up later…” Seliky said back…I nodded as I lifted her

to my shoulder…


“…yeah you are right…we should get going…your city isn’t too far anyways…” I replied



as I began to slither on through the trees…





…After a bit of moving on…we came on to the area where he entrance of the city was…

I slowly took Seliky and placed her on the ground so she could head up to the city…we said

our goodbyes and she started to head to the city…I quietly waited behind a tree…watching

her slowly make her way to the large bridge that came to the large walls of the city…I closed

my eyes…remembering when was just a small nagling…seeing this wall for the first time…it

made me feel so tiny…so insignificant…it still does…it towers over myself…It’s hard to imagine

such a tiny race could build such a massive structure…sure…I could tell some area’s aren’t as

supported well as other…since the walls are cracked a bit…but everything has flaws…I guess

since I know my way around supporting things…that I could see the tiniest flaws in stuff of

that sort…heh…maybe I am like this…”nerd” thing Seliky claims herself to be…


…I opened up my eyes again…seeing the little white dot that is Seliky finally pass

through the massive gates…I sighed to myself…I’m all alone again…without Seliky here to

keep me company…I haven’t any clue what I am going to do to stop this blob monster from

attacking us again…I can only hope that Seliky finds out something that could be of use to

us…so we could maybe stand a chance against it…I took a deep sigh before turning around

and slithering away from the city…I guess I could just place a few traps near the burrow…

who knows…it might fall into one of them…I could go look in some of the traps I already set…

if I am lucky enough…a human would be in one that has a medical kit…the last one I got from

a human is running low…and I really don’t want to bother Jewlia…she’s still resting…and I

don’t think Mimi would want us to disturb her…it’s just going to be a long and crazy day for me

and Seliky…I just know that…but I can’t shake this weird feeling in my gut that I am having…

it’s not the feeling I have whenever that blob monster shows up…it’s a different feeling…a

tingly feeling…almost if something eventful is going to happen…but I have no idea what…I

guess it is just me…maybe I am just very hungry…I guess I’ll go see if I can eat something…

since Seliky isn’t here I don’t have to worry about her feeling ill then I could get to work on

laying traps…yeah that's definitely a good plan…
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Part 73


…I slithered on forward through the lush group of trees…it was a rather nice felaryan day…it was nice a warm…but not too hot…it was
the perfect temperature to just relax…but sadly I can sit around and enjoy it…I have to go and figure out some ways so me and Seliky would
have a better chance against that blob monster…I can dig some traps…maybe place them in an area that we can lure the monster to…then
would have an advantage against it…but what else can I do?…I mean…I only know how to dig…nothing else…unlike Seliky… don't have the
ability to do research…I dought the humans would even let me close to this…"Library" thing Seliky is always talking about…what can I do to help
us…there has to be something…

"…Hey Scaly…watch out you are about to smack yourself in that tree…" heard above me…I looked up seeing a tree right in front of my
face…I almost smacked right into it…

"…heh that was close…but hey it would have been funny to see you hit the tree…" I heard again…I looked around a bit…finally seeing
Hitomi hanging upside down from a nearby tree…

"…oh…um…thanks Hitomi…" I said back to her as I turned away…somewhat embarrassed by what just happened…

"…pffft…and everyone goes on how Naga folk have the best sensory or something…yet here I am staring at one who almost smacked
herself face first into a tree…what are you not paying attention or something?..." she laughed as she hoped down from the tree and skillfully
landed on her four legs…

"…oh…um…yeah…I guess I was just distracted…I was thinking about something…" I mumbled…

"…oh?..." Hitomi replied with a curious look on her face…

"…well you see…me and Seliky recently found out something…um…you remember that blob monster?..." I said back…suddenly Hitomi's
face change…almost like her eyes lit up with absolute hate…

"…you mean that good for nothing drip who took away my baby!...." she said back angery as she tightened her fists…

"…well…um…I and Seliky encountered it again…yesterday…and…though we barely survived…we kind of found out something about it…" I
said quietly…Hitomi's look of rage change again…now she seemed focused…I guess she was curious about what I was saying…"

"…go on…" she said back as she folded her arms…

"…well…Seliky knotweed a pattern…that it only comes out at night…every other day…" I replied…

"…every other day…you mean it only appears once every two days or something?..." Hitomi said back…

"…yeah…which means that…tomorrow it's going to appear again to attack us…" I mumbled and let out a big sigh "…me and Seliky are
trying to come up with a way to prepare for it…since it is going to appear tomorrow…"

'…I see…and that little morsel figured out this pattern thing all by herself hmmmm?..." Hitomi responded as she reached up to antennae
and rubbed her hands against it…I guess to clean them…

