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Wal and her other personalities, Issuz and Tazlye

Race: Neko
Sex: Female.
Age: 22.
Size: 7 Feet and 3 Inches.
Eye color: Changes with the personalities, Issuz has nature green eyes, Wal has sea blue eyes and Tazlye has fire red eyes.
Hair and fur color: Shiny black, with the tips of her hair (last 1, 3 inches), that changes color just like her eyes.
Hair length: Shoulder length.
Clothing: A sheet of leather with holes in both ends wrapped around her chest and tied in front, with a leather strap. A pair of very short leather hot pants, the legs cut diagonally, and a pair of sandals, the kind that reaches almost all the way to your knees.
Prey/Pred: Wal is a pred but she only eats other sentient beings, if she’s really hungry (or if they stole something sweet from her^^') and of course she is prey to the bigger predators. Issuz will never cross the border to predator land. Tazlye will eat what she can find, she doesn't really care who or what it is, she'll even eat a friend if she hungry enough and doesn't have anything else to eat.



Wal, Issuz and Tazlye each is one of the three personalities of a neko mage with schizophrenia, though Wal is the original.

Wal is adept in water magic, while Issuz and Tazlye mostly use their control of the elements. Since Wal is the original, she is the personality that is mostly in control of the body, this means that when the body falls asleep or unconscious, Wal will take over. Issuz and Tazlye comes out when they believe they are needed, when talking to certain people or whenever they feel like having fun, which Wal is too lazy to have. The three of them never goes dormant, all three are awake when the body is and can always hear each others thoughts, so they have no trouble communicating. They also hear, see, taste, smell and feel the same. Issuz and Tazlye also functions as Wals shoulder helpers, Issuz is the angel and Tazlye is the devil.

---Wal is a pretty lazy, non caring person, she likes to just go with the flow, she uses her water magic for getting stuff she can’t reach or simply when she don’t feel like getting up. She can however, get really serious when trying to learn a new spell... that will allow her to be even more lazy in the future ^^'
---Issuz is kind and wants to help pretty much everyone, though there are a few exceptions with some people and some races, she won’t help any predators of Nekos, unless there would be a really good reason(Bribes/Rewards aren’t one of them...unless it's sugar or anything sweet, cause then she wont have anything to say in the matter).
---Tazlye is pretty much Issuz counterpart, she is mean, sadistic and she hates helping if she doesn’t get anything in return.

Wal has a kind of strange way of talking. She will say the first word of the sentence and then pause for a second or two, before saying the rest of it. She also talks slowly, taking her time even when danger is near. For example she could say this: "There...is a Dridder behind you" VERY slowly. Issuz mostly has a calm, friendly and well mannered speech, though she can get angry. Tazlye doesn't exactly SAY her words, it more like she GROWLS them and it can often become some foul growls.

When Issuz and Tazlye start fighting over, if they should or shouldn't help someone, then they can keep going for days. One day Wal got tired of them fighting inside her head, so she picked up two small rocks, a green and a red. What she did with the rocks, was putting one in each hand and then shuffling them behind her back, she then stuck her hands forward towards the person asking for help, and said to him: "Pick...a hand" Unfortunately for that person, what was picked was the red rock, so no help to that person. Ever since then Wal has been carrying a leather pouch with, 5 green pebbles and 5 red pebbles, so that if Issuz and Tazlye starts fighting over if they should help someone or not, Wal just randomly picks a rock from the pouch, or tells the personality in charge at the moment to do it. The green ones mean that Issuz will decide, and the red means that Tazlye will decide.

Wal, Issuz and Tazlye weren’t always, Lazy, good willed and... Let’s say psychotic. No, they were like any other normal neko, until a certain event made them change to what they are now.(this will be in the first story I’m writing about them)

Wal may sounds like the usual slow and weak person, but she’s actually extremely fast and strong, she can pretty easily outrun most other predators, the giant kinds too, and she has the strength of 6 fully grown neko males, but she is purely too lazy to use her speed or strength. There is however one thing, that she will use them in order to get her hands on, and that’s sugar or anything else that's sweet. Wal simply loves anything sweet. She will climb mountains, cross oceans and kill friends in order to get it, if she has to. Issuz and Tazlye however both hates anything sweet (which might be one of the only things they have in common), but when Wal has the scent of anything sweet, she can completely contain them within. This speed and power can not be accessed by either Issuz or Tazlye, Wal is the only personality able to use it.

