Mukat's Felarya Fiction Tumblr

So, I may or may not have made a Tumblr account to post Felarya fics on. You can find it over at http://boundlessdepths.tumblr.com/

I'm sort of setting this up as a feedback thread, since you can't really comment on people's tumblrs... you can also always use the ask box to talk to me, I suppose. I just ask that you not reblog things if you have a tumblr yourself... I'd feel weird seeing this stuff get spread around.

Definitely going to be reading these tomorrow ^^ or today haha.

walkingbyself wrote:

Definitely going to be reading these tomorrow ^^ or today haha.

Well, I hope you like then

I liked them, ^^ reading about Lucian and Naomea and their musical competition. Both version's were spectacular reads and highly enjoyable. I admit some of the wording sound a bit weird once or twice, but did not detract at all from the story. Lots of rich details in both the 'Gerridi Came up from Deka' and 'To Give the Devil Her Due', I regret I didn't read the last one yet, as I don't have any more time to read it. However, I'll try and get to it another time. Thanks Mukat for sharing these stories. ^_^

walkingbyself wrote:

I liked them, ^^ reading about Lucian and Naomea and their musical competition. Both version's were spectacular reads and highly enjoyable. I admit some of the wording sound a bit weird once or twice, but did not detract at all from the story. Lots of rich details in both the 'Gerridi Came up from Deka' and 'To Give the Devil Her Due', I regret I didn't read the last one yet, as I don't have any more time to read it. However, I'll try and get to it another time. Thanks Mukat for sharing these stories. ^_^

I'm curious as to what you mean by the wording sounding weird in spots... was it just my word choice, were things confusing in places? I have a hard time editing myself and writing really is honestly a weak point for me, so I'd like to know what critique you might have.