Hello! My name is Rose

I am part human and part fairy and I was nearly orphaned as a young teenager. My whole village of Sheelin was destroyed while I was out in the woods foraging for berries. It was a very small village near to a great castle. My father lived at the castle but would visit often. He was a good wizard by the name of Archemedus. The castle was Caiseal Wizard's Academy. The place was in another world called Earth. The country was Eire. A very ancient place it is too. Filled with magic and suspense for those who were multi talented.

Alas, I wasn't mult talented. Some how I was almost a plain human. After living with my father, who was nearly busy every moment of the day with tasks of schooling those that were multi talented, I decided to venture away from home. My father bid me good luck with my adventure and I left home with my ruck sack, bow and arrows. I went to the teleport rock and thought of where I wanted to be but somehow I messed up my jump to the meadowlands and ended up some where I do not know at all. Now I must start a new unknown life in an unknown world.


Here are my abilities and personality stuf.

5 foot 2 inches
125 pounds
muscular but yet quite female
20 years old
I am very shy until I have known you for a while. Once I know you, my Gealic side starts to show
I enjoy the out of doors and often times, I can be found sitting under a tree reading
My weapon is a cross bow and arrows, I am a good shot with it
I have a special ruck sack that can hold all I own
I am studing to be the best healer known
I do have a special healing touch but do not quite understand it yet
I have various books that is all that is left from my village and from my father that I study from .

That is all that I have to say right now ecept that I hope to be meeting many new friends.

First of all, a good spell and grammer checker would help you out here. I'd also put a lot more detail in, this is very bare-bones. What destroyed her home village, and why? Was her father a human or a fairy? Did she know her mother? Those sorts of details really bring a character to life.

Please try to re-write this in a third person perspective. Then I'll take you seriously and point out other flaws. This is just... well... it's an excellent set up for a Sue.


Edit:
Are you thinking of Sidhe?

Welcome to Felarya.

What century does she come from on Earth?

I think she may find that Felaryan fairies aren't quite the same as Irish ones...

A good start to a character, gives a good outline. Don't feel discouraged, but keep adding to her. Maybe some more physical traits (eye/hair colour) and some more personality traits, even little things.