The reason for Wal's sugar love is simply because Issuz and Tazlye DOESN'T like it. Their hate for it, kept her from eating anything sweet from the age of 6 until she finally snapped at the age of 18 (this is going to come up in a story^^). It's not that she couldn't eat sugar, oh no, she just didn't, since Issuz and Tazlye asked her not to eat it.

Magic abilities
Issuz and Tazlye don't really know too many spells, they mostly rely on the common ability to bend their element at their will. Of course they know some spells but it takes time saying the incantations, and in battle situations they don't have much time for that. Wal however has a HUGE range of water spells, some powerful enough to affect even magic resistant skins and armors. She has even found a way to use them by saying just the name of the spell and skipping the incantation, though not saying the incantation decreases the power of the spells by 5 to 10 times, depending on the spell.

They do all share one common feature with controlling their element. The more powerful they want an attack to be, they smaller the area of attack gets.
A better way to explain is with Tazlye's flames. She can make giant fireballs...but they aren't very hot and she can make a tiny flame at her fingertip... hot enough to cut through pretty much everything (not diamond of course).

History

Wal was the only personality at the time of birth, it wasn’t until later, that Issuz and Tazlye appeared.


The appearance of Issuz.
It was at the day of Wals sixth birthday, that Issuz appeared (At this point in time, the hair and fur color was completely black). Wal was playing in the forest around the village. She fell out of a tree and landed in the middle of a lot of man eating plants. She was dodging their bites and tentacles, as well as she could, but she got whipped and bitten all over. All of a sudden her parent came and saw her being attacked by the plants. They rushed to her help, but were quickly pinned down. A bigger plant was just about to take a bite of both the parents, when Wal heard a voice in her head, saying. “You want me to help? Just give me a name” Wal quickly screamed out a name. “ISSUZ” Just then the plants stopped, they weren’t moving at all. Wals parents, who was waiting to get eaten, opened their eyes and saw their daughter kneeling down, with her hands to the ground, but something was different, the tips of her hair was green. Their daughter looked up and to the parents surprise, the eyes had changed from blue to green too. “That was a close call” Issuz said with a giant smile. “Let’s get rid of these plants” She said, she raised one hand and formed it into a fist, then banged it into the ground, with this the plants quickly withered and crumpled. Wals parent ran towards their daughter calling her name. Issuz just looked at them coming closer. “I’m not Wal” She said, making the parents stop in their tracks. “I’m her other self, my name is Issuz”

(yes I know, it’s a weird way to stop, live with it^^)


The appearance of Tazlye.
Tazlye appeared around 4 years after Issuz had appeared. Wal had been lying on a branch of biggest tree around, all day looking at the sky and doing nothing but blinking her eyes and talking to Issuz inside her mind, when she got hit by a the giant clouds of black smoke coming from the village. She climbed down as fast as she could and ran for the village, the scene she saw was horrific, humans wearing black coats and weird masks were killing the Nekos in the village and setting fire to the buildings. Wal ran towards one of them and kicked him on the shin, the man sweared and jumped around a little before calling some of his companions, they grabbed Wal and threw her through a window of one of the burning buildings. Wal had hit her head lightly when she hit the floor and was pretty dizzy, but after some seconds she could determine, that this was her home. “Help” it came from upstairs, it was her parents and her little brother on 2 years, and they were trapped in the bedroom, in the middle of the fire. Wal staggered as fast as could towards the stairs while being dizzy, she got upstairs and staggered on to the bedroom, it was blocked with burning wood from the ceiling. “Mom? Dad? Are you okay?” Wal yelled. “We’re not hurt but we can’t get out and the fire is getting closer” Her father yelled back. Just then the roof collapsed behind Wal and knocked her of her feet and rammed her head into the wall. “Wal? What happened? Are you okay?” Her mother yelled, but no answer came, Wal was out cold. Wal came to some minutes later, she grabbed her head and screamed in pain, she looked around, everything was blurry, but she could pick out the flames, they had completely surrounded her. Wal was panicking, fire was everywhere and she could hear her parents coughing from all the smoke. “Issuz? Can’t you help me?” She cried. “I’m sorry Wal, but I can’t control flames...” She was cut off by another voice. “But I can” Wal looked around to see who had talked, but no one was there. “Where are you and who are you?” Wal asked in panic. “I am nowhere, and I am YOU” Wal instantly got it, the new voice was very much like Issuz, but not completely the same. “Please help me and my family” Wal cried. “Of course I will, but you have to give me a name first” Wal thought a little and then called out to. “TAZLYE” The tips of her hair and her eyes changed color once again but something was different, this time they did not turn green, they turned red. "Let’s get this fire fighting started" Tazlye said with a grin and started moving in a way that could easily be confused with dancing. The flames were following Tazlye’s movements and getting smaller with every passing second. Tazlye then stopped moving with her arm stretched out and her hand ready to snap her finger. "Now, BEGONE" She growled at the flames and snapped her finger a single time.