"…yeah…now she's in the city looking up a way we can stand a chance…I'm also trying to think of a way to help us…but the thing is that I
haven't a clue on what to do…the only thing I am good a is digging…and that will hardly help us at all…" I said back …I let out a sigh as I turned
away…" I kind of feel useless…

"…oh don't say that…you know what is useless?...getting into an argument with an Harpy…now THAT is useless…the little air heads will
just keep cursing at you and all…a better alternative is just to eat them…that shuts up their yappers…" Hitomi laughed and she nudged me a
little…I just let out a sigh and looked down at the floor… "Listen Scale butt…how about this…I'll help you think of a way to get rid of this blob
thing…" My eyes widened after hearing her say this…

"…What…really?..." I said out…

"…yeah of course…I have a bone to pick with that thing anyways…no one harms this momma's baby and gets away with it I'll tell you
that…but before I help yam…I need to catch myself something…since you interrupted my hunt…" Hitomi replied…

"…oh…I…I'm sorry…I didn't mean to bother you…" I said back…

"…nah it's no problem…it's not like I was doing any good anyways…couldn't find a darn thing since I last saw you…hmpt…wouldn't be
surprised that you scared everything away from all your moving and nearly crashing into trees…" Hitomi said out…

"…Yeah…I guess I need to work on moving a bit quieter…" I said softly…feeling a bit embarrassed having someone else telling me that I
can't move through the forest quiet enough…it's something I really should work on…I never was really good as it…making catching food so hard
for me that I had to rely on traps and the fruit that grows around here…maybe it would be a good idea to work on that…then I wouldn't have to
rely on eating humans all the time…making little Seliky not as sick when do…

…Right then…my stomach growled loudly…I blushed as I looked up at Hitomi…she has a somewhat of a smirk on her face as she placed
her arm over my shoulder…

"…you're going to fix that…right?..." she laughed…

"…ah…I guess I'll just take a look in my traps…to see if I caught anything…" I said softly…

"…pfffft…don't bother with that…I already passed by your traps and there was nothing in them…" she replied…I paused for a bit…staring
at Hitomi…

"…why were you checking my traps?..." I said out…she just turned around and placed her hands behind her head a stretched…

"…Hey don't give me that look…I'm going to be a mother and if I can get an easy meal I'm going to take it…I would've paid you back
anyways…" she said back…she then turned around and folded her arms "…how about this scale butt…lets hunt together…and I'll show you a
thing or two about stealth…make things a bit more easier on you…"

"…what…really?..." I replied…can't believe she offering to help me…

"…hey hey hey…don't get your tail all tied up in a knot…and sure…they didn't call me the Grass Assassin back home for nothing that's for
sure…after we get yourself a bite to eat…you and I could start thing about this big ball of Slug girl ooze good for nothing blob…monster…
creature…THING…"

…I laughed for a bit at her reply…Hitomi really is a kind person once you get past her…rather unique character…makes me happy that I
got to know her…and at least…I think…I am on her good side…

…I moved over to Hitomi and gave her a gentle hug…

"…thanks Hitomi…I am grateful for your help…" I said to her…

"…hey hey hey…don't get all lubbey dubby on me now…it's no big deal after all…not can you let me go now…I can feel the essents of bad
hunting skills passing over to me…" she grumbled…

"…what do you say first Hitomi…" I laughed…

"…can you let go of me before I bite your head off…" she replied…I moved back from her a bit…still holding on to her shoulders as I
looked at her face…she just smiled…

"…what don't look at me like that…it's how us Mantoids show our love…wait…on second thought…the biting the head off is only for mates…
hmmm…I should have thought this through beforehand…" she said out…I just laughed as I released her…

"…fine fine…next time…just us "please"…ok?..." I replied…

"…Ok…Fine…I'll just avoid hugging you from now on scale butt…you Naga's and your way of showing "affections"…" she said back as she
climbed up a tree… "…now that this horrid love fest is over…shall we get to hunting…"

"…oh…um…of course…um…" I paused a bit…watching Hitomi climb up the tree with ease…"…do I have to…um…go up there?..."

