My charector descriptions.

Emerald

Race: Human/Fairy (she's half human and half fairy)
Sex: Female
Age:15
Size: 5 foot 6
Eye color:Bright Blue
Hair color:Bright green
Hair length: Shoulder
Prey/Pred: Emerald is a predator using size altering magic to shrink her prey to a bite sized meal.
Special Abilities/features; Emerald wears a small gold ring on her right hand with a ruby embedded into it,Emerald can communicate with dryads and Hor'thi on a telepathic level.She also has two stomachs one for storing prey and one for digesting

Emerald is an average teenager,well as average as a half fairy can be,Her father was human and her mother a fairy.Emerald grew up in a fairy society she never knew her father so it was the only life she knew,Due to something that happened to her mother Emerald was born without wings but this didn't stop her from having fun.Growing up with fairy's gave Emerald a great sense of humour and she is constantly playing pranks on humans and neko's alike.Emerald's apearence is that of a human but she has a couple of small antennae hiding beneath her hair which means she can easily disguise herself as a human to lure prey unsuspectingly to where the pack she belongs to lies in wait.Due to the way she was raised Emerald prefers to be 'all natural' like her siblings.

At a young age Emeralds mother started feeding her small things like tombthumbs or neera,before long however Emarald started experminating trying new things,humans and neko's her mother shrunk for her.At the age of seven Emerald had been out walking she encountered a couple of perverted humans when they atacked Emarald shielded herself and did things she didn't quite understand but when she opened her eyes she saw a couple of small screaming humans upon the floor and from that day on she begun hunting on her own happily shrinking down her prey.Emerald can store prey in one of her stomachs for a great period of time before she decides to digest them,she can choose to only digest on prey at a time so she can live off groups of humans for a long period of time meaning she a lot of spare time,Emerald just loves the way her prey struggles in both of her stomachs.

At Seven years old Emerald found a small egg which she could fit in her hand,curious Emerald took the egg to her tree top home where she nurtured it and a few weeks later the egg hatched in her palm,Emerald was surprised when a small naga emerged from the egg.Emerald called the naga Hor'thi and looked after the tiny naga watching over her as she grew,over the years Emerald came to think of Hor'thi as a daughter.

Crimson

Race:Fairy
Sex: Female
Age: 18
Size: any size she up to 100ft
Eye color: Blue
Hair color:Blue with red streaks
Hair length:Shoulder
Prey/Pred: Pred

Crimson was born three whole years before Emerald making the two half-sisters and this is how Crimson treats Emarald.She looks out for her,protecing Emerald from any predators who would make a meal out of her often growing to sizes to match them,if the predators don't listen to reason Crimson resorts to violence in order to protct Emerald,she calls this aggresive negotiations.When Crimson travels with Emerald and Hor'thi she prefers to keep them on her shoulders,most of the time shrinking Emerald down,but this also carries a danger as at that size Hor'thi doesn't recognise her as a mother and Crimson has to keep an eye on her so she doesn't eat Emerald.

Crimson's nature is calm and playfull most of the time unless of course one of her friends or family is in danger then she becomes stern and serious.Crimson discovered a 'special'way to use humans not just as food but also to pleasure herself.Due to events in her past Crimson unfortunatly doesn't have any trust for naga's however she has made an exeption in the case of Hor'thi who is like a niece to her.

Like most Fairies Crimson hates wearing clothes,she hates them as much as she hates tasting clothes so prefers to strip her prey before eating them.When she eats her prey she tends to tease them by playing with them,usually sitting on them or flicking them into the air with her feet.When Crimson is in a particularly cruel mood she will often force her prey onto her stomach forcing them to listen to the screaming and struggles of there comrades waiting until they stop before swallowing the prey she has left.