Two days later Wal was standing, holding her little brother, with the Nekos that survived the attack, she was crying looking at her parents grave “Why did this have to happen? They didn’t have to die” She cried. “I’m sorry” Tazlye said to Wal. “They had already inhaled in too much smoke when I killed the fire” Wal was just standing there crying. “If the healer hadn’t been killed, they could have been saved” Issuz said. “i know, it’s all those guys fault” Wal said and imagined a picture of the ones that burned the village, she then looked down at her brother. “I have to find someone that can take care of him now” Wal muttered and with that she left the village.

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PostSubject: Re: Wal, Issuz and Tazlye, the skitzo neko^^   Wal, Issuz and Tazlye, the skitzo neko^^ Icon_minitimeMon Mar 16, 2009 12:57 pm

It's not too bad as a character design, although, if we're talking about schizophrenia, tell us at least 2 thinghs:

Her very ideas, manners and speech must change from personality to personality, so I demand more info about every single "part" of her

Second, being a mage, could even change type of spells like -- one personality holds healing spells - the other offensive - the third strategical or at least, could change the element used


I'm handling a schizophrenic character, I know what it means XD
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you hit it spot on, i just haven't gotten it written down yet, i have a lot in my head, but i'm always bad at getting it on paper.

EDIT: now i have^^ still long ways from finished though, but i prefer to take it slow lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Wal, Issuz and Tazlye, the skitzo neko^^   Wal, Issuz and Tazlye, the skitzo neko^^ Icon_minitimeSat Mar 21, 2009 2:55 am

ok i added SOME of her history and made FEW changes at the earlier stuff
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Hey, not bad!

Next step:
So, she controls three elements, but does Wal have an inner source of magic? Or maybe those personalities are even a link to some other source?
These personalities are born naturally inside of her or have been caused, or created, by something or an event?
Personally, I really liked the specifics of every personality and their way to be, and the fact that that the other ones (the ones not in charge) are never dormant gives so much freedom to imagination, expecially about funny situations XD

I'll wait further for the explanation about the appearance of Tazlye. cat
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Hey, not bad!

Next step:
So, she controls three elements, but does Wal have an inner source of magic? Or maybe those personalities are even a link to some other source?
These personalities are born naturally inside of her or have been caused, or created, by something or an event?
Personally, I really liked the specifics of every personality and their way to be, and the fact that that the other ones (the ones not in charge) are never dormant gives so much freedom to imagination, expecially about funny situations XD

I'll wait further for the explanation about the appearance of Tazlye. cat

i don't know if this is a good idea, but i have been thinking about them not using magic but more like they just manipulate those three elements, they can't make fire, plants or water apear, they just bend it to their will. well Issuz can force a seed to grow of course, fire can easily be made, and water can be brought everywhere.

as for Tazlye, i already have something in mind, but i'm taking the usual break after writing. (writing like this, reminds me of school(i HATE school))
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wow your charector sounds cool realy interesting good luck with writing about her
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thank you fellow school hater^^
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I like her ^^ she seems very intresting, don't see many characters like this! good job can't wait to read more bout her.
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thank you, might take a while, cause i'm going to berlin monday morning, and i'm staying till friday
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thank you, might take a while, cause i'm going to berlin monday morning, and i'm staying till friday

Oh? thats alright ^^ it takes me awhile to get to stuff anyway, also I might do some fanart of her, I find her intresting enough, curious whats your DA account name?
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thanks for understanding and my DA is: snicer

and i would love you for drawing her^^(i can't draw shit sobsob )
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i put in a little something just above the history, just got that idea when listening to linkin park: crawling in my skin (how does that fit together??? i have no idea, but i'm seventeen so nothing does lol! )
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Only you can come up with that sugar idea Very Happy

And its reminds soo much about yourself haha.

