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PostSubject: The Ultimate's super stories.   The Ultimate's super stories. Icon_minitimeTue Aug 13, 2013 9:18 am

Okay, well I'm working on a story for two of my characters. Just to point this out, this chapter is a one off and it's... Not exactly going to take itself seriously. I did this chapter just to get me in to writing a bit more. But enough from me, here's a short silly story I've worked on. The real story will begin in Chapter 1 and will be much more longer.

Chapter 0 – The start of something... Sort of.

“Man... I'm so bored...”

A voice thought out loud, it seemed to belong to a pale green skinned woman who was floating on her back in a pure clean pond. She was the size of the average human, along with having no clothing and her c cup breasts clearly showing in all their glory on her chest. Her hair colour was a marvellous turquoise and her stunning, sky blue eyes had a sparkle in them from the sun.

“What to do...”

She said as she floated all the way to end of the pond, gently pushing the edge with her feet to make her float back in the opposite direction. After a short while, she twisted her body around so she floated on her chest, on her back seemed to be really small wings. They looked like two giant, but wide petals from a flower that were attached to her back. Her wings from looked at another perspective, would look useless as they were not big enough for flight, or to serve any other purpose other than being there to store her magic power.

“Well... Lets start the day I suppose, even though it has been a while since it did start.”

She gave a gentle sigh, swimming to the edge and climbing out of the pond. She did a few exercises, giving a yawn once she had finished. She looked around at the scenery, it was nothing new to her as she looked at it all with a bored face. Behind her would be a massive pond that she was just in and all around seemed to be colourful green trees, along with bushes and plants.

“Grass... Trees... Mud... More grass... And grass, lovely. This place gets dull after a while...”

She said to herself as she began to walk on.

“Nothing exiting happens around here, my parents picked an awfully boring place to call a home. I don't even know why I still live in that pond, they left me and they ain't coming back... I guess that's partly my fault though, I was the one who drove them away... I wonder if they will, fat chance they will though. Not everything's boring I guess, my hunts are always fun and I do have a couple of friends to speak to, but I don't get to see them much.”

She hopped over the root of a large tree, continuing her monologue.

“But a person like me doesn't deserve friends, if you'd heard the things I've done, then you wouldn't like me as the main character of this stor-”

Before she could finish her sentence, she was sent flying in to the side of a tree, sliding down it with a big grunt. When her feet touched the ground, she dizzily looked to see who or what did that. As she held her head, in front of her was a woman, also being the size of the average human. She was wearing a dirty, but elegant blue dress, being short sleeved and the skirt part reaching to her knee caps, other than that she had no other types of clothing. Her hair was a brilliant dark blue colour with bangs, her eyes being dark green. What was also noticeable, in fact very noticeable was four long wings which could be seen to the left and right sides of her, they looked like dragonfly wings, but they were huge! They were only a few feet away from touching the ground too. By now it was obvious that she was a fairy.

“Hey you!”

The fairy angrily shouted to Asuna, clearly looking annoyed. She had her fists clenched and seemed to be the source of what hit Asuna.

“Grr... What the hell was that for, Light!” Asuna growled back, her dizziness having faded before walking over to her.

“You know what that was for! What in Nemyra's name are you doing!” The fairy called back, who's name according to Asuna was Light.

“Look Light, I ain't putting up with your stupid antics again so if you're looking for another stupid  reason to fight then come at me, I'm ready this time.” She took a fighting stance, watching her.

“You should know what you're doing, you did it just before!” Light shouted, still looking not so happy.

“... I really don't know what I did that was so wrong... So please, enlighten me.” Asuna undid her fighting stance, now folding her arms and not taking a single eye off of her.

“Here's what you are doing... You're bloody stealing my spotlight!” Light declared.

“Eh? You're spotlight?” Asuna replied, looking really confused.

“That's right! This is supposed to be MY story! Not yours! Why in Nemyra's name did you be introduced first?! Why are you even here at all!” Light shouted at Asuna, barraging her with questions.

“... Didn't you get the script?! This is mine AND your story!” Asuna replied back.

“I did get the script! But it was too hard to read! And as if this story is about me AND you! This is supposed to be the epic tale of The Fastest and Strongest Storm Sprite! Defeating all those who stand in her way!” Light said while doing punch and kick combos at the air.

“You... What bit did you struggle to read?” Asuna asked, but in a more understanding tone.

“... The first page.” She answered seriously before stopping her assault on the air.

“The... Oh you stupid spark! Are you serio- What did you do with the script?” She said as she face palmed.

“I showed that thing whose boss, now it's in my belly! It didn't taste very nice though... Had to eat it with fruit.” Light explained, showing how not nice it was with an expression of displeasure.

“And... You know what, come here, come here for a sec.” Asuna asked, Light did as she was told and came closer. As she got close enough, Asuna punched her in the face as hard as she could which made Light stumble back, groaning in pain as she landed on her behind.

“Hey! What was that for you stupid giant drip of fairy pee!” Light shouted at her, holding her face where she was hit.

“I was knocking some sense in to you! I'll gladly do it again if you don't shut up about it. Also, it's Water Sprite, not fairy pee you blue idiot.” Asuna grinned, looking down to her.

“Is that right? Well someone the likes of you has no right to talk about sense!” Light said as she got back up, entering her fighting pose.

“You probably don't even know what the word “sense” means!” Asuna replied as she entered hers.

“Alright pal, get ready because you've angered the wrong Sprite!” Light then proceeded to take flight and shoot up in to the air, turning in to electrical energy as she did so. After a blink of an eye, she was gone. Asuna cautiously looked around, not seeing the fairy in blue anywhere. All of a sudden, a lightning bolt flew past her face. Asuna then immediately punched to where it came from and she got Light in the chest.

“Heh... You're gonna have to use a tactic I don't know, too bad that I know all of them in your pathetic arsenal.” Asuna grinned as Light groaned in pain.

“Tch, well... Get a load o' this!” Light then grabbed Asuna's arm with both hands and began to shock her. Asuna screamed as she was being electrocuted, but she managed to break free from Light and she grabbed her right arm, turning around and throwing her over her shoulder. Light flew over her and landed on the ground, she shook her head and quickly got back up. She turned to face her but she was gone.

“Where did that pee for brain go...” Light muttered to herself as she looked around. Asuna had disappeared just like Light did. Light hovered up to get a better view of the area, all she got was a magnificent view of the forest, but not seeing her opponent anywhere. She was using her predator sense, but Light's wasn't that great in terms of range so it was difficult for her to locate her. Slowly, a giant shadow started to loom over her, it also had a familiar magic signature, a big one at that. Light gulped, quickly flying to the side, seeing that she dodged a giant fist.

“Damn! I was so close!” Asuna cursed as she missed. She looked to Light and went to attack her again. Light zapped out of the way, now flying just above her.

“Heh, you're never going to catch the fastest fairy alive!” Light taunted, poking her tongue out at her.

“That's what you think!” Asuna retorted and tried to grab her. Light easily escaped from her hands, successfully dodging every time Asuna went to grab her. Asuna growled as her attempts were futile and stopped trying to grab her.

“What's the matter slow poke?” Light said as she landed on her head. As soon as she did, Asuna suddenly turned her whole body in to water, now looking like a Slimoid. Light sank into her head, her screaming stopping as soon as her head went under. She was now floating inside of Asuna's head, struggling to hold her breath. She also seemed to be panicking an awful bit, showing that she wasn't a big fan of water. Asuna started to control the water in her body, moving Light about to different parts of her body. Light flailed as she was being moved around, close to drowning. Before it was lights out for her, she was shot out of the water body, hitting the ground hard. Asuna shrank back to her previous height and walked to over to Light, looking down at her.

“There, I think I won this one you blue idiot.” Asuna snickered as Light was on the ground, soaking wet from head to toe and also being muddy from the ground, she was in a slight daze.

“Lets inspect the damage... Hmm... Oh whatdoya know, seems you've toughed up a bit. Only a broken wrist and a few broken fingers this time. There's gonna be a load of bruises but eh, you can walk it off.” Asuna laughed as she gave a mockery of an applause. Light groaned, slowly coming back to reality.
“Tch... Y-you... I'm not finished yet...” Light said under her breath, Asuna gave an annoyed sigh.

“Is that so? Well listen here, you look pathetic right now, in fact pathetic is an understatement in terms of the way you look. You look useless, powerless, hopeless, uh... A bunch of other words that have -less on the end.” Asuna said clearly as she folded her arms. Light didn't seem to take that well.

“Grrr... I'll... I'll show you who'll be a bunch of words with -less on the end!” Light shouted as she gathered the energy she had left. Indeed, she was really hurt but that wasn't going to stop her. She closed her eyes and started groaning. After a few seconds, the clouds above them would turn to a dark grey. Asuna looked up at the sky.

“Well this is new.” Asuna commented as she watched, after another short while, the cloud that was directly above Asuna, was dark black and from it, shot down a mighty thunderbolt. Unfortunately for Light, it missed Asuna, in fact the bolt was way off target and struck somewhere close by. After it struck, a scream came from it. Asuna watched with a blank expression, although was secretly glad it didn't hit her.

“Huh, the blue idiot strikes again, and misses!” Asuna laughed, Light growled like a wild ferocious Neko from Asuna's laughter. She forced her now strained body to get up, her blue bangs covering one of her eyes and her massive wings looking a mess. Asuna watched Light, grinning all the while.

“Oh I'm sorry~ I didn't mean to hurt the poor poor little weak Sprite's feelings.” Asuna laughed more.

“That's it! You've done it now!” Light quickly prepared to give her a devastating kick to the stomach. Just as she went to deliver it, someone ran in the way and was kicked instead of Asuna. The person, who was a man, fell to his knees while holding his stomach in pain. He was wearing black trousers, black socks, black leather shoes, a short sleeved shirt while over it he had a brown jacket. Clearly not having the best fashion sense. He also had a hat on, which had fallen off of his head. He grumbled as he got to his feet, taking his hat in an annoyed manner. Once he was up, he looked to the two fairies, annoyed. He also was twitching a bit, a few streaks of electricity bouncing around his head while looking a bit burnt. Light and Asuna looked to this man, gulping as they both knew they were in trouble.

“Alright... Okay... I'm going to say this once... What the HELL are you two doing!?” He shouted, just before anyone of them could reply, he continued.

“You are both very, yes VERY off the script! It was all going fine until you came in at the wrong second, Light! By now we could be past the introduction but no! What about our readers, they could have stopped reading by now because of you two!” He sighed as he put his hat back on, suddenly after he did, lights started to activate until a whole low budget studio room could be seen behind him. There was also lettering on his hat, which now could be easily read as “D1rectur.”

“Uhh... It was all her fault! She even fired a thunderbolt at you!” Asuna shouted as she pointed at Light.

“My fault?! This story should just be about me! I don't need a lame Water Sprite like yourself in it!” Light angrily replied back to her.

“Ladies! Er well I wouldn't go that far to call you both that but- You two! Just shut up! This whole chapter is a disaster! Now I need to make a new script...” The man sighed.

“Well we can easily just use my script and- “ Asuna was cut off.

“No, do you honestly think anyone is going to take this story seriously now? No, I didn't think so either... Look, you two just go sod off while I prepare to do this all over again...” He sighed again.

“... Well... Okay... C'mon Light, I need to teach you how to read so YOU don't screw it up next time.” Asuna said as she dragged Light away.

“Hey! It's you who screwed it up!” Light protested as she was dragged away. After they were gone, the man walked over to his chair, sitting down on it.

“Stupid fairies... “ He said, taking his hat off.
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PostSubject: Re: The Ultimate's super stories.   The Ultimate's super stories. Icon_minitimeThu Aug 15, 2013 6:38 pm

That was a good start, Ultimate. I've got to say that I don't like very much the kind of stories that break the fourth wall, but this one was quite funny and I could get over it. On another hand, I noticed that there were some places that seemed to need a bit more polishing, but I can't seem to point them out in my present state other that the description of Asuna's wings. Those sentences seem a bit rough, maybe if you work a bit on them the description can come out more smooth.

I look forward to your next installment.
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PostSubject: Re: The Ultimate's super stories.   The Ultimate's super stories. Icon_minitimeThu Aug 15, 2013 6:55 pm

Seems interesting enough so far, although I think I have a piece of the fourth wall stuck in my hair.
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PostSubject: Re: The Ultimate's super stories.   The Ultimate's super stories. Icon_minitimeFri Aug 16, 2013 4:32 am

Ilceren wrote:
That was a good start, Ultimate. I've got to say that I don't like very much the kind of stories that break the fourth wall, but this one was quite funny and I could get over it. On another hand, I noticed that there were some places that seemed to need a bit more polishing, but I can't seem to point them out in my present state other that the description of Asuna's wings. Those sentences seem a bit rough, maybe if you work a bit on them the description can come out more smooth.

I look forward to your next installment.
Thanks for that feedback. ^^ I tried my best with the description, I'm not the best with writing. I'll try and improve though. Also there won't be anymore fourth wall breaking.


parameciumkid wrote:
Seems interesting enough so far, although I think I have a piece of the fourth wall stuck in my hair.
Yeah, I'll make sure it's built more securely next time.
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PostSubject: Re: The Ultimate's super stories.   The Ultimate's super stories. Icon_minitimeMon Aug 26, 2013 5:03 am

Chapter 1 – The actual start of something.

“Light... Light... Liiiighht... LIGHT!” A smack sound was heard.

“OWW! WHAT?! I'M UP!” Was the reply.

“Good, now wake up you pathetic excuse for a fairy.”

“Grr... Hang on...”

It was a bright morning in the Fairy Kingdom, the pleasant sun was in the sky, shining down which revealed the entire forest. The natural sounds such as giant bushes rustling in the wind, the brilliant water flowing in the river, the joyful sounds of predators having fun and not to mention the not so joyful screams coming from the receiving end of those predators, all made up the majestic and beautiful scenery. There was an enormous tree in one area of the Kingdom, on a part of the trunk was a small gap. If one was to take a peek inside of the gap, there was a quite a big space inside, along with there being a few items in there too. That big space just happened to be the home of a Storm Sprite, who was currently sleeping in there until she was waken up by another fairy that happened to be a Water Sprite. Light reluctantly sat up, yawning. She angrily looked to Asuna, who was grinning.

“What in Nemyra's name was that for?!” Light shouted.

“Oh well you know... I was bored and I wanted to say hi. You were sleeping so I couldn't say hi... So I fixed that and now you are awake, so... Hi.” Asuna answered.

“... How could you get bored so quickly? It's only morning... I'm super sleepy so it must be super early...” Light asked as she tried to get the sleep out of her eyes.

“Yeah... To put it in another way, I just wanted to annoy you. It's funny ticking you off.” Asuna snickered.

“I figured. Well I'm up and I don't think I'll be going back to sleep any time soon... Want to go out?” Light asked as she got up, doing some stretches.

“Well duh, what else is there to do?” Asuna responded as she folded her arms.

“Well... Yeah, you're right.” Light said as she finished her stretches, then she wondered something.

“Uhh... How did you even get in here?” Light asked.

“Oh uh... Yeah... Forgot about those guys...” Asuna said as she looked to the floor. Light shrank down to two inches in height and flew over to the exit, the gap was quite small and she could only get through it by shrinking herself. As she flew out, she looked and saw something strange. There was a bunch of Humans and Nekos outside, all standing on each other's shoulders. Most of them were whimpering and some just showed discomfort. Asuna walked over to the gap and peeked out from it.

“Yeah... I sorta... Kinda... Threatened as many people as I could, so I could have them make an impromptu ladder, thus is how I was able to get in here.” Asuna stated. Light facepalmed.

“Hey! All of you! She won't eat you and neither will I! You're free!” Light shouted to the humanoid ladder. As soon as they heard, they all struggled to get down at the same time in fear. This only caused for them all to fall, until they were all piled up on to each other on the ground. It didn't take them long to scatter off though. Light sighed and went back inside, glaring at Asuna.

“Don't you ever ever ever do that again!” Light demanded.

“Fine fine... But heck if I was going to climb the tree itself, people would get a perfect view of my perfect behind for free!” Asuna protested.

“Oh whatever, the only thing that's perfect in this world is me! I have perfect everything! I got the look, I can cook, I can deliver a hook, I-” Light was cut off.

“You can't even read the first page of a book.” Asuna laughed.

“Grr! I can too read the first page of a book! I can prove it! Look!” Light declared as she reached for a really old looking book.

“That one doesn't count as it's your diary, but then again, a three year old can write better than you.” Asuna grinned, but was smacked.

“Shut up! Why the heck am I even best friends with you...” Light said to herself.

“Because without me, you'd be a lonely and an even stupider fairy than you are now, now c'mon lets go out already, time's a' wasting!” Asuna said she shrank down to a couple of an inches in height. Light gave a small sigh, growing back to her previous height so she could gently pick up Asuna and help her out. Asuna climbed out of her hand and jumped out through the gap. Light was about to shrink herself down so she herself could get out, when a thought occurred.

“There's... No steps or anything... She just jumped out... It's quite a long fall...” Light panicked, quickly shrinking and flying out to see her. Asuna was on the ground, laying on her back and not looking so good. Light landed and grew back, crouching down and looking at her.

“Are... Are you... Okay?” Light asked, but there was no response. Asuna's eyes were closed too.

“Asuna...? Are... Are you...” She poked her body, nothing.

“No... No no no... But... But... You can't have...” Light started to form tears, looking at her fallen comrade.

“... Wait... I think I know how to fix this... I saw humans do this once to someone... It worked and the person came back to life somehow... But...” She looked at Asuna, growing her body back to the size of the average human. She then opened her mouth and looked at it.

“... This... There better not be anyone watching... “ She closed her eyes and slowly lowered her head so her lips went to hers. Her eyes closed tighter and tighter as she came closer, her blush growing larger and larger as well. Suddenly, Asuna opened her eyes, to see Light about to give her a massive sloppy kiss. She freaked out and kicked her away.

“What the hell are you doing?!” Asuna screamed, Light stumbled back, screaming as well.

“How are you alive?!” Light shrieked.

“I was going to pretend I fell to my death to mess with you! I open my eyes and all I see is your fat face coming towards mine, looking like you was about to give me the biggest make out kiss ever! Ugh!” Asuna felt like she was going to be sick from the thought.

“I... You... Wha?! I thought you was really dead! So I was gonna do that thing people do when they put their mouth on the fallen person to blow air in to them! I saw it one time and the person came back to life! I wasn't gonna... Ewww... I would never think about doing that!” Light blushed heavily.

“... Oh you blue idiot! CPR wouldn't work on a dead person! God dammit Light!” Asuna shouted angrily as she sat up.

“I'm sorry! But I wouldn't have tried to do that if you didn't pretend that you was dead!” Light argued.

“Don't be trying to push the blame on me! God I will never forget this, that image I now have is going to haunt me for the rest of my life, thanks me for scarring me.” Asuna huffed. After that there was a short awkward silence.

“Well... Let's just put all that behind us huh?” Light said as her blush faded a little.

“That's all we can do...” Asuna replied as she stood up, Light followed suit.

“Well... Umm... What do you feel like doing?” Light asked.

“I don't know... Go get breakfast?” Asuna suggested.

“Lets go get breakfast then.” Light agreed and they both began to walk.

The dynamic duo strolled through the immense forest, looking for food. All around them were gigantic trees and bushes, not to mention the plants were enormous, it was all so pretty to them, but with all of the fantastic scenery, there has to be the big downside. Both of them weren't safe on the ground, any dangerous plant could snatch them at any moment. Luckily, Light had took down some of the more deadly plants around the area previously so they were somewhat safe. It wasn't just the plants that could have a go at them, but other predators. Not that anything was bothering at this point of time though.

“Hey Light... Why are we walking at this size? I mean, we would be safe if we were big.” Asuna suggested.

“Umm... It's sorta embarrassing being giant...” Light meekly said as she looked to the ground.

“Embarrassing? Why the heck do you say that?” Asuna looked to her.

“Well... It attracts attention for one... And also I don't want people looking up to see my lower region if you know what I mean...” Light blushed.

“Oh c'mon is that it? I'm naked for Felarya's sake, so are a bunch of other people. I think by now if people saw a giant naked lady, they would focus on running for their lives instead of standing still to get a good luck like an idiot.” Asuna explained.

“True... But that's also another thing, I don't want to scare people. I'd like to talk to them and make friends with them if possible.” Light said.