"…of course scale butt…bet way of moving around without being detected…" she replied…

"…well…I…don't know how to climb…trees…" I mumbled…

"…ah right right…you said this before…no wonder you are such a bad hunter…what kind of Naga are you anyways…I thought all naga's
were like…pro tree huggers or something…your tail broken or something?..." She said back as she jumped down the tree and landed in front of
me…

"…um…do…I…just prefer the ground…that's all…" I replied softly…Hitomi stared at me with her arms folded…shaking her head back and
forth before rolling her eyes…

"…well I guess I'll come up with…something to teach you…you really are not making this much easier on me are you?..." she said back…

"…sorry…" I mumbled…

"…don't sweat it scale butt…it'll be good practice for when I have to teach the kids the way of hunting…heh…that's going to be so much
fun…anyways…lets go on…and try not to hit any trees ok?..." Hitomi laughed as she began to climb the tree again…

"…I'll make sure not too…"
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Part 74



I slithered on through the forest floor…trying my best to keep up with the Agile Mantoid girl moving through the tree…almost seeming like

a green blur jumping from tree to tree…every now and then…Hitomi will just stop and let me catch up to her…I never knew that she was really

this fast…she can get from place to place much faster than I can even dream to…and she can even fly…and I don't even see her using her

wings…I can only imagine how fast she can go while in flight…


"…Can't you move any faster?...I see Slug people who are faster than your scaley behind…" Hitomi said out from the top of a branch high

above my head....


"…I'm going as fast as I could Hitomi…I'm much faster underground…but here are too many trees in the way and would be somewhat

difficult to burrow through because of all the roots in the way…" I replied…Hitomi just shook her head as she sighed to herself…


"…excuses excuses…by the time you catch up to me...I would be an old wrinkly Mantoid…but anyways…I found us a good spot for us to

get those hunting skills of you…if you can even call them skills…to top performance…look over there…" she said to me…I looked over her

shoulder…seeing a bunch of elk like creatures out in the distance…


"…that are those things?..." I asked…Hitomi gave me a cold stare…as if I was stupid or something…"


"…ok…you must be joking…no one is THAT horrid of a hunter to not know the basic food source us giant peeps eat to live…" she said

back…


"…um…n…no……I mainly eat humans…every now and then…the big turtle things…I don't know what they are called though…" I replied

slowly…feeling really embarrassed about myself…am I really that bad at surviving out here…


"……turtle things…you mean those big Noghdong…kind of hard to believe you can eat one of those…their shells are like…super hard or

something…" She said back to me…


"…well…I don't run into them very often…but if they are small enough I can swallow them whole…their shells take a while to you know…

digest but it really is filling…but I can't get the really really huge ones…only like the ones who are like…24 feet or something…but since they are

hard to find…I mainly eat humans…" I explained back…


"…only humans huh?...heh…a lot of other people I know who be very jealous of you I can tell you that…humans are quite a rare meal for

a lot of us…but that's beside the point…those little buggers over there are Dulkers …these little guys are good for a meal since they are

practically everywhere…no too bad in taste either if you like your food to be fuzzy…" Hitomi said to me…I looked back over at the creatures

minding their own business…eating from the vegetation on the ground…


"…now watch a pro at this…" Hitomi said with a short laugh as she leapt high into the air…vanishing into the trees…I slowly made my way

behind a tree and looked over two the creatures out in the distance…after a little bit…I finally saw Hitomi…she was right near them…but I could

barely see her…her green body blended perfectly with the leaves in the trees…I guess the creatures didn't see her at all…even if she was right

near them…she swayed against the wind…mimicking the leaves blowing in the trees…t was amazing on how precise she was…and how she can

remain hidden even when so close to her target.


Suddenly…she lashed out with such blinding speed…grabbing one of the poor creatures so fast…that is seemed to have almost just

vanished and reappear into her grasp…the other creatures all galloped away…leaving the poor captive at the mercy of Hitomi…Hitomi move

away from my sight again with the creatures in her hands…it was really an amazing sight to see Hitomi Skillfully hunt…making it seem almost

easy…but I know it can't be that easy…Hitomi probably practiced hard at perfecting everything she does…I know I would never be as good at

her when it comes to this stuff…but I am very grateful that she is taking her time to teach me at least something about hunting…


After a minute or two…Hitomi appeared with a satisfied look on her face…I guess she just ate the poor creature…


"…did you see that scale butt?..." she asked me…


"…yeah…you were amazing!..." I said back…she just smiled and she patted her belly…


"…I AM the Grass Assassin after all…" she laughed…


"…hehehe…yeah…it fits you I guess…" I said with a little laugh…


"…hehehe…thanks Scale butt…ok…now to serious business… the number one thing you should keep in mind while hunting is…camouflage…

you do not want what you are going after to see you…hear you…or sense you what so ever…and since most creatures use their eyes and ears

to be aware of their surroundings…if you eliminate their ability to see you…it greatly makes them a lot easier to stalk…" Hitomi said to me…I

nodded slowly…Hitomi then seemed to begin to stare at me…like…examining my body or something…"…hmmmmm…not much to work with here…

you are all…like…brown…some spots of dark brown…black…few spots of yellow here and there on your tail…definitely not a person to be hiding

in the trees…that is for sure…well then…the best bet for you is….like you said…stay on the ground…at least like…near rocks or something…

maybe dirt…I donno…it's hard to work with a Naga…if only you were something cooler…like a Mantoid…that would make you so much easier to

work with…"


