Basic overview for Luna's Tale by Goldclaw

Okay I'm going to give an overview of my new story that is a side story for Secrets Arise in Felarya which later crosses over into SAIF but I'm not going to talk about SAIF. Please note that this story actually takes place a few chapters ahead (Like between chapters 11 and 12) and one month in the story of Mike being in Felarya. (also Luna is about ten and is still small) hope you enjoy this overview and plz tell me what you think of it. (this story may not be good because i am still a novice writer but im happy with it and i give credit to randomdude678 the creator of Terra, Kiki, Drayla, Rin, Captain Falcon, and Binermas)

so anyway Luna's Tale is about a naga called Luna and she is part ice, earth, and nature naga (she comes from another world where one naga can faver several elements), she and her family gets attacked by an eternity beast and she some how wines up on Felarya near Frost Peak and not knowing what becomes of her parents (she watched in horror as her brothers and sisters being eaten in one go by the beast). the story then switches over to Mike who decided to walk in a field not far off from Mireille's temple (she's in the main story). he is attacked by a ice harpie who does a cheap move (throwing a boulder at Mike) and carries him off towards Frost peak.

as the ice harpie passes over the jewel river and into the mountains. Mike bites the ice harpie which releases him. he lands in the snow and is attacked by a wolf with scales. he is poisoned and ice begins to form on his legs. the wolf knocks him down and drags him to a cave. just as the wolf is about to eat him Luna comes in and kills the wolf with her icicle magic. he thanks her and cries in pain as the poison continues to spread.

okay the scene i am about to explain is very strange. you may find it very strange, unnatural, and weird. (note that Luna has a few strange abilities and powers). it is a vore scene but in a strange way so please bear in mind that Luna is not native to Felarya.

Luna sees that Mike is poisoned and explains that her healing magic is not strong enough to cure him. (I'm really going to have trouble explaining this. Okay here goes nothing) She explains that she has the ability to heal living creatures in her stomach. She tells him that it is the only way to heal him. Mike agrees to let Luna eat him. (there are tow reasons why he agrees. one some of the poison will be destroyed. two there is a blizzard outside the cave and Mike will be "safe" and warm inside luna.) Luna begins to eat him, as she is eating him she can't help but "taste him". as soon as Mike's head is in Luna's mouth, she "tastes" his head and gulps him down and he soon is enveloped by darkness. he suddenly realizes that it is a lot bigger inside Luna's stomach and he asks her why. she answers that she can make the inside of her mouth, throat and stomach bigger. (When Luna does this her stomach doesn't bulge out which means she can eat a creature that is about the size of a human when she is in her child state/size)

so Mike (who is inside Luna's stomach) and Luna introduce each other and he asks her where she comes from. Luna then remembers the beast and begins to cry. Mike who can't really hold her and comfort her wiggles around in her gut making her stop crying and begins to laugh instead. Luna asks Mike if he can be her new father, Mike surprised by this agrees and he also activates a distress beacon.

morning comes and Luna tries to find a safer place but is attacked by to more wolf things. Mike sensing this does a forgotten Chinese technique called Zenku Dimension Door (imagine a circle within a circle with a line at the top and the bottom connecting the two circles. the one who does this technique places both hands on the lines and moves their hands like a clock to the opposite lines. the door can be anywhere even inside or outside a building depending where you are) once Mike does this, he appears outside of Luna and tries to attack the creature in front of Luna. suddenly a giant icicle impales the wolf in front of mike and luna and a barrage of bullets bombards the second. Mike turns and sees the naga Rin and her father captain falcon along with few others coming towards them. suddenly mike screams in pain as the poison spread twice as fast; mike who can't bear the pain blacks out.

a few hours later mike wakes up in a large room in a hospital bed. he sees luna next to him and soon wakes up. she gives her new dad (aka mike) a huge and Mike tells her to stop because he is still in pain. Rin comes in along with Captain Falcon and Governor Binermas. they ask where Mike and luna come from. Mike has no problem but luna began to cry as she remember her past. Mike holds her and comforts her by stroking her hair like a mother would do (this is so not like Mike at all but he can't stand to she luna cry). luna suddenly stops crying and tells Mike that she'll being going through her grow cycle. Rin hearing suggests that luna goes see terra and kiki, luna agrees but won't go unless her father comes with her. he agrees to go and his again hugged by luna making him yelp in pain.

so luna and mike go to see terra and kiki. they walked quickly trying to get to the swamp before night came. they do and as they were walking Mike is snatched up by a vine and is placed over Drayla's mouth. Luna screams and begins to cry as Mike is about to be eaten. Drayla noticing this and moves Mike away from her mouth. she asks luna whats wrong and luna tells drayla that she was about to eat her father. Draytha, surprised by this, puts Mike down on the ground and luna runs/ slithers (yeah she slithers really fast) to mike and tackle hugs him to the ground and she begins to cry again. Mike strokes her hair so that she would stop crying. drayla seeing this, she asks luna and mike how they met and how mike becomes luna's father. so mike and luna tell their story (this time luna doesn't cry but puts her head down in sadness). Drayla feels sorry for luna and tells mike to take good care of her which mike has already made a vow and promise to himself to protect luna with his life.