“Eh I don't want to befriend what I call food. I mean, they can take advantage of you.” Asuna told.

“Take advantage of you? How?” Light wondered.

“Well picture this 'right. A Human just made friends with you. That's cool to you of course and you both get along well. Days, weeks, possibly months go by and you're both really good friends, but the Human starts asking for things. You don't realize at first, but the Human starts asking more and more from you, up to the point the Human knows all your weaknesses. Then, when the Human has you unguarded, he or she can rip your wings off and make you his or her own. Or another thing could happen, he or she could lure you in to a trap which was set by other people. Or-” She was cut off.

“I think you're going a bit too far, I guess I can see the last part about being lured in to a trap, but who would go through all that trouble?” Light said.

“You never know, crazy stuff happens in this world.” Asuna replied. As she said that, three fairies flew past them, one of them crashing in to a tree with a cry of pain. The fairy had seemed to drop a hat, the hat looked like it belonged to a wizard, plus it was purple with star patterns around it. The fairy shook her head and realized her hat was gone. She panicked and flew around the area, before realizing it was on the ground. She descended to the floor, picking up her hat and placing it back on her head. It seemed to have string attached to it, meaning it could be hung around the neck. Light and Asuna watched the fairy with curiosity, she seemed to have long flowing blonde hair with bright green eyes. Her skin was fair and she had an outfit on, it didn't cover a lot of skin, just covered her breasts and lower region. It also had the same colour scheme as her hat, her size was also six and half foot.

“Thank goodness my hat is okay... Wait... Where did they go?” She said to herself as she looked around, she didn't seem to find who she was looking for, but she found the Sprites instead.
She quickly flew behind the nearest tree when she did with a squeak, peeking out from the side of it.

“Uh... Hm, that was interesting. Let's keep going Light.” Asuna said she walked on, but noticed that Light didn't follow suit.

“Umm... Light?” She said as she looked at her. Light was staring at the stranger they just saw with wide eyes.

“She's... She's... She's so cute with that thing on!” She excitedly stated as she zapped over to her in the blink of an eye. The fairy was startled and quickly hovered back. Light didn't stop for anything as she gave her a massive hug. The blonde fairy struggled but resistance was futile, she eventually stopped struggling and just awkwardly hugged her back. Asuna sighed as she put her hands on her hips.

“Geez, I thought you were in to men, Light. What's with the sudden coming out as Bi?” Asuna asked.

“I'm not Bi! Whatever that means... But she's super cute! Cuteness can be in anything! Well except for a certain Water Sprite I know who could be easily mistaken for a Gloomglow.” Light snickered.

“U-um... Could... Could we stop hugging now...?” The fairy asked and Light released her from her grasp.

“Sure! Oh what's your name? Oh wait, I wanna introduce myself first! No wait, it's polite if you go first, so you go first!” Light excitedly asked her.

“U-umm... It's.. I-I mean I'm E-”

“Eden! Where are you?!” Before she could say her name, the two fairies that raced past before had came back, sounding like they we're looking for their friend. Eden looked over to see them, they were both naked and one had long white hair while the other had short red hair.

“O-oh uhh, I'm sorry but I gotta go! W-we can talk more if we meet again so see you later!” With that the blonde fairy flew over to her comrades, the two fairies gave a sigh of relief and flew off with her.

“... Aww... But I wanted to talk to her...” Light sulked, her pointy ears folded back as she did. Asuna then walked over, putting a hand on Light's shoulder.

“I could be mistaken for a Gloomglow 'ey? I think you was just mistaken for a giant ugly Fishbrat and scared her off.” Asuna laughed, but then she received a jab to the stomach.

After that event the Sprite duo walked on, it had been an interesting morning so far and they had not even eaten yet. It took a while of walking but the pair managed to find a tree, it had fresh fruit growing from it and the duo's stomachs grumbled from the sight.

“Hooray! We finally found something!” Light happily exclaimed, taking flight and ascending to collect the fruit.

“Alright, toss a few down for me.” Asuna told her.

“Hmm... Nope!” Light giggled as she started to gorge herself on the fruit, the fruit appeared to be beating like a heart, but Light was hungry and it didn't bother her. Asuna grew annoyed.

“Whatdoya mean nope?! You pass me some of that stuff down or else you'll be going home in crutches!” Asuna threatened, glaring up at her.

“Okay okay, I was only joking~” Light then reached for a fruit, then spat on it in a way Asuna wouldn't notice. She spread it around, pretending to get the dirt off of it. When she was done, she tossed it down, snickering deviously. Asuna caught it and without warning, she bit in to it. She didn't seem to notice anything wrong, and presumed to eat it until it was no trace of it left. Light evilly laughed at her.

“... What's so funny?” Asuna wondered as she looked to Light.

“Nothing~ I'm just happy you enjoyed it.” She giggled.

“Uh... Sure? Anyways pass me some more down.” Asuna said and Light did so. Light then collected a few more for herself and landed back down on to the ground. The duo peacefully enjoyed their breakfast by the tree, watching the scenery. Sometimes a fairy would fly by, sometimes a Eliocanthe would fly by and the clouds drifted high above them. It was peaceful, besides the odd scream now and then. Light cringed whenever she heard it.

“It's so horrible...” Light muttered to herself.

“What is?” Asuna asked.

“People dying... I mean sure, I get that it's normal for a predator to eat their prey, but the prey is able to think, talk and have views like we do. Why would a predator eat someone when they know that?” Light wondered.

“Well... I eat people, and my view is, that I'm an asshole. That's pretty much it.” Asuna clearly stated.

“... I think I already knew that, that's also not a very good view. What did those people ever do to you to deserve death?” Light questioned.

“How am I supposed to know? They all shout the same thing: Please don't eat me! I've probably heard that line hundreds of times and it gets quite annoying after a while. So it makes me an asshole for not caring about them.” Asuna explained.

“I will never understand, I remember when I ate people. I felt guilt and stopped doing it, how come you all don't feel guilt too?” Light asked again.

“I guess we just don't care, as harsh as it sounds, but a good reason is that predators can be born and brought up to see people as food, so later on in life it doesn't really matter to them if their prey can think, talk and have views. I was brought up to see Humans, Nekos and the like as food, although I wasn't a gullible kid and didn't believe everything I was told. I can see someone as food, but also someone as you described.” Asuna told.

“Not everyone is going to have the same views as me I guess.” Light sighed. She then got up and looked around.

“Well... I don't suppose anything else is going to happen today...” Light added as she yawned. Asuna stood up as well.

“... Do you feel that...” Asuna asked.

“Feel what?” Light asked, then suddenly, the ground started to shake.

“Whoa what the heck!” Asuna cried as it started to shake more violently.

The whole area was shaking, it eventually reached to a certain point where it wasn't going to get worse but it was still quite scary for the fairy duo. Light looked up and saw something opening up from the sky, she pointed to it so Asuna could spot it. There was now a circle shape in the sky, being purple in colour. It looked like the cause of the shaking. Then something shot out of it and the circle closed immediately after. Light and Asuna watched the object shoot out of it like a sonic boom. It went so fast that they couldn't see it when the trees blocked their sight from whatever it was. After a few more moments, the the shaking stopped. The duo had no idea what they just witnessed as they looked at each other speechlessly. Light quickly flew up until the trees were not blocking her view and far ahead she could see smoke.

“What in the world...” Light muttered under her breath. She descended and landed next to Asuna.

“So... What did you see?” Asuna asked, wanting to know.

“I don't know... But whatever it was crash landed, it probably has created a lot of commotion as well.” Light explained, she wasn't wrong either as they could see fairies flying towards it and other curious predators heading in the direction the object landed.

“Huh... Well I guess we need to go check it out as well.” Asuna suggested.

“It is quite a distance away, it'll take some time... For you.” Light grinned.

“Yeah yeah, well you blue idiot, here's a chance to prove that you're as fast as you claim to be. You go retrieve whatever it was and I'll wait by your home. You come back empty handed and well... You're the slowest fairy I've ever met.” Asuna challenged.

“Hmph! I'll show you what speed really means! I'm The Fastest and Strongest Storm Sprite! No one matches me in speed!” Light exclaimed with immense pride in her voice. She shot up in to the air and turned her body in to electrical energy, zapping over to the crash landing site as fast as she could. Asuna chuckled to herself as she began to walk to Light's home.

“Idiot, I can't be bothered walking all the way over there.” She said to herself.

Light zapped onward, nothing was going to stop her now as her speed was being tested. She was a very proud person, almost a bit too proud at that. She zoomed past everything that moved in a blink of an eye, anyone that got a glimpse of her, would just see a blue blur charging onward. She quickly arrived at the scene, her body transformed back to her fairy body. She seemed to arrive before anyone else and probably had some time to check things out. She descended to the ground, looking at the wrecked area. There didn't seem to be any fires so she wondered what made the smoke appear, plus her predator sense wasn't detecting anything either so it couldn't be anything magical either. As she walked forward, she started hearing spark sounds which got louder the more closer she got to whatever it was. The sparks stopped shortly though. Then she saw something, Light hopped over and crouched down. In front of her, appeared to be an arm which probably belonged to a human. Light was shocked when she thought of this being a person. From the way the arm was angled, it looked like the person was buried under the ground.

“... How... I can't believe this is a person... The arm looks like it belongs to a Human, or Neko, or Fairy, or... Somethin- Oh what am I saying, I gotta get this person outta there! I can be a hero!” Light excitedly grabbed the hand from the idea of being the Fairy Kingdom's “big hero.”

“On three! Don't worry person! The Fastest and Strongest Storm Sprite is here! Now one! … Two! … Three!” She pulled the hand and as she did, there was no body following the rest of the arm. She held the arm and looked at it, her smile slowly turning upside down. It took some time to make her realize she just pulled the arm off of somebody and she screamed, throwing it at the ground and jumping away, panting.

“I didn't do it! Asuna did it! I don't kill people!” She cried as she fell backwards on to the ground, hugging her legs with tears starting to fall down her face. After a few moments of sobbing, she realized something, there was no blood anywhere. She immediately wiped her tears away and got up to inspect the arm again. Indeed, there was no blood, just like she thought.

“What... Huh... Then what's...” Light picked up the arm again, it was not heavy, but nor was it light. It was also cold as well, plus dirt from the ground covered around it. She checked the back of the arm where the flesh should be seen, but it had no flesh. She couldn't figure out what it was inside of it.

“Hmm... Well this arm couldn't be the only thing that... Well, appeared out of thin air.” Light said as she took a look around, there didn't seem to be anything else of interest. She looked at the broken scenery, she guessed that it couldn't have been the objects that made the mess, but the force of the wind they made as they fell. Just before she was going to fly to somewhere else, a strange orb object appeared, it flew just above her. It was black in colour and it had a propeller that spun above it, which is how it was flying. On the front of the flying orb shaped object, looked like a camera lens. Light watched as it hovered down and faced the arm she was carrying, it would hover up to see Light's face and then it would descend to look at the arm, it repeated this a few times.

“Uh... Hi?” Light greeted the strange thing. The orb didn't seem to respond, but it flew up in the air. It flew a fair distance away, then stopped and faced Light from where it was. Light watched it curiously, she flew up in to the air and hovered over to it. When she got close to it, it would fly another fair distance before doing what it did just then, which was stop and look at Light.

“Hmm... I think it wants me to follow it.” Light looked at the arm, then to the mysterious flying orb. She proceeded to follow it to wherever it was leading her. Light flew through past trees and bushes, dodging dangerous plants until she seemed to arrive at some cave. It was a small cave and it wasn't too dark inside. The orb flew inside, Light followed shortly after it.

“Man, some morning this has been. Wasn't expecting anything like this to happen.” Light told herself as she walked on. There didn't seem to be anything dangerous inside, but then she came to a stop. She saw someone, the person appeared to be female, sitting down with her back against the wall. Her head was tilted down and her eyes were closed. Her hair was white in colour and if they were out of the cave then it would be glistening from the sunlight. She didn't seem to have any clothes on either, but was strange was the way she had no genitalia. Her skin colour was pale as well. Her breasts seemed to be in between cup b and c in size. What Light immediately noticed was that she was missing her right arm, she looked at the arm she was holding, then to the woman.

“Oh no way...” Light slightly gasped, she had no idea what she was seeing. The person wasn't giving off a magic signature either so her predator sense didn't work. After getting a good look at her, Light then proceeded to watch what the orb was going to do next. The orb flew over to the arm that was currently attached to the woman. Suddenly, a gap opened up in the arm and the orb landed inside of it, then it closed. After a few seconds, machinelike noises would be heard coming from the woman. From the shoulders, it would look like filters opened up and when they did, boiling steam fired out of them. Light jumped back when the steam appeared, she was quite frightened of whatever this thing was, but incredibly curious at the same time. It took some time, but after the steam stopped spewing through the filters, they closed back up. Then slowly, her eyes opened. Her eyes didn't look like normal eyes either, they were long and big. They didn't have much colour in them at first, they were just white but what seemed to be the irises were slowly fading in, the irises were big, being a neon blue colour.

“... Operation: System filter completed.” The woman spoke as she slowly began to move, her voice had a monotone sound to it.

“Oper-what now?” Light asked the woman. The woman didn't seem to reply, but she was looking at the arm Light was holding.

“New operation: Arm retrieval.” Was the next thing she said and as she got up, she reached for the arm and took it before sitting down again. Light just simply watched, her fear gone and was just exited to see what she would do next.

“Operation: Arm retrieval completed. Commencing new operation: Arm repair.” After she said that, she slotted her arm in to where it should be. When she slotted it in, a mechanical sound came from the arm. It seemed she was actually repairing her own arm and after she was finished, she was able to move it like it never broke off in the first place. Light was struck with awe from the person she was watching.

“Wow... What... What are you?” Light asked her. The woman looked at her and seemed to notice her this time.

“Operation: Arm repair, completed. Commencing introduction. I am Vibri, an android.” She replied.

“That's so cool... What in Nemyra's name is an android?” Light inquired.

“I am an android, an automaton that resembles a person.” Vibri answered.

“... What the heck is a automaton?” Light inquired again.

“Automaton, a mechanism that can move automatically.” Vibri responded.

“... What the heck is a mechanism?” Light asked.

“Mechanism, there are a few meanings. Which would you prefer?” Vibri asked.

“What do you mean what would I prefer, give me all of the meanings!” Light told her.

“Mechanism, the technical aspects of doing something. Mechanism, a device consisting of a piece of machinery. Mechanism, the philosophical theory that all phenomena can be explained in terms of physical or biological causes. Mechanism, a natural object resembling a machine in structure or function.  Mechanism, the atomic process that occurs during a chemical reaction.” Vibri explained.

“... Oh wait wha? Sorry I was just watching the Duikers outside heheh... Okay go over them again, I'm listening.” Light nervously laughed.

“Will repeat. Mechanism, the technical aspects of-” She was cut off.

“Yeah yeah just get to the point already!” Light demanded.

“You asked for all of the meanings of the word mechanism.” Vibri told.

“... I did? Well forget that just give me the right one!” Light commanded.

“There is no right one.” Vibri simply confirmed.

“Well give me the left one!” Light commanded again.

“You're not making any sense.” The android told her.

“Well I think your face doesn't make any sense!” The Sprite argues back.

“The IQ of this creature seems to be on par with a fruit.” The android remarked, her facial expression hasn't changed a bit either. It was almost emotionless. Light would take a lot of offence to that, but...

“... What's an IQ?” Light asked.

“IQ, a measure of a person's intelligence as indicated by an intelligence test.” Vibri answered.

“Oh... So lets see... IQ... On par with a fruit... Fruit is tasty... Are you saying I'm tasty?” Light guessed.

“No, I'm saying you must be an unintelligent life form.” She responded.

“Oh whatever, you and your big fancy words. Now... What was I supposed to do... Oh yeah! You have to come with me now.” The fairy told her.

“Do I have a choice in the matter?” The android inquired.

“Nope! It's just my pride is on the line and if I don't bring you back to my friend, I'll never hear the end of it! So lets go!” Light excitedly grabbed the android's hand ran out of the cave with her.

The fairy and the android ran through the forest, well, it was more like Light was dragging her along with her. She ran back through the way she came, eventually getting to the area where Light found Vibri's arm. All around the area were now all the predators that noticed Vibri's dramatic entrance. Light figured it would be best to go around rather than straight through, plus predator sense didn't seem to work on Vibri so the predators that had it wouldn't really detect her. So the two took the long way and ran around, Light didn't want them to see Vibri just in case they caught on that Vibri was the thing that appeared out of nowhere, Vibri's big, neon blue coloured eyes could possibly give it away. Soon they were in the clear and Light slowed down so she was in a jog, she was also still holding on to Vibri.

“Man I'm tired from all this running, I need to work out more... Anyways, can't you fly or something?” Light panted.

“I am not sure if I should tell someone I just met about my functions.” The android replied.

“Well are you alright with me shrinking you so I can fly?” Light asked.

“Shrink?” As the android heard what she said, her neon blue eyes turned to neon orange.

“Yeah!” Light came to a stop and looked at Vibri. Vibri started getting smaller and smaller until she was the size of a Neera. As she shrank, a white bar appeared on each eye, they spun around the pupil until the eyes flashed once. Once they flashed, the colour of the irises would be back to the neon blue colour. Vibri then looked around at the scenery, it was already huge at first but now it was just ridiculous at how big everything was. In front of her was a gigantic, pale blue foot which belonged to Light. Light crouched down and offered her a hand to climb on to, which Vibri did.

“There, now this makes things much more easier!” Light then proceeded to fly up in to the air. The android watched the scenery, then took an interest at Light's humongous wings. Her eyes proceeded to do what they did before, flashing once when she was done doing whatever it was. They both flew onward, it took some time but Light eventually landed by the tree which she made her home. Asuna was sitting on the ground, almost falling asleep.

“Hey! You stupid giant drip of fairy pee!” Light called as she ran over to her. Asuna looked to her, partly annoyed.

“Well you took your sweet fairy ass time. Geez, I think I could of have grabbed whatever it was faster than you, when I can't even fly!” Asuna growled.

“Yeah yeah, keep your breasts on. At least I got it!” Light growled back. She then proceeded to grow the android back to it's original size, which was five foot and ten inches. Asuna was shocked to see that what fell, was actually a person.

“Whoa... What the hell is that?” Asuna asked as she looked Vibri over. Vibri looked Asuna over as well, but she did not need to move to do so.

“I am Vibri, an android.” Vibri stated.

“Huh... Haven't met an android before, I've heard about them though. Although I don't know much other than you're a machine.” Asuna said as she was looking at her back, she then noticed something. On her back were two, large red numbers.

“Hey uh... Vibri, why do you have the numbers 00 on your back?” Asuna wondered.

“I am Vibri, the first of my kind.” She responded.

“Well then... Interesting.” Asuna said to herself.

“So... What now?” Light said.

“Now... We have this thing figure out which one of us is better.” Asuna grinned, but Vibri immediately pointed at Asuna.

“The blue creature is not very bright, if I was to have a conversation with her, it would be like trying to communicate with a tree.” The android bluntly stated. Asuna just laughed.

“Hey! I am not a tree! I am Light! The Fastest and Strongest Storm Sprite! The one who flashily finishes everyone who stands in her way!” Light proudly exclaimed, then was whacked over the head by Asuna.

“Ehh... I'll believe that when you're standing on a pile of defeated Storm Sprites, which will be never.” Asuna snickered.

“Grr... Well you know what, I wasn't going to say it but I am now. When we were eating our fruit, I spat in yours.” Light grinned evilly, Asuna's smile immediately vanished.

“Yeah, not so mighty now are yo-” Asuna dragged her over to a small branch that was on the tree, then pulled it back as far as she could and let go, knocking out Light in the blink of an eye. Vibri watched.

“I presume you two are enemies.” She said.

“Eh? Oh no, she's just a brat.” Asuna told her while dragging Light's body away.

“Will she be fine?” The android asked.

“Oh she can just walk it off.” Asuna replied.
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PostSubject: Re: The Ultimate's super stories.   The Ultimate's super stories. Icon_minitimeFri Aug 30, 2013 3:15 pm

Chapter 2 – Show and Tell.

