Wiki corrections

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By the way, because I'm a cynical twat, it might be worth deleting the link to e-akahele's interactive map, because that map is also outdated, and probably a lot of information on it.

Shady Knight wrote:

By the way, because I'm a cynical twat, it might be worth deleting the link to e-akahele's interactive map, because that map is also outdated, and probably a lot of information on it.

I'll let Karbo decide on that. It may still be useful.

What use is a map that's outdated and gives information that could very well contradict newer revisions in relative short order?

Shady Knight wrote:

What use is a map that's outdated and gives information that could very well contradict newer revisions in relative short order?

One should always honor one's past I feel. Nostalgic I am though. Biased my views may be. =P I'm such a pack rat I even horde data as old as sprites and programs from high school on CD! 0.0; Only recently and recently tossed some the other day due to redundancies.

Okay so I'm brushing up on my Felarya Religions and rather enjoying myself as I forgot Lataran was a god in this world, or that they had a cult at all! But then I come across this line:

The Wiki wrote:

He is represented as a frail, shady, genderless laughing figure, always wearing a grinning mask.

One cannot be Genderless AND a he as that means you identify as male and thus are gendered. Somebody please correct that when you can.

jedi-explorer wrote:

Okay so I'm brushing up on my Felarya Religions and rather enjoying myself as I forgot Lataran was a god in this world, or that they had a cult at all! But then I come across this line:

The Wiki wrote:

He is represented as a frail, shady, genderless laughing figure, always wearing a grinning mask.

One cannot be Genderless AND a he as that means you identify as male and thus are gendered. Somebody please correct that when you can.

Yes you are right, I badly formulated that. What I wanted to say is he is sometimes represented as a female as well. I corrected it, thank you  ^^

The wording is still awkward in my opinion. I think the word you're looking for is androgynous. "He is represented as a frail, shady, androgynous laughing figure, always wearing a grinning mask."

Mhh not totally. What I mean is is usually represented as a male figure but in some circumstances he can be represented as a female figure too. Basically to highlight the fact he is the ultimate deceiver and things like gender and appearance in general doesn't guarantee anything when dealing with him.

If that's the case, then I think his gender should be given more weight rather than just be a passing remark.

"Lataran is represented as a frail, shady laughing figure, always wearing a grinning mask.  Lataran's gender is a hotly contested topic among its followers, with some claiming he is a man, while others are convinced she is in fact a woman.  Some sects, however, believe that Lataran is actually genderless, and can assume either form on a whim.  Regardless, it is a fact that Lataran has been depicted as a man as often as a woman in both reliefs and scriptures."

Keeping the entry mostly gender neutral when talking about Lataran specifically might also help.

The sentence :

wiki wrote:

although not from her body body being consumed but more by an overload of energy.

atthe fire succubi the word "body" is in double

Felarya Wiki wrote:

Deméchrelle entered an incredibly violent rage that was felt by every creatures in the whole region

That should be Creatures shouldn't it? Either than that or my be all the creatures

felarya_refugee wrote:

Felarya Wiki wrote:

Deméchrelle entered an incredibly violent rage that was felt by every creatures in the whole region

That should be Creatures shouldn't it? Either than that or my be all the creatures

It would help to know where this article is. Deme's bio??

jedi-explorer wrote:

felarya_refugee wrote:

Felarya Wiki wrote:

Deméchrelle entered an incredibly violent rage that was felt by every creatures in the whole region

That should be Creatures shouldn't it? Either than that or my be all the creatures

It would help to know where this article is. Deme's bio??

It's under the "Five Eyes" article.

gwadahunter2222 wrote:

The sentence :

wiki wrote:

although not from her body body being consumed but more by an overload of energy.

atthe fire succubi the word "body" is in double

Fixed, along with other typos on that page. Thanks.

felarya_refugee wrote:

jedi-explorer wrote:

felarya_refugee wrote:

Felarya Wiki wrote:

Deméchrelle entered an incredibly violent rage that was felt by every creatures in the whole region

That should be Creatures shouldn't it? Either than that or my be all the creatures

It would help to know where this article is. Deme's bio??

It's under the "Five Eyes" article.

There is no "Five Eyes" article.

I beg to differ.

http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Legends#Five_Eyes.2C_the_Devourer

The link is found in Deméchrelle's bio but you can also find it here in the legends page.

felarya_refugee wrote:

I beg to differ.

http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Legends#Five_Eyes.2C_the_Devourer

The link is found in Deméchrelle's bio but you can also find it here in the legends page.

As I said: There is no article called "Five Eyes". That is a segment of the "Legends" page. It cannot be found through the "search" function. Which is why it's helpful to provide a link.

I've now created a redirection page so that typing "Five Eyes" into the search bar will take the reader directly there. And I've fixed the grammatical error, changing it to "every creature". Thanks.

Misty glade Mikadis Temple section the Mirror maw's link doesn't work properly it redirect you to the fauna page but not on the Mirror Maw's entry.
Edit: by looking the link of the Mirror Maw redirect to fauna2 instead of fauna6 it's an old link when all the entries were on fauna2 before they were moved to fauna6

Indeed; fixed.

Dumancal's Entry is a bit unclear.

It says legends and myths has spread, then says it was only discovered about fifty years ago.

The idea was that Negav discovered it recently, but since its so far out of the way, the local predators and inhabitants would have known about it for a while (as Negav isn't the only place in Felarya with people, after all :p )

The link to Majuras Elves just leads to the broad species description of all elves. Was this mistake intentional?

Interesting. For me it lead to a small description of Majuras elves.

opt4bootay wrote:

The link to Majuras Elves just leads to the broad species description of all elves. Was this mistake intentional?

Was this OUR wiki or that stupid fandom thing? Cause I'm sure they're mismanaging things worse than we do with our slow-but-usually-well-done-updates** Which is hilarious when you think about the fact we have two people on editing and they have potentially the whole of the internet who registers.

opt4bootay wrote:

The link to Majuras Elves just leads to the broad species description of all elves. Was this mistake intentional?

The link from what page? So that I can check it.