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CC-7748
Tasty morsel
Posts : 1
Join date : 2009-07-02
Age : 34
 |  Subject: My Character  Sat Jul 04, 2009 12:44 am | |
| Name: CC-7748 or Cmdr. Elliott or Elli (ee lie)
Rank: Commander in GAR
Organization: Republic Army, 185th Airborne Corps
Place of Birth: Kamino
Age: about 20 human years, 7 Clone trooper years
Gender: male
Species: Human/ Mandolorian
Personality: He is very gungho about combat when fighting he inspires other to continue no matter the odds, at first he can seem rigid but as you get to know him to notice he just wants to be the best soldier he can be. He has a thing for his pod brothers that he left in his universe, so he tends not to talk about his family, Elliott also is the fastest promoted Clone known in the GAR since it has only been seven years since he was released from the simulators and became a "shiney," he also has a temperment when people you the term "Shiney" he finds the term disrespectful for the new troopers and he never uses it himself.
How he got to Felarya:
Cmdr. Elliott was with his unit securing Saleucami when a Separatist inter dementional gateway opened up and sucked him into it, the force of the journey knocked him uncouncious, and when he awoke he found himself in this strange planet with the help of a Fairie named Mara he figured he was no longer in his universe, and although he was trained to fight he is not prepared for the dangers if his new home...
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Jætte_Troll
Friend of the Jotun
Posts : 2769
Join date : 2009-02-02
Age : 33
Location : Over There
| | Subject: Re: My Character Sat Jul 04, 2009 1:54 am | |
| Hrm... I'll ignore for now that he's a crossover character. For now.
Besides that, is there anything more we can have on him? I guess we know what he looks like, but what about his personality? His very nature makes him un-original, being a clone, so he needs something to set him apart. | |
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Flare
Survivor
Posts : 845
Join date : 2008-04-14
Age : 39
Location : California
| | Subject: Re: My Character Sat Jul 04, 2009 8:06 am | |
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kaitheguy1234
Temple scourge
Posts : 658
Join date : 2009-05-13
Age : 35
| | Subject: Re: My Character Sat Jul 04, 2009 8:36 am | |
| Hmmmmm.....sad to say, but he needs a lot more info and work. What's his personality like? What're his likes and dislikes? There's barely any info at all... | |
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Sillysausage
Seasoned adventurer
Posts : 141
Join date : 2009-07-01
Age : 32
Location : Ausfailia
| | Subject: Re: My Character Sat Jul 04, 2009 5:47 pm | |
| I agree with the others here, you really need to give a much more detailed description, this one doesn't really say anything except how his base stats and how he got to Felarya. And since he's a character from Star Wars, and a clone at that, he'll need an original personality at the very least if you want people to care about him. | |
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Archmage_Bael
Mara's snack
Posts : 4158
Join date : 2009-05-05
Age : 36
Location : Shatterock Caldera
| | Subject: Re: My Character Sun Aug 30, 2009 4:52 pm | |
| yes, as a clone it would make hard, but it would be interesting in and of itself to TRY and make him original wouldn't it? it would be difficult, but fun right?  | |
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Jætte_Troll
Friend of the Jotun
Posts : 2769
Join date : 2009-02-02
Age : 33
Location : Over There
| | Subject: Re: My Character Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:21 pm | |
| I don't think this guy was really serious at all. Let us let this die... | |
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Archmage_Bael
Mara's snack
Posts : 4158
Join date : 2009-05-05
Age : 36
Location : Shatterock Caldera
| | Subject: Re: My Character Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:25 pm | |
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