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PostSubject: Benjamin Baker   Benjamin Baker Icon_minitimeTue Jun 26, 2012 4:32 pm

Age: 26

Height: 5' 8"

Species: Human

Occupation: Inventor, Travelling Salesman

Gender: Male

Eye Color: Emerald

Hair Color: White

Skin Color: White

History: Born and raised in the poorer parts of Negav, Baker never really had the luxury to go study magic nor did he had the talent for it. He lived on his own with his uncle who struggled to work just to meet ends meet. Baker was pretty much homeschooled, so he never really got out to socialize with other kids. Nevertheless, he was still a bright and upbeat person, always curious about technology to make up for his inability to fulfil his dream of being a Magiocrat. Believing that magic and science were both one and the same, he stayed at home, tinkering with small knick-knacks using parts that he would find around the streets. His inventions, though in their prototype stage, were quite popular with the other kids in his neighborhood, most typically imitated the effects of that of real magic, though none were really effective. Soon enough, he was able to raise enough money to buy better materials to work with, and after the death of his uncle, he inherited the home and converted it into a small workshop that he would come back to from time to time whenever he was inspired. He currently wanders around Felarya, wanting to see magic first hand and plan on how he could use technology to replicate that sort of magic.

Personality: A very curious fellow and a lively person. He tends to follow his instincts when travelling around Felarya and take caution as he observes others in combat or practice with magic. He always seems to take every situation with a smile, as his philosophy goes: "Every magician, whether they be stage performers, adventurers, or politicians, should always carry a smile even on their darkest moments, because that's when they can build the moment where they perform that one miracle that most have been dying to see."
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PostSubject: Re: Benjamin Baker   Benjamin Baker Icon_minitimeSun Jul 01, 2012 9:13 am

Sounds okay to me. Maybe you should say his uncle knew a bit about technology, otherwise, just with experimenting and tinkering with the parts he finds around he shouldn't be able to have made prototypes that "imitate real magic". Kinda hard for a kid. I also find it strange that he doesn't socialize with other kids yet his inventions are popular among them; if he doesn't go out, other children wouldn't know about his inventions.

Also, he seems a bit... empty right now. You should develop him a bit more. Like how did he manage to get that money he earned, and such.
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