"…brown huh…and…you said I should stick to the ground so they don't see me as easily?..." I said back…


"…yeah but still…that works better with smaller creatures who are your color…but you are MUCH bigger…making you much easier to spot…

so yeah…that is pretty much hopeless…" she said back…I gave a big sigh and turned away…


"….well…what should I do then…everything seems to point to that I am not meant to be a hunter…maybe should just stick to using my

traps…" I mumbled…


"…blah…don't say that scale butt…just try I out once…see if you can catch one…if you can't…we'll figure out something……"


"…Oh…ok…I'll try…" I mumbled as I fallowed Hitomi…the creatures galloped away faster she caught the first one…so we move about a bit

until we can across a new group of Dulkers…grazing in the grass…


"…perfect here is a nice group here…remember…you don't want them to see or hear you…" she told me…I let out a big sigh and nodded…

I turned and looked over at the creatures in the distance…slowly making my way closer to them…I stayed in the areas where the trees were

somewhat closer together…to at least cover myself from their sight a little bit…after a bit I looked back over to Hitomi who was a where I left

her…she just smiled and gave me a thumbs up…didn't really make me feel better…I am actually very nervous…I never really hunted like this…

the closest thing I can remember is when I lived with Thanh…how I would play "games" with Tiffany…but that was in a house and I always knew

where Tiffany was going to hide…this is out in the wild…it's not a game and can't rely on my childish tricks to be a successful hunter…


…I slither on closer to the Dulker…bracing myself against a tree to try to stay out of site…but somehow…I saw one of the Dulkers quickly

turn to where I was and began to run off…having the others in the group fallow behind it…I sighed deeply to myself…maybe I am just not cut

out for this…


…Hitomi then jumped down next to me as I looked up at her in shame…


"…no good…huh?..." I mumbled…


"…no good…puffs…that was Terrible…sloppy sloppy sloppy that is what it was…" She said back as she shook her head…


"…maybe I should just give up on this…" I mumbled…


"…bah…give up now…now way…this is a challenge for me and I will see it through…we just need to adapt a hunting style just for you…

something that we know you are good at and mesh it in to one perfect hunting style for you…" she said back to me as she patted my shoulder…


"…but I don't think I am good at anything that could help me…other than making traps…" I said back…


…Hitomi paused for a moment…staring at me… guess she was thinking on what to do with me…


"…hmmm…you said something about burrowing before…digging and what not…" she said out…


"…oh…yeah um…I said I could travel pretty fast underground…" I replied…


"…how do you know where you are going while underground…don't you just…only see dirt or something?..." she then asked…


"…oh it's easy…When I am tunneling…I can feel the vibrations around me to scope out my surround areas…to get a feel for the terrain

above me and around me…I also can see with this purple eye of mine to see he heat sources that are around me…even see them above the

ground…" I explained…


"…hmmmm…interesting…now…can you do all of that…Quietly?..." she asked me…


"…I…I don't really know…" I paused for a second…I remember back when me and Seliky were just starting our lives as friends…when she

wandered off and hat Dridder was nearby…that I dug underground and saved her…"…I…guess I could if I really tried…"


"…perfect…I got a plan then…have you ever thought about…hunting your pray…from underground?..." she asked me…I was confused on

what she was trying to ask me…


"…from…underground?..." I repeated…


"…you know…using all that…fancy vibration nonsense to basically…"Stalk" your pray or something…I am sure that no one would suspect a

giant clumsy lug like you from beneath them…" Hitomi added…

"…you mean like…just fallow the pray from underground?..." I said back…she nodded…


"…yeah…and like…when you are close enough…like…pop out or something…I donno…I prefer trees myself…but…heck it's something

right?..."


