[/strike]Felarya Take over (still at work)[/strik For get it

It was a normal hot day when all of a sudden a portal open up in the sky above Frost peeck and 100.1,000.1,0000 and ect. of Demintional creatur that looks excacly like Jason. All of the Demintional creaturs started to poor out of the Portal, there was so many that they even blocked the sky. They started to attack anything onsite Naga's, Neco's, Human,and ect[/strike]

Sorry to break it to ya, but odds are, this won't roll over well with the rest of the forumgoers :\

first of... NO. do not even think of doing a takeover rp... the second that happened the guardians would be there and evaporate the intire horde of "whatever"

second... if you intend to start any kind of rp... write down a set of rules that doesn't constrict the rp and still puts a roof on it.

third... STILL NO

fourth... for future references... check your spelling and grammar. what you wrote there is a MESS

fifth... HELL FUCKING NO

Unfortunately, this RP doesn't really seem lucid enough. The takeover concept doesn't really fit and it looks a little messy.

Someone else will probably explain it better.

EDIT: Reptillian said it best.

ehh ok I gess well but I thought it would be a neet Idea to something like this but ok if you don't want to you don't have to I just thought it would be kindof cool to do this


and wait Demintional creatures can just go threw portals without any trouple how would they be eleminated its like you go from a portal or go threw a flash city and you get aliminated on the spot

O.o??????

Well, therein lies the trouble. If you get annihilated on the spot, it's not really that fun and it ends too quickly. Basically you'd need godmods to just survive, and as many people here can tell, my pissed-o-meter goes into the red when godmodding is afoot.

well don't worry Im working on this so let me work on this

Shinggaku wrote:

ehh ok I gess well but I thought it would be a neet Idea to something like this but ok if you don't want to you don't have to I just thought it would be kindof cool to do this


and wait Demintional creatures can just go threw portals without any trouple how would they be eleminated its like you go from a portal or go threw a flash city and you get aliminated on the spot

O.o??????

Could you please read the wiki? Please? And check your spelling. Please.

The Gaurdians would kill anything like this ONLY because they would be a huge threat. "Huge threat", because they are overpowered, from what I've read of Jason, who is, himself, a flat and annoying character that nobody knows about or cares about.

This post will probably be edited or deleted because it's mean, but it's really not. I'm only trying to help you improve, really. Your RP's suffer due to your lack of knowledge about the world, and your terrible grammar, which I have offered to help you with but got ignored, and I doubt you enjoy that. I really want to help you improve, but you have to listen to people...

This is a joke, right?

ok what part of "still at work" don't you under stand it is not finished, meaning it still need to be edited

I know your trying to help but I tryed to pm you but I didn't work for some reson

and no its not a Joke but im still working on it

And like others said, you cant take over Felarya, only make a name for yoursel

*sigh*

its an invaation your soppose to stop them from taking over it's not like

"OMG THEY HAVE TOOKEN OVER FELARYA WE MUST BOW DOWN BEFORE THE MIGHTY CHEESE"


so preaty muchthe goal is to stop them from taking over and like I said to other people It's still not done

Shinggaku wrote:

*sigh*

its an invaation your soppose to stop them from taking over it's not like

"OMG THEY HAVE TOOKEN OVER FELARYA WE MUST BOW DOWN BEFORE THE MIGHTY CHEESE"


so preaty muchthe goal is to stop them from taking over and like I said to other people It's still not done

you won't have to stop them... the guardians will take care of them as i said before T_T'

ok but just let me work on this I know your trying to help but Im doing resurtch so I can get this rp better suited



....................SO GET OFF MY FUCKEN ASS

Shinggaku wrote:

ok but just let me work on this I know your trying to help but Im doing resurtch so I can get this rp better suited



....................SO GET OFF MY FUCKEN ASS

I'll get off your ass, when you start spelling like a sane man T_T'

Shinggaku wrote:

ok but just let me work on this I know your trying to help but Im doing resurtch so I can get this rp better suited



....................SO GET OFF MY FUCKEN ASS

SERIOUSLY. Please, listen to people. My PM's work now, I can help you with spelling and gremmar. This idea for an RP is horrible in every single way. EVERY MANNER. You cannot "adapt" this and make it good. Just scrap it and make something more fitting. I notice your RPs all seem to confuse Felarya with a Shonen Fighting Manga, or DBZ or something like that.

Remember: The world started as a fetish artist's imaginings, then grew into a lush and complex fantasy world of its own. The conflict is a little "Man versus man" and A LOT of "Man versus nature". This is not a place to put random OCs blasting the crap out of each other for no apparent reason. Please read the wiki. Read some stories. Do something involving the world, and not Dragonball ripoffs.

Again, sorry for being blunt. But this just isn't working, for us or for you.

Ok Fine I'll stop this and thinkof something else thanks

Good then maybe now Reptillian will keep off you!

Ya

so what do you think of a Role play that Jason's brothers apear and start attacking Jason or Jason's friends

or dose that sound like it could be stupid

Shinggaku wrote:

Ya

so what do you think of a Role play that Jason's brothers apear and start attacking Jason or Jason's friends

or dose that sound like it could be stupid

I hate to break it to you, but no-one is going to take you seriously until you learn to spell and talk like a coherent, sane person. Secondly, that is an entirely vague idea and shows little promise. Plus all your RPs seemed to be based around this Jason fellow, who is boring and ill-suited to the world.

Jætte_Troll wrote:

Shinggaku wrote:

Ya

so what do you think of a Role play that Jason's brothers apear and start attacking Jason or Jason's friends

or dose that sound like it could be stupid

I hate to break it to you, but no-one is going to take you seriously until you learn to spell and talk like a coherent, sane person. Secondly, that is an entirely vague idea and shows little promise. Plus all your RPs seemed to be based around this Jason fellow, who is boring and ill-suited to the world.

You now that seems alittle rud but who care's

Dude, seriously! First let me say this: Learn proper grammar and spelling. Also, not everyone is going to love your ideas. There are good ideas, and there are bad ideas. Try fleshing out your ideas and work on them, helping them become good and interesting ideas. Heck, I myself have trouble coming up with an original character. The only great original characters that I have ever come up with are Solomon Sharkbane, who is a pirate captain in the 1700's, and Celestial Comet: a super hero that received his powers by being in an accident which involves a comet impacting the ground next to him. Heck, most of my characters are from fan fiction and popular shows/movies. All it takes is patience and time.

mikeimp wrote:

Dude, seriously! First let me say this: Learn proper grammar and spelling. Also, not everyone is going to love your ideas. There are good ideas, and there are bad ideas. Try fleshing out your ideas and work on them, helping them become good and interesting ideas. Heck, I myself have trouble coming up with an original character. The only great original characters that I have ever come up with are Solomon Sharkbane, who is a pirate captain in the 1700's, and Celestial Comet: a super hero that received his powers by being in an accident which involves a comet impacting the ground next to him. Heck, most of my characters are from fan fiction and popular shows/movies. All it takes is patience and time.

Ok thank you

Well Im improving my Charrectur so he wouldn't seem so power full but I might need some help

Ok I got an Idea of a Role play

one of my charrectur Tommaru is human but he's just a Kid so I think A kid that dosn't know anything about felarya get sucked into felarya by a flash citty

Jætte_Troll wrote:

I hate to break it to you, but no-one is going to take you seriously until you learn to spell and talk like a coherent, sane person. Secondly, that is an entirely vague idea and shows little promise.

... this again ^^^