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PostSubject: Oc Jezzebel reamped   Oc Jezzebel reamped Icon_minitimeFri Jun 29, 2012 2:51 pm

Hopefully this is much better than the last one.....

Name: Jezzebel
Race:Sea Krait Naga
Height: (Head to ground) 107ft (head to tail) 263ft
Age: 98 years old. Looks and Acts like a twenty one year old.
Hair Color:A steel Grey.
Eye Color: A solid gold.
Scale color: Black with a yellow stripe.
Magical Specialty: Water Based magic
Non-Magical Specialty: Singing.
Predation: Opportunistic. Food Category of 3-15 ft. Prefers not to eat mermaids. Though anything else is fair game.
Personality:Laid back. Loves to learn about new things and interesting things though. Always telling her those who meet her*and live* To Stay Frosty. She prefers to simply just go with the tides. If she has no motivation to do something she simply won't. For this many call her lazy but she could care less. "Life is to short and if you don't take the time to simply enjoy it, life will go right past you. Leaving you wondering where the time went."
How to befriend: An offering of food is always nice, loves little trinkets, and if your brave enough strike up a conversation. If you catch her interest for long enough you might not be on the menu for later. Sing to her for she loves to fall asleep to singing.
Mostly seen at: The Topazial Sea, Shillapo islands and Chioita city.
History:Was abandoned by her parents and siblings as she was the last of the eggs to hatch. Her parents thought her to be dead and along with all the other eggs which failed to hatch left her in a Coastal cave most likely to be prey to smaller creatures of Felarya which openly consume eggs. She hatched a few days later alone and afraid. Days went by and for the first couple of days she feed herself preying on the other eggs that had never hatched. She grew rapidly and hunted a few weeks later on small animals such as mice, fish and rabbits. She often after hunter would simply go back to her cave and sleep. One day though when she had returned she had found two Labrydines mermaids had invited themselves into her home and had been practicing a song which sounded rather beautiful. She looked at the mermaids and they at her. They feared for their lives as they had no wish to be eaten by a twenty foot naga.As Jezzebel approached them they coward in fear and apologized for intruduing. They immediately offered to clean Jezzebel's scales which were rather dirty due to a recent hunt. Jezebel agreeded to have her scales cleaned in exchange for not eating the mermaids. She watched curiously as they cleaned her scales leaving them shinier then they had ever been. Once finished Jezebel thanked the mermaids and forgave them for intruding. She was curious about the song they had been singing and asked if they could teach it to her. Their eyes widened happily as for the next few hours they taught the naga how to sing. Jezzebel had much trouble and the mermaids ask if she could go to thier gathering spot every day and learn there. She happily agreed and from then on went for her singing lessons at a cove only known to the mermaids and her. At first most of the smaller mermaids were wary of a rather lager naga being in their midst and the larger meraids wanted to simply have a meal but the two mermaids she had met before vied for her as she only wished to learn to sing nothing more and nothing less. The rest of the mermaids grudgingly agreed to allow Jezzebel to stay. As years went on Jezzbel improved greatly and with the more rime she spent at the Cove the more the mermaids began to accept her and love her. She was no longer a predator or prey she was simply a friend. They then took her in as one of their own and for the first time Jezzebel could say she had a family. Nowadays she still goes occasionally for a lesson or two to learn more songs but is usually found by the shore soaking in the sun for hours at a time or floating along the sea without a care in the world. The mermaids still view her as family and do everything to protect her and vice versa.
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PostSubject: Re: Oc Jezzebel reamped   Oc Jezzebel reamped Icon_minitimeSun Jul 01, 2012 9:03 am

Well, just two things. First is that you could have edited the first post of your other thread instead of having made a new thread for this. You know, to keep the forum tidy and such. Second is you should separate things into paragraphs. The backstory seems like an unreadable wall of text like that, and to be honest, I haven't read it because of that. I'll give it a try later on, after I finish browsing around the forum.
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