Wiki corrections

Oldman40k2003 wrote:

Pim18 wrote:

I could be wrong(english is not my main language)
But in the fairy kingdom page:

Tasenya Bridge

A bridge from the Sunfall thicket leading to the west toward Akaptor desert. The name Tasenya is that of a powerful ghosts who used to rule and terrorize the region and was defeated by fairies long ago

Is it one ghost or multiple? And if there are more then one then I think it 'were' not 'was'

Fixed.

While my deduction that the ghost was singular is not foolproof (because English is not Karbo's native language), the "a" in "The name Tasenya is that of a powerful..." heavily implies that there was only one ghost.
If there were multiple ghosts, the sentence probably would have looked like this: "The name Tasenya is that of a group of powerful ghosts who used to rule and terrorize the region and was defeated by fairies long ago." or (maybe) this: "The name Tasenya is the name of the powerful ghosts who used to rule and terrorize the region and was defeated by fairies long ago".

Typically one can not replace "who" with "were", because "who" deals with people (and it is a pronoun), and "were" is... well it is hard to describe, but one of the things it is, is a verb, so typically it can't replace a pronoun. As far as pluralization goes, "who" is both singular and plural. Examples: "Who are these bandits?" (a plural use), "Lone shadowy figure, who are you!?" (singular use), "Who are you?" (singular or plural).

Ok thanks for poitning out.

The link to echydins on the Misty glade entry doesn't bring up an article just the Marsh Fauna page, it appears that the echydins entry is on the Fauna page not the Marsh Fauna page.

Fixed that broken link and other broken "echydin" links.

The links for Thas Voidfingers and Ramtov Telekline in that little "Characters of Felarya" box are broken.

fixed, thanks

In the Shaper's Guild section of the Ryzelm'oire section in "Sea Depths", the "examples" of things that have come out of the Shaper's guild link no longer seems to work.

GlobFish wrote:

In the Shaper's Guild section of the Ryzelm'oire section in "Sea Depths", the "examples" of things that have come out of the Shaper's guild link no longer seems to work.

That's because the page it once linked to has been deleted.

Karbo, when you want to change a page's name, it's best to use the "Move" function. If you copy/paste and then delete, you end up with broken/red links.

I've changed the old page into a redirect to the new one. Thanks, Glob.

Yes I guess I should do that. It's just that, instinctively, I have a mefiance against redirects ^^; ( probably irrationnal though lol )

They're quite harmless, really. And rather useful.

Especially when you redirect page A to page B, and redirect page B to page A.

Kaiten and Namesta are listed under Felaryan naga species when they are, in fact, offworlders.

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Once marked, every time your go to sleep

Nemesis entry.

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The reign of Sineria

that is in the chronology event. Gosh, put a capital R on reign!

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After the fall of Sineria, various minor powers emerge, but not to the extent of the Sagolian empire or the dridder Kingdom.

Same thing here capital D on dridder Kingdom. This sentence is the first in Rise of Negav

On the succubus page. In the picture including Faldhatee, her name is misspelled as "Faldathée"

ok fixed ^^

I'm inclined to think that this would already have been pointed out, but...

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The vast majority of Felaryan forms of life are carnivorous and, for some reason, seem to have developed a liking for swallowing their prey (mostly adventurers) whole and alive!

I was under the impression that it had been agreed across the board that adventurers were not a staple food source for the vast majority of predators. That parenthetical statement would testify otherwise. Also, the paragraph it is contained within states that hybrid predators are the main danger of Felarya, which I think was also revised.

This is on the main page, of all places, under "Dangers". Its prominent location leads me to believe I cannot be the first to point this out, but I apologize for not perusing each page of this thread to verify.

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A huge bridge linking the kingdom to the nothern coast region. It's also called "the bridge of war", having been used a long time ago by a tribe of fairy to invade that nothern

i think noRthern should be the right word (grey bridge in fairy kingdom)

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Inded, any parasitic invertebrate

Isnt IndEEd? in the mangurr's text

ZionAtriedes wrote:

I was under the impression that it had been agreed across the board that adventurers were not a staple food source for the vast majority of predators. That parenthetical statement would testify otherwise. Also, the paragraph it is contained within states that hybrid predators are the main danger of Felarya, which I think was also revised.

This is on the main page, of all places, under "Dangers". Its prominent location leads me to believe I cannot be the first to point this out, but I apologize for not perusing each page of this thread to verify.

That's a point of content, so I'll leave it to Karbo.

Krisexy26 wrote:

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A huge bridge linking the kingdom to the nothern coast region. It's also called "the bridge of war", having been used a long time ago by a tribe of fairy to invade that nothern

i think noRthern should be the right word (grey bridge in fairy kingdom)

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Inded, any parasitic invertebrate

Isnt IndEEd? in the mangurr's text

Thanks; fixed.

Thank you, it's fixed

The Saslenoth links to Jungle Fauna page 2, but its entry is in the Dimensionally Unstable Terrain. Credit for the creation of them is also given in the Jungle Fauna page 2 instead of Dimensionally Unstable Terrain.

Sean Okotami wrote:

The Saslenoth links to Jungle Fauna page 2, but its entry is in the Dimensionally Unstable Terrain.

Not sure what you mean here. It links to it from where?

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Credit for the creation of them is also given in the Jungle Fauna page 2 instead of Dimensionally Unstable Terrain.

Fixed; thanks.

In the Forest of Whisper, the Saslenoth links to Jungle Fauna page 2. But I think it may be the case in other pages.

Sean Okotami wrote:

In the Forest of Whisper, the Saslenoth links to Jungle Fauna page 2. But I think it may be the case in other pages.

It is; I've fixed them too. Thanks.

I know this isn't really typographical errors and that Negav's chronology is work in progress, but I have noticed a contradiction. In there, Tonho is the last mention of the Neko King. However, for the longest time, Negav's entry alluded that the last one in power before the Magiocrats was Micolon. If Tonho is part of its name, it should be made clearer, as the two entries seem to disagree on who was the last ruler during the Great Destruction.