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Followers of Lataran

Lataran is also called "the last one laughing". He is the god of guile, trickery, games, riddle, illusions, thieves, and betrayers. He is represented as a frail, shady, genderless laughing figure, always wearing a grinning mask. He represents guile in its most ruthless form, elevating betrayal to a form of art. His followers are people with a rather interesting outlook on life, their beliefs aligned with believing in Lataran's teachings that any act is justified as long as it's cleverly done. From his teachings they have come to believe that In their vision, if you trick someone, you aren't the one to blame, - the one who has been tricked is. Moreover, by tricking them you taught teached them a valuable lesson for the future. Thus, Lataran followers see themselves as scholars of sort, spreading their "wisdom" through cruel trickery and malignant acts mean deception, "enlightening" their victims in the process. Naturally talented with words, bluffs, and disguises, they are skillful con-artists and rarely what they look like who rarely expose their true nature. Needless to say, they are widely seen as perfect jerks. They believe in theft but mostly for the beauty of the act. If there is an invaluable unvaluable treasure kept by one of the most powerful nobles of Negav, you can bet your last skevol that, at some points, it will be a target for Lataran's followers. Lataran himself is rumored to have build built the temple in the Forest of Whispers as a place for adventurers and other reckless people to take part in deadly games for fabulous rewards and his own great enjoyment.


Entry needed a big grammar check. Noticed it from the link in Q&A.

Thanks; fixed.

Not sure if this counts as a correction, but shouldn't some of the locations, especially in the Locations page, have more capital letters like Forest of Whispers, or Topazial Sea? I may be wrong, but I think that's how it works for the name of an area.

You're probably right. I moved the "Forest of whispers" page to "Forest of Whispers" yesterday, because that was the name actually used in the article. Most names should indeed probably be capitalised.

The Tolmeshal Forest is referred to as a Jungle in the description, I recommend changing to either a forest or a jungle, it cannot be both.

I've noticed a lot of predator characters on the wiki don't have their predator ranking, one of them being Belletia, is there a reason why some characters don't have any pred rankings?

Actually listing alphabetically would make it easier to look for specific creatures or plants.

Aside from that, I know I've been credited as Sean Okotami, but since I've changed my username, shouldn't I be credited with my newer username? Also, the idea of the sandstorm, or whichever idea is credited to Louis, Louis is actually me, so it'd be better that it's credited to Shady Knight as to avoid confusion.

Page: Menyssan
Paragraph one
"Her sharp eyes, amazing memory and methodical mind make her able to quickly deduct things that others would miss, and she always seem to be several steps ahead of her opponent in any games of wits."
I'm pretty sure this should be deduce.

Page: Fairy kingdom
Grey Bridge
"A huge bridge linking the kingdom to the northern coast region. It's also called "the bridge of war", having been used a long time ago by a tribe of fairy to invade that northern region, according to a legend. It looks like the petrifed and hollow trunk of a very ancient tree that has been carved with smal embrasures along its side that were probably used to fire arrows or magic missiles at the ennemy from safety."
small and enemy.

Nemyra's Palace
"Indeed, the palace in Felarya is actually just one of the numerous entrances to Nemyra's personnel universe."
Personal.

Page: Plant life2
Nemetarbor
"It is only when the soil starts to loose its fertility that these trees live up to their name, unearthing themselves from the soil and walking about on their roots."
Lose.

Nemyra's personnel universe? That I'd like to see. Where's the recruiting center?

Thanks, EvilGenius; fixed.

On the Tolmeshal Forest page, the link to spine beetles takes you to the top of a fauna page rather than directly to the entry on spine beetles itself. In fact, the entry on them doesn't seem to be even on that page. O.o

Thanks; fixed. (At some point, actually, lots of other fauna links will have to be fixed.)

Thanks; fixed. (And thank you for including the direct link.)

From the Hell entry.

"Evasions are very rare but not totally unheard of"

Shouldn't that be "Escapes are very rare, but not totally unheard of"?

It should indeed. Thanks; fixed.

Mutourks and Malyran Snake-Apes are not linked to in the Malyra Fen subpage.

Thanks; fixed.

(Edited out)

On the elves entry the full belly creativity is a trait of the scarlet elves the credits should be moved in the right section.

gwadahunter2222 wrote:

On the elves entry the full belly creativity is a trait of the scarlet elves the credits should be moved in the right section.

Thanks; done.

A two part edit.

1. The Ibiante and Frenzied Ibiante should be combined, seeing as they are the same species, just one has gone a "bit" mad.

2. I believe that Ibiantes should be move from the Dungeon Fauna page (Fauna6) to the Minor Races page, do to the mention of them living in groups and utilizing (and perhaps making) weapons such as daggers and spears. Also the fact that they can decimate adventuring parties quickly would seem to imply that they are using some sort of tactics.

Actually, for there it to be a "race", even a minor one, the species need to be sapient. If not, then it's not really a race since it doesn't have human-level intelligence.

In the arthronode entry, stun is mispelled as "stunt".