My charectors

This is my giantess charector she's a work in progress and i need constructive criticism.

Dupe

Race:Giantess
Sex: Female
Age:28
Size: 90 Foot
Eye color: Navy Blue
Hair color: Crimson Red
Hair length: Shoulder
Prey/Pred: Pred

Dupe does not wear any clothes but she would if she could find some in her size as she grows jealous that smaller humans can wear clothes and she can't.She carries a pouch that hangs by her waist and the strap around her neck,she uses this pouch to carry around usefull items.The pouch has two equally large sectins one side Dupe uses for carrying her personaly items such as her journal,hairbrush or mirror,the second side of the pouch Dupe uses to carry fruits and vegtables she finds particularly tasty.

Dupe lives on one side of Jewel river staying close she that she can easily Get water which she uses to water the plants in her garden.Dupe made a small two mile wide area by wripping all the trees from the ground leaving it bare and in time grass grew where the trees used to be.Dupe used the free land to atract humans's and neko's to the area where they were allowed to make a small village the size of four football pitches,the village consites of reasonable sized shacks each occupied by two to four humans or neko's.Dupe looks after the village allowing them use of the land she claimed as her own,the villagers use it to play games or grow crops.The only down side to the villagers is each week they have to give Dupe a sacrifice of two or three people each week alternating between humans and neko's.

Dupe can be a clumsy hunter but at the end of the day she gets her meal,most of the time anyway,Dupe's favourite creature to hunt would be young naga's as long as there parents are not around,Dupe finds young naga's taste like tasty noodles.As for sleeping Dupe often sleeps next to her village but she is always carefull and set up the rule 'no walking about the village while i'm sleeping' as she will sometimes eat in her sleep,For extra protection for her village Dupe sleeps with her arm wrapped around the village close but not close enough to actually squash them.

Dupe's relationship with those in her little village is kind usually to those outside of the prison if they were inside the prison however she would automaticly make herself judge,jury and executionerlistening to each prisoners acount of what happened before she decides wether she eats them or lets them live.The only reason she does this is due to her upbringing she originates from a different world to felarya where she was raised by a kind loving giantess and her wife teaching her right and wrong and that evil beings deserved to be punished and it was there place to punish them.
Her whole entire defination of good and evil is strange and will sometimes make stuff up like punishing humans or cutting down trees or killing non-sentients but Dupe rarely does this unless she is very hungry,more often than not Dupe sees evil as such things as murder or assault even muggins,rape or simply stealing or even an upset woman slapping a man.But Dupe's view of good is basicly the opposite of the things she sees as evil but this was mostly due to her upbringing.

Dupe is a huge startrek fan she even changed the borgs line of "we are the borg resistance is futile"to her own catch phrase of "i am hungry resistance is useless" Dupe only found out about star trek on her travels,she came across a small outdoor theatre were they were showing a startrek marathon and fom then on she was hooked although she only saw a hundred episodes before falling asleep.Dupe's personality on the whole is calm and happy but when she is talking to her prey she becomes calm and serious and when she gets bored of her conversation she will say "i'm gonna eat you now"and that would usually end the conversation due to the fact she usually ate her prey afterwards.

Jenny

Race:Neko
Sex: Female
Age: 18
Size: 5 foot 6
Eye color: Blue
Hair color:silver
Hair length: Shoulder
Prey/Pred: Prey
Special Abilities/features; Jenny is blind.

At the age of six Jenny was abandoned in the middle of the felaryan jungleat that age Jenny had not become blind she became blind when she was older,lost and alone she had no one to call a friend and because she was blind she couldn't see anything in a way it was a bonus as Jenny can not be fooled by illusions.Jenny grew at a surprisingly fast pace knowing what the predators smelt like helped Jenny a lot as she was able to easily identify them and hide out of sight or not as was what sometimes happened.

Her personality is quite cheerfull despite not being able to see she tries to be as honest as possible which has sometimes gotten her into trouble with predators bu somehow to no fault of her own she has been able to get out of being eaten though she has no idea why sometimes she feels as though someone is looking out for her.


Telona

Race:Succubus
Sex: Female
Age: 18
Size: 5 foot 6
Eye color: Bright red
Hair color:Ginger
Hair length: Shoulder

Telona is a young succubus girl with bright red hair and pale skin colour,she wears a simple plain white top and a black miniskirt and she also does not wear shoes and has a pair of horns on her forehead.as well as this Telona has the tradition black demon wings.

Telona is actually a calm gentle girl despite her appearance she is actually a very shy girl preferring not to look at others when she is talking with them instead she will stare at nearby trees or rocks sometimes she will stare into the sky.She is very clumsy and accident prone as well as very sensitive the first insult even if not directed at her will send Telona running away in floods of tears.

While Telona was born and raised in hell she despises it completely preferring to wander around Felarya.Telona iis not very good at casting spells often meaning one sell but casting another of having it backfire in her face.Telona has a fear of fairys at the sight of one she will simply run in the opposite direction.

Telona is young in hell and even though she acts mature and sensible the other demons and succubi will often treat her as a child.Shy and calm though she may be Telona also has a Darker side she lets out when she is really angry at someone,In that case Telona will bring the person who angered her back with her to hell but this is very rare and only happens if her or one of her friends has been hurt,she is more lenient towards other demons and succubi preferring to just bite there kneecaps when she's mad at them.