Hor'thi

Race:Naga
Sex: Female
Age: 8
Size: (she is no bigger than a human's arm)
Eye color: Emerald green
Hair color:Firey red
Hair length: Shoulder
Prey/Pred: Predator (she mostly eats what Emerald shrinks down for her)
Special Abilities/features; Hor'thi has a great controll over nature and can easily camoflage into her surroundings.She also has venom she can use to paralyze prey or people who anoy her.

Hor'thi hates her size and can't wait for the day when she gets bigger,because then she will be human sized,Hor'thi is immensly proud of her scales there a bright blue shade and hor'thi will boast about them whenever she can,although sometimes this gets herself into trouble.Hor'thi just loves the taste of humans although she can only digest one over a period of two weeks this doesn't bother her and she often eats mre than one,this has a draw back as she finds herself unable to move from the spot the weight being too much for her.

At her size Hor'thi has many predators normal sized naga's,dridders and sometimes even humans will try and eat her but she feels safe as long as her mother Emerald's around.Hor'thi is a giggler she giggles at the most inapropriate times this can often runi Emeralds hunt or even fun.Hor'thi takes pride in her magic skills which she learnt off passing mages...before she,Emerald and Crimson eat them that is,she often uses her magic to help with the local neera village,summoning rain to help with there crops.

Due to the fact Hor'thi helps out at the neera village they often treat her as a god sending her offering such as fruit or sacrifices of neera,they consider it an honour to be eaten by her Hor'thi just finds it cute she just has 'her way' with the neera before sending them away back to there village.

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So yeah these are three of my main charectors i will be using for roleplaying or storys and please constructive critism is welcome.

Interesting, I knew you can get small Naga's, but I didn't expect one to be that small. If Emerald is part human, wouldn't that make her a cannibal in a way.

Where did Hor'thi's name come from? You don't see names like that often.

vegeta002 wrote:

Where did Hor'thi's name come from? You don't see names like that often.

says the one who came up with "Ha'dara" XD

well emerald basicly eats them because she enjoys the taste of them and it's mostly due to the way she was raised and fed by her mother.

And hor'thi's name came from a purely random idea which i just happened to have in my head at the time.

Reptillian wrote:

vegeta002 wrote:

Where did Hor'thi's name come from? You don't see names like that often.

says the one who came up with "Ha'dara" XD

Actually, Ha'Dara is Bajoran. I borrowed it.

slug_man wrote:

well emerald basicly eats them because she enjoys the taste of them and it's mostly due to the way she was raised and fed by her mother.

Does she know she is part Human?

I believe the fact Emarald is part human is a fact her family keeps from her.

slug_man wrote:

Emerald

Race: Human/Fairy (she's half human and half fairy)
Sex: Female
Age:15
Size: 5 foot 6
Eye color:Bright Blue
Hair color:Bright green
Hair length: Shoulder
Prey/Pred: Emerald is a predator using size altering magic to shrink her prey to a bite sized meal.
Special Abilities/features; Emerald wears a small gold ring on her right hand with a ruby embedded into it,Emerald can communicate with dryads and Hor'thi on a telepathic level.She also has two stomachs one for storing prey and one for digesting

Emerald is an average teenager,well as average as a half fairy can be,Her father was human and her mother a fairy.Emerald grew up in a fairy society she never knew her father so it was the only life she knew,Due to something that happened to her mother Emerald was born without wings

Actually, a fairy's magic is stored in their wings, so if she didn't have any, she wouldn't be able to use any fairy magic. Also, the dryad link is a very special one, not something that can be tapped into. In fact, the only way to do so for a non-dryad is to have a dryad share a once-in-a-lifetime link with them. And then that only connects them to that specific dryad, not the network itself.

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but this didn't stop her from having fun.Growing up with fairy's gave Emerald a great sense of humour and she is constantly playing pranks on humans and neko's alike.Emerald's apearence is that of a human but she has a couple of small antennae hiding beneath her hair which means she can easily disguise herself as a human to lure prey unsuspectingly to where the pack she belongs to lies in wait.Due to the way she was raised Emerald prefers to be 'all natural' like her siblings.

