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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Jul 23, 2010 2:01 pm

Lilly is not one who like to stand still,

From Lily's entry. Her name takes only one 'l'. Also, I don't think Hazel can be a color for hair since Hazel eyes tend to kinda change color.

Fleeing the insects the tribe moved west, to Nemyra kingdom.

From Temi's entry. I know it's technically right, but we should call it Fairy Kingdom. Also, I propose that Lily's Other Characteristic is big, black freckles, because her mug shot gives it away.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Jul 23, 2010 3:26 pm

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Lilly is not one who like to stand still,

From Lily's entry. Her name takes only one 'l'.

Fixed, along with a pluralization error I noticed.


Sean Okotami wrote:
Also, I don't think Hazel can be a color for hair since Hazel eyes tend to kinda change color.
I thought Hazel was a brown color?

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Jul 23, 2010 3:50 pm

Karbo could always mean it's the same color as an hazelnut as wikipedia specifies hazel as an eye color.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Jul 23, 2010 3:55 pm

I have an idea to figure out what her hair colour should be called. Just figure out what Crayola colour it is and give it the corresponding name. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sat Jul 24, 2010 12:38 am

For eye colour, wikipedia has this to say about hazel:
"Hazel eyes are due to a combination of Rayleigh scattering and a moderate amount of melanin in the iris's anterior border layer. Hazel eyes often appear to shift in color from a light brown to a dark golden-green. A number of studies using three-point scales have assigned hazel to be the medium color between the lightest shade of blue and darkest shade of brown. Hazel mostly consists of brown and green. The dominant color in the eye can either be green or light brown/gold. This can sometimes produce a multicolored iris, i.e., an eye that is light brown/amber near the pupil and charcoal or dark green on the outer part of the iris (and vice versa) when observed in sunlight. Hazel is commonly found in Europe (especially Southern Europe), the Middle East, North Africa, the Americas, Central Asia, and parts of South Asia.

Definitions of the eye color hazel vary: it is sometimes considered to be synonymous with light brown or gold, as in the color of a hazelnut shell.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sat Jul 24, 2010 4:36 am

I tend to describe my eyes as golden, but a lot of people call them hazel.






They always have a permanent greenish rim that sometimes expands into the brown, changing the overall color of my iris.




I don't see any issue with describing hair colour that way though. I've known quite a few people that have hair that appears to shimmer or change appearance when exposed to varying degrees of light. Given the nature of some of the critters in Felarya, I imagine this would not be an issue.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sat Jul 24, 2010 5:00 am

Guess that means I have to edit Fairy 'Tales' *shrug*
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sat Jul 24, 2010 1:27 pm

Wiki Corrections.


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Felarya possesses a wide variety of metals, stones, or gems found only there. The unstability of this world and the strange physical phenomena that occur there sometimes grant these materials very strange and unique properties.


Should read:


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Felarya possesses a wide variety of metals, stones, or gems found only there. The instability of this world and the strange physical phenomena that occur there sometimes grant these materials very strange and unique properties.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sat Jul 24, 2010 4:14 pm

Felarya and the Correctors from outside, leaving many to believe the Tiitans and the Correctors were indeed in league.

From the Titan Lore entry, you put two i in Titans
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:02 am

thank you Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Jul 30, 2010 7:36 am

On the dridder's page, shouldn't the picture of Ciel be placed with Bolas dridders, as that's the type she is? Rather than between Gerridi and Trapdoor? People might get the wrong ideas, especially where the Gerridi are concerned.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Jul 30, 2010 1:55 pm

ops my mistake
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:33 pm

Some suggested words for skin color: pale ,pale pinkish, tan, mocha, fair, tan, swarthy, dark, chocolate, ebony, milky white, black, light purple, blue, grey, green, brown.

Tan is used twice.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:42 pm

Sean Okotami wrote:
Some suggested words for skin color: pale ,pale pinkish, tan, mocha, fair, tan, swarthy, dark, chocolate, ebony, milky white, black, light purple, blue, grey, green, brown.

Tan is used twice.


This was only on the Template page, right? In any case I fixed it on that page.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sun Aug 08, 2010 3:07 pm

Yes it was.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sat Aug 28, 2010 6:36 am

From Anna's entry: Anna doesn't loose control often (You mean doesn't lose control often)
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:22 am

Sean Okotami wrote:
From Anna's entry: Anna doesn't loose control often (You mean doesn't lose control often)


Fixed.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Sep 10, 2010 9:21 am

The link to Lyiba-MoonEye's DA page on her Ceil picture under Dridder Races does not correctly link to her page. The link adds an additional trailing slash to the url that will cause it not to load.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Sep 10, 2010 9:35 am

aethernavale wrote:
The link to Lyiba-MoonEye's DA page on her Ceil picture under Dridder Races does not correctly link to her page. The link adds an additional trailing slash to the url that will cause it not to load.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wed Sep 22, 2010 8:15 pm

Nothing major but when I went to read Déméchrelle's wiki bio I placed my mouse over the picture and it said "Anko" instead of Déméchrelle.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:25 am

alright ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Thu Sep 23, 2010 11:51 pm

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Nothing major but when I went to read Déméchrelle's wiki bio I placed my mouse over the picture and it said "Anko" instead of Déméchrelle.
Looks like Karbo fixed that one.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sun Sep 26, 2010 4:15 am

To the Golem Entry: They are very hard to dammage however,

Remove the extra "m" in damage.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wed Sep 29, 2010 7:36 am

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To the Golem Entry: They are very hard to dammage however,

Remove the extra "m" in damage.


Fixed, along with a few other things.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Mon Oct 11, 2010 11:53 am

In the Felaryan Rivers section, the Myriad river is blank. There are ideas I've put in for it here

http://felarya.forumotion.com/new-ideas-f2/mond-myriad-river-t1705.htm?highlight=myriad

someone needs to go and fill it in.
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