It was night time in the Fairy Kingdom, it looked drastically different in the dark, plus it was just as dangerous as it would be in the day. The forest glistened from the white shining moon that hung in the sky, it was also breezy and warm. The predators that were active in the day were sleeping, now the nocturnal predators came out as it was their turn to hunt and have fun. Some people that are awake in the day were still up though, one person that was still awake was Light. She was dashing through the air, dodging trees that came in her way. From her face, she looked a little uneasy.

“Drats... Where's my home... I can't see that well at this time of night... Dammit Nemyra, why can't you get off your butt and order someone to put night lights around the Kingdom or something, some Queen you are, like seriously...” The Sprite muttered to herself as she flew on. Everything just looked the same to her, just trees, plants, grass and more trees. Light was getting worried now, she just wanted to find her home, enter it safely and have a nice sleep, was it so much to ask? She asked herself. Light came to a halt, she was tired from all the flying so she landed on the ground.

“Oh... Where am I... I just want to go home... I wish Asuna was here... She would help me...” Light sadly sighed. She looked around the area, somehow it looked more different on the ground rather than seeing the place from in the air. Not that it made things better for her, if she wasn't careful she could get in to some serious trouble.

“Please... Please let there path or at least something I can remember which will make me find my way home... Please...” Light begged, not knowing who she was begging to, but just hoping as much as she could that she would see something that could lead her home. Just when everything was looking bleak, Light spotted something that she recognized. A couple feet ahead of her, was her diary? What was her diary doing all the way out here Light wondered as she went over and picked it up. As she picked it up, all of the pages fell out of it and Light gasped in shock as they did. She panicked and quickly tried to gather all her pages but a strong gust of wind blew them away.

“No! Come back!” Light quickly dashed after them, all of her past memories were in those pages and if she lost them she wouldn't be able to live with herself. The pages luckily all flew in the same direction because of the wind, but there was so many of them and to add to the difficulty, it was night time which made it much more harder to see. The prank Asuna just pulled has gone too far this time Light thought as she flew after her memories on paper. She managed to catch a few, but a few wasn't going to cut it. Light was fighting back her tears, the thought of losing even a single page was just horrible. Not that losing a couple of pages would kill her, but nobody likes losing important and valuable items. After a lot of struggling, Light managed to collect all her pages and she placed them all inside of the book cover, holding it tightly so they wouldn't fall out again. She gave a sigh of relief, hugging her diary.

“... Why... I'm going to have to have a serious talk with that Water Sprite... I can handle her taunts, teasing and jokes but she's gone too far with this one... “ Light sighed. She decided that it was best not to think about the diary too much now, she had gotten her pages back before any harm could be done and all she needed to do was find her home, if her diary was there, then her home couldn't be far now she thought. That thought actually cheered her up a little as she walked on. After a short while of walking, she smelled something funny.

“What... What's that smell... Smells like something is burning, who would be cooking food at this time of night? Hmm...” Light was actually a little hungry and wouldn't mind eating something right now, she followed the burning smell until in the distance, she could see smoke.

“Oh I knew it! I wonder if they'll share their food with me, I mean I must be super famous in this Kingdom by now. I'm The Fastest and Strongest Strom Sprite for Nemyra's sake. They're bound to greet me warmly and feed me. Oh man, it would be so awesome if they asked for my autograph! Whatever that is... But I heard famous people do tha- What am I talking to myself for, lets go!” With that the Sprite happily ran to where the smoke was coming from, her diary being safely secured in her hands. There was a massive bush in the way, but just through it was where the fire was coming from.

“Alright guys! The famous me is here!” She dived through the bush, but what she saw next wasn't welcoming. Her smile had vanished, she even dropped her diary and was frozen stiff. In front of her was her home, and it was on fire. The whole thing was being burnt down, plus the fire was slowly spreading as well.

“... What... What...” Light couldn't even form a basic sentence as she watched in horror. She fell to her knees, her most precious items were in there and now they were gone, probably burnt to ashes. Light forced herself to get up, she was going to head in there no matter what. Those items she had were just too valuable to her to be taken away. She took a deep breath and charged forward, flying up to see if she could get in to the tree somehow, it was just the out side of the tree that was burning so she should be able to. At last she found the entrance to her home and shrank down, zapping in to it and growing back to her previous height. She looked around and saw that her belongings were safe. She crouched down and picked up a really old looking photo and a pendant. She then quickly realized she had left her diary outside and she was going to fly back out and grab it, the fire increased and blocked her only way out. The inside of the tree was now starting to burn, plus smoke started coming in. Light grabbed the upper part of her dress and moved it up so she was covering her face, she covered just past her nose as it was really hard to breath now and she was coughing.

“No no no! M-my diary is out there!” She coughed, there was absolutely no way of getting out she thought, but then she got an idea.

“Wait... I can just zap myself out of here!” She was about to, but remembered if she did that, she wouldn't be able to take her belongings with her. She now had a choice, a really hard one that.

“… I can either let these go and save myself... Or I stay in here with them and hope someone comes and helps...” Light didn't know what to pick, she was panicking an awful lot and she was crying all the while. The fire was quickly getting inside and she had to make choice sooner or later, plus she was also losing a lot of air which also wasn't helping.

“What do I do what do I do... Asuna... Please come and help me... Please be awake and see the smoke from your home...” She coughed and pleaded as she hugged her legs along with her possessions. It was bleak for her, she really didn't want to leave her items behind and which each panicked breath, the air was being drained from the room. Light's vision was going hazy, the colour of the place slowly fading from her sight. The air was almost depleted, it seems her time was up on making a choice, her last tears ran down her face as she closed her eyes. Just as the flames drew near her foot, the whole place suddenly and violently shook, along with there being a loud breaking noise to follow it. Light wearily opened her eyes, the colour faded back in and from what she could make of it, the whole upper section of the tree had been broken right off. She could now see the night sky and plenty of air came rushing back so she could breathe.

“I'm... I'm alive...” She gave a massive sigh of relief, slowly getting back up and getting the last few coughs out of her system. She wiped her tears away and looked at her belongings, they were safe but she still wondered about her diary. The fire had spread around the area, but it didn't look as bad as she thought it would be. Then, there was a loud, machinelike sound that came from behind her. As soon as she turned around, a gigantic hand forcefully grabbed her and she was slammed in to the ground, being pinned under it. Light screamed in pain as the force of the slam destroyed her wings. She whimpered as she slowly opened her eyes, what was pinning her down in to the ground, was a seventy-five foot tall Vibri and her eyes were a neon red colour. Light was shocked, surprised, frightened and incredibly hurt at the same time.

“U-uhh... H-h-hi Vibri... What's... W-why...” Light tried to speak, but she was too scared to get her words out.

“Operation: Light retrieval completed. New operation: Threat extermination, commencing.” The giant android spoke in a loud clear voice. Light was tremendously confused.

“H-hey V-Vibri! I... I-I'm n-no threat! You... You j-just saved my life just then! W-why...”

“Light, confirmed as a threat.”

“W-what?! H-how am I a threat?!” After Light said that, Vibri showed Light that in her other giant hand was Light's diary.

“I have scanned the diary and from your own words that have been written on to the paper, you are confirmed as a threat and you must be dealt with.” With that, the android crushed the diary and threw it away. Light shouted in tried to reach out for it, but it was in vain. She was then tightly scooped up in to the giant Vibri's hand and Vibri stood up straight, holding Light to face level.

“P-please Vibri! I, I haven't done a-anything wrong!” Light struggled in her grasp, her hands were cold and hard as well.

“Continuing with operation.” Vibri then held Light higher in to the air and she tilted her head up. Light panicked as she was being dangled in the air like a child's puppet, she wondered what Vibri was going to do but then, she saw Vibri's enormous, metallic mouth open up and she screamed.

“No! Vibri! You can't do this!” Light's words seemed to go through one ear and out of the other as she was slowly lowered in to the open maw. The inside of Vibri's mouth was mostly silver coloured, her teeth were white while the gums were silver, plus the saliva made them shiny. The tongue was almost silver coloured as well, but it had a hint of blue to it. Not that Light cared about the colours as she was going to die. Then, Vibri let go and Light fell in to her mouth and entered the throat.

“AHHH!” Light sat up, banging her head.

“AHHH!” Light screamed again as she hurt herself, she rubbed her head and looked to see what it was, Vibri's head was right in front of her.

“AHHH!” She screamed once again from seeing Vibri.

“Ah shut up you loud blue lunatic!” A voice shouted at her, it seemed to belong to Asuna.

“Wh-... What... But...” Light crawled away from Vibri and looked around, it was day time and they where by her home. Her home looked fine as well, it wasn't destroyed and nothing was on fire. She stood up and took a few deep breaths, as she did that Asuna walked over.

“What the hell was that about? You scared the living daylight outta me when I heard you scream the first time.” Asuna asked, although she wasn't looking mad, she just looked concerned.

“I... I'm sorry about that... Just... Let me get myself together first... Just uh... What day is it?” Light told her as she was sweating.

“It's still the same day and alright, whatever you need. Tell me when you're fine.” Asuna replied and walked away from her to give her some space. Light quickly flew up and entered her home, checking her belongings. They were all fine, her diary was safe in the corner of the room and her pendant and photo were both fine as well. She sighed and sat down, that was the worst dream she has ever had in a while she thought.

Meanwhile, Asuna was speaking with Vibri.

“Uh... Do you know what just happened?” Asuna asked the android.

“From what I saw, the unintelligent life form had awoken and screamed three times in rapid succession. On the first scream, she woke up. On the second scream, that was a reaction from pain. On the last scream, she saw me.” Vibri replied.

“Huh... Oh well, she should be fine in a bit. In the meantime... Is it really true on what you can do?” Asuna wondered.

“I am not programmed to lie.” Vibri responded.

“Wow... Could you uh, show us a little demonstration?” Asuna said with interest.

“I can, but right now I am currently low on power and I need to recharge my systems so I can be fully operational. If I run out of power, I will shut down.” The android explained to her.

“Huh... Well lets recharge your systemthingy then! By the time we're done that blue idiot should have gotten her act together.” Asuna told.

“Acknowledged. Commencing operation: System recharge. To recharge my power, I need to consume food.” Vibri said as she looked at Asuna.

“Eh? That it? Thought we were about to go on some epic adventure to find a generator thingy or something in the time limit we had before you shut down. Oh well.” Asuna said disappointingly.

“I have my creator to thank for my design. Doing what you just described would take too much unneeded time. Now, you will have to lead the way. I have not been sent any map of this world yet.” Vibri said to her.

“You haven't been sent a map yet? What do you mean yet?” Asuna asked.

“I prefer doing one thing at a time, I will answer questions after finishing current operation.” Vibri stated.

“Well okay then, lets go.” Asuna then walked on and Vibri followed.

The two walked through the forest, looking for food. Asuna wondered what sort of food the android would eat. She wasn't very specific and food was a broad term in Felarya. Would the android eat people? Would the android just eat fruit? Asuna wondered as she walked on, she would ask Vibri on what she thought was food but she remembered her saying that Vibri would answer questions after this. She decided to play it safe first and just find fruit, so she leaded her to the same tree her and Light went to last time and they eventually arrived there.

“Aaaaaand here we are!” Asuna declared. Vibri got closer to the tree and inspected it.

“Which part is consumable?” Vibri asked her. Asuna pointed up to the fruit that hung out high above them.

“Them things that are moving, but... One of us has to climb up the tree to grab them.” Asuna said as Vibri looked at them.

“Climbing will not be needed.” The android said.

“Huh? Why? We both can't fly up there.” Asuna told Vibri.

“That is where you are wrong.” Vibri told her and after she said that, pale coloured wings started to form on her back. Asuna had to blink twice to believe what she was seeing. Vibri's eyes were also neon orange now as she did that. After her wings finally formed, they looked a bit like Light's but she had her own style built in to them, they had some light blue coloured streaks on them as well. Vibri then took flight with them and to ascend even quicker, her feet formed in to pale coloured boots which at the bottom, had jet boosters attached. Asuna was amazed, even more amazed by how all this wasn't even magic. Vibri hovered over to the fruit, taking one and looked at it, the way it beat like a heart was interesting. She started eating and as she did, a loud sound came from her body, it almost sounded like a bug zapper that was switched on. Vibri continued to grab and eat the fruit from the tree before landing, once she landed, her eyes turned back to their neon blue colour and the noise had stopped.

“... Um... So... Uh... How'd you feel?” Asuna said, not knowing what to say from that display.

“Operation: System recharge, completed.” Vibri replied, she was now fully energized as indicated by her heads up display. On her heads up display was a white bar at the bottom right corner with a little percentage number next to it on how much energy she had left. The bar was fully filled and the percentage number was on a hundred percent. Vibri's wings seemed to sink back in to her body until they were not there any more and her boots seemed to sink back in until they changed back to her feet.

“Man... Light needs to see this... This is amazing.” Asuna commented.

“Again, I have my creator to thank for my design. Now, you are free to ask questions.” Vibri said to her.

“Neat, but first lets get back to Light. She's probably alright now.” Asuna told her as she walked back from the way she came, Vibri followed behind her. They both eventually arrived back to Light's home after some walking and they both saw Light leaning against her tree. Asuna quickly walked over to her.

“Hey Light! How're you feeling now?” She asked her.

“Oh um... Yeah I'm fine now, I just had a bad dream is all... It was a super bad one... But yeah, I'm fine now.” Light replied as she looked to Vibri, mainly looking at her mouth with a little shiver.

“Well if you're fine then I'm fine, now... You really need to see what that android can do, like seriously. She can freaking... You have to see for yourself!” Asuna exclaimed as she went over to Vibri. Light slowly followed, still looking at Vibri and just being unable to get that memory of her dream out of her head.

“Alright Vibri, time to show us what you can do!” Asuna excitedly said.

“Acknowledged, commencing new operation: Show and tell. I will answer as many questions as I can and will demonstrate my abilities when asked.” Vibri stated.

“Alright, first question, why are you even doing what we say and why are you still here with us?” Ausna asked.

“I have not been gave any operations from my creator since I arrived, so I am free to give operations to myself until then. To answer your next question, I don't really know anything about this world and you two are the first people I have spoken to. You both haven't tried to harm me so I can presume I am safe with you two.” Vibri explained.

“I see, well if you need information you can always ask us about something, well, preferably me as that Dunce Sprite can barely do basic maths.” Asuna grinned as she looked at Light.

“Define basic.” Light glared at her.

“Basic as in... You can just about work out a sum like two plus two.” She replied.

“What do you mean just about?! I can do that easily! Look! Two plus two equals... Two twos!” Light answered proudly.

“Eh... Close enough I guess.” Asuna commented.

“Are you two meat bags done arguing?” Vibri asked.

“What?!” The two Sprites shouted in union.

“Will repeat, I said are you two done arguing?” Vibri said, totally repeating everything she said there.

“Oh... Yeah, sorry 'bout that. So uh... What I've been really wondering is, how on Felarya did you do what you did before? I mean, that wasn't magic. Those wings just... Formed from your back and that thing that happened with your feet, just... What happened?” Asuna curiously asked, dying to know.

“What you witnessed was my main ability.” Vibri's eyes turned to neon orange as the wings she used before slowly formed on her back once again, her feet forming in to those hover boots as well. Light felt like she was just slapped in the face with awesomeness as she watched with her green eyes.

“For me to do this, it is thanks to that blue idiot that you refer to, or specifically, Light.” Vibri explained, Asuna looked to Light with a confused look on her face. Light looked just as confused as Asuna did.

“Um... How in Nemyra's name did I help you do that?” Light wondered.

“Do you remember when you first met me, Light? Well you probably do since we met a short while ago, but you know when you shrunk me? That is when I activated my main ability, it only seemed to work on your wings though.” Vibri aforementioned.

“Eh? That... Still doesn't explain much.” Light replied.

“I was not finished. You see, I have the ability to copy a skill that I witness and use it in my own way. For example, when you were shrinking me, during that I scanned how you were doing that. Unfortunately, after my scanning was completed, it seemed I could not copy that skill, which means I cannot copy any skill it seems. Although, when you were carrying me, I scanned your wings and I was able to copy your flying skill. Thus, how I formed these wings and hover boots.” Vibri fully explained.

“Wow... An ability to copy almost any skill huh? That's amazing, like seriously. Does it take a lot of energy to pull off?” Asuna questioned.

“It depends on what the skill is, but most skills do not take much of my power. Also, the ability is called Skill Copy, if Skill Copy is successful, then I will use Skill Get which stores the move in my memory for later usage. I can store a vast amount of skills, but if my Skill memory gets too full I will need to forget, or, delete some Skills that I copied.” The android stated.

“Oh man that's all so cool! You gotta show us!” Light excitedly exclaimed, it seemed that her dream wasn't bothering her now that she just saw and heard something that she thought was epic.

“I can demonstrate, but I need a skill to scan.” Vibri said as the wings sunk back in to her body while her hover boots morphed back in to her feet, and her eyes turned back to neon blue.

“Hmm... Okay, lets see you do this!” Asuna transformed her entire right arm in to a massive water blade. She slashed at the air a few times before marking the ground with it. Vibri's eyes turned to neon orange and like before, the little white bars appeared above the pupils. They spun around them as she watched Asuna perform her water blade attacks. Soon they stopped and Vibri's eyes flashed once.

“Skill Copy, successful. Skill Get, successful. Activating new skill.” Vibri's arm then suddenly started to morph, it took almost the same shape as Asuna's blade but it was pale coloured with light blue streaks going across it. Soon it had fully morphed and she too, slashed at the air and marked the ground. The two fairies just watched in awe.

“My Nemyra... This HAS to be the coolest person I have ever seen! Well err, I'm the coolest but being second coolest is pretty good too!” Light complimented.

“Thank you, is this operation finished?” Vibri asked as she morphed the pale blade back in to her arm.

“Hmm... Not just yet, we know about your main ability, but can you do anything else?” Asuna inquired.

“Well, my creator did add a few miscellaneous additions to my design. For one, my personality can be programmed in to a different one. For example, this is my current personality, I could have it changed so I'm more humorous, or I'm more serious, or I'm more talkative, you get the idea.” Vibri explained, Light and Asuna grinned to each other.

“Really? Well... Could you be more humorous for us?” Light asked, smiling.

“Accessing database... Modifying... Personality change successful, anything else you pair of bozos want?” Vibri said in a whole new tone, her facial expression changing as well so she was smiling more. Light and Asuna laughed from being insulted like that.

“Wow that's amazing!” Light applauded.

“Yup, it is quite amazing how much of a bozo you are.” Vibri laughed, even though Light was enjoying what Vibri could do, she didn't like that remark.

“Hey! I'm not a bozo! I'm The Fastest and Strongest Storm Sprite! The one who flashily finishes all of those in her way!” Light proudly stated, putting her hands on her hips.

“Hm, well I can see you prefer having brawn over brains, but judging from my built in electroencephalogram, a Glouteux has more brain activity than you, and that's saying something.” Vibri chuckled, Light didn't get any of what she just said, but she knew it was bad and she growled in anger. Asuna was too busy laughing her wings off, the Android looked to Asuna next.

“And you, you think you're the smart one don't ya? Well listen here contamination on legs you're just as bad, I don't even know your name yet! If anyone is a bigger bozo than her it's you!” Vibri laughed, now she had two angry Sprites growling and glaring at her.

“... Vibri, change your personality, like, now...” Asuna told her, looking like she was about to explode.

“Aww, can't handle a joke? I said I can be humorous, but I didn't say you'd find me funny, what am I, some robotic entertainer?” She said while putting her pale hands on her hips and looking at the Fairy duo.

“... Did you change it yet?” Asuna asked, sounding like it was the last time she was going to say it,

“Oh fine fine, just gimme a sec... Going through my database thingy... Modifying... There, personality changed back to previous personality. I hope you enjoyed one of my miscellaneous functions. Would you like to hear about my other miscellaneous functions?” Vibri asked as her facial expression went back to being almost emotionless.

“No.” The Sprite duo replied in union.

“Operation: Show and tell completed?” The android asked and the Fairy duo looked at each other.

“Well... Are we done here?” Light said to Asuna.

“Hmm... Not just yet, there's stuff I still want to know... Hey Vibri, we know about you're interesting abilities now, but what I want to know now is... How did you get to this world? I mean, you appeared out of nowhere all of a sudden, why are you here? What's your purpose for being here?” Asuna asked.