Ah, well, given her age, it would probably be tactful to have her stay dressed, 'all natural' is really only okay when depicting characters over the age of 18. Not a within-Felaryan law, but you can't draw her unless she's covered up, sorry. >>

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At a young age Emeralds mother started feeding her small things like tombthumbs or neera,before long however Emarald started experminating trying new things,humans and neko's her mother shrunk for her.At the age of seven Emerald had been out walking she encountered a couple of perverted humans when they atacked Emarald shielded herself and did things she didn't quite understand but when she opened her eyes she saw a couple of small screaming humans upon the floor and from that day on she begun hunting on her own happily shrinking down her prey.Emerald can store prey in one of her stomachs for a great period of time before she decides to digest them,she can choose to only digest on prey at a time so she can live off groups of humans for a long period of time meaning she a lot of spare time,Emerald just loves the way her prey struggles in both of her stomachs.

Two stomachs, of which she has control over the functions of... I think I'd like for you to explain the reasoning behind that. That isn't something humans possess, and I don't know of it being a fairy trait either. Leviathan mermaids and some nagas possess two stomachs, and Katrika, thanks to her adaptive trait, can hold back digestion, but I don't see those as traits that make much sense for Emerald.

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At Seven years old Emerald found a small egg which she could fit in her hand,curious Emerald took the egg to her tree top home where she nurtured it and a few weeks later the egg hatched in her palm,Emerald was surprised when a small naga emerged from the egg.Emerald called the naga Hor'thi and looked after the tiny naga watching over her as she grew,over the years Emerald came to think of Hor'thi as a daughter.

If she is 15, wouldn't that make Hor'thi something more of a sibling? And at the age she found Hor'thi, I have difficulty believing that a fairy child not only made the choice not to eat what would have been easy prey, but to have parental responsibility. Perhaps she sort of adopted Hor'thi as a 'pet' and her attachment meant that her parents would have to look out for the little naga, and they were raised together?

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Hor'thi

Race:Naga
Sex: Female
Age: 8
Size: (she is no bigger than a human's arm)
Eye color: Emerald green
Hair color:Firey red
Hair length: Shoulder
Prey/Pred: Predator (she mostly eats what Emerald shrinks down for her)
Special Abilities/features; Hor'thi has a great controll over nature and can easily camoflage into her surroundings.She also has venom she can use to paralyze prey or people who anoy her.

Hor'thi hates her size and can't wait for the day when she gets bigger,because then she will be human sized,Hor'thi is immensly proud of her scales there a bright blue shade and hor'thi will boast about them whenever she can,although sometimes this gets herself into trouble.Hor'thi just loves the taste of humans although she can only digest one over a period of two weeks this doesn't bother her and she often eats mre than one,this has a draw back as she finds herself unable to move from the spot the weight being too much for her.

I'm just assuming that what you're talking about is humans that have been shrunken down for her to eat. At that size, she would probably have difficulty eating a three-inch tiny, though I don't think it would weigh her down as described. Maybe one a day, though a naga's metabolism isn't nearly as slow as a snake's. She'd likely have to eat more often than that.

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At her size Hor'thi has many predators normal sized naga's,dridders and sometimes even humans will try and eat her but she feels safe as long as her mother Emerald's around.Hor'thi is a giggler she giggles at the most inapropriate times this can often runi Emeralds hunt or even fun.Hor'thi takes pride in her magic skills which she learnt off passing mages...

Hor'thi... Shouldn't be able to able to use magic at such a very young age I'm afraid. >> The only nagas that are said to use magic easily from early on are diamond and emerald nagas, and ice nagas can use some ice magic early on as I've seen. Other than that, Since it seems that she's a young human-sized naga, then she might have the potential to learn magic in her adulthood; for giant nagas, it's supposed to only appear later in their lives, for reference.

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before she,Emerald and Crimson eat them that is,she often uses her magic to help with the local neera village,summoning rain to help with there crops.