That must be one small village if she can get her arm around it... or does she only get it partly around the village?

yeah i believe dupe only gets her arm partly around the village

If they're feeding her every week that must either be a big village or everyone has been eaten there. Or they're feeding her newborns.


Why does she know of Star Trek?

Why is she unable to skin a kensha to make clothes?

A Felaryan Trekkie? I like her choice in shows.

Jenny

Race:Neko
Sex: Female
Age: 18
Size: 5 foot 6
Eye color: Blue
Hair color:silver
Hair length: Shoulder
Prey/Pred: Prey
Special Abilities/features; Jenny is blind.

At the age of six Jenny was abandoned in the middle of the felaryan jungleat that age Jenny had not become blind she became blind when she was older,lost and alone she had no one to call a friend and because she was blind she couldn't see anything in a way it was a bonus as Jenny can not be fooled by illusions.Jenny grew at a surprisingly fast pace knowing what the predators smelt like helped Jenny a lot as she was able to easily identify them and hide out of sight or not as was what sometimes happened.

Her personality is quite cheerfull despite not being able to see she tries to be as honest as possible which has sometimes gotten her into trouble with predators bu somehow to no fault of her own she has been able to get out of being eaten though she has no idea why sometimes she feels as though someone is looking out for her.

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Here is a new charector she's a wok in progress because i still have a few things to work out about her.

no...just no...she is clearly a copy of toph from avatar: the last airbender

i'm sorry but i'm fairly sure that toph is copyrighted.

ok um sorry i edited it so she's not a mage but one question who's toph?

and anyway like i said she's a work in progress so things are gonna be changed.

Toph

it's not just the mage part...she is pretty much 70% Toph.

oh right but just so were clear how is she like toph?

even though being blind, she's seeing her surroundings by touching the ground...that's toph

and sorry about the 70% ... i hit the wrong keypad it's meant to say 40% ^^'

ok ok so clearing that up i edited it so that she does not sense things through touching the ground but rather through sound waces

Dude...that's DareDevil T_T'

aw man now your just picking on every little person my charector is like i have no idea how i could chnge her so she isn't like any copyrighted charector maybe it would be best if i just got rid of her though she's one of my favourite of my charectors.

i'm sorry but karbo stated, that we can't break copyrights...i think he did at least...

which is why i'm trying to make it so she does not break copyright so can't have her sense things through ground because it's too much like toph can't use sound waves because it's too much like daredevil do you have any problem with her just being blind?

...blindness can't be copyrighted ^^' ...well, maybe if someone was FREAKING rich, they would be able to make it copyrighted XD

and personally i think she was a good character...but copyrighting is bad ^^'

*sets off fireworks*

well thank god for that i was starting to get anoyed

sorry about that^^'

no it's ok realy *eye twitches*

Newest charector i created.

Telona


Race:Succubus
Sex: Female
Age: 180
Size: 5 foot 6
Eye color: Bright red
Hair color:Ginger
Hair length: Shoulder

Telona is a young succubus girl with bright red hair and pale skin colour,she wears a simple plain white top and a black miniskirt and she also does not wear shoes and has a pair of horns on her forehead.as well as this Telona has the tradition black demon wings.

Telona is actually a calm gentle girl despite her appearance she is actually a very shy girl preferring not to look at others when she is talking with them instead she will stare at nearby trees or rocks sometimes she will stare into the sky.She is very clumsy and accident prone as well as very sensitive the first insult even if not directed at her will send Telona running away in floods of tears.

While Telona was born and raised in hell she despises it completely preferring to wander around Felarya.Telona iis not very good at casting spells often meaning one sell but casting another of having it backfire in her face.Telona has a fear of fairys at the sight of one she will simply run in the opposite direction.

Telona is young in hell and even though she acts mature and sensible the other demons and succubi will often treat her as a child.Shy and calm though she may be Telona also has a Darker side she lets out when she is really angry at someone,In that case Telona will bring the person who angered her back with her to hell but this is very rare and only happens if her or one of her friends has been hurt,she is more lenient towards other demons and succubi preferring to just bite there kneecaps when she's mad at them.

Cute shy girl with a darker side?

Uhm, that's been done to the point of death honestly. Isn't this Dupe's thread anyway?

EDIT: Also, succubi are not human sized in Felarya. No, fairies do not accidentally shrink succubi, so please do not use the 'a fairy did it!' excuse.

i changed the title of the thread

i never said she was shrunken by fairies just that she had a fear of them so there i did not use the fairy did it excuse

As for her size succubi supernatural beings i believe they can choose what size they have.

GiantessFanXXX wrote:

As for her size succubi supernatural beings i believe they can choose what size they have.

Quote :

The Wiki:

A lesser known fact about succubi is their true size. When they appear in peoples dreams to lure and tempt them, they usually show themselves human-sized. However, most succubi are actually about 80 feet tall on average! This lesser known fact remains so because few people come back alive to report the succubi's true height.

http://felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Succubi

hmm does that mean i can have a human sized succubus it does say most succubi so not all of them are going to be that big right?