“I will answer as much as I can, to answer your first question... I can't, as I don't know what happened. All I know is that one minute I was in my creator's enormous laboratory and after he commanded me to enter my Sleep mode, I awoken in this world and my arm was missing. He had left me one operation though, which was to find shelter so I left my arm behind. After I reached a small cave, I stayed in there for a bit and waited for my next operation. I didn't seem to be getting any so I entered Auto mode, which enables me to give myself operations until my creator gives me my next one. I decided to send out my scouting drone to find my arm, but it seemed Light had already picked it up. I had the drone lure her to me so I could give myself repairs, then Light leaded me back here and I met you. To answer why I am here, I... I... Error.” Vibri's head twitched on her last word.

“Error?” Light and Asuna said in union as their heads tilted to the side.

“Checking systems... Checking... System error, can not seem to find information on that... Why... I have only just noticed, my creator should have told me what my main mission was... Unless something happened during my trip to this world. Commencing side-operation: System Link.” After Vibri said that, her eyes changed to a white colour and she walked over to Light's tree, facing it and a projection appeared on it from her eyes. What could be seen on the tree was a somewhat large square shape, and a small antenna formed on top of Vibri's head. A blue coloured beam shot up in to the air from the antenna and static noises started to come from the android's ears. What was also noticeable, was her ears had morphed in to a radio dish like shape and they were currently moving up and down, looking like she was trying to get the best frequency. The Fairy duo watched the projection on the tree trunk, wondering what was going to appear. After a long six minutes, it seemed nothing was going to come up and Vibri withdrawn the antenna and radio dishes, the blue beam also faded away. The android gave a sigh as her eyes returned to their normal colour.

“... Operation: … System Link failed... This is not good at all, I am unable to communicate with my creator... Now I don't know my purpose for being here... Plus I have no way to return to my creator as well...” The android slumped, she wasn't very happy. Asuna recovered from that awe-inspiring event and put a hand on the android's shoulder.

“There there... Maybe something did happen on your way to this world, but who knows, your creator should figure out pretty soon that something is up and he'll be able to fix the problem.” Asuna smiled, Vibri looked to her.

“... That's possible... My creator wouldn't just send me here for no reason... By now he should be trying to fix whatever technical problem has arose. Yeah.” The android seemed to cheer up and she stopped slumping.

“Forget that guy for now, you got us to hang with!” Light happily explained as she hugged Vibri from behind. Vibri's eyes changed to neon orange and she used her Skill Copy ability, once her eyes flashed and went back to normal, she turned around and hugged Light.

“New skill learnt, hug.” Vibri smiled, Asuna gave a small, happy sigh.

“She's right, we can be your friends! We know lotsa stuff about this world, we can teach you about the place and take you to various landmarks and stuff! It'll be nice having something to do for once.” Asuna happily told her as she folded her arms.

“Yeah! Oh man I can just imagine what fun we'll have!” Light excitedly added as she released Vibri from the hug. Vibri looked at the Sprite Duo.

“Well... I am on Auto mode, I never get to use Auto mode much when on missions, I might as well try and enjoy myself before my creator figures out how to communicate with me again.” The android said to them.

“That's the spirit! Just uhh... Excuse us two for just a moment.” Light said as she dragged Asuna away to the next nearest tree which was a few feet away. She dragged her behind it so Vibri couldn't see them.

“Uh... What's up Light?” Asuna asked, really not knowing why she brought her here.

“Here's the thing... There's one of her... Two of us... This question was going to come up eventually so... Who gets to take her home? Light wondered.

“Oh, that's easy to answer because I am.” Asuna grinned, Light didn't like that answer.

“Oh no you ain't! I'm the one who found her, so I should be the one to keep her!” Light argued.

“Hmph! Well you heard what she said about the electro...en...thingy! A Glouteux is smarter than you! You're too stupid to keep her” Asuna argued back.

“Oh yeah?! You just sounded very hypocritical there saying that I'm stupid when you failed to even know what she said!” Light growled.

“Tch... Well... There seems to be only one way to solve this...” Asuna cracked her fingers, Light did the same.

“I know where you're going... I hope you're ready... As my move will be devastating...” Light clenched her right fist.

“Huh, the only thing that is devastating is your stupidity... Now... Get read for...” Asuna clenched her right fist as well and they both moved their fists back. They both looked incredibly tense, a sweat drop ran down Light's face.

“... ROCK, PAPER, SCISSORS!” The Fairy duo shouted at the same time as they both made their hand signs. Asuna did scissors, while Light did... Rock, Asuna saw that she lost and she snarled.

“T-two out of three!” Asuna called out.

“Fine, you sore loser!” Light said, annoyed. They both readied their hands again.

“... ROCK, PAPER, SCISSORS!” They shouted as they both revealed what they got. Asuna used paper while Light used... Rock once again.

“No! Grr... Alright pal, this is it, me and you, the final battle, only one of us can keep the machine.” Light glared at Asuna.

“Just you wait... I'll show you my real power!” Asuna declared as they prepared their fists a final time.

“... ROCK! … PAPER! … SCISSORS!” They closed their eyes tightly as they drew their hand sign of choice. After a few moments, they both opened their eyes to see that they ended up both picking paper.

“For for Nemyra's sake! How can this be?!” Light cursed.

“... Okay... This is will be the last final one!” The Sprites went at it again, and again... And again... And again... Every game they seemed to play they drawn in. They were stood there until nightfall, going at it over and over. They couldn't believe just how unlucky they were, plus they were both incredibly exhausted. They both sat down and panted, losing count on how many games they had just stubbornly played.

“You... You've done it now... You will feel my wrath...” Light tiredly threatened.

“Pff... As if... You could even harm me...” Asuna panted, they both slowly got back up and prepared for the ultimate rock, paper, scissors game that they were about to play.

“... Rock...”

“...Paper...”

“...SCISSORS!” After saying that, they both accidentally punched each other in the face and knocked each other out. The both plummeted to the ground with a thud. Little did they know, Vibri was using her scouter drone to watch the entire thing. She actually found the whole thing pretty amusing to watch and now that the show was over she had her drone return to her and it landed safely back in to her arm. She walked over to them and dragged them both over to Light's home, leaving them just by the base of it.

“Moronic meat bags. Now I have to watch over them all night, I guess it is safe to say. Operation: Show and tell, successfully completed.” With that, the android sat down and began her night watch.
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These are pretty damn good, mate. These three are going to be quite well together, I can see. The comedic moments in these stories are actually quite hilarious. Keep it up. So far, an 8/10. ^_^
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I noticed your writing style is very dialogue-heavy. :3 I'm not sure that's a bad thing but you might want to take that into consideration if you ever feel like doing something different. I have to say, your story thus far is an amusing, if somewhat clichéd at times, read. ^_^ Amusing, too! Overally you're pretty good at this. I'll refrain from picking out the grammar errors this time because I think you can probably make those go away on your own, not that there are tonnes to begin with. :p

I have to say, I really liked the misdirection in the second chapter concerning their Rock Paper Scissors game. Though part of me questions how they know that game when Earth doesn't exist but most of me doesn't care - there's probably a number of acceptable explanations. That bad dream Light had sure had me going, though, I can tell you that much. The prologue with the lack of a fourth wall was decently funny, too. Though about Vibri - she seems like a pretty generic emotionless robot girl to me. I've seen them a number of times, like Aigis from Persona 3. I'm not sure that's necessarily a bad thing, but it would be interesting to see you take her in a different direction, concerning character development or whatever you choose to make her unique.

Also Light reminds me of Dashie. XD That's all I can say for now, I has headache. :3 Hope my feedback helps!
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PostSubject: Re: The Ultimate's super stories.   The Ultimate's super stories. Icon_minitimeWed Sep 04, 2013 6:00 pm

Nyaha wrote:
I noticed your writing style is very dialogue-heavy. :3 I'm not sure that's a bad thing but you might want to take that into consideration if you ever feel like doing something different. I have to say, your story thus far is an amusing, if somewhat clichéd at times, read. ^_^ Amusing, too! Overally you're pretty good at this. I'll refrain from picking out the grammar errors this time because I think you can probably make those go away on your own, not that there are tonnes to begin with. :p

I have to say, I really liked the misdirection in the second chapter concerning their Rock Paper Scissors game. Though part of me questions how they know that game when Earth doesn't exist but most of me doesn't care - there's probably a number of acceptable explanations. That bad dream Light had sure had me going, though, I can tell you that much. The prologue with the lack of a fourth wall was decently funny, too. Though about Vibri - she seems like a pretty generic emotionless robot girl to me. I've seen them a number of times, like Aigis from Persona 3. I'm not sure that's necessarily a bad thing, but it would be interesting to see you take her in a different direction, concerning character development or whatever you choose to make her unique.

Also Light reminds me of Dashie. XD That's all I can say for now, I has headache. :3 Hope my feedback helps!
Thanks for the feedback. ^^

Well firstly, I will agree with it being dialogue heavy as my characters can be quite talkative and it's intended, if it wasn't then there wouldn't be as much of it as you just saw and will continue to see.

Also, if it's amusing then I'm doing something right, but I honestly don't know many clichés so if you continue to see them, my bad I guess.

About my grammar... Yeah, my bad again, I try my best with it but I'm honestly at my limit in terms of writing. My English teachers would always, always give me the same criticism about my grammar and no matter how much I tried to improve, I didn't. So I've stopped trying and I'm happy with my current writing level.

And the rock, paper, scissors game, I figured that must be a popular game so I used that, but now that I think about it, I guess I could have made a slight variation to it. But dumb me is dumb and I'm not smart enough to come up with new hand signs for the game. XD

Now, with Vibri, I haven't seen many things with androids/cyborgs/ect in them, and there was only a few things I could get inspiration from while doing my own thing. Hopefully she'll become more likable as I work on her though.

Dashie... Have no clue who that is. ^^;;

But yeah, thanks again for the feedback. ^^
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Thanks for the feedback. ^^
You're welcome. Very Happy

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About my grammar... Yeah, my bad again, I try my best with it but I'm honestly at my limit in terms of writing. My English teachers would always, always give me the same criticism about my grammar and no matter how much I tried to improve, I didn't. So I've stopped trying and I'm happy with my current writing level.
I've heard a lot of writers say that's a horrible thought to have as a writer, and I'd have to agree. Just because you don't think you can improve doesn't mean you shouldn't stop trying, at least not permanently. If you're getting frustrated then sure, a break now and then can help clear your mind and maybe even let you get an idea on how to improve, but don't just stop growing altogether. O.o

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Dashie... Have no clue who that is. ^^;;
Rainbow Dash. Xp
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Nyaha wrote:
I've heard a lot of writers say that's a horrible thought to have as a writer, and I'd have to agree. Just because you don't think you can improve doesn't mean you shouldn't stop trying, at least not permanently. If you're getting frustrated then sure, a break now and then can help clear your mind and maybe even let you get an idea on how to improve, but don't just stop growing altogether. O.o
I already know that's a bad thought, but I don't really want to be a writer and if I don't want to be one, then having that thought doesn't really matter. I'm not frustrated at all either. I'm only doing these chapters for just something to do, it's just people seem to like them. If I was trying to be a good writer, then I wouldn't have that thought. :p
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Chapter 3 – Bygones.

Light woke up with a yawn, she sleepily sat up and stretched her arms high in to the air before bringing them back down to get the sleep out of her eyes. Once she was done she looked around, seeing she was outside of her home. She was confused to why she was sleeping outside, but remembered her stubborn game of Rock, Paper, Scissors that she played with Asuna. Thinking of Asuna, she wondered where she was. She seen Vibri, who was close by, just staring at her with those big neon blue eyes which looked a little creepy. Then, Light heard a groan sound which came from below her. When she did, she blushed to find out Asuna was underneath her.

“Ugh... What...” Asuna sleepily moaned as she got the sleep away from her eyes.

“Uhh... Hey...” Light shyly said as she slowly went to get off her.

“... What... What are you doing on top of me Light!” Asuna shouted as she quickly pushed Light away.

“N-nothing! I-I don't even know how I got there!” Light shouted back as she landed on her bottom.

“Yeah right, first you attempt to make out with me and say you was just trying to perform “CPR” on me and now this, you sure you haven't got a crush on me~?” Asuna teased.

“N-no! I'd rather fall in love with a Tonorion than the likes of you!” Light yelled as she quickly turned around and faced the opposite way with her arms folded.

“Alright alright, I believe you.” Asuna laughed as she stood up and did some stretches.

“Good morning.” Came from the android who was sitting down and quietly watching the two Sprites.

“Good morning.” The Sprites replied back in union, but one reply sounded not so enthusiastic; it came from Light too.

“It seems you both had a decent sleep, but for future reference do not fall asleep by knocking yourselves out by fighting over me.” Vibri told them.

“Yeah fine fine.” Asuna said nonchalantly as she finished her stretches, Light replied with a small growl which sounded like she said okay.

“I also gathered food, so it saves you the trouble of finding some.” Vibri told them as she pulled out a basket that was behind her, the basket being full with lots of different kinds of fruit. Asuna walked over and sat down on her legs, looking in to the basket before grabbing a random piece of fruit and eating it.

“Nice job, was wondering what this was.” Asuna commented. Light came over as well, doing what Asuna did and started eating.

“Where did you even get this basket from?” Light asked with her mouth full.

“I borrowed it.” The Android simply replied, Asuna and Light looked to each other and didn't really believe that, but they just went with it as they looked back to Vibri who also started to eat.

“I have wanted to ask you two questions.” Vibri said after she finished what she was eating.

“Hmm? About what?” Asuna replied.

“Well, yesterday you two asked a lot of questions about me. I think to establish some trust, I should be able to get some information on you two.” Vibri answered.

“Well ask us anything! I guess we do need to be kinda fair here, we did ask like, a lot of things.” Light explained with her mouth full again.

“I don't have much of a problem with being asked questions either, so ahead.” Asuna confirmed.

“Then, my first question to both of you is, what are your abilities? You know about mine, I need to see what you can do.” Vibri asked.

“Oh oh oh! I love this question!” Light quickly and excitedly shouted as she forced all the fruit in her mouth down her throat, going to stand up as well. Asuna sighed, she knew Light would be like that, but it saved her from going first she thought.

“Now, ahem, as The Fastest and Strongest Storm Sprite in Felarya, I have a deadly arsenal of awesmazing, spectacular, flashy and devastating moves! I can control the element of lightning, I can even turn in to lightning to reach those speeds that no other person can reach! I can also use electricity which helps with powering stuff sometimes. Umm... Oh! I can shrink and I can grow at will! Don't like being giant though... Super embarrassing if you ask me, plus it scares people and I don't like doing that. Uhh... I can also fly...That's it I think, but everything I use to fight with is with stuff from my lightning and electricity powers.” Light happily replied, always energetic to explain her power that she is so proud of.

“Acknowledged, you must be quite powerful then and I can see how you are so proud of yourself.” Vibri commented as she saved everything Light said in to her memory. She looked to Asuna next.

“My turn huh? Well let's see... I'm a Water Sprite which means I can control the element of water. I can transform parts, or even all of my body to water and I can slip about stealthily. I can make liquefied weapons with my body, that can actually act like real weapons. Umm... Not sure if this counts as a ability, but Water Sprites can't fly, although we can glide... Well... Most can glide, my wings are so small, they can't allow me to do that. However, it makes my wings a really hard target to hit, and if my wings don't get damaged, then my opponent will have a hard time fighting me. I can also shrink and grow like most other Fairies, and... Yup, that's what I can do.” Asuna answered as best as she could.

“Acknowledged, you also must be quite powerful, but you do not seem to be that proud of your power unlike Light.” Vibri commented again, doing the same thing and putting all that in to her memory.

“Ehh, if what I can do helps me survive then it's good enough for me.” Asuna said as she went to grab another piece of fruit.

“Now that I know your abilities, I would like to ask something more personal. What are both of your back stories? You asked about where I came from, so I should be able to know the same thing about you two.” Vibri inquired. Light and Asuna looked to each other, wondering about this question, wondering who should go first.

“Well... You deserve to know... But like... It's long story.” Light answered as she sat back down, her cheerful expression had faded.

“I have a lot of time.” Vibri stated.

“Then I'll go first, Light can go second on this since she was first to answer the first question.” Asuna told as she cleared her throat.

“I'll start from here...”

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“Asuna! Hurry up and wake up! It's time to go!” A voice called from a distance, the call would be carried across what seemed to be a humongous pond, the spotless water beaming from the morning sun.

“Ugh... Five more minutes...” The second voice would reply, it belonged to a very young Asuna, who appeared to be around six years old. She was laying by the edge of the pond, sleepily playing with the water with her hand. A few moments later, a liquefied upper body rose from the pond, taking the form of a humanoid man, his size being just the size of Asuna's hand and he went to hug it. He seemed to have medium sized blue hair and a pale green skinned body, he also had bright green eyes.

“Now come on Asuna, can't be late again or we'll get in trouble again. We can't fly you know so we need to get there early.” The blue haired man informed.

“Ugh... Alright dad...” Asuna yawned as she rolled on to her back which allowed her to sit up.

“Asuna dear come on, let's go.” A woman walked over, who seemed to have long green hair and beaming blue eyes, her skin colour was pale blue and her breast size was a bit smaller than the average breast size. Her wings also where petal shaped, being green in colour as well, they also weren't very big either.

“Ohhh... I'm coming mum...” Asuna gave another yawn and sat up, walking over to her mother and going to hold her hand. Asuna's father dived under the pond and surfaced after a few seconds, now being just bigger than Asuna's mother who was currently the average Human female size. He climbed out the pond, showing no clothing too as he walked over to his family, giving them both a kiss.

“Now, I'll do my thing Tsuna and get the hunting done, hope you both have a safe travel.” He smiled to them.

“Oh we'll be fine Lee, you just be careful with the hunting.” Tsuna said as she kissed him back and went to walk away with Asuna, Lee waved until they were out of site.

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“So yeah, that's what mornings were like for my family.” Asuna said as she took a small break from her story.

“Acknowledged, is that it to your back story?” Vibri inquired.

“Nope, I started at that point in time for a reason, so... Now we'll go from here...”

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The mother and daughter had walked through the Fairy Kingdom, it seemed that they were walking along a specific path too.

“So Asuna, made any friends yet?” Tsuna looked down to Asuna, but her smile was a little off.

“Nope.” Asuna simply replied.

“Aww, well it would be really great if you could make some, you have been going there for quite a while now...” Tsun said a little sadly.

“I'll make friends when I want to.” Asuna said, a bit of annoyance in her voice as if she had been asked that question too many times before. Her mother gave a small sigh as she walked with her and eventually they seemed to reach a small town.

“Ah here we are, Kortiki Town. I've always tried to convince your father that we should live here, but he's stubborn about that pond and doesn't want to leave it. Hmm... Anyways, can you make it to the school by yourself? I need to head to the Big Old Library and pay off a debt for some of my friends and I promised them I would be there as early as possible.” Tsuna informed.

“Okay okay I'll be okay.” Asuna said before being kissed on the head.

“Good, have a good day!” Her mother said as she quickly walked off. Asuna looked around, she could go to school, but she also could do something else. She had no parent watching her, she could do what she wanted.

“Hmm... What to do...” Asuna began to walk around the town, but making sure to stay clear of the school she was supposed to be going to. She walked around to some of the homes, thinking she could have some fun by knocking on the door and running away- but then she remembered that Fairies have a thing called predator sense so she would be caught and she sighed. She walked around to some of the shops instead, thinking she could have some fun by seeing if she was able to steal anything- but then she remembered again about the predator sense and she sighed again.

“Aww... Can't do anything fun here without being seen... Guess I'll just go the school then...” With a final sigh she walked to her school. Her school was one of the widest trees in the town, it had been professionally carved from the inside so that there was desks, seats, stairs to reach the next floor in the tree and more. Outside of the school was a lot of kids, all of them around Asuna's age and they were standing in a single file line, waiting for the signal to go inside.

“Darn... We came a little too early... Was hoping to be late... Oh well...” She sighed as she joined the back of the line, the students didn't really bother noticing her, all of them carrying on talking amongst another. After a few moments, there was a student who had only just arrived and he slowly joined Asuna at the back of the line. He was a clothed Fairy, wearing clothes that made him look very neat and tidy, although it looked just a bit too much for something you would wear daily.

“Hello Asuna.” He happily greeted, Asuna turned her head but replied with a grunt.

“Hmm, still feeling that way like normal? I understand... Maybe this rose I bought for you will make you feel better? It's a very rare rose, I heard that it was picked from another world so I had to work very hard to get it... Just for you.” He blushed. Asuna looked at the rose with a blank face and took it.

