GREGOLE
Survivor
Posts : 943
Join date : 2007-12-08
Age : 34
Location : Heckville
 |  Subject: Ryla, Calvin & Felarya  Mon Dec 10, 2007 6:44 pm | |
| It's relatively new, but since I've not gotten a lot of feedback on it yet, I'd rather like to know what folks think of my entry in the universe.
A work in progress, but it's getting there...
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
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Cypress
valiant swordman
Posts : 239
Join date : 2007-12-09
Location : The Jungle Bowl....
| | Subject: Re: Ryla, Calvin & Felarya Tue Dec 11, 2007 12:08 am | |
| I just got around to reading it^^ I think it is wonderful. Its got a flair of humor that doesn't get tacky (thats hard with this topic somtimes) also the perspective jumping is well done (often never done right) and does a lot to get us swept up in the story and have a lot of suspence while introducing new chars constantly.... works for me, no wonder i like it XD | |
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Zoekin
Grand-pop
Posts : 493
Join date : 2007-12-08
| | Subject: Re: Ryla, Calvin & Felarya Fri Dec 14, 2007 6:09 pm | |
|  I love your stories! You have a real gift for setting a scene and making your characters come alive! I'm really glad that you chose to use Katrika too! You certainly have some fantastic ideas too! The Island is a fasinating place! Oh-and Ryla rocks! | |
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Pendragon
Grand Mecha Enthusiast
Posts : 3229
Join date : 2007-12-09
| | Subject: Re: Ryla, Calvin & Felarya Fri Dec 14, 2007 8:22 pm | |
| The beginning chapter was great, not being outdone by the other 5. I'm sure the rest will be even better, when you get around to it. | |
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Karbo
Evil admin
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Join date : 2007-12-08
| | Subject: Re: Ryla, Calvin & Felarya Sat Dec 15, 2007 3:19 am | |
| Very nice story so far ^_^ You characters are interesting and the story is very pleaseant to follow. Can't wait to see what wil happens next  | |
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GREGOLE
Survivor
Posts : 943
Join date : 2007-12-08
Age : 34
Location : Heckville
| | Subject: Re: Ryla, Calvin & Felarya Mon Mar 03, 2008 6:13 am | |
| For those still following, chapters seven and eight have finally been posted. | |
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Zoekin
Grand-pop
Posts : 493
Join date : 2007-12-08
| | Subject: Re: Ryla, Calvin & Felarya Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:34 pm | |
|  Awesome work! Tanya in the spotlight and Kat gets to be a hero! What more can I ask? Tanya-"Two words-WORLD DOMINATION!" SMACK! Katrika-"Sorry about that my friend! Loved the story! Ryla is so cool! Everything I want to be when I get older!" | |
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