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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Thu Dec 19, 2013 10:43 am

Huh. I didn't know you could do that. My mistake ^^;;;
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:36 am

Minor mistake: in the entry for the Ascarlin Mines, it says "Once your go deeper into the mines,".

Also, a suggestion, I know it's Old Man's job, but since he hasn't been here in a while, perhaps someone else could double-check the pages in his stead for mistakes to correct. I believe he left a list of which pages are left for him to check.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wed Jan 01, 2014 10:26 am

I've fixed the typo in the Ascarlin mines.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wed Jan 01, 2014 2:38 pm

From the Oloonde lakeland: Some mermaids sometimes come the Jewel river and love to snatch unaware onlookers with a swift flick of their tongue.

Also: "Over the course of time, The water" That's an improper use of a capital letter.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Thu Jan 02, 2014 3:10 am

Indeed; fixed.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Thu Jan 02, 2014 6:29 am

I looked back, at it, I think the correction you should have made is "Some mermaids sometimes come FROM the Jewel River". The wording implies that they come from the Lake of Arrows and go to the Jewel River to catch people who go too close to the lake's bank, the complete opposite of what they should be. They should come from the river to hunt by the lake.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Thu Jan 02, 2014 6:36 am

Quite so; fixed.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Thu Jan 02, 2014 6:38 pm

"Few in number, there mighty, pure white oaks are scattered throughout Felarya"

Should be they're mighty

http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Plant_life#Holy_Oak
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Thu Jan 02, 2014 7:00 pm

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"Few in number, there mighty, pure white oaks are scattered throughout Felarya"

Should be they're mighty

http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Plant_life#Holy_Oak
Actually, I think it's "these".

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Jan 03, 2014 3:15 am

Indeed, it should be "these". It must have been a typo. I've fixed it.

(As a reminder, "they're" is a contraction of "they are". The word indicating possession is "their".)

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Jan 03, 2014 6:54 am

Huh. Sounds like they both make sense to me if you say it out loud, but that could be just me xD
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sat Jan 11, 2014 10:06 pm

The Wiki wrote:
One of the soldier hold the rank of captain, and have second-highest authority under the two battlemages.

It should be "One of the soldiers holds the rank of captain, and has the second-highest authority under the two battlemages.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sun Jan 12, 2014 1:16 am

fixed, thank you ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Mon Jan 13, 2014 9:43 pm

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fixed, thank you ^^

And thank you for updating the University! ^_^ Will help when I go to write Axel, Tifana and other Isolon or Battle mage's bios.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Thu Jan 16, 2014 5:48 am

While browsing the Wiki, I found something:

http://felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Science_and_Magic
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In Felarya, Science and magic are intricately intertwined in Felarya, and some [...]
One of those "in Felarya" is redundant.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Jan 17, 2014 3:56 am

Thanks; fixed.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Fri Jan 17, 2014 3:19 pm

While looking for something for Kharl the Chilotaur I got lost in the entries and was reading up on some and found this under Lykorpid:

The Wiki wrote:
It stand on six very strong, sturdy, talon-like legs that allow the creature to cling to tree trunks and branches, much like a spider.

That should be: It standson six very strong, sturdy, talon-like legs that allow the creature to cling to tree trunks and branches, much like a spider.

And...

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Whenever an unsuspecting prey walks underneath it, the Lykorpid fail on top of it and proceed to devour it whole with its large circular mouth situated below its body, circled by numerous small eyes that gives the creature a very wide lateral field of vision.

Fails should be fall. XD I would be curious as to what failing on top of something would look like though.

Aslo there was:
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One of the most remarkable trait of the Lykorpid is it chirps like a bird in order to deceive potential preys.

Two here. One of the most remarkable traits and preys I think should be prey.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sat Jan 18, 2014 3:09 am

Thanks; fixed.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Thu Jan 23, 2014 12:44 am

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When they found out they were linked to the Negav dimensional gate, they reacted by setting numerous traps and defense systems around the arrival area in case some predators would someone be able to pass through.

Someone should be removed I think. ^^; It makes no sense.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Thu Jan 23, 2014 8:59 am

Remember to specify the article, please. Smile I've changed it to "somehow".

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Thu Jan 23, 2014 1:41 pm

Shocked  Sorry! It was 2 AM and I sorta was out of it. I did wonder about that, but I went to sleep and didn't get to correct it. ^^; I'll keep in it mind from now on, thanks! ^_-
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sat Feb 01, 2014 3:05 pm

http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=The_Correctors#The_War

Second paragraph, "Some sequels can still be seen today" should probably be "Some consequences".

Also, the link to "http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Chronology#The_Era_of_Mirages" just goes to the Chronology page, without any extra direction.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sun Feb 02, 2014 3:41 am

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http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=The_Correctors#The_War

Second paragraph, "Some sequels can still be seen today" should probably be "Some consequences".

It's a Gallicism. :)In French, the word "séquelles" means "aftermath". I've corrected it accordingly.

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Also, the link to "http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Chronology#The_Era_of_Mirages" just goes to the Chronology page, without any extra direction.

That can't be fixed, unfortunately, because of the current structure of the Chronology page. It's not subdivided into linkable sections.

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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Sun Feb 02, 2014 9:35 am

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Also, the link to "http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Chronology#The_Era_of_Mirages" just goes to the Chronology page, without any extra direction.

That can't be fixed, unfortunately, because of the current structure of the Chronology page. It's not subdivided into linkable sections.

Which is why I think the link should be fixed so it isn't misleading, right?
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Tue Feb 11, 2014 9:34 pm

http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Fauna4#Localith

I was reading the Localith, being quite impressed till I came across two errors. One was a grammar error:

The Wiki wrote:
A rare creature, and one of the larger known aquatic one

The second "one" should be ones. Plural.

The second error was:

The Wiki wrote:
When prospective prey gets too close to its head, the Lacolith will suddenly open its immense mouth, producing a brief, but almost irresistible current, sucking the unlucky creature right into its maw. Ironically, they pose little threat to divers, who are simply too small for the creature to bother with

I think it's inaccurate to say that a Localith doesn't pose ANY threat to a diver. If something is sucking water into it's mouth, via water magic or just a very strong current, it's going to suck up small things nearby too. I understand that perhaps it mean that in the context they don't hunt human sized prey, but non the less I think there should be some more specific info there saying that. ^^;
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