“Look, Hope...” Asuna said with a small growl.

“Yes?” The Fairy boy called Hope replied, looking really happy that she took the rose.

“I've said... Time, after time, after time... Leave. Me. Alone! I don't want to be with you! I don't like you! You're so annoying and stupid looking! Just... Just just piss off!” Asuna shouted as she bit the rose in half, spitting out the end and crushing it with her foot when it hit the floor, she looked really mad.

“I'm... I'm...” Hope couldn't get his words out, he was so happy that he was finally able to give Asuna the rose he worked for, but now he was holding back tears, seeing all his effort was in vain. Asuna was in a fit of rage, after obliterating the rose she quickly looked for something else to destroy. She looked to Hope, and as about to punch him right in the face before she was dragged back,.

“Asuna! What on Felarya do you think you are doing?!” The person holding her back was a woman, she was smartly dressed, wearing a black textured jersey dress, along with black tights and black high heeled shoes. She also had glimmering, long white hair that had a tint of velvet to it.

“I'm not doing anything!” Asuna shouted, all the young students watched in shock. They knew Asuna had a short temper, but this time it was the angriest she got.

“Class, go ahead and take your seats, I'll be in there momentarily.” The woman said as the students quickly did what they were told.

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“And yep, I caused quite a stir.” Asuna paused.

“Acknowledged, you seem to have quite a temper. Must be unwise to make you mad.” Vibri commented.

“Yeah... Well, here's the last bit to my story. Then it's Lights turn.” Asuna stated, Light didn't look too enthusiastic about that.

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It had been a rough start, but eventually it was break time for the pupils. Asuna had been put on detention for her actions that morning, so she wasn't allowed to go outside. She was sat at the desk furthest to the back of the room, quietly growling to herself with her head resting on her folded arms. The woman that held Asuna back that morning was the teacher, and the teacher was standing just outside of the school so she could keep an eye on her, and on the pupils.

“Darn... I can't stand sitting here any longer... I need to get out of here... Hmm...” Asuna looked around the place, it seemed that the only way out was where the teacher was standing, or was it she thought.

“... I'm the only Water Sprite here... If I try hard enough, I could transform my body in to water and slip my way out through a window... The teacher might not notice since she's watching all the students... Alright, let's do it.” There was a window to the left of the wall, it wasn't exactly a window, but it had large square shaped holes to make it look like windows instead. Asuna slowly and silently got up from her chair and tiptoed over to her escape exit. She made it, but now she had to use her magic. Asuna wasn't trained much in magic at this point, but with sheer determination, she slowly transformed her body in to her water form. This was the first time she accomplished this
outside of training with her father, and to her it was so strange being in this form. Her vision was incredibly blurred, she wasn't exactly sure if she was seeing anything, she was just a pool of water that was alive. Using her memory, she managed to find the wall and slowly slide up it and eventually, she made it out of there. She slid on to the ground and focused very hard again, slowly transforming her body back in to her Fairy form and with enough focus she did it.

“... I... I'm out... I... I did it!” Asuna celebrated with a loud whisper, she was going to run for it but she ended up bumping in to Hope. They both gave a oof sound as they shook their heads, then when they saw each other they quickly felt awkward.

“... Uhh... Hey there Asuna... Are... Are you feeling any better...?” Hope asked, a little scared.

“... I'm fine...” Asuna simply replied, there would be a long awkward silence until one of them spoke up.

“... So, Asuna... I guess you're umm... Not a fan of flowers huh?” Hope asked, wiping his sweaty hands over his pants. This question just made Asuna mad again, but not as bad as before. Just before Asuna could shout at him, an idea came in to her head, and she grinned.

“Ohh yeah I'm really sorry about that, I mean, really sorry. It's just... Just...” Asuna said, trying to lead him on.

“Just w-what, Asuna?” Hope asked, wanting to know, there could have been something behind Asuna's words and actions towards him all this time, he needed to know.

“Just... I-I'm sorry... My... My past has been v-very rough... I-I don't want to say what happened... B-But I want to make it up to you.” Asuna grabbed Hope's hands, looking at him in the eye with determination.

“I... I... I-It's okay A-Asuna you don't have t-” He was cut off.

“No no no, it's not okay... Look, we're going to sneak out of this town so we can be somewhere more private. Since I can't fly, you have to carry me, I'll tell where to go.” With that, Asuna shrank down to tiny size and Hope, without hesitating, gently picked her up and stealthily got away from the school and flew out of the town.

They flew for a while, until Asuna had him land next to an enormous pond.

“Here we are!” Asuna jumped off his hand's and grew back to her previous height.

“Where are we?” Hope asked, looking around.

“This my home!” Asuna said with a fake exited smile.

“Oh... It's very nice, Asuna. So... Why bring me here?” Hope wondered, dying to know what Asuna was planning.

“W-well... I've... I-I've been wanting to tell you something... But... But since I've always had to act mean to you... I've never got to say it...” Asuna acted as she turned away from him, walking closer to her pond. Naturally, Hope slowly followed her, his heart racing.

“A-and... What... What is it that you've been wanting to say...?” Hope stood next to Asuna, both at the edge of the pond.

“I... I... I l... I lo...”

“Y-yes...?”

“I... I... I freaking hate you, now go and die!” Asuna pushed hope in to the pond, diving in after him and landing on his back, trying to push his head under. Hope struggled, which was hard for Asuna to keep him under, so she used her water magic and took control of the pond around her, making liquefied tendrils that rose up, wrapping around Hope, and dragging him under. Asuna climbed out of the pond, then looked at her crime, keeping up her water magic hold on Hope. After two minutes, Asuna stopped her magic and fell to her knees, exhausted. She looked at the pond, watching a body slowly float to the surface.

“Heh... Heheh... Finally... No more of him... No more being bugged every single day... No more getting stupid presents... No more seeing his face...” Asuna basked in her new found freedom, eventually seeing Hope's lifeless body rise up and float on the surface. Suddenly, a few screams came from behind her, Asuna turned around saw a few students she knew from her class.

“What... A... A... Asuna! You monster! You just... You just... You just killed Hope!” One of the boys cried.

“We... W-we need to tell!” Said the second boy, with that they quickly flew back to the school as fast as they could. Asuna watched, turning her head back to the lifeless Hope.

“Heh... Now no one will mess with me... I bet I can do whatever I want in school now... Everyone will know... Everyone will know not to piss me off... And I'll get my own way...” Asuna grinned.

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“... Yeah... I killed him... I brought him to my home, tricked him in to thinking that I loved him, and I straight up killed him... What happened next was my parents came back home, they saw me, shouted and screamed... Argued at each other... Yeah... I went to school on my own the next day, I was immediately kicked out of that Town and was banned from ever entering again. As for my parents, when I got back home, they said their goodbyes to me, said some not nice things to me, and left me. From then on, I've lived in that pond my whole life, just... Waiting to see if they want to come back...” Asuna sighed, finishing her story. Light was busy blowing in to handkerchiefs that were made from leaves.

“I hate that story, i-it's so sad... Asuna you asshole!” Light cried, Asuna sighed again but gave a little laugh.

“Yep, I know, I'm an asshole.” She simply replied, not denying it.

“Interesting, you are a threat, but at the same time you are not since you have a friend.” Vibri commented.

“Yeah... I don't deserve friends, even told Light to not be friends with me but she's even stubborn about that.” She smiled.

“You can't live life without friends! Asshole or not, you're like a sister to me and I can't let you live your life without anyone to laugh, cry, scream and have fun with!” Light shouted as she went over to her to give her a hug.

“Yeah yeah keep your friendship morale speech things to yourself.” Asuna smiled as she was hugged.

“Now then, I have Asuna's story, it is time for your story, Light.” Vibri stated as she looked to her.

“... Umm... Well... Okay I guess...” Light cleared her throat.

“I'll start from... Here...”

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“N-No! Mummy! Daddy! Please come back! Plea-”

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“O-Okay I don't want to start from there actually...” Light said as she played with her thumbs.

“Umm... Okay, here.”

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It was a pleasant morning in the Great Rocky Fields, well, pleasant for the people and creatures that live there originally as it was a stormy morning.

“Alright, just like we practised, now go! Punch! Punch! Kick! Kick! Punch! Punch!” Alone in a small area outside of a small cave, there were two people doing some training. One of them was a young girl, looking around four years old with blue hair and two large dragonfly like wings, this was Light of course, she didn't seem to have any clothes on too. The other person was an adult male, he had spiked blue hair and blue eyes, along with having pale blue skin, he didn't really have any clothing on either.

“Careful now you two, don't want my lovely heroes to pull a muscle now.” A woman giggled as she came out of the cave, her long hair was a blue colour, but it had some purple in it, her body colour was a dark pale blue and her eye colour was dark green. Her clothing made her really stand out, because it looked like a white tunic, but with the elements of it being a dress. It also had streaks of blue on it as well, and was well designed. Her footwear seemed to match as well, they looked like white wellington boots that had blue streaks on them and were curved towards the toes area. What also made her stand out, was that she had three massive pairs of dragonfly like wings, all of them being the same colour as her hair.

“Oh don't worry my love, I'm just making sure our wonderful daughter is going to be as strong as ever.” The man laughed, he seemed to be the father. It seemed to be a nice morning overall.

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“So that's what I think my life back then was like... My memory isn't very good, I just remember the most important parts...” Light sighed.

“You don't have to go on about it if you do not feel like doing so.” Vibri said.

“... No, you deserve to know... So... The next thing I remember is...”

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It was now a few hours after midday had past, and the lightning powered family were all in their home which was a cave.

“Muuuum... I'm sleepy... … Mummy?” Light was lightly patting her mother's leg, it took quite a few pats, but her mother finally answered, looking really distressed.

“O-Ohh... Y-You're sleepy...? H-Here...” Her mother directed her to her bed, Light quickly climbed in, saying goodnight to her mother, and went to sleep. The next morning, Light woke up.

“Ugh... No like morning...” Light yawned, getting the sleep out of her eyes, when she finally woke herself up, she looked around in shock. She wasn't at her home, she was in some corridor and the lights seemed to be inside the walls, lots of strange carvings and marks where on them too. Light gulped, starting to tear up.

“M... Mummy...? … Da... Daddy...?” Light began to walk down the long corridor, really scared and frightened. She called for her parents every few seconds, but she never got a reply from them. Eventually she couldn't help it and she fell to the floor, crying her eyes out. She was there for a good few ten minutes, eventually tiring out and getting back up. She was going to press on, and down the corridor she went again. Soon, she came across a basket, and the basket was familiar to her so she quickly ran over to it. As she knelt down, she saw a lot of things in it, most of them being familiar to her as well. She found one of her mother's blue dresses, shrunk down to fit Light's size, she found a photograph of her and her parents together, she found her mother's pendant and finally she found a piece of paper with a lot of writing on it. Since Light was so young, she couldn't read it as she wasn't much educated yet, although she turned the paper over, and on the back was big huge letters that Light knew. It read: “Goodbye, we love you.” Light looked to it, then looked at everything else, starting to cry again.

“N-No! Mummy! Daddy! Please come back! Please! Don't go! No goodbye!” Light bawled as she lay on the solid ground, starting to cough. After another few minutes, she eventually calmed down, looking at the basket again. She went to grab the dress and put it on, it fitted her perfectly and it suited her just fine. Then she sat down, wondering what to do, her crying wouldn't change anything she thought. She had no one to comfort her, she had no one to go to, no one to take care of her. These thoughts rushed around her ahead, she was only young and couldn't handle any of it so she got up and went over to the wall, starting to bash her head against it really hard. Bash, after bash, after bash, and after bash, Light kept doing it, even when there was blood all over the wall, but she did stop sooner or later, passing out on the floor.

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“...And... And...” Light was trying not to cry, she absolutely hated her past, it depressed her so much. Asuna gave Light a hug.

“There there... You don't have to say any more...” Asuna said, trying to comfort her.

“O-Okay... Could... Could you say the rest... I can't... I can't say it...” Light whimpered.

“Sure sure... Well, from what I remember Light telling me, is that she was able to survive in there and finally left that place the day she aged in to an adult. She also found out that the place she was left in was an old temple, and many, many explorers adventured in to it. Those adventures became Light's source of food, but... She thought of a way to get educated, and that was by capturing those people, telling them that she would let them go if they teach her everything they know. ...Light never followed that agreement and ate them anyway, she also ate them... By chewing on them... Then to pass the time... She would play sadistic games on her prey, by sadistic... You don't wanna know, it's really gruesome though. Eventually, she was smart enough to write, and she obtained a book to write all her diary entries in. If you want to hear about the sadistic things Light did... Then you have to read her diary, which she probably won't let you. What else... Oh yeah, for drink there was a strange stream of water that ran through the temple, where it came from she never found out. Umm... That's it I think, one day little Light fell asleep and next day she was left in that temple for reasons unknown. ...Oh yeah! Light also isn't her real name, she says she forgot what it was and had to name herself, she came up with the name Light by practising her magic one day and after seeing how bright she could make a flash, she thought of the word Light and she decided to call herself that. And... That's it I think.” Asuna finished.

“Interesting, very interesting. Did not expect you two to have back stories such as that.” Vibri commented, having saved everything said in to her memory.

“Yeah well... I think everyone has an interesting past, some people might not think they're that interesting, but they are.” Asuna told.

“That is correct. … Detecting something.” Vibri quickly stated.

“What?” The Sprite duo said in union. Vibri stood up and looked around, Light and Asuna wondered what was going on as suddenly, the ground started to shake.

“W-Whoa! W-What's... Is... This feels the same as before!” Asuna shouted, holding Light close to her as she looked around. Indeed, they felt this violent shake when Vibri first arrived in Felarya, and they all wondered what was going on. Suddenly, above them, two portal opened up, the portals looked the same as the one Vibri went through and after a few moments, two oval shaped objects quickly came down. Asuna quickly grabbed light and jumped away with her just before the objects crash landed on top off them. There was a thunderous crash, feedback filled the air and everything was distorted for a few moments. Light groaned, sitting up after everything calmed down. Asuna was laying on her legs, but she grumbled and slowly sat up herself.

“Ugh... What the heck just happened...” Asuna groaned, Light gently grabbed Asuna's face, and turned it in the direction Light was looking. Ahead of them was Vibri, and Vibri was looking at the large oval objects that had crash landed. Vibri scanned them, and then stood back.

“...Dropships.” Vibri said and suddenly, both the large objects opened. Machinelike noises came from inside them, and after a few moments, two humanoid figures got out from them and set foot on to the ground. These two figures seemed to look exactly like Vibri, which made the Sprite duo gasp in shock.

“What... What's going here?!” Light shouted as she stood up and walked over to Vibri, Asuna shortly followed.

“Yeah, just who are those two?” Asuna asked.

“... I do not know.” Vibri answered.

“You might not know us, but we know you, Vibri.” The first one said with a grin.

“Yeah, unlike you, we aren't Androids who fail in design.” The other remarked.

“I don't like the look of you two, who are you!” Light demanded, the two androids in front of them just gave a grin.
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PostSubject: Re: The Ultimate's super stories.   The Ultimate's super stories. Icon_minitimeSun Feb 23, 2014 6:53 am

Chapter 4 – Raise your head and taste the courage.

“I said, who are you two!” Light shouted again, quickly getting impatient with the two Androids in front of her.

“Ohh fine, as long as it shuts you up. We are the first in our creator's new series of B-Androids, well, technically Vibri was the first but she was just the prototype.” The first Android explained.

“... So, I am the prototype which led to you two being made... Then what about our creator? I lost contact with him and-” Vibri was cut off.

“Yeah yeah we know all about that, he lost contact with you on purpose. You know all of the previous missions you were sent on? They were just to see how well you could perform, being thrown in to this world was a final test to see what you would end up doing without any orders, and our maker didn't like what he saw. You made friends with two Sprites, and gave them information you shouldn't have gave.” The second Android explained.

“I see... So that is what my purpose was. What does our maker want to do with me now?” Vibri asked, Asuna and Light listened closely to what was going on.

“Well since he's nice, he decided not to scrap you for parts. He told us to tell you that you should go back to him for... Modifications.” The first android smirked as she got out a strange looking device. She threw it a small distance away and it exploded in mid air, making a purple portal appear.

“If that is my next order, then I will go.” Vibri said as she looked to the portal and just as she was about to walk over to it, she was stopped by Light.

“No! Don't go Vibri! We only just made friends! Who knows what your maker will do to you!” Light shouted, really not wanting her new friend to leave.

“I have to follow orders, Light. It seems that I have to leave, so, goodbye for now. Maybe we might see each other again. Same with you, Asuna, goodbye.” She gently pushed Light off her and walked over to the portal, once she stepped through it, the portal closed up.

“Huh... Oh well, we'll see her again Light.” Asuna said, trying to comfort her sad friend.

“Ohh I think I would like to disagree with that.” The first Android commented, Light and Asuna looked back to them.

“What do you know?” Asuna inquired with a slight growl in her voice.

“What I know is my business, however, we have orders to finish, and it involves you two.” She replied.

“What do you want with us?” Light wondered

“Our creator thinks that Vibri told you two a bit too much about where she came from. He likes to work in complete secret, and when someone finds out just the slightest bit of information about him... He gets rid of them.” The Android told and after she finished her sentence, the Fairy duo quickly entered their fighting stance.

“So... Your mission right now is to kill us huh?” Asuna said.

“That is correct, and we need to get back to our maker so if you two just stay still and accept death, we'll kill you quick and painlessly.” The second Android replied.

“No way in hell I'm letting that happen!” Light shouted, and was immediately going to charge in but Asuna put an arm out and stopped her.

“Don't do it, Light. If we're gonna beat these two, we can't do it recklessly. You take on the first Android, I got the other one. Since you can fly, you lead yours to somewhere else so we don't get in each other's way. When we're done, we will meet back here. Alive too! Understand?” Asuna informed.

“Yeah yeah I got this.” Light smirked, getting really exited now for this.

“Are you two done wasting time?” The second Android replied.

“No the real question is are you really better than Vibri? You two are so slow you could have got us by now! Damn you're just a hunk of junk”” Light teased as she took off in to the air, flying away.

“If I wasn't in this personality then I would have killed you the instant I saw you.” The first Android replied as her eyes turned to neon red in colour. She then morphed her body in to her flying mode, taking off and quickly going after Light. Asuna watched, then looked back to the Android that was in front of her.

“You sure that was a good idea? From the information we got from Vibri, Light just looks like a complete idiot who in a situation like this, would get killed straight away.” The Android taunted.

“Shut up! I fully believe that Light will be back here alive, she may look stupid and arrogant and incredibly stubborn, but she has more sense than anyone I've met, you don't know what she can do!” Asuna defended angrily.

“Well we'll see~... Her head on a pike.” The Android taunted again, which made Asuna quickly run over to attempt to give the first blow. She turned her whole right arm in to her giant liquefied blade and went to slice at her, but the Android easily dodged it and gave Asuna a hard kick to the back, her eyes turning to neon red as well. Asuna groaned in pain as she recovered and went to slice at the Android again, but her attack was dodged once again as the Android jumped back.

“Is that you can do? I was planning on copying your attack but if it's that worthless then I'd be too ashamed to do so.” The Android taunted once again, Asuna gave a growl.

“Okay... I see what you're doing... You know that I get mad easily...” Asuna took some deep breaths and tried to calm herself down.

“Ehh well thanks to Vibri we know everything that you and that dumb Storm Sprite can do, which makes this a lot easier for us. Anything you try will just easily be dodged.” The Android grinned, Asuna uttered a curse as she remembered that her and Light had told Vibri everything about themselves.

“Grr... Well... You might know everything what we can do... But being able to dodge it is another story!” Asuna shouted as she began to grow to her giant size, reaching sixty foot in height before her growth stopped. The Android looked up with her constant grin on her face.

“That just makes you a bigger target.” Saying that the Android entered her flight mode and took off in to the air, flying away and morphing her arm in to a futuristic looking cannon. She aimed at Asuna, and fired massive purple plasma shots at her. Asuna turned her body in to water, she thought she could avoid the weapon the same way she always does with bullets being shot at her, but these weren't bullets and as the plasma fire hit her arm, it went inside her and Asuna gave a muffled scream of pain as it immediately boiled the water in her arm, starting to vaporize it too. Asuna quickly forced the plasma out of her body, transforming her body back and looking at her arm. It looked fine, but it hurt so much. With a scowl she shrank back to her previous height, holding her right arm while looking to the Android who landed right in front of her.

