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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:46 am

thank you, corrections done ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:56 am

Also, center is spelled centre
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Mar 25, 2011 11:09 am

It can go either way. Center and centre are both acceptable.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Mar 25, 2011 12:17 pm

I dono, I have to agree with Cliff on this one about centaurs, the seismic sense doesn't work so well. On the other hand they really don't need it, they have a vast distances over which they can survey, their sheer height over a plains area would allow them to be able to see vast distances.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Mar 25, 2011 1:36 pm

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Anko is a well known and feared giant mermaid roaming the waters ofJadong lake

There needs to be a space between 'of' and 'Jadong' D:
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Mar 25, 2011 3:22 pm

While I am at it, quite a few times "lose" is instead spelled "loose". Such as Anko's entry, where "loose" is written instead of "lose".
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Mar 25, 2011 6:46 pm

Okay, fixed a few things.

Sean Okotami wrote:
Also, center is spelled centre
Sure, if you want to use limey English. But over here in America we spell things the correct way. Razz
(The general rule of the wiki is that either version of English is allowed, although consistency in a particular article is preferred. This rule came about because I kept changing all the spellings to the American ones. I still do change them accidentally, but only when I am not aware that the word I am changing actually is correct in British English.)



AisuKaiko wrote:
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Anko is a well known and feared giant mermaid roaming the waters ofJadong lake
There needs to be a space between 'of' and 'Jadong' D:
Fixed; because of how you create links in the wiki, this error is not very visible when writing or editing the article. I bet there are more than a few similar errors like that still out there.

Sean Okotami wrote:
While I am at it, quite a few times "lose" is instead spelled "loose". Such as Anko's entry, where "loose" is written instead of "lose".
Anko's "loose" has been fixed.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:50 pm

From the mantoids entry:

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There is several species of them, some growing their scythed appendages...
Pretty sure the 'is' is supposed to be are...minor grammar heh.

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While they their feeding habits do include humanoids...
There appears to be an extra they in this Razz.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sat Mar 26, 2011 11:40 am

I've remembered something about Nekomura's entry. It says that sometimes their Isolon Eye will weaken to the point where it creates a window for the predator to reach in and pick a few unfortunate nekos. However, Negav's Isolon Eye has been described that it's not really a barrier, but if a giant predator got there, they would be repelled because of discomfort or pain, something among those lines. I don't think it makes much sense if Nekomura's create a "window" to snatch. I think it's either outdated, or it could be reworded such as it weakens enough so that the pain is bearable, which gives the predator time to try to reach for a prey, then get away.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sat Mar 26, 2011 5:37 pm

Sean Okotami wrote:
I've remembered something about Nekomura's entry. It says that sometimes their Isolon Eye will weaken to the point where it creates a window for the predator to reach in and pick a few unfortunate nekos. However, Negav's Isolon Eye has been described that it's not really a barrier, but if a giant predator got there, they would be repelled because of discomfort or pain, something among those lines. I don't think it makes much sense if Nekomura's create a "window" to snatch. I think it's either outdated, or it could be reworded such as it weakens enough so that the pain is bearable, which gives the predator time to try to reach for a prey, then get away.

I think what its trying to say is that the effect weakens enough that a pred can snatch up a neko on the outskirts of town. Keep in mind, the effect of the Isolon Eye gets weaker and weaker as you move further away from it. If their eye starts to weaken, the outer edge of its barrier will start to weaken and receed inward some.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sun Mar 27, 2011 2:08 am

Asuroth wrote:
From the mantoids entry:

Thanks; fixed.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sun Mar 27, 2011 10:48 am

ehm, maybe the map should be changed...

anyway im trying to look at it, im never being able to look at it with a correct zoom. what i mean by that is that all the names are so unclear its impossible to read them all :/ but when i go to karbo's deviantart, the zoom on the map is perfect and we all see the names correclty :/ because the map on the wiki is impossible to read for me.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:59 pm

I noticed that the Luminous Hallows entry lacks any inhabitants listed, despite several being mentioned in the description of the place itself.

Also, in the same entry, bio-luminescent should be spelled as bioluminescent. There is no need for a -, it's one word.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Mon Mar 28, 2011 2:25 am

Alright ^^

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ehm, maybe the map should be changed...

anyway im trying to look at it, im never being able to look at it with a correct zoom. what i mean by that is that all the names are so unclear its impossible to read them all :/ but when i go to karbo's deviantart, the zoom on the map is perfect and we all see the names correclty :/ because the map on the wiki is impossible to read for me.

Well that's due to the size limitation of images in the wiki sadly..

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Mon Mar 28, 2011 3:25 am

you cant do nothing about it? D:

then maybe give a link to your da..
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sun Apr 03, 2011 6:28 pm

From the Ichty entry.

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Some Ichthys can also unleash a field of electricity in the same fashion as electric eels while underwater to stunt their foes

Stun is mispelled.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Mon Apr 04, 2011 12:37 pm

Sean Okotami wrote:
From the Ichty entry.

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Some Ichthys can also unleash a field of electricity in the same fashion as electric eels while underwater to stunt their foes

Stun is mispelled.

Thanks; fixed.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Apr 08, 2011 11:17 am

well there are some characters that are still under construction(on the wiki) so maybe you could add something to that?
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Apr 08, 2011 1:08 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sat Apr 09, 2011 5:15 am

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Pim, We have a different thread for that.
OK!!
My second mistake on this forum already>_>
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sun Apr 10, 2011 11:20 am

It has come to my attention that there is an article on the Main page about Felarya's dimensional plane. Yet we also have the physics page that covers parts of the same thing.
I suggest we combine the article on the main page with the one on the physics page. This will reduce some of the clutter on the main page.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sun Apr 10, 2011 12:22 pm

I have fond a spelling error in Mineralogy, under Mazhir, where it reads, "unless in contact with them for al ong time".

Also, in Elementals, in the first paragraph, where it reads, "Elementals uses partly the rich ambient magic of Felarya to maintains their form", the "s" should be removed from both the end of "uses" and "maintains".
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Tue Apr 12, 2011 8:46 am

Apparently all fairies are good at illusion magic, but this is only stated in the Mist Fairies entry on the fairies page. It's reasonable to assume to get general knowledge of what faries are good at one reads the main entry.
I suggest adding this information to the main entry.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Tue Apr 12, 2011 10:20 am

I noticed that on Kiki's bio it mentions that Crimson Maidens tend to have split personalities, a normal one and a rather "demonic", battle frenzy one, as well as indications of a rule by monarchy (Kiki is said to have been a warrior princess). Neither of these are mentioned in the Crimson Maiden entry on the wiki.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wed Apr 13, 2011 6:39 am

I've noticed that some of the height changes in the wiki, especially about the dryads is well... Has the changes to size been fixed or is that still being done? One of my characters in my story, Luna's Tale, is a cactus dryad in which the wiki states that they are 70 to 80 feet in height.

Since the size changes have yet to occur, my dryad is like a late teen to young adult stage, what would the height of those stages be?
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