The Sueishness of Your Characters

Swiftlit: - 1

Calimn: 11

Syll: 15

Smokes: 16

Thatris: 16

Never expected the enraged elf and blank-faced traveler to be the highest. Swiftlit got the lowest mainly because he literally got born out of a chaos flux and has no real past. Still, none are Sues, so I'm happy.

Note to self try this test out again later when character actually has something worth mentioning.

Well seeing as I'm new to writing I cant say Im surprised at the first score

Denial Setyr - 71 (Irredeemable-Sue) (just goes to show writers starting out have lots to learn but hey I can try and work that down hopefully....)

Now the second test posted is very odd and strange to me considering first test...

Denial Setyr - 17 (Probably not a Mary-Sue) 0.o

I am not sure how but meh they are test and meant to flush out some traits that could stand to be lost or are a bit well much.

Personally I will admit I am not surprised at the Mary-Sueism from the first and very surpised by the second but hey live and learn right?

Geeran = 22 points. Borderline.... I don't get it...

After a little bit of a re-write, I looked back at my characters...

Elrich Carter (Quest of the Twiceborn): 8
Elrich Carter/Feign (Journy of the Twiceborn): 29
He got hit with a whole bag of Sue when his magic got fully unlocked the end of QotT.

I'm not even gonna bother with most of the others, they're all gonna be sub-10 points.

Sherazif Abdazred/Nephanim on the other hand ends up with a 6 pre-transformation, and a 23 after. If not for the fact he's an unrepentant villain the whole time, he would score in the mid-30s just on powers.
Thyne has about 25. She's a smart, warlike fairy who hangs out with dridders, I honestly wasn't surprised.