“See? You were just a bigger target, and you turning in to water is no big deal for me.” Said the Android. Asuna wondered what to do, now she was getting big doubts in her mind and started worrying about Light. She had no time to worry though as the Android aimed her plasma cannon at her, Asuna quickly turned in to her puddle form and jumped out of the way before being shot at. Asuna dived around, bouncing on to tree to tree to try and dodge the plasma that was being fired at her. The Water Sprite tried to think of ideas while jumping everywhere, if all her attacks were just going to be dodged, and if her magic was useless to fight with, then what could she do? She had to think outside the box, but it was hard to do while avoiding being killed. Then while thinking along the lines of magic, an idea finally hit her and was going to test her idea. She increased her speed, going as fast as she could until finally she seemed to lose sight of her opponent. The Water Sprite had shrunk to tiny size, hiding in a small opening of a tree that was around fifteen foot away from the ground. She also used to this time to catch her breath. Eventually, she saw the Android just below her, looking around with her big neon red eyes. Asuna stayed absolutely still, and after a couple minutes the Android seemed like she couldn't find Asuna which gave hope in Asuna's new idea.

“Alright... It can't detect magic signatures... Just like I can't use my predator sense to locate it... I wonder if...” Asuna seemed to get another idea, and she jumped down quickly and quietly by turning in to her puddle form once more. She then transformed her body back, growing back to Human height as well. She looked around, and finally found what she was looking for which was a rock, then she got up and leaned her back against a tree, after doing that she then bashed the rock against the tree and quickly dropped it, turning in to her water form as well. This immediately caught the android's attention, walking over to where Asuna was. The Water Sprite stood completely still, watching the Android get closer and closer until eventually, she was just inches away from Asuna. The Android looked around the tree, finally looking like she was just staring at Asuna, but she walked away right after. After the Android was a few feet away from her, Asuna turned back in to her Fairy form with a grin. She now had finally spotted a weakness, the Android can only detect people through movement and sound, meaning that the Water Sprite could finally have a chance to attack now and inflict some damage. She just hoped Light was doing alright now.

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Light had flew as far from Asuna as she could, finally stopping and turning around to see the Android right behind her who also stopped when she did.

“Finally found where you want your grave to be dug? I don't know what was wrong with the last area but oh well, people like to be fussy I suppose.” The Android grinned.

“Nah, there's a reason why I flew out here, and it's so I can kick your robot ass without holding back!” Light remarked.

“You? Kicking my robot ass? Listen Stormy, you- no, Vibri even said it herself, your IQ is on par with a fruit! You're too stupid to come up with any sort of plan, you will just shout a bunch of heroic nonsense, fly at me and attack me with no real plan and I will dodge everything and just send your ignorant face plummeting to the ground which will finish you off.” The Android explained, it didn't seem to affect Light though, she just grinned.

“Well, we'll just have to wait and see what happens, now bring it on!” Light turned in to lightning energy and zapped up in to the air faster than anyone could blink. The clouds above the Android started turning dark until they were completely black. The Android didn't move, but she had morphed her right arm in to what looked like a lightning rod, pointing it up in to the air. Then suddenly, incredibly powerful lightning bolts struck from the clouds, and they ended up all hitting the Android's lightning rod. Light slowly descended, looking a little tired from doing that and was really annoyed to see it hadn't done anything.

“Hey! What gives!” Light growled.

“Thanks to your good friend Vibri, I know everything you can do. It's a shame that the only magic you use is lightning magic, because I can counter everything you throw at me.” She stated as her rod dispersed all the lightning she drawn in at the ground. Light didn't like the way the Android knew everything she could do.

“Alright... Even if you know all my moves, there's not a single chance that you'll be able to dodge them!” After declaring that, Light quickly zapped away and after a few moments, she zapped back forward, transforming her body back a few seconds before collision and put her fists out, going to punch the Android, backed up with the force of the speed of light. However, the Android grabbed both Light's fists and pushed forward until all the momentum was gone and they were hovering again.

“I might be able to dodge them, but I can do that and I can do this.” A blade morphed on the Android's kneecap and she kicked Light right in the stomach, the blade going right through and coming out through her back. Light screamed in pain, blood starting show. The Android slowly brought the blade out, and stabbed her again, followed by another agonizing scream. She then brought the blade out once more, and instead of stabbing she let the Sprite drop. Light ended up crashing through tree branches and leaves, before her fall finally was stopped by landing on a bunch of smaller tree branches that where close together with leaves all over them. The Storm Sprite was taking struggled breaths as she was in a state of panic, she tried her best to calm down but she was in too much pain. She slowly looked at her stab wounds, seeing she was losing quite a bit of blood.

“D-Damn... She... She got me good...” She uttered as she looked around, she needed to get up and fight the Android but she wasn't in no state to do so. She slowly reached out to grab a leave that was bigger than her body, weakly tearing it and lifting up her dress, going to try and tie it around her wounds to stop her blood loss. She did all she could before slowly rolling off the branches, falling off them and landing on her feet with a grunt. She looked around, not seeing the Android anywhere.

“Looks... Like I lost her...”

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Asuna was slowly sneaking up on the Android, hoping to finish this with just one strike. She wondered on how she should attack, she could use her water blade, but she didn't know how tough the Android's body was so she didn't want to risk it. Although, she had her fairy magic she thought. If she could quickly shrink her, grab her and smash her in to something or do something similar then she could win she thought, so that's what she set out to do. The Android stopped walking, checking the area in front of her.

“Hmm, you, Water Sprite, are really good at hide and seek- but it seems I have to turn on a little something that will detect you straight away now to end this little game. Infra-red vision, on.” A quiet electronic sound came from the Android's head and her red neon eyes turned orange slightly. Asuna didn't know what infra-red meant but she knew it meant she had to hurry up so she quickly began her attack. She used her fairy magic and put all her focus on it, which made the Android rapidly shrink. Before the Android could turn around and counter attack, Asuna had jumped in to the air at a size of twenty foot, bringing her fist down which smashed right in to the two inch Android. Asuna brought her fist up, and brought it back down, punching repeatedly and not giving the tiny Android any attempt at recovering. After a full minute of punching, Asuna shrank back down to Human height and panted heavily, laying on her side and looking at her hand.

“Oww... Punching the ground is never a good idea... Now...” Asuna checked to see any signs of the Android, she smiled once she saw a completely broken and tiny android on the ground. She had won and gave a massive sigh of relief.

“There... That'll teach you... Just need to wait for... Light!” Asuna got up and grew back to her giant height, it seemed that she was the first to win her battle because Light hadn't returned so she quickly ran in the direction her friend flew off so she could give support to her. It took some time, but she finally sensed a familiar magic signature up ahead, but it was weak which made Asuna worry as she got closer. Soon enough, she spotted Light, with the Android she was fighting holding her by the neck, Light's wings where on the floor as well so they had also been ripped off.

“Looks like I won Stormy, any last words before I end you?” The Android grinned, Light was too weak to say anything, the blood from her wounds had been dripping down her legs. Then, the Android suddenly started to shrink. She had ripped Light's wings off, how was she being shrunk the Android tried to possess in her head. Soon she was next to Light's foot, as Light had fallen back after she was released. The Android went to go find cover, until she stopped, and saw the biggest person she had ever seen, it also answered her thought on how she was shrunk. She was only an inch tall in height, while the one who she was looking at was Asuna, who was sixty foot in height.

“It looks like you're the one who should be giving the last words, but since I hate you, I'll just go ahead and shut you down now.” With that, Asuna gently picked Light up, and as hard as she could she stomped on the inch tall Android, giving it another few stomps for good measure until she walked away with Light. Asuna looked at Light's wounds worryingly as she walked on, wondering how she was going to heal her. She didn't know any healing magic, and she didn't know any medicines either, what could she do she thought as she didn't have much time to waste. Light was literally dying in her hands and it was all down to her on whether Light was going to survive.

“What do I do what do I do... I can't heal her... I can't do anything...” Just as things looked bleak, Asuna spotted something in the distance. As she quickly walked on, it looked like an entrance to a familiar town, she gulped as she remembered just which town it was- Kortiki Town. The Water Sprite looked to her dying friend, there was probably a lot of people in that Town that hated her guts quite a bit from her past and they probably wouldn't hesitate to attack her either. She had no choice though she thought, there had to be a healer in there so she walked on.

“Right... Hopefully the people that knew me as a kid in here don't remember who I am... Just need to find a healer... And it'll be fine...” Asuna said to herself as she shrank down to Human height, now holding Light with an arm under her back and an arm under her legs. As she walked in to the place, she got a few looks from some people, but they would stop looking at her when they saw Light. Asuna looked around, getting some flashbacks from when she was allowed in this Town but she shook them off, it wasn't the time to daydream. The Water Sprite continued to walk, she had no idea where she was going to find a healer, she didn't know anyone until she felt a hand be placed on her shoulder. As soon as she felt it she stopped walking, she knew this magic signature...

“What... Are you doing back in this Town, Asuna...” The person asked her, it sounded very cold and unwelcoming, but it was also a voice which was familiar to her. When she turned around, she felt her heart race as she suddenly remembered who this person was. She had that long white hair that had the slightest bit of velvet in it and that black dress, it was her teacher from when she was little.

“... I know you hate... I know you never wanted to see me again for what I did all those years ago... But... I'm not here for nothing, I... I need help...” Asuna said sadly.

“You... Want help?! Out of all places to come for help, you came here?!” She shouted with disgust.

“I had no where else to go! Look my friend is dying in my arms right now! I need a healer before she-” She was cut off.

“I don't care what you want, if you made a friend then she's probably just like you, a psychopathic killer.” She replied coldly, although as she was looking at Light, she seemed to remember her a bit but she shook it off.

“She... She isn't anything like me! She's the kindest person I have ever met! I don't deserve her as a friend... I have even told her that but she still wanted to be my friend! Please... Please help her I'm begging you!” Asuna pleaded in slight panic.

“Hmph, this could just be a plan to get revenge...” The white haired Fairy sceptically replied.

“If you heal her, I will let you end my life. I don't care what happens to me, I'm going to Hell no matter what I do so just... P-Please... Please help her... She's really young and doesn't deserve death...” Asuna started to cry, sniffing all the while. The Fairy looked at Asuna, she could tell now all this wasn't an act.

“...Fine, I'll send her to the medical department- But you... Go to the school and wait for me there.” With that she shrunk Light, gently picking her up and flying away with her. Asuna watched them fly off, wiping her tears and smiling brightly. Her friend was going to live now she thought as she went to make her way towards the school that was nearby.

An hour seemed to have past, and Asuna was in the classroom she used to be taught in. She was standing at the front of the class, looking at the very back desk which used to be hers. The Water Sprite didn't know if she was liking the nostalgia that she was feeling, it didn't feel right. Suddenly, she heard footsteps and the Fairy she begged to before walked in. She walked past her and sat at her desk, not making any eye contact as she rested her elbows on the table, clasping her hands together and holding them upwards towards her mouth with a long sigh.

“So...” She began.

“S-So what?” Asuna asked, wondering how her friend was going to be.

“Your friend lost a lot of blood... And she has some nasty injuries... She... Well... I hear it's a fifty fifty chance of her recovering.” She answered.

“O-Oh... Well...  There's still a chance, I just pray the healing does it's thing and... She'll live.” Asuna said sadly.

“Right... Now, we made a deal didn't we?” She said as she finally looked to her.

“... Oh yeah... I said I'd let you kill me... Just... Can we wait until I see if my friend lives...?” Asuna said with distress.

“Look... Just forget about it, I won't kill you, as much as that boy's parents would love me to.” She told, Asuna's mouth immediately formed a big smile.

“Thank you, really... Thank you so much.” Asuna thanked.

“Don't mention it... Just... When your friend is healed, don't come back here. There's still a lot of people that live here who don't forgive your actions that day, me included. Even if... You've matured since the last time we met, I can tell you've changed.” The Fairy stated to her.

“Yeah... I promise I'll never show my face around here again... And I have changed, it's all thanks to my friend...  Without meeting Light, I would just be the same person as I was as a kid. Light made me open up more, and made me understand what it's like to be kind... And what benefits being kind gives, and it's more than what I ever imagined.” Asuna conveyed in a happy voice.

“Hmm, well, I guess it's good to hear. How... Exactly did you two meet in the first place? How would you, and someone like here even become friends?” She asked, curious.

“... Hehe... It's a rather... Strange story on how we ended up as friends, it went something like this...”

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It was an average ordinary everyday day in the Fairy Kingdom, the sun shone and everything in the Kingdom was busy doing it's thing. A blue bolt was zapping around the area energetically, it went up in to the air and at about a hundred foot high it took form of a blue Fairy, who did a corkscrew flip in the air as she fell back down.

“Whoooooooooooooooooo!” She excitedly shouted as she opened her wings and glided down, dodging all sorts of branches and carnivorous plants. She eventually landed on the ground, putting her hands on her legs as she panted, looking to where she just fell from.

“Aww yeah, that's right! There ain't no Fairy in this Kingdom who's got anything better than that!” She boasted loudly and proudly. After she calmed down a bit, she realized she had landed in a puddle of water, which was a little weird considering it hadn't been raining today. Then all of a sudden, the puddle slid away from her which took Light by surprise. She then grinned, going to jump on to the puddle and she landed in it again. The puddle simply moved back again, which encouraged Light to jump on to it again but the puddle dodged. Light began to jump over and over, trying to land on the puddle like it was a game. Then after quite a few tries, the puddle suddenly formed a big liquefied arm and fist which punch Light in the stomach while in mid air, sending her back a few feet and she ended up landing on her back.

“Oww... What the heck...” Light held her stomach on pain. The puddle then slowly started to change shape, making the form of a Fairy until it became a Fairy, with turquoise coloured hair and pale green skin. She walked over to Light, lifting her foot and putting it on Light's chest while looking down on her with a annoyed facial expression.

“Don't... Do that again... Or I'll cut out your heart and shove it down your loved one's throat.” She coldly stated as she lifted her foot off Light, going to walk away and expecting to hear her scurrying away with fright. But, what she got was a loud laugh and immediately she turned around to see Light getting up.

“You? Tearing my heart out? Hah! You look like-” She was cut off as she was quickly punched in the face.

“... I said, go away.” The Water sprite coldly replied, Light got back up and was angered from the fact that she was hit before she could finish her taunt.

“Grr you! You stupid giant drip of Fairy pee! I wasn't done speaking!” She gave Asuna a small electric shock.

“Oww! Alright you are dead you freaking pathetic blue piece of shit!” Asuna angrily shouted as she went to give Light another blow to the face, but Light dodged it faster than she could blink by turning in to lightning energy and zapping behind her, turning back to her Fairy form.

“You didn't just call me that you green asshole!” Light channelled lightning energy into her fist and punched Asuna right in the back and she screamed as she hit.

“Y-You... You have done it now... I am going to rip your tongue out and shove it up your cunt so you can go fuck yourself!” Asuna was really mad now as she grew to her giant height, turning around and going to stomp on Light, and she succeeded doing so, but all she got was her foot being electrocuted and she brought it back quickly, leaning against a nearby tree while holding her foot up to check it was badly burnt. After a few moments, she saw Light land on her nose with a big grin.

“You sure you wanna keep fighting me? Because who you're looking at is Light, The Fastest and Strongest Storm Sprite in Felarya! No one matches me in speed, and no one even comes close to having the same amount of power I have!” The Storm Sprite boasted like before, but her boasting got her grabbed tightly right in Asuna's hand.

“I don't give a shit about who you are... And I don't want to keep fighting you, now I can either let you go so you can fly away, or I can kill you right now.” Asuna said with a growl.

“Oh fine fine you party pooper, I'll fly away...” Light pouted and after a few moments Asuna let her go.

“There, now leave me be Storm Sprite... Fuck my foot hurts... Would have preferred your crushed body under it instead but oh well...” She sighed.

“... You know, I can heal it. I have the power to control lightning, which means I can also heal what I hit with it.” Light explained.

“... You can heal my foot?” Asuna asked.

“Sure can buddy! Lemme see it.” Light flew back and grew to her giant size as Asuna lifted her foot up, Light held her ankle so she could get a good look.

“Hmm... Okay... Uh huh... Can do something there... Alright yeah, I can super heal this.” Light said.

“Oh good, I am not walking around with that bu-” Asuna suddenly screamed, Light blasted a bunch of electrical energy on her foot and jumped back, laughing loudly.

“Ahh I can't heal crap! You idiot!” Light shouted in between her laughing, Asuna held her foot in pain, glaring at the Sprite in front of her.

“... You. Are. DEAD!” Asuna dived on to Light, and they began brawling through the Kingdom.

A lot of time past, and so did a lot of fighting. In the middle of a wrecked area, Light and Asuna were on the ground, laying a few feet away from each other and both of them looking just completely injured from head to toe, writhing in a lot of pain all the while. They were still at their giant sizes, and it seemed they had also ripped each other's wings off as well, their backs just aching in pain. Both of them panting heavily as well, looking really worn out. After a few moments, Light started laughing, Asuna looked to her, having no idea how she could be laughing in a situation such as this. She eventually stopped and started talking.

“Ohhh man... That... That was... That was awesome... Just... That fight is what I've been waiting a long time for... It was so friggen cool...” Light coughed.

“... You... Are the weirdest Fairy I have seen so far... And I've seen weird Fairies...” Asuna commented weakly.

“Heheh... You're... You're alright... I like you... What's your name?” Light grinned as she looked at Asuna, the Water Sprite didn't believe what she just heard. The Fairy she had said horrible things to and had tried to kill said that she likes her, she didn't know how to respond.

“... Uhh... I'm... Asuna...” She answered, looking at the ground.

“Asuna... From now on... We're going to be the bestest friends... Not just friends... Not just good friends... The bestest friends.” The defeated Sprite smiled.

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“So yeah... It all started from there.” Asuna finished her story, she was also sat on the Fairy's desk as well.

“... Huh... Umm... Interesting I... Think is the word to describe all that.” She said, trying to understand the logic in that story.

“See? Told you, one minute we are just killing each other and the next thing is she declares us as friends. I can't understand it myself, but that's how she is I suppose.” Asuna smiled as she remembered all the times she had with Light when they first met.

“Well, I can't even bring myself to harm you after hearing that story. You have a really good friend, and if I killed you I would break an incredible bond and I wouldn't be able to forgive myself.” She explained.

“Thank you... Also... What's your name? I've forgotten it, and... It's not like I can call you Teach again.” Asuna said.

“You can call me Stacy, Asuna.” She answered.

“Stacy... Alright, so umm, Stacy... It might be a long while until my friend recovers... If... It's not any trouble, and if it is I understand completely, but... Do you have a place for me to stay? I really don't want to leave the town until I know how my friend is...” Asuna asked, Stacy thought about it.

“My mother... Always said to do the right thing I guess so... Okay, I have a home in this Town and you can live with me until your friend is well again- But, you have to help me with errands, not letting you stay for free.” Stacy explained.

“I can't thank you enough... I'll do whatever you tell me to, even if it's to clean your home with my tongue, I'll do it.” Asuna said seriously.

“Oh no I won't be making you do anything like that... Just things to help me out with.” Stacy informed.

“...Ah, okay then... So... Let the wait begin.”
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PostSubject: Re: The Ultimate's super stories.   The Ultimate's super stories. Icon_minitimeSun Feb 23, 2014 8:48 am

It's really interesting so far. :3 I think the action was really well done, too. Way to make your characters feel mortal. :DThough I have to say, when chapter 4 shifted to flashback after Light was taken to care, it kinda' lost its' momentum for me, y'know? Like, Light's safe now, she'll probably be fine, why read this flashback that has nothing to do with the current event? Although, even then when I continued to read I wasn't disappointed. It was really funny and interesting. I especially liked the part where Light lied to Asuna saying she could heal her, then zapped her again. That was gold. XD
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Chapter 5 – There's teaching afoot.

The previous day had ended, and what was night time had turned in to morning. The sun slowly rose over which started to give light to the Fairy Kingdom. In a tree house located in Kortiki Town, the white haired Fairy named Stacy was waking up. Her home was awfully small, but big enough for a Human sized person to live in. Stacy sat up in her bed which was made from wood, it wasn't exactly comfortable but it did have sheets and a blanket over it, along with a couple of pillows.

