A good idea?

Hello there

After finishing my last "Vorabitor" Exam (yay!) I#m thinking about an idea, but I wanted first to ask how the people who knows my stories and characters like the idea. After I've written the origin story of Marya (which was by the way inspirds by nsk's and zoekins story about Shiva) I'm thinking about a longer story which I'm writting from time to time which containes the origin of my characters; Trisha, Sanix, Rev, Josh and Luna.

What do you mean? Would such a story be interesting enough to read? Of course I'll finish first my next stories ^^

Looking forward to your opinion

It's a good idea
But this time you will do more developpment in your story and avoid the fast relationship by example Vale accept too quickly to believe in Sanix and Trisha etc...
In clear it's an ambitious project
Goiod luck my friend

gwadahunter2222 wrote:

It's a good idea
But this time you will do more developpment in your story and avoid the fast relationship by example Vale accept too quickly to believe in Sanix and Trisha etc...
In clear it's an ambitious project
Goiod luck my friend

Well the fast relationship I had already explained; If you have only two choices, doing your job, coming home and maybe get killed because you are useless from that moment on (because they had all artifacts) or to trust somebody who wants to help you and risk that hes betraying you ...

Well I think option2 is at least altough the best

And I don't say that she trusts them 100%

Edit: I understand the criticism on the fast relationship but it's like I'm seeing it. Vale is a very wide character which thinks about survive at least, wouldn't she have this ambition she would already be dead after the time at the Reptiles Eye because there she was only a tool, now she has the chance to change things and well; if there are two naive people who helps her? That would be her first mind and with time she will become a closer friend, but you'll see in the future that there is not everywhere happy sunshine

Well, personally, I like the idea.

Your stories are very good, and I never regret reading one.

Please go on.

I think it can be a good idea
It can really help to make your characters deeper ^^