…I thought about I for a bit…Hitomi's sudjestion doesn't seem like a bad one…it's exactly the same thing that I did to rescue Seliky while

still being hidden from that Dridder…I could definitely apply the same thing when it comes to hunting…why didn't I think of doing this before…I

guess I was just so stressed out about trying to survive that I paid no thought of it…


"…that sounds like a great idea Hitomi…I actually have something in mind that I could do…" I replied back…Hitomi laughed as she placed

her hands on my shoulder…


"…hahaha…you sound like you have a bit more confidence behind that innocent voice of yours…this "plan" definitely must be something if

you sound like that…." Hitomi replied "…well then let's see if we can track down those little buggers again and test this "plan" of yours…"


…I smiled and nodded before Hitomi leapt into the air…into the canopy high above…I fallowed behind her as best as I could…but Hitomi is

so much faster than I could ever be…it was very difficult to fallow her…especially how agile she is…maneuvering through the trees so easily and

gracefully…I am rather jealous actually…at least Hitomi was kind enough to stop every now and then to let me catch up…


…eventually after a good 10 minutes…I caught up with Hitomi again…this time she seemed to be hiding…she signaled me to come closer…I

guess she must have found them…so I tried my best to move over to her as quietly as I could…once I reached her…I looked over the thicket…

seeing the group of Dulkers grazing off in the distance…


"…well scale butt…here's your second try…let's see what you can do..." she whispered to me…I nodded as I looked back over to the

creatures in the distance…I examined their position to get a general idea on which direction I should dig…after I got a decent idea on what I

should do…I took a deep breath and struck the ground beneath me and began burrowing deep into the ground…


,,,after being completely underground…everything began to feel much more conferrable…the nice cold soil against my skin…almost feels

like it is giving me more energy…I guess it's because I am in an environment that I am more conferrable with…like my body was specifically

designed to be completely underground…and to be able to travel through it quickly…


…then it struck me…perhaps…I could use my ability to burrow quickly against this…blob creature…I am not sure…that creature seems to

have the ability to sink into the ground…but I don't know if it can move really fast…maybe if I encounter it…I can overwhelm it from beneath the

surface…or at least if things get too dangerous…I could just take Seliky and burrow away…but this is matter I shouldn't be talking about now…

right now I have to focus on this hunt…I closed my green eye so I could see through the dirt and s the heat sources of the Dulker that were

above me…just minding their own business…they don't really to be aware that I am present…which is good… think I got the hang of burrowing

quietly when I had to save Seliky the first time…


…after moving into a conferrable position as well as a good angle between myself and the Dulkers that I were targeting…I really only have

once shot at this because the second I lunge…they will run away…so I have to take as much advantage of the moment of surprise I have…

even if it will be a short one…after a minute or two of waiting…I figured that it was a perfect time to strike…I quickly lunged my hand through

the dirt…breaking into the surface right under the Dulker and grabbed it…I heard is squeal as it began to struggle in my grasp…the other began

to scamper away…but I then had an idea…Il lifted my tail up…causing it to burst out of the ground in the path of the fleeing dulkers…they

turned around and ran the other way…luring them in my direction…I then lunged my free hand out of the ground and grabbed a second one…I

pulled I to me and I began to make my way back over to Hitomi…I didn't think I would actually do this well…I managed to catch two of them…I

am actually quite proud of myself…


…after a bit…I resurfaced where Hitomi was waiting…she had a big grin on her face when she saw me…


"…hahaha…impressive…very impressive scale but…a bit chaotic and messy with the dirt flying around and that huge mess you left over

there…but hey…you found something that worked…it remind me of my "Gotcha Grab"…but instead its underground…" she said to me as she

patted my back…


"…heh…thanks Hitomi…I just remembered I did something like this to save Seliky from a Dridder once…I just figured could try to apply the

same logic for hunting…but still have to thank you…without your help I wouldn't have realized it…" I paused for a short but as I looked down at

the two Dulkers who were still squirming in my grasp "…so…um…here…it's my thanks for you helping me…"


…I let out one of my hands with the dulker in it to Hitomi…


"…what…no you caught those guys by yourself…so you eat them…" she said back as she gestured her hands up…


"…no no…I insisted…you were a big help and you are helping me with learning to defend myself better so it is the least I can do…and plus…

two of these guys is too much for me to handle…" I said back as I handed her the dulker…I never really was able to eat too much…I guess I

have a small stomach or something…Hitomi just sighed as she took the Dulker from me…


"…fine fine…I'll take the thing…you naga's and this…"Generosity" nonsense…" she said back as she took the Dulker and swallowed the

poor thing…I giggled a bit before eating mine…it was a bit harder to swallow than it is for a human…I go bucked in the nose a few times before I

could get him in…Hitomi laughed during that which really made me blush…


"…well now that your belly is taken care of…shall we go on to training?...I assume you have room in that pile of dirt you call a home to do

that right?..." Hitomi said out…I nodded back…


"…yeah…I have a private chamber made of stone where I used to practice…it's really big so there is plenty of room…it's right next to the

hot spring too so maybe after we can take a dip…" I said back…


"…bah…me and water never got along…makes my wings all heavy and stick to me too much…" she said back as she wings unfolded a bit…

revealing her beautiful rainbow like wings "…and I don't want these guys to get all messed up"

