The history of a protector - Jade

For everybody who wants to learn more about the most protective giantess in Felarya ( the lovely Lady here: http://karbo.deviantart.com/art/Jade-the-giantess-135684490 ) just follow the link to read the most important story of my character Jade

http://ravana3k.deviantart.com/gallery/#Jade

I'll download this and read it, thoroughly, I promise. Sounds interesting...

I've read through your entire gallery, Ravana3k... and there's my feedback.

-You're probably self-aware about spelling and grammar, so not that.

-I've got no idea why Jade wins against anything else, frankly... you need to add something beyond suggesting that she works out a lot.

-Everything else's A-Ok.

this is weird. my sister is named jade. and she also has brown hair. and is protective. >.<

powerfulgiantess...with a brutally sad past... these are good stories