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asaenvolk
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PostSubject: Rivers   Rivers Icon_minitimeWed Nov 25, 2009 7:59 pm

Okay I noticed a few small problems with it, for one most of the rivers are not named. for example the river going around Negav, kind of important! Bael suggested "mond-myriad" river or the many mouthed river, which sounds cool. Another problem with the new map is exactly which river is the Jewel river, because if that MAJOR river up north is the Jewel river the one north of the ascarline mountains isn't, it would a river that leads to the Jewel river. Also the ones Vivian live buy and goes around the mysterious temple would have a name as well as the one going into deeper Felarya. Allot of the smaller local geography around Negav really needs to be more named IMHO. So if any one knew the names of them or had name ideas I would like to know.
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PostSubject: Re: Rivers   Rivers Icon_minitimeWed Nov 25, 2009 8:01 pm

yeah. im coming up with a little description for the river going around negav. i have some interesting ideas for it.
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PostSubject: Re: Rivers   Rivers Icon_minitimeWed Nov 25, 2009 9:12 pm

Mond-Myriad River:

threat level: low.

This is the river that runs along the edge of negav, acting as a large moat in the front. there are a lot of reeds and plants along the edges of the river, which can sometimes hide small critters. Even though its a low danger level near Negav, it is more dangerous along the southern edge that stretches all the way down past the marshes.

This river is interesting because it contains at one part, a small under-water channel that connects the river on the other side of the ascarlin mountains to this river. At the bottom of the river there is a long thin crevice that is hard to get through unless done so by a smaller creature. There is a gaping hole in the crevice, making a trench that leads to a massive undersea bubble which is said to contain creatures that are incredibly dangerous.

No one has ever traveled down below there. It is referred to as the Nedden Myriad Zone. (description of it is pending, unless someone has an epic idea for it Very Happy)

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this is what i have so far. sound good?
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PostSubject: Re: Rivers   Rivers Icon_minitimeThu Nov 26, 2009 2:46 am

I think you are totally right about that. They are definitely among these things that need to be named Smile

It's the same for important regions. For example I'm beginning to think the center area ( slighty south of the giant tree ) need to be named as well.
There is also the eastern shore, etc...

Archmage_Bael : The idea of a hidden zone under river is interesting ^_^ But the crevice would be quite far from Negav then ( because of the eyes and so )
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PostSubject: Re: Rivers   Rivers Icon_minitimeThu Nov 26, 2009 12:02 pm

Karbo wrote:
Archmage_Bael : The idea of a hidden zone under river is interesting ^_^ But the crevice would be quite far from Negav then ( because of the eyes and so )

my thoughts as well. I was thinking that it would be closer to the marshes to the south-east.
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PostSubject: Re: Rivers   Rivers Icon_minitimeSun Nov 29, 2009 1:25 pm

Okay, there is probably an obvious answer to this, or an explanation that I missed.

Regardless... how exactly does that river get over the chasm from the Fairy Kingdom while going to the Lake of Illusions? On that same note, how does the Chordoni River flow out of the chasm without flowing upwards? Or does it?

Like I said, just wanting to clarify the nature of this.
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PostSubject: Re: Rivers   Rivers Icon_minitimeSun Nov 29, 2009 1:55 pm

Jætte_Troll wrote:
Okay, there is probably an obvious answer to this, or an explanation that I missed.

Regardless... how exactly does that river get over the chasm from the Fairy Kingdom while going to the Lake of Illusions? On that same note, how does the Chordoni River flow out of the chasm without flowing upwards? Or does it?

Like I said, just wanting to clarify the nature of this.

Silent Eric proposed an idea of how that river can make it across the barrier. Some kind of "water bridge" or something, he could probably explain it better than I could. Or magic, that could work too.

As far as the Chordoni, I don't think it flows out of the chasm. If anything, it originates from the Chrodoni waterfalls, and then dumps into the chasm one way, and into the jewel river in the other. The Chordoni Waterfalls are rumored to originate from another world, since they don't have an obvious source.
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PostSubject: Re: Rivers   Rivers Icon_minitimeSun Nov 29, 2009 2:27 pm

Hmm, the Chordoni makes sense in that light. I suppose that's the only way it could work.

And I was hoping for some sort of answer like a water bridge. Thats just cool.
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