."…hehehe…alright Hitomi…um…I'll lead the way alright?..." I replied…


"…alright dirt head…I'll fallow you scaley behind…" she laughed…
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...me and Hitomi headed through the forest floor for a couple of minutes...It felt good to actually lead the way this time...Hitomi is so much

faster than I am and she can easily move through the trees...having to wait for me to catch up...like this...I can just take my time and take the

moment to just relax and enjoy the warm Felaryan air...though Hitomi seems to be edgy y the looks of it...maybe she doesn't like how slow I am

going...it fits her I guess...she seems to be the person who likes things to go fast...I decided to move just a little bit quicker for her...I mean

we do have a limited time till that monster shows up again...so I should be going as fast as I could when I think about it...





...Eventually we came to the entrance of the burrow that I have blocked off with the boulder...I proceeded to push it aside and lead

Hitomi in...she stumbled a bit since the tunnel is very dark...after a bit I just took her arm and led her the rest of the way before she could start

complaining...though I guess I should try to come up with a way to have my tunnels be more lit up...poor Seliky must be walking around down

her in the dark with only that little flashlight thing she has...and Hitomi can't see at all...I'll have to think of a way to light up later on...perhaps

with those rocks I found that are in the training chamber...but I don't have many of those either...I'll think of something eventually...





"...Ugh are we there yet scale butt...Its annoying walking through the dark like this...can't see a damn thing down here..." I heard from

behind me...


"...oh don't worry Hitomi...we are almost there...just a little bit more to go..." I replied...


'...Well make it quick...your nag hands are tainting me..." Hitomi grumbled...we continued on for a little bit until we finally came to the

very large stone opening to my old training chamber...it's been a really long time since I have been in here...almost been like 4 years...I am

surprised that I remembered where it was...





...I led Hitomi into the center of the chamber and released her arm...


"...well...here we are...my personal training chamber...thing..." I said out...Hitomi looked around for a bit...


"...it's...so...black....bleh...how am I going to show you anything when I can't even see my hands in front of my face huh?..." Hitomi

grumbled as she folded her arms...I giggled a bit as I slithered over to the end of the room where the special stone I mined up was...I risen up

my tail and slammed it against the stone...the stone began to light up along with the rest of the stones I have places along the walls of the

chamber...causing the chamber to completely light up...


"...ACK...the light...So bright!...warn me next time before you do that scaley...nearly blinded me..." Hitomi said out as she covered her

eyes...


"...Oh...sorry...I guess I need to remember more often that not everyone's eyes are like mine and need to adjust..." I said back...Hitomi

grumbled for a bit while she was squinting...after a bit...her eyes adjusted to the newly litted room...she looked around the room a

bit...skittering across the stone floors and passing her hands across the stone walls..


"...Nice place...nice and big...did you dig out this chamber all yourself?..." she asked me...


"...oh...yeah I did...took me a few days..." I replied...


"...Impressive...very impressive...especially since this is solid rock...there must be some muscle under those scales then huh?...it's funny

really because you look rather scrawny to be digging out caves like this..." Hitomi said back to me...


"...oh...well I'm not nearly as strong as I was now than I was back then...I haven't been working out as much I guess...I should really get

back into it...especially with this nasty monster stalking me...I need to be at my best game if I want to stand a chance against it..." I mumbled

back...


"....well that's why you got me...I'll toughen you up for sure...teach you some of my family's martial artsmight help with your digging

too..." Hitomi laughed...


"...Martial arts?..." I replied in confusion...I didn't know predators knew martial arts...I mean...I heard of it from Aunty Thanh and Seliky

mentioned it every now and then...but I always that it was just something for those who are really small...like humans and such...


"...yeah...us Mantis folk take pride in our fighting style...but seeing how you did help me and all...I'd be happy to teach you at least the

basics...it'll help when I have to teach my kids when they hatch...practice makes perfect after all..." Hitomi said back as she came over to

me..."...that is...if you are willing to learn..."


"...oh of course...anything to get rid of that monster...just tell me what to do and I'll do it..." I replied...a grin appeared on Hitomi's face.


"...Haha...that's what I wanted to hear...now then...dodge this..."


...before I could react...Hitomi struck me right in the face...knocking me into the ground painfully...


"...Ow...Hitomi...what was that for!?!..." I cried out as I rubbed my cheek...where Hitomi struck me...I didn't expect her to attack me like

that...