“Ohh I hate this bed... Eden is so lucky with hers... Big fancy mattress and everything...” She yawned as she climbed out of her bed, she stretched her arms in to the air and groaned. She then went over to her wardrobe where all of her clothing was neatly folded up, Stacy appeared to have a short collection of them as she seemed to have a few dresses and a few outfits, along with some tights and shoes. She picked out a rather plain looking pale yellow dress, sleepily putting it on. After she put it on she used her feet to pull over a pair of pale yellow coloured flats and put her feet in to them. Then she grabbed a comb, combing her long white hair so it looked neat, putting her comb away once done. For some reason her right shoe was a bit tighter today she thought as she walked over to the door of her home.

“Hmm...” She wanted to make sure she had everything and she tiredly looked around, after a few moments of looking she figured that she was ready to leave, opening the door to her home. The door didn't have hinges, but it had a wooden handle on it which allowed Stacy to slot out and slot in the door like it was a jigsaw piece. After she opened the door she hovered up as her apartment was a few feet away from the ground, turning around and slotting the door back in to the tree. She then descended down and landed on the ground, walking in to the Town. She was going to be busy today she thought, she also felt like she was forgetting something but just couldn't put her finger on it as she walked on. Stacy eventually reached the school she taught at, entering it and walking over to her desk. She sat in her chair, all of her items were under the desk in a small compartment that had a magical lock on it that only she could open. The Fairy unlocked it and brought out all her equipment, it was all shrunk so it was more easier to store.

“Alright... Today is magic day... So I need...” She took out a bunch of books, a piece of chalk and a object which looked like a eraser for a chalk board. She stood up and took the books, walking around and placing them on all the desks and after doing that she grew them back to their original sizes. Stacy walked back over to her desk, growing the chalk with the chalk eraser and put them on the edge of a long piece of wood that was under a big board, the board looked like it had been used many times before. She then looked around, there was still something she was missing she thought...

“...I'm sure there's something else... Wait... Oh crud!” After finally remembering she quickly ran out of the school, flying back to her home. When she arrived she opened the door and quickly entered inside. Like the compartment at the school, she had a compartment next to her bed and when she unlocked it she brought out what she had forgotten, which was her lunch. With a relived sigh she left her home a final time, flying back to the school with a more clear conscience now that she had everything. She landed and entered the school again, going over to her desk and giving a relaxed sigh as she sat down once more, putting her food next to her that was in a small bag.

“Just need to wait for the kids to arrive and I can start the day properly now.” After saying that she leaned back, putting her hands on the back of her head while looking upwards. After a bit of time had passed, a lot of kids were lined up outside of the school, Stacy was about to fall asleep before hearing loud laughter which came from outside, which quickly woke her back up as she remembered that it was time to start the day. She got off her chair and stretched her arms up in to the air with a yawn, walking outside. As soon as the kids saw her, they quickly quietened down and made their single file line even neater.

“Good morning my students, you may enter now and take your seats.” Stacy said after clearing her throat. The students looked like they were around thirteen years of age, all of them being Fairies but there was a few subspecies of Fairies as well. They all at a slow pace walked in and took their seats, looking at the books that were in front of them. Some sighed while others looked more exited as they knew what today was. Stacy walked over to the chalkboard, standing in front of it so the whole class of young students could see her.

“Alright class, as you may have noticed, it is magic day. I know some of you love it, and I know some of you just hate it. Either way, we'll be going through it together once again. Now after the register is done, we will start straight away.” The Fairy walked over to her desk, as soon as she finished speaking the students started talking amongst each other, Stacy sighed as it was going to be another time where she had to shout while doing the register. She opened a drawer and grabbed a piece of paper that had all the student's names on it, the names were written in a list and next to the names were boxes which had to be marked to check if the student was present. Stacy cleared her throat.

“Alright! Quiet down now! As soon as we get this thing done, the sooner we can begin. Any time wasted here will just be added on to your break.” After she shouted that, the class quickly quieted down. Stacy then began calling out each student's name, marking the register accordingly. After a few moments, the register was complete, and the students saw that as a chance to start talking again. Stacy put the completed register in to a different drawer and stood back up, having to shout to get the class' attention again as she walked back over in front of the chalkboard.

“Alright listen! What I said about the register goes for everything else, you waste my time then I waste yours. So! Let us begin. The previous magic day we were looking at the concept of magic and we shall be continuing with that. Last time we- oww!” Stacy squeaked, the class looked to her, confused.

“...What's wrong Miss?” One of the students asked.

“Uhh... I don't know I just felt a random pain in my- oww! I think there's a stone in my shoe... Sorry class, hang on.” Stacy lifted her foot up and grabbed the heel of her flat, pushing it off to remove her shoe. She then lifted it up and shook it slightly, trying to empty the stone in to her hand. What she saw wasn't a stone though, her and the class looked in disbelief when they saw what it was.

“Ugh... I'm... I'm... I'm out... I'm alive... Oh my friggen... Just... Just why...” What came out of her shoe was a tiny Asuna, laying on Stacy's hand while looking like she wanted to cry. After a few moments of silence, the class began to laugh loudly and Stacy blushed bright red in the face as she went over to her desk and sat down, placing Asuna on the table.

“...What... What were you doing in there... Now my students are going to think of me as some... Some... You know!” The Fairy teacher loudly whispered to her, her bright blush still showing.

“I was sleeping! Last night you said I could sleep wherever I wanted! I didn't know that was one of your shoes!” Asuna angrily replied, Stacy felt incredibly embarrassed.

“Y-You could have easily gotten out by turning in to water couldn't have you?! You're a Water Sprite!” Stacy loudly whispered back.

“Yeah well I can't turn in to water when my wings have been crushed! I nearly died in there! And just just just I stink so bad now!” Asuna argued as she sniffed herself, feeling sick.

“F-Fine fine I'm sorry I'm sorry... I'll heal your wings back in a moment, let me just... Sort this class out...” Stacy took some deep breaths and after she got rid of most of her blush she put her shoe back on and stood up, going to confront her now seemingly uncontrollable class.

“L-Listen now! T-That was just an accident! We've wasted too much time and we need to continue, so hurry up and get your giggles out of your systems!” The class was pretty rowdy, but they knew that they didn't want their break being taken away from them so they eventually all calmed down. They weren't going to forget this day they all thought.

“Okay... Ahem, to continue what I was saying before, we were looking at the concept of magic and last time we were looking at the different ways magic can be cast. Since now we know about casting magic, we shall be now looking at the different types of magic. There is all kinds of magic out there just waiting to be learned, and sometimes the magic you learn defines who you are as a person. Let's take for example...” Stacy turned around and picked up the piece of chalk, she then wrote a word on the board that was big enough for everyone to see. She then turned around and the word she wrote was “Healing”.

“Let's take Healing Magic as an example, for a person to devote their time to learn the ways of healing, the person could be someone who cares about others quite a lot and would do anything to help them, the person could also be a hard worker, etcetera etcetera. Now, I know we have a few healers in here, would anyone like to come up and demonstrate their magic?” Stacy asked, there didn't seem to be any volunteers which made the Fairy teacher sigh, putting her hands on her hips.

“Ureth, Gina, Zen, Orah, I know you four are the only ones here who can use healing magic, so don't make me pick one of you instead.” The Fairy Teacher said, and after a few moments one of the students stood up and walked to the front of the class. The student was a girl, she didn't have any clothes but she had an accessory in her short hair which was a pink flower. Her hair was green, which matched her green eyes. Her skin was also a Caucasian colour, her wings being green as well.

“I'll demonstrate then...” The young Fairy unenthusiastically muttered. Stacy gently picked up Asuna and held her in her open hand near the student.

“Good Gina, now on three, we will both focus our healing power and hopefully, this... Poor Water Sprite's wings will heal back.” Stacy told, Gina nodded as they both counted to three and after they did so they focused on Asuna's wings. Stacy made sure to do most of the work, not wanting Gina to out do herself and eventually Asuna's wings were as good as new.

“Ugh took yas long enough, my back was killing me.” Asuna thanked, Stacy gently placed her on the floor and and grew the Water Sprite to Human height, what also seemed to grow was the stench of Stacy's foot that came from Asuna's body. It wasn't long before the students that had clothing would cover their noses with their shirts.

“...And class since we're discussing magic I will be demonstrating a magic which restores magic energy so this Water Sprite can turn in to water to get rid of this smell.” The class giggled as Stacy put a hand on Asuna's shoulder, focusing really hard with a finger and thumb on her nose. Asuna felt all her magic energy coming back to her slowly until eventually it was completely restored. Without hesitating the Water Sprite turned in to her water form and after a minute she turned her body back to her Fairy form.

“There... The smell is gone... And we will never talk about this again- This goes for you too you stupid kids! Or else!” Asuna threatened.

“Or else what you Foot Sprite?” Said the young Fairy sitting at the desk closest to Asuna, the class laughed from the comment. Asuna glared to the student who was a boy, wearing a grey coloured torn tunic, her also had purple eyes and black hair.

“Or else I'll... I'll... Dammit your kids... I can't do anything to you... Uhh... I'll tell all your parents that you all-” She was cut off as Stacy put a hand over her mouth, looking annoyed.

“You won't be doing anything Asuna... And you class won't be getting much break if this keeps up, there was no need for that comment Zack. Now enough with all the distractions, we need to keep going...” Stacy sighed as she let go of Asuna's mouth.

“What am I supposed to do then? I'm not joining in with this, this place bored the heck outta me when I used to be here as a kid.” Asuna complained.

“Oh yes you are joining in, you said you would help me with anything. Being my assistant today counts as anything so just be quiet and do what I ask you to do.” Stacy told her firmly, Asuna sighed with a shrug and walked over to the back of the classroom, leaning her back against the wall.

“Right, so for the last time, let us continue... Ahem, so yes magic sometimes defines who you are and those two types of magic that were just demonstrated aren't even close to just how many magic types are out there. For today we shall just be looking at magic that is commonly used by the general way of casting.” Stacy turned around and started to write on the board, as she started writing all she heard was a really loud yawn. She shrugged it off, but then she heard snoring which made her turn around with annoyance. The person snoring wasn't the students though, it was Asuna.

“Asuna! Cut that out! You're supposed to be helping!” Stacy shouted angrily, Asuna quickly opened her eyes.

“Yeah yeah just carry on Teach.” Asuna smugly said with a grin, if she was going to be helping in school, then she was going to enjoy it.

“Teach... You're not my student anymore! Ugh, just don't do it again...” Stacy then turned back around and continued writing. Asuna looked around, starting to feel the nostalgia that she liked and wanted more of it, her memories of being a big trouble maker all coming back to her. Some of the students were looking at her, more interested in her than whatever the teacher was doing. Asuna looked back to them with a grin as she turned her right hand in to water, aiming at Stacy and firing a water ball at the back of her head. She quickly turned her hand back to normal and acted like she hadn't done anything as Stacy had stopped writing on the board. The class kept their snickering at bay as the Fairy Teacher turned around, clearly looking annoyed.

“Okay... This is unacceptable... Asuna... I can tell it was you who done that... I take back my words about you being mature now...” She groaned, she didn't know what to do do either. Asuna was supposed to be helping her, instead she was going to make today hell if she continued. Stacy just sighed and turned back around to finish what she was writing. After a few more moments she put the chalk back down and faced the class.

“Okay class, if you look on the board you will see that I have written a few types of magic. We have Fire Magic, Water Magic, Healing Magic, Fairy Magic, Illusion Magic, Conjuring Magic, and lastly Lightning Magic. We have seven kinds of magic types here, some you might know of, some you might not. We will be going through each one, looking at the pros and cons of each one, and finally seeing each one in action. Now, I have one spell book for each of these magics that you may have seen on some of the desks, and the way we are going to do this is to slit up in to groups of three. I want each group to read through their spell book and write down in your own books some notes. Any kind of notes will do as long as they are relevant to the magic you are researching, after some time I will call for your attention and we will go through each group to see what they found out. Now everyone get yourselves in to your groups and choose which spell book you want to research.” After Stacy had finished speaking, her class got up and did what they were told. Some did it pretty lazily while others did it without much hesitation. Eventually all the pupils were in their groups and sitting around the desks that had a spell book on it.

“Asuna, make yourself useful by handing out these pencils.” Stacy ordered, Asuna reluctantly walked over and took a bunch before walking around the classroom, handing them out.

“Step right up step right up and get your pencils before I get whipped by the mistress for doing a bad job, you seen what she done to me before and I hear that's her new punishment for you kids too if you're naughty.” Asuna loudly spoke as she gave the pencils to the class, hearing this the class looked to Stacy, then to her feet with a gulp, not wanting the same fate as Asuna.

“Asuna! Stop speaking lies! If I had a punishment like that I wouldn't be hear right now!” Stacy shouted.

“Yeah you'd be in some porn business instead, that might suit you actually, you like to boss your students around and put people in your shoes and wear them so if you can just grab a dominatrix outfit you'd be good to go.” Asuna replied with a smug grin, Stacy blushed from the thought of it.

“A-Asuna keep that kind of discussion away from a place like t-this! Y-You're not supposed to be saying things like that in here!” Stacy shouted.

“Alright alright calm down calm down, geez. You wanted help right? I was only recommending a new career for you once you don't feel like teaching anymore.” Asuna said with a sigh, Stacy was going to reply but stopped herself and sat back down at her desk.

“...If I want career advice then I will ask for it... For now just help the class with whatever it is they need help with...” She said before calming down, getting out her own book and starting to write in to it.

Half of the school day had passed, and now it was break time. Stacy was outside of the school and went back inside after making sure her students were alright. She walked around the classroom, looking to see what progress was made, or more specifically, to see if anyone actually wrote anything. Some groups had written a fair amount, while others didn't do much and had just doodled instead of writing. After checking she went back over to her desk, going to get her lunch which was in a small container which had a lid on it. She was going to open the container, but she blinked twice to see that it was already open and inside of it was a recognisable magic signature.

“...Asuna...” She picked up the lid and set to the side, now able to see a tiny Asuna, eating away at her lunch. She had almost ate everything, all that was left was some fruit. Stacy poked Asuna's back, who in turn looked behind her to see who it was.

“Oh, hi Stacy!” She happily greeted, Stacy didn't look very amused.

“...This was my lunch... What the hell do you think you're doing!? You've made my day horrible! First you embarrass me in front of my class, then you make fun of me, and now you ate my food!” She shouted angrily.

“So? I'm sorry for before I guess but now I'm starving. I haven't eaten much ya know.” Asuna shrugged, going towards the fruit and eating it right in front of her.

“...I should kill you right now...” Stacy growled.

“A lot of people should have killed me by now, but here I am, alive and well and... Starving.” She scrammed the fruit down, Stacy glared all the while.

“...You were giving me career advice before, correct...?” She muttered, loud enough for Asuna to hear.

“Uh huh.” Asuna replied with a burp.

“Porn business was it... Well then... Let's get some early training.” She picked Asuna up and ripped her wings off, putting a finger over her mouth to hide the scream.

“Owww you bitch! What gives?!” Asuna shouted as Stacy raised her up to her eye level.

“What gives... What gives is you pissed me off! I said I wouldn't kill you... But I can do this.” Stacy kicked off her right shoe, picking it up and shoving Asuna in to it.

“H-Hey! I-I was kidding about the porn career thing! You're one of the best teachers in Felarya! Don't you dare put me back in this position!” Asuna struggled, Stacy just grinned.

“Don't worry... I'll be letting you back out as soon as I've finished teaching for today... For now just stay out of my sight.” With that Stacy held the shoe at the heel which made it hard for Asuna climb back out, but before she could get anywhere it was too late as Stacy put her foot in to the shoe and put her foot back on to the ground firmly, but not too firmly. She didn't get to eat, but she did get to feel a sense of relief that she can teach the next half of the day without Asuna messing it up.

After break was over, Stacy got up and walked outside. She called the students back inside and eventually they were all back at their desks, some looking not very enthusiastic to start working again. Some noticed that Asuna was missing, but shrugged it off. Stacy walked in front of the board and cleared her throat.

“Alright class, hope you enjoyed your break, but now we need to continue on. You may have noticed that my assistant is not around, the reason for that is she had to be somewhere else and she won't be able to be here for the rest of the day.” She explained, Stacy also seemed to be biting her lower lip for some reason, plus she flinched a few times as well.

“Are you alright Miss?” Asked one of the students.

“O-Oh yeah, I'm fine. Now let us continue on... Ahem, this morning I split you in to groups and each group had to research about a certain magic type, now we are going to feedback and witness the magic types first hand. Now, can the people who researched about Fire Magic feedback to us?” Stacy asked, also trying to hide the fact that Asuna was biting her foot which felt like painful pinches. The Fire Magic group looked to one another, not wanting to speak up until eventually two of them peer pressured their friend hard enough so he would feedback.

“Well... We learnt that Fire Magic is a magic you fight with... Umm... And you can also use it for things like making a fire for... Things.” The student spoke, Stacy gave a nervous smile as she expected a much more... Informative answer.

“G-Good work you three, yes Fire Magic is primarily used for offence, depending on how skilled the caster is, it can be a big force to be reckoned with. It can also be used for when you are out adventuring and you need to make a camp fire. Good work, Water Magic group you are next.” She explained, after asking for the next group one of the students spoke up without much hassle.

“We learned that Water Magic can be used for fighting with, and other things such as... Uhh... For when you need to control a river to change the current and stuff.” Was the reply.

“Nice, yes, Water Magic can be used for offence and it also has other uses such as controlling the river's current too. Healing Magic, next.”

This would repeat on until Stacy had gotten feedback from her entire class, it also seemed that Asuna had stopped struggling and Stacy was sure that her foot was bleeding.

“Okay class, took some time but now all know a bit about all of those magic types and hopefully you have been taking notes. I can't say enough how important taking notes is as it helps a lot, you might not think it does, but it does. Now, going on to the final thing so we can rap this day up. I will demonstrate all of those magics to you all, first, Fire magic.” She concentrated and made a small flame hover just above the palm of her right hand, making it visible enough for the class to show. After making sure everyone saw it, she used her water magic and made an orb of water replace the flame. She skipped the Healing Magic and Fairy Magic as she didn't really need to show those off and used Illusion magic next, making an Illusion of a Pixie Float which floated around the room before fading away. Next she used the Conjuration Magic and she summoned a Duiker, the class looked amazed by this one, Stacy saw that it gained their interest so she made a mental note of it.

“Alright class, the last magic I'm going to demonstrate is pretty dangerous so you might not get the best view of it as I'm going to show it as safely as I can.” Stacy then put both her hands in front of her and made a circular shape with them, she concentrated and made a small crackling ball of lightning appear in her hands. She only would show it for a few seconds before letting it fade away, not wanting to let a spark set fire to anything.

“And there we have it class, today we managed to understand a variety of magic types and the pros and cons of them. Some of you worked really well, some of you I think need to push yourselves  more- And you know who you are as well. On a final note, I want you all to think about what kinds of magic you want to learn. Like I said, magic can sometimes define who you are. Class, you're dismissed.” As soon as Stacy said that last word, all the students quickly rushed out, quickly making the room empty. The Fairy Teacher sat down at her desk, stretching her arms and legs with a long yawn, glad that she could relax now. She didn't need to teach for the next couple days either, which is always a nice plus.

“There... Work is done for a small while... Can do what I want now... Oh yeah.” She took her right shoe off, pouring Asuna out of it and on to the desk. She was covered in sweat from head to toe, plus she also had some blood on her that came from biting Stacy's foot hard enough. The Water Sprite also smelled worse than before, Stacy sniffed and quickly moved back away. Asuna looked around in a daze, trying to get her breath back as it was really hard to breathe in there. Stacy poked her, not sure if she was even alive.

“Uhh... You... Alright Asuna?” Stacy asked as she watched her struggle to sit up.

“Am... I... Alright... You say...? ...I... I... When my wings... Are back... I'm going to use my water blade... And cut your feet off... And shove them down your throat...” She weakly answered as she eventually sat up on her legs, looking upwards and panting.

“Ah, you're fine, good. Once we are back at my place then I'll heal you, I hope you know now not to be an asshole around me, I'm not going to take it, and I'm going to make you assist me.” Stacy stated as she stood up, going around the classroom to tidy everything up. Once the room looked the same as it was when she first entered this morning, she walked over to Asuna and picked up before putting her shoe back on, healing the cut on her foot as well.