so once again luna and mike leave Drayla and head in the direction that she tells them where terra and kiki live. after two hours they finally reach the tree that terra and kiki live in. both mike and luna call out to terra and kiki but only kiki answered and flies down to meet the new comers. she sees mike next to luna thinking that mike has a trap waiting and attacks him. seeing this luna goes in front of mike making kiki stop her attack. luna tells kiki not to harm her father but mike suddenly screams in surprise as a giant hand grabs him. luna turns and sees a giant naga holding mike in her hand and sees the naga licking her lips. kiki tells the naga who is actually terra to not eat him. kiki changes to the size of terra and picks luna up in her right hand. luna tells terra to let mike go for he is her father. terra, who is a little surprised by this, places mike into kiki's hand that holds luna. luna goes over to mike and hugs him again but this time making mike telling her to stop because she is hugging him to tight. terra and kiki ask how they met. so once again tell their tale but this time to terra and kiki. after they finished terra and kiki agree to let mike and luna stay with them while luna is growing.

as luna is growing, she has a special prey to practice hunting and playing with before she swallows it. if you haven't figure it out then well it's Her father Mike and she also likes to give him "baths". a month passes and Luna is now 45' tall and goes for a 'walk' with Mike. as they were walking, the same beast comes out of know where and attacks they both. Mike attacks the creature but is knocked by the creature. Luna uses her ice magic but as the icicles hit the creature, they were absorbed into by its skin and the creature charged towards her. Mike, who fired a 50 cal shell at the creature, made it miss Luna and fall. (im going to keep this short) Luna get badly injured by a spike landing in her left shoulder and through her right eye, mike releases the first curse seal (his curse mark opens to form an eye) and kills the creature and sends it to the underworld with hell magic.

mike teleports Luna and himself back to terra and kiki, who become extremely worried and ask what had happened. mike didn't answer and took out a strange small and semi long green board and uses life saving and a soul spell to save luna from deing (she was extremely close though) and places the board inside her head to help her since the spike damage a small part of her right brain. a mark appears on her right hand and a small vurtual A.I. appears over the mark. (the A.I. is a very unexpected character that a came up with. >.>) mike tell luna that this is her symbolic A.I. partner and will help her when she need help. luna hugs Mike and nearly breaks his spine into and gives her A.I. the name IA. the A.I. is pleased (it in the shape of a female which i have know idea why but i can tell is was Claires idea)

So with that Mike decides to go back to Mireille's temple along with Luna and leave kiki and terra. the story then crosses over and continues in Secrets Arise in Felarya. I Know that this not a great or some awsome idea but i think it is a nice side story. oh yeah, some time during the main story Luna finds out that she has four brothers and six sisters (Mike's other kids are from his future and yeah that'll be explained later)

.......damn i really mad this story sound extremely bad but it may change as i am writing it to be of a better quality and not sound too bad to read.

Sounds pretty interesting. I'll start reading it on your deviantart.

ah about that im still working on the first chapter and it may be awhile since im in school right now

Ah, okay. On that note, I look forward to reading it.

ok oh and im actually drawing luna right now but she only wants the upper part of her drawn*she'll only show part of her tail*

Cool! I'll be looking forward to that, too!

i might post it later tonight or tomorrow* i cant color her but i would be happy is someone would like to color her because i only have paint and i cant any colors right on it and my scanned pic look aweful when i try to color them

HELL YEAH! HELL YEAH! my pic of luna is up on deviant art now. im so F***in happy now! WOO!

Awesome picture of her, Goldclaw!

why thx ye joker. I'm actually planning on drawing her when she's little and not 45' tall

Alright, sounds great! Lookin' forward to it!

AH HELL!!!!!!!!! I'M GOING TO HATE MYSELF WHEN I FINISH THE FIRST CHAPTER!!!!!!! I hate making my stories sad and full of sorrow *This is one part of me that I EVER RARELY SHOW!!!!!!!* I can't stand making it sad but I have to since it has to happen and has to be sad! DAM IT!!!!!! if your reading then click on the link to find out why i'm acting like this *I may even cry after I write the first chapter of Luna's tale...AH HELL! I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO KNOW!!!!! DAM IT ALL TO HELL!!!!!!* *I am really sorry bout this Karbo*

https://felarya.forumotion.com/role-playing-f8/you-in-felarya-post-2-t490-630.htm#22401

Are you gonna be okay, dude?

yeah I am....... you kinda get to see a side of luna in the rp *i dont show my emotional side hardly....i try to hide it*

Ah, I see. I understand completely.

im actually posting something in the rp in just a minute

Cool beans. Sounds good. Anyway, think we should continue our conversation with the Private Messages or something like that?

i guess so

Interesting good luck with it.

thanks, i appreciate it