Due to the fact Hor'thi helps out at the neera village they often treat her as a god sending her offering such as fruit or sacrifices of neera,they consider it an honour to be eaten by her Hor'thi just finds it cute she just has 'her way' with the neera before sending them away back to there village.

... Small-time rain-god? I've already said what I thought about the magic. The neera behavior, I'm pretty sure that any predator that appears, they'd hide, and aren't stupid @_@. That's kind of not fair to neera, since they are very much survivalists and likely don't need to rely on crops for food. I can't really think of any logic behind how they'd believe an eight-year-old naga to be their 'god'.

ugh i can see just by reading that i'm gonna need to redo my charector design just a few things though

1. not once did i mention emerald used fairy magic i said she used size altering magic but that doesn't have to be fairy magic granted she is upposed to be half human.

2.she can only communicate telepathicly with dryads because for some reason she can't talk properly around dryads.

3.i just wrote a description and wasn't planning on drawing her.

4.the double stomach thing is something i need to change

5.Emerald only has parental responsibilaty due to the way she was brought up and again she is only half fairy

6.Hor'thi is not an ordinary naga she is supposed to be just a little bigger than neera's and quite weak she can only eat a couple of things before she feels weighed down while she has powerfull tail muscles she is not very strong when it comes to things like eatin although i'm gonna completly rework Hor'thiand her neera friends.

slug_man wrote:

ugh i can see just by reading that i'm gonna need to redo my charector design just a few things though

1. not once did i mention emerald used fairy magic i said she used size altering magic but that doesn't have to be fairy magic granted she is upposed to be half human.

2.she can only communicate telepathicly with dryads because for some reason she can't talk properly around dryads.

3.i just wrote a description and wasn't planning on drawing her.

4.the double stomach thing is something i need to change

5.Emerald only has parental responsibilaty due to the way she was brought up and again she is only half fairy

6.Hor'thi is not an ordinary naga she is supposed to be just a little bigger than neera's and quite weak she can only eat a couple of things before she feels weighed down while she has powerfull tail muscles she is not very strong when it comes to things like eatin although i'm gonna completly rework Hor'thiand her neera friends.

1. Size changing magic=Fairy magic

2. This is rather... odd. There is no proper reason for this. It's like you just did it because you wanted her to be unique.

3. It's still not very acceptable.

4. Yes.

5. ...What?

6. ...

slug_man wrote:

ugh i can see just by reading that i'm gonna need to redo my charector design just a few things though

I aaaaam just trying to help.

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1. not once did i mention emerald used fairy magic i said she used size altering magic but that doesn't have to be fairy magic granted she is upposed to be half human.

Well, logically, for the potency and ease of use she seems to be able to utilize growth magic, and since she isn't a powerful archmage or I assume doesn't have a massive amount of magic to generate that kind of spell on a whim, all signs point to fairy magic, which, if she has no fairy wings, she is incapable of.

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2.she can only communicate telepathicly with dryads because for some reason she can't talk properly around dryads.

I apologize but that.. That really isn't an acceptable explanation. >>

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3.i just wrote a description and wasn't planning on drawing her.

What I mean is, she's underage. Why would you have an underage girl around nude? It's not something that is acceptable.

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5.Emerald only has parental responsibilaty due to the way she was brought up and again she is only half fairy

The way she was brought up? I'm not sure what you mean by 'again she is only half fairy'.

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6.Hor'thi is not an ordinary naga she is supposed to be just a little bigger than neera's and quite weak she can only eat a couple of things before she feels weighed down while she has powerfull tail muscles she is not very strong when it comes to things like eatin although i'm gonna completly rework Hor'thiand her neera friends.

Well, I'm still not sure that after eating something it should affect her like eating a heavy rock. And I believe I need some clarification as for what size Hor'thi is supposed to be. You mentioned she can't wait to be human-sized, and then say now that she is supposed to be just a little bigger than a tiny.