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melancholy-melody13
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 |  Subject: N/A  Mon Jan 12, 2009 10:23 am | |
| Takiing off some of my ideas, thats all.
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Karbo
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| | Subject: Re: N/A Tue Jan 13, 2009 1:34 am | |
| I am really curious to see more about it, it sounds interesting  | |
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melancholy-melody13
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| | Subject: Re: N/A Fri May 29, 2009 9:29 am | |
| there hath been an update =D yay | |
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gwadahunter2222
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| | Subject: Re: N/A Sat May 30, 2009 9:08 am | |
| I notice a little grammar mistake here "some exploerers who know of this bring flashlights or know magical spells to ward off the more carnivoarious species."
It's a good an interesting idea but I think you should develop some type faunas or floras to emphasize the particularity of the ecosystem of the place. | |
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melancholy-melody13
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| | Subject: Re: N/A Sat May 30, 2009 11:32 am | |
| - gwadahunter2222 wrote:
- I notice a little grammar mistake here "some exploerers who know of this bring flashlights or know magical spells to ward off the more carnivoarious species."
It's a good an interesting idea but I think you should develop some type faunas or floras to emphasize the particularity of the ecosystem of the place. I did have to type this fast, while sitting on the stairway lol and I'm planning on it! ^^ and working on it as we speak. | |
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melancholy-melody13
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| | Subject: Re: N/A Thu Sep 24, 2009 12:43 pm | |
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gwadahunter2222
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| | Subject: Re: N/A Thu Sep 24, 2009 6:46 pm | |
| Interesting fauna the tentacle orb, I think you should say it's a jellyfish-like creature at the beginning and search a new name. The word "tentacle" makes me think to some animes in particular  | |
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melancholy-melody13
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| | Subject: Re: N/A Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:46 pm | |
| - gwadahunter2222 wrote:
- Interesting fauna the tentacle orb, I think you should say it's a jellyfish-like creature at the beginning and search a new name. The word "tentacle" makes me think to some animes in particular
lol thankyou and thats a dumb reason to change it around lol I shall let it keep it's tentacles. Not my fault people have dirty minds | |
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Karbo
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| | Subject: Re: N/A Fri Sep 25, 2009 5:03 pm | |
| that's a funny idea to have them drop when in light | |
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kaitheguy1234
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| | Subject: Re: N/A Sat Oct 03, 2009 7:58 am | |
| I really like the idea of Moseura. The idea of using these blinding lights like morse code seems really appealing. | |
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melancholy-melody13
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| | Subject: Re: N/A Wed Oct 07, 2009 4:29 pm | |
| - kaitheguy1234 wrote:
- I really like the idea of Moseura. The idea of using these blinding lights like morse code seems really appealing.
thankyou ^^ and I hope more people see this, I'd really like more feedback. | |
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melancholy-melody13
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| | Subject: Re: N/A Thu Oct 08, 2009 12:44 pm | |
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gwadahunter2222
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| | Subject: Re: N/A Fri Oct 09, 2009 6:52 am | |
| if you say it prey human size creature there is no reason to precise human just after  its hunting skill is classic but I don't complain too much about it.  | |
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melancholy-melody13
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