She's good lol!
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And its reminds soo much about yourself haha.
well... that part is based on myself^^(yes i'm a sugar addict lol! )
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Míshéa wrote:
And its reminds soo much about yourself haha.
well... that part is based on myself^^(yes i'm a sugar addict lol! )

Thats why i wrote it xb.

I know you, remember ? Wink
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Lol even if it's self-based, a character with such heavy sugar addiction is a great idea!!! Laughing

I mean, imagine just how many gags and stories can come out from this idea! My brain is in overdrive and it's not even one of my characters confused
Wal is getting more interesting day by day ^_^
She just needs the info about Tazlye and she will... be... ALIVE!!! Evil laugh
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Lol even if it's self-based, a character with such heavy sugar addiction is a great idea!!! Laughing

I mean, imagine just how many gags and stories can come out from this idea! My brain is in overdrive and it's not even one of my characters confused
Wal is getting more interesting day by day ^_^
She just needs the info about Tazlye and she will... be... ALIVE!!! Evil laugh

thank you it means alot to me that you are supporting me in the making of her(them^^)

i made some grammar changes all around, and i posted a little teaser of tazlye's apearance^^
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Me: Ok edited some more and i put in the full story of Tazlyes apearance, it's somewhat longer than Issuz...

Issuz: Hey, why is that even.

Tazlye: Because this was more interesting to write.

Issuz: oh be quite you pyro.

Me: relax you two, it's because of Wals little brother, i have some stories in mind that involves him, but i had to make sure that everyone know that he is important.

Wal: *yawns" Whatever, can i go now.

Me: hey you came here on your own, i never asked you to come.

Wal: *gone*

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Readed the story about Tazlye!

I'd rather want to know what actually she can do with flames, move them with her will and control their potential?

This story gives Wal a double choice quest:
Be a "mother" for her little bro, and protect him, or search for vengeance towards the men in black coats (more the Tazlye's line, I think)
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I'd rather want to know what actually she can do with flames, move them with her will and control their potential?
I knew that i had forgotten something in the story^^ i'll get to it right away

nksrocks wrote:
This story gives Wal a double choice quest:
Be a "mother" for her little bro, and protect him, or search for vengeance towards the men in black coats (more the Tazlye's line, I think)
you'll see, you'll see^^

i actually have a story on mind, about what happens after Wal leaves the village, with the brother in her arms^^
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I'd rather want to know what actually she can do with flames, move them with her will and control their potential?
I knew that i had forgotten something in the story^^ i'll get to it right away
As promised(kinda), i made a demonstration of it in Tazlyes apearance^^

i have a little(Secret)idea for this character, that will be reavealed to all in time, for now i will talk with nksrock in private about it(he is the most loyal commenter on this topic. and he's making a drawing of Wal, Issuz and Tazlye for me)
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ok i took the liberty to add the reason for Wals sugar need^^(i think it's pretty good)

please, anybody that reads this.....Give me some more feedback already(not refering to the ones that does give feedback^^)
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Reptillian wrote:
ok i took the liberty to add the reason for Wals sugar need^^(i think it's pretty good)

please, anybody that reads this.....Give me some more feedback already(not refering to the ones that does give feedback^^)

I'm one of those who already give feedback lol! but still, I feel in the mood to comment

The character evolution is going kinda well, isn't it Reptillian?
I think there are just a few steps for its completion and its "readyness", but still many things can be said, so other hints, comments, criticism and story possibilities could be surely of help, or could be a at least good argument for discussion so...

...I follow Reptillian's way and ask for constructive feedback from all of you, who is interested obviously Cool
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I think it's a really cool character, especially for Felarya. I wonder how she'd fare against predators when one part is wanting to run and another wanting to blast it. Smile And the sugar thing is a neat character trait.

I guess I just want to see the drawing next. Smile As good as a description is, a picture is always helpful.
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