"...bah...you are too slow and your reaction time is horrific..." Hitomi said out as she folded her arms...


"...you could have at least warned me before you did that..." I mumbled as I hoisted myself up and dusted off the dirt from myself...


"...Yeah...scale butt...a monster is totally going to come up and warn you that it is going to strike when you are least expecting it...things

don't work that way scale but...you should be on your guard pretty much all the time..." Hitomi said back as she shook her head...I let out a

sigh as I rubbed my cheek...I could almost taste blood from inside my mouth too...that punch really hurt too...


"...ugh ok...I get the point you are trying to say...I just well...wasn't really expecting you to hit me that's all...I'll be ready ne..." before I

could even finish...Hitomi struck me in the face again and I flew back into the ground face first...


"...Hitomi!..." I cried out...Hitomi rose up her hands and turned around as if she took no part in it...


"...what it's not my fault...you were the one who wasn't paying attention..." Hitomi said back...I tasted some more blood in my mouth

now...I think she cut up my lip…I hoisted myself back up slowly…my jaw is beginning to hurt a bit…I just had two blows to my face…I am

surprised my jaw hasn't been dislocated…


"…Hitomi…go easy on me ok…" I mumbled as I rubbed my jaw…


"…bleh…there is no such thing as "going easy"...nothing out there is going to decide to go easy on you…it's all or nothing and there is no

shortcuts or freebees…" Hitomi said back to me…I sighed as I rubbed my jaw some more…


"...I know Hitomi…but this is just practice…can we at least start sl…" before I could finish…Hitomi struck at me again…but this time I saw it

and grabbed her arm and pushed I aside to make her miss…"...hey I stopped it that time…"


"…nice work scale butt…" Hitomi said out…then she grabbed my arm with her free hand and twisted it…then bend it back…forcing me to

cringe and fall forward…"…but of course…you need to make sure that I can't use your own counter against you…" Hitomi then releases me and

stepped a few feet away from me…giving me some room to hoist myself up…


"…ugh…I guess I am just really bad at this…" I mumbled as I rubbed my arm…which was begging to hurt from when Hitomi twisted it…


"…bah…it's not that you are bad…it's just I have more experience with this…I had to wrestle with my brother and sisters all the time…and

I have more than 40 of them…so I kinda know what I am doing…don't worry you'll get better scale but…it'll just take more abuse…' she

laughed…I just sighed to myself…


"…I guess you are right…but still…can we just go…a little bit easier…and just build from there…" I said back…Hitomi sighed as she

shrugged a little…


"…Ok ok…fine…I guess we can just have a sparring session or something…" she sad back to me…


"sparing session?... I said back…


"…basically…you and I fight…but it's for training…not trying to seriously hurt one another or anything…basically this'll help me figure out

what I have to work with…" Hitomi said back as she cracked her knuckles…


"…sounds a bit…dangerous…" I said back…I don't want to accidently hurt Hitomi or anything…and I donno if I could keep up with Hitomi…

so I could get hurt as well…


"…hey…you can't accomplish anything if you aren't willing to get a little dirty…and seeing how you LOVE to play in the dirt…this should be

second nature to you…" Hitomi laughed…I just sighed…\


"…ok…so…when do we start?..." I asked…


"…well…whenever you are ready…just take your stance and we can begin…" Hitomi replied as she rising her arms up…holding them

outwards with her fingers pointing down…what was she doing…this is the same thing she did when she was hunting…she had her arms lifted up

in this same manner…"…well…are you going to take your stance?..."


"…oh…um…" I wasn't sure what she meant…but I assume she meant like a battle position or something…I just bent my arms up with my

shoulder facing Hitomi…I usually do this when I am confronted with some sort of monster that is attacking me…I use my arms sales to sometimes

block the attacks…


"…ready?..." she said to me…I nodded my head slowly as I took a deep breath…I am actually very nervous about this…I have no idea

what is going to happen…"…alright then…let's get started…"


…Suddenly…Hitomi came lunging at me at near blinding speeds…so fast that I swear…I could still see her after image from where she was

standing earlier…I barely had any time to react to her breath taking speed and she struck me in the stomach hard…for a second I couldn't

breathe for a moment and everything went blurry for a second…but regained my focus and struck back at Hitomi…

…She simply moved out of the way with such ease and smoothness…that is almost seems as if she was dancing…