“I mean it... You know... You cruel Fairy...” Asuna attempted to speak, still not getting her words out good enough.

“Me? Cruel? You can't be serious... Look, if I'm not going to kill you, best I can do is punish you. I took back my words about you being a mature, to me, you're still a kid, a kid that needs some discipline. I'll be giving you discipline for as long as you're with me, so just you keep trying to annoy me, you won't get away with it.” Stacy explained clearly as she had left the school, now she was flying back home. It took a bit of time, but she eventually made it back as she landed just outside by it. She put Asuna on the floor, then she crouched down and put a hand near her as she began healing her wings once again. Once done, she used the magic that could restore magic energy which made Asuna feel more healthy again. Asuna stood up and grew herself back to Human height, glaring at Stacy.

“...Punish me... You can't punish me! I'm mature! You're the one who can't take a joke you stupid friggen stupid foot Fairy!” Asuna shouted, her words didn't bother Stacy, but the stench that came from Asuna did.

“Ugh... Whatever just get rid of that smell... You're still going to be helping me today, and I'm not having you be around me smelling like that!” Stacy ordered, Asuna grumbled as she switched to and from her water form which got rid of the smell and the blood.

“There, happy Miss Foot Fetish? Why do you even have shoes and clothes anyway, you're a friggen Fairy! We all should just be normal and naked!” Asuna exclaimed.

“You better shut up about that foot thing, I'm not going to have you make nicknames for me about that for the time you're with me.” The Fairy Teacher told.

“Oh whatever... Anyways... Teaching is over, what now, Teach?” Asuna reluctantly asked.

“Now we... Stop calling me Teach too! I'm not your teacher anymore! Ugh, anyway, now we're heading to a library to meet up with a friend. It's in this Town so we don't have to go far, you just wait out here for a few seconds while I head inside for a few moments.” As soon as Stacy said that she flew in to her home, Asuna sighed and looked around. The memories she had forgotten about this Town were all slowly coming back to her as she looked around, suddenly she felt someone tap her on the back which made her turn around to check. In front of her now was a flat chested Fairy who had short red hair, she looked to the Water Sprite, then to a piece of paper which had a description on it.

“Let's see... Looks like an idiot, has stupid green skin that makes her look like a piece of snot from a giant Naga, has stupid wings and a stupid face. Looks like a match.” She said loudly and clearly, Asuna growled.

“Hey! What the hell! I haven't done anything to you! No need to say things like that about me!” Asuna shouted, the Fairy shown Asuna the paper.

“Ehh I was just matching what was described to me, seems I found the right person as I was told that you would react by being mad.” The Fairy stated.

“Whatever... What do you want?” Asuna asked.

“I was told to pass a message on to you.” The Fairy answered.

“A message? What is it?” Asuna asked once more, and what she got was a big punch to the face. She ended up falling on her behind, putting a hand on where she was hit.

“What the shits name in fucking hell was that for you stupid flat chested bitch!” Asuna angrily shouted, glaring at her.

“...That was the message, I was told to punch you in the face, cya now.” The Fairy took off and went to fly away. Asuna quickly got up and chased after her, jumping up and grabbing her leg before she could fly away.

“Hey! Let go shitlord! I ain't got any more messages to give to you!” She shouted, trying to fly away but failing.

“I've got a message to give pass on to you! The floor says hello!” Asuna put her other hand on the Fairy's leg and swung her down, smashing her down on to the ground. Asuna then quickly grabbed her hair and pulled her up, after pulling her up she grabbed the back of her neck and glared at her.

“Now, you give me a good reason for what you did before I-” Asuna was cut off as she heard someone shout her name, she looked to who it was and Stacy was behind her, looking mad.

“Asuna! You let her go right now!” She screamed, Asuna didn't do as ordered and shouted back.

“Why should I! She came over and just punched me in the face for no reason! I'm not letting that slide!” She argued.

“...Let me go... Before I turn you to ashes Water Sprite... It wasn't for no reason... I was told to punch you by that Storm Sprite...” The Fairy groaned, feeling dazed as her head had smacked the ground. Asuna remembered about Light, and when she calmed down she gently let the Fairy go.

“...Light told you to... Dammit Light...” Asuna facepalmed really hard.

“You really need to sort that anger out... It'll get you killed one day... Are you alright, Amy?” Stacy sighed as she walked over to the Fairy who seemed to be called Amy.

“Yeah... Only just got smashed in to floor super hard... It's okay...” Amy said sarcastically with a groan. Stacy took Amy's right arm and put it around her head, helping her up.

“Great... Asuna, isn't there anything you can't mess up? You ruined my school day, now you've just hammered one of my best friends in to the floor. Asuna just shrugged.

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PostSubject: Re: The Ultimate's super stories.   The Ultimate's super stories. Icon_minitimeWed May 28, 2014 7:35 am

Well, it's been a while since my last chapter... And just here to say that I'm not going to continue it for a while as I'm literally stuck with it, and it's just made me lose interest in it... However, I'm working on a new story instead and this is the prologue of it. I'll probably be working on this one for a while until I feel like going back to the Light and Asuna one, since I know people like that story and it's always annoying when a story is left unfinished. But yeah, here's Chapter 0 of my new story I call Enigma of Fate.
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Enigma of Fate.
Chapter 0 – “Same old same old.”

It was night time in Negav and there was a hooded woman walking alongside the pavement in one of the streets in Negav. She was dressed in a dark coloured robe and it was really dirty and torn in some parts. She was looking at the stores and shops as she walked past them, they all seemed to be closed until she came across a shop that was just about to close. She hurried over and stepped inside, being quickly greeted by what seemed to be the shop owner.

“Uhh I'm sorry but we're closed now, you'll have to come again tomorrow.” He told her with a gruff voice, he was tired from working all day and just wanted to go home right now.

“Oh... I'm sorry b-but can I just ask if you have any job openings?” The hooded woman asked rather hesitantly, the shop owner groaned and was going to quickly dismiss her but before he could guide her outside the woman stood her ground and wouldn't move. “Please! J-Just tell me what I have to do and I'll come here early in the morning and work straight away!”

“Look there's no job openings here right now... If we were hiring then there would have been a noticeboard or something similar outside of the shop.” The man firmly stated. “So please leave, or I'm going to have to call the authorities.” He said, getting his mobile device out. The woman didn't want to move, but didn't want to cause trouble either so with a sad sigh she turned around and walked out of the store.

The robed woman continued to walk down the street, her head pointed towards the ground. There was hardly anyone around, and each place she passed seemed to be closed. Suddenly, she picked up chatter in the distance and she lifted her head back up. Ahead of her was a bar and it looked like it was still accepting customers. She hurried over and stood outside of it, looking at the drunken Negavians who in turn looked at her.

“H-Hey! Whaddawe got 'ere?” One of the drunks slurred, the woman turned her head away to ignore the drunk, going to walk inside the bar. “Ohhhh I see 'ow it is!” He hiccuped. “Go get sssshat out by a Naga!” He drunkenly shouted. The woman continued to ignore him as she had already entered the bar, leaving the drunken men outside be as they started talking about if Naga's could even poop. They didn't seem to agree with each other and it just ended in a drunken brawl.

“Hmm...” The woman looked around, it was quite lively in here despite what time it was. She walked over to the counter, being greeted by a Human woman.

“Well you're a shady looking person, we seem to get you people a lot.” She laughed. “So, what're you buyin'?”

“Um... I'm not here to buy anything... But I was wondering if this place is hiring anyone.” She asked.

“Hiring? Uhh I think you'll have to take it up with the owner of this place, who unfortunately isn't here right now.” The lady explained. “I could hand him your resume if you have one on you.”

“I don't... I could write one though, I won't take long if you'll allow me.” She said, the barmaid shrugged as she started to clean a glass.

“Sure I guess.” She answered. The robed woman nodded as she went over to the nearest table that was free. She put a hand inside her robe and brought out her satchel, getting out a really worn out pencil and a dirty crumpled piece of paper. She opened the crumpled piece of paper up and started to write on it as best as she could, but it still wasn't very neat at all. As she was writing, she felt something fall on top of her head. She reached for it and placed it next to her work in progress resume. It was a Tomthumb, and he was stumbling to his feet.

“U-Ugh... D-Dammit Jerry! Dat w-was cheating!” He hiccuped, the woman suddenly felt another thing drop on her head. She grabbed it and rolled her eyes as it was Neera, she placed the Neera next to the Tomthumb.

“C-Cheating?! I-I'll cheat on your wife in a minute!” The Neera drunkenly shouted.

“Y-You'll do wat?! W-Why I oughta feed you to a Neko!” The Tomthumb argued back, the two Tinies carried on arguing until they were interrupted.

“Uh... I'm trying to concentrate here so... Could you two please fight somewhere else?” The hooded woman asked.

“Y-Ye 'ere dat Jerry? S-She wansus ta move!” The Tomthumb drunkenly said.

“Why we oughta s-show her 'oos boss!” With that, the two Tinies drunkly dived off the table and in to the woman's robe. Startled, the woman was about to take her robe off but stopped herself from doing so. She didn't want to take it off for some reason, and she growled to herself as she tried to put up with it. She tried to focus on her resume, but the Tines had somehow managed to climb up in to her hood.

“Hey actually the owner is here now, he left something here and had to come back.” The hooded woman turned her head with a startle to the person who spoke. She saw the it was barmaid, and there was a Human man in a suit standing next to her.

“I hear you would like to work here, we actually do have an opening soon so if you've got the required experience I wouldn't mind hiring you once the time comes.” The man told her. The woman's heart raced, she had been searching for such a long time and someone was finally offering to hire her. Suddenly, her hood fell back and it revealed her head. A lot of people stopped what they were doing and stared at the woman. She had long orange hair and big pointed ears with white tips on her head which resembled a fox's ears. Her skin was Caucasian but slightly darker toned and her eyes were light brown in colour, however, the shape of them started to slowly change and soon they looked like eyes from a wild snake, she also whiskers too.

“W-What fiend is that?!” Cried the barmaid, taking a step back in shock. The woman coward back in her seat a bit as she knew what was going to happen, and it did. The people inside the bar started getting rowdy and the woman was suddenly grabbed.

“Sorry but we don't accept your kind in here.” The bar owner coldly stated as he tried to drag her out of the bar, however he couldn't seem to move the woman out of her seat. She had grabbed the edges of the table and wasn't budging, starting to get really upset. People in the bar started throwing stuff at her, one even throwing a half full glass bottle and it hit her over the head. It hurt her and blood started dripping from her head, but she still wasn't budging as she started to cry. It had been years and years, and finally she found a place that was going to offer a job but because of her appearance it suddenly denied her all chance of ever working here.

“She isn't moving... Samantha, call the authorities.” The bar owner ordered, the barmaid was the one to nod and quickly grab the phone. The robed woman heard the order and it frightened her, she didn't want any trouble but it was all she was doing at this point and now it started to anger her. She rocketed up from her seat and glared at the bar owner, grabbing the upper part of his blazer.

“Listen here, I'm sick of being treated like this everywhere I go! I've done nothing wrong! Is it my ears that offend you? Is it my eyes that annoy you?” She suddenly let go of him and took off her robe, folding it up while keeping her eyes glued to him. There was also a loud gasp as people saw something on the woman's lower back. “Or is it my tails?” She had five long orange tails, all of them slowly waving about. “I should just demolish this disgusting place for what it is, but you know what, I'm better than that, better than all of you scum!” She reiterated by glaring at everyone else in the bar, turning her head back to the bar owner. “I am going to leave you all be... But listen mister... If you, or anyone else in this bar treat anyone the same way you treated me today, you will all wake up with these jammed in to your throats.” She opened her mouth, hissing loudly as two large fangs descended from her upper canine teeth. Her ears then flicked as she heard sirens outside of the bar, it seemed the police were already in the area and she had to make an escape. The woman looked around for a back exit and luckily she saw a door near the back of the bar and she ran towards it, barging through it with her shoulder and ending up on an alleyway. She put her robe back on and ran onward, unfortunately she heard people behind her running after her.

“This is the MSD! Stop right there!” The lead officer called, the woman didn't do what she was told though and ran on. She sprinted through a very linear alleyway, knocking over whatever she could behind her to slow the police down. Eventually she came to a dead end and she leaned her back against a large wall. She panicked and looked around, she was trapped and she could hear the police getting closer and closer until.

“There's nowhere left to run! Put your hands! ...Huh?” The officer blinked as he reached the corner and he got his flash light out. The woman who he was chasing after had vanished. He turned to his fellow policemen with a confused expression on his face. The other offices wondered what was wrong, until they looked around the corner themselves to see the woman had gone.

“Dammit! We were right behind her! How could we let her escape!” The lead officer complained. “I mean... She was in our sights...” He groaned, looking at a fox that was walking past. He kicked it as hard as he could in frustration and the fox flew, slamming in to the wall with a loud whine. “Let's go back to the bar... We've lost her, but she won't get far when get some details about her.” With that the officers walked away.

After a short while, the fox that was kicked slowly got to it's feet. It limped around, looking like it was checking the area. After it finished checking, it went to the back wall and suddenly it started to morph. It's paws became hands, it's hind legs turned in to Human legs and it's chest turned in to a Human woman's chest. It had transformed in to the woman that was being chased by the police.

“Ugh... Damn... He kicked me hard...” She shook her head, she was also naked as well since transforming in to a fox made her lose her clothes. She quickly found all her clothing though and put it all back on, sighing once she put her hood back up. “Guess... It's time to head back home...” With another sigh she began to make her way out of the alley. She made sure to check her corners, and with some luck she was able to get away from the area stealthily. She was holding her side where she was kicked, it was hurting a bit which then suddenly reminded her, she had been bleeding from the head. All the adrenaline from before had made her forget all about it, and now that she had remembered it was starting to sting. “Oww... Hope I heal soon...”

It was a long walk, but eventually she was almost home. She had walked from Negav's middle tier to Negav's lower tier, and finally to the entrance of Negav's underground. She walked on through, having gone in and out of this passageway many, many times before. She travelled down, and down, and down until she reached the enormous cavern known as The Pit. As she walked down she noticed that there was a lot of people sleeping, but the sad truth was that she could never tell if some of them were actually sleeping, or if they were dead. The only way to find out was to wake up in the morning and see who was up and who wasn't. There seemed to be nothing out of the ordinary for the woman though as she had seen everything that needed to be saw. As she walked deeper and deeper in to the cavern, she saw a familiar person ahead who was sitting on a large rock that was attached to the wall. He was an Elf with pale yellow skin and navy blue hair. His green eyes spotted the woman and he hopped over to her with a grin.

“Heyyy sexy~ You're back late! How'd job huntin' go?” He asked with a joyful smile. The woman shook her head with a sad expression.

“Not good... So same old same old.” She sighed. “Why are you up so late?” She asked him.

“Well I was worried about you of course haha! It's all doom and gloom down here and you're one of the more nicer people who lives here, plus we're friends! We've been over this many times!” He smiled. His clothes were all torn and dirty, but he wore black and red coloured trainers with dirty white socks, short pale green cargo pants, a dirty red vest and a short torn green sleeveless denim jacket over it that didn't seem to fit him at all considering it only reached down to his waist. He also wore dirty red goggles on his forehead too.

“You? Worried about me? Look Zach, I have told you many times that I can take care of myself. And... I'm really tired so I just want to go get some sleep.” She yawned.

“Hmph, well look, Layla, at least let me escort you to your bed.” He pouted, the woman who's name appeared to be Layla gave a sigh, but nodded.

“Fine.” Layla replied and the two walked deeper in to The Pit. It took a bit of walking, but they eventually reached Layla's sleeping bag. It was incredibly smelly and dirty, and it was never ever pleasant to sleep in. It was also surrounded by other smelly sleeping bags with people sleeping in them, so she didn't have almost any space for herself.

“Right, here we are, hope you have a wonderful sleep my love.” He laughed quietly, Layla rolled her eyes.

“I'm not your love... If I was, you wouldn't wake up to breakfast in bed every morning, but I would.” She shown her fangs as she teased. Zach cringed from the thought.

“Alright alright, I'm sure there's a even nicer Vampire Kitsune out there just waiting for my affection anyway.” He grinned as he began to walk away. “Cya later then.” He waved, Layla watched him go before carefully treading over to her sleeping bag. After awkwardly making it without stepping on anyone, she took off her robe and lied down, taking off her dirty black and incredibly worn out boots as well and placing them near her legs. She used her robe as a blanket and hid herself under it. Layla closed her eyes and sighed, thinking over today's events. She had survived another day in The Pit, and had walked around Negav almost all night searching for a job that didn't end well. Suddenly, she felt something moving about on her body, it was probably just a couple of bugs which was nothing new, but she felt them crawl on to her face. She lifted her robe up in annoyance and grabbed the couple of bugs in her hands, however she was shocked to see that these weren't insects, these were the two Tinies she met in the bar.

“Ugh... My head... Damn I drank too much...” The Tomthumb groaned.

“Same here... Were are we...” The Neera muttered.

“...What... Are you two...” Layla said dumbfound.

“... Uh oh...” The tow Tinies gasped in union, the first thing that came to their heads was that they got captured while drunk and were now going to be some woman's midnight snack. They tried to struggle, but they couldn't do much due to their migraines. Instead, they both ended up vomiting on Layla's face.

“...Are you kidding me...” Layla moaned, she didn't seem very impressed. The two Tinies realized what they had done, and both just gave her an awkward smile.
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PostSubject: Re: The Ultimate's super stories.   The Ultimate's super stories. Icon_minitimeThu Jun 05, 2014 6:36 pm

Ohay! It's the girl Nyaha rped with in Negav the other day! ^_^ Cool to see her in a story.

I don't read many stories, but of the ones I have read few ever seem to take into account racism in Negav, so it's nice (bittersweet) to see you bring it to light. The only issue I have is that she's also a vampire, so it isn't certain that the bar patrobs and owner are being racist; perhaps it's her unholy nature putting them off.

Another thing I think you could improve is some of your uses of ambiguity. For example:
You wrote:
"Hmph, well look, Layla, at least let me escort you to your bed.” He pouted, the woman who's name appeared to be Layla gave a sigh, but nodded.

Something about you writing that her name "appeared to be" Layla detracts from the story. In a sense, it makes the narrator sound unsure, but more in a "no duh" way than a foreshadowy way. Her name is Layla. We've seen her called that. There's no reason for the narrator to be unsure about the fact that her name is Layla, know what I mean?

Other than that, it seems like a pretty interesting slice of life story with a unique but troubled character. I look forward to reading more.

P.S. read and wrote all this on Wii U. Yay wireless~
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PostSubject: Re: The Ultimate's super stories.   The Ultimate's super stories. Icon_minitimeFri Jun 06, 2014 6:31 am

Nyaha wrote:
Ohay! It's the girl Nyaha rped with in Negav the other day! ^_^ Cool to see her in a story.
I did mention it to you that I made her for a story. ^^;

Nyaha wrote:
The only issue I have is that she's also a vampire, so it isn't certain that the bar patrobs and owner are being racist; perhaps it's her unholy nature putting them off.
Well in my view, if you're in a bar that seems to only accept Humans, (considering how everyone in the bar reacted to her Kitsune features and how the only people in the bar I mentioned were Humans) a Vampire isn't going to get a free pass. Plus if you know what kind of reputations Vampires have, then that also decreases the chance further of being allowed in. However I understand what you mean.

Nyaha wrote:
Another thing I think you could improve is some of your uses of ambiguity. For example:
You wrote:
"Hmph, well look, Layla, at least let me escort you to your bed.” He pouted, the woman who's name appeared to be Layla gave a sigh, but nodded.

Something about you writing that her name "appeared to be" Layla detracts from the story. In a sense, it makes the narrator sound unsure, but more in a "no duh" way than a foreshadowy way. Her name is Layla. We've seen her called that. There's no reason for the narrator to be unsure about the fact that her name is Layla, know what I mean?
I'll make sure to keep that in mind for next time then, but when I wrote that part it was just to make it official that her name was Layla and I didn't see anything wrong with it ruining the flow, but yeah I'll keep it in mind.

Thanks for the feedback though, t'was appreciative. ^^
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Welp, this ain't no story but figured I'd post it in my ol' dead story thread anyway because saves making a new thread about something I won't really be making many more of. Anyway, I made a poem!

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