"…wup…to slow…over here…awww so close…try hitting me now?..." she taunted me as she nimbly dodge every single one of my strikes…

she then jumped up into the air above me…her 4 legs wrapped up around me and she twisted herself in a way where she threw me into the

ground…she then jumped back…leaving me on the floor in pain…


"…pfffft…so much to work on…so clumsy….easy to predict…easy to knock over…you really aren't making this easy on me are you scale

butt?..." Hitomi said out…I sighed as I hoisted myself up…rubbing my scrapped up arms as I went upright and faced her…"…well then…here is

my first lesson...not sure how it will apply to you naga folk…but…us Mantoids have a saying…"the more Limbs you have to behead them with…

the better…"…you saw how I just easily brought your down with my legs earlier…if you have an extra limb or something…use it…it's there for a

reason…take that…tail…thing to have…use it…do some…whipping stuff…or something…the more you can add to a battle the better you know…

it keeps what you are facing another thing to worry about…and the more things they have to worry about…the better the chances they will fail

at avoid one…so how about it…round two?..."


"…ok…lets…try again…" I said back after regaining my breath…that punch to the stomach really knocked the wind out of me…I just hope I

can do better this time…Hitomi smiled as she dashed at me again with her amazing speed…I braced myself as she came close and struck at me…

this time I brought up my arms and blocked her strike…but before I could do anything…she struck at me again…forcing me to block that one…

after that she struck at me again…and again…and again…leaving me no opening to do anything…the only reason my arms aren't in pain now is

because of my scales…and even then I can feel the blows slights…I can feel myself being pushed back…I don't want to be pinned against the

wall…if I do then I surely will be totally helpless to Hitomi's barrage…I have to think of something…I looked down…remembering what Hitomi told

me about using her legs to aid her…maybe I should use the same concept…while she kept striking me…I moved my tail and wrapped it around

one of her legs when she wasn't paying attention and pulled on it…making lose balance....now is my chance to strike back!...I swiped my arm at

her…but somehow…Hitomi quickly regained her balance and blocked my attack with her arms…as soon as they connected though…Hitomi went

flying sideways from all the force I put into that strike…sending her a couple feet away from me…


…She slick across the floor on her feet for a bit before coming to a complete stop…she then looked up at me…which a slight smile on her

face…


"...hmmmpt…you actually applied what I taught you…granted I was pretty much aiming for you to do that…but I am proud of you…but I…

wasn't expecting to be flung away this far…if I didn't grab onto that arm of yours…that…might have hurt…A LOT…there really is a lot of power

behind that innocent face of yours…" she said out…


"…oh…um…thanks Hitomi…" I replied softly…


"…yeah…but even with all that strength…without a proper technique…it wouldn't help much…but surely once you catch onto martial arts…

you will be a force to be recon with…heck…even I am feeling a bit scared imagining it…" she then added with a laugh…


"…you really think so Hitomi?...or…are you just saying this to make me feel less…hopeless…" I replied…


"…a little of both…but I really do think you will truly have anything that even dares mess with you…wish they never had once you get

everything under control…" she said back as she slowly came closer to me…place her hand on my arms and lifting it between us…"…but I am

curious…about these scales…"


"…oh…what about them?..." I asked…she stared at them for a second…rubbing her fingers against some of them…even pressing hard

against some others…after a few seconds…she looked back at me…


"…Can you lift your arm up…like this…" she said to me as she held her arms vertically…being parallel to her body…


"…oh…um…sure…" I replied back as I tried to mimic the way she held up her arm…"…um…why are do you want me to d…" before I could

finish…Hitomi quickly struck at my arm…hitting them with those lards spines that were coming out her arms…they struck again my arm…hitting

the scales on them and letting out a loud high pitch clashing sound…my arm flew back from the impact…I could swear that if she hit it any harder

that my shoulder may have been dislocated…


"…ahahahaha…just as I thought…those little buggers are as hard as a rocked…my blades didn't even scratch them…" Hitomi laughed…I

stared at her for a bit…developing a rather disturbing thought…


"….ummm…yeah…they are…pretty hard…um…what…if they…weren't…" I said back…


"…well then…just be happy they were…or else that arm of yours would have been on the floor in a bloody…I really should have thought

of that beforehand…all well…those scales of yours…they are very impressive…a lot of neat stuff you can possibly use in combat…especially

defensively…like when I was hitting you and you kept blocking all of them…if that was a normal person…their arm would feel like jelly by now…"

Hitomi said out…I smiled a little…


"…oh…well I could also do this with them…" I said back…I retracted my scales…turning them into large spines…as soon as I did that…a

huge grin filled Hitomi's faces and her eyes lit up…


"…oh ho ho…all the possibilities…it's like you are part Mantoid or something…this…is going to be a lot of fun…I am going to turn you into an

amazing fighter my friend…and after I am done with…that blob monster wouldn't even want to come within MILEs of you…" Hitomi laughed…


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