Wiki corrections

Huh. I didn't know you could do that. My mistake ^^;;;

Minor mistake: in the entry for the Ascarlin Mines, it says "Once your go deeper into the mines,".

Also, a suggestion, I know it's Old Man's job, but since he hasn't been here in a while, perhaps someone else could double-check the pages in his stead for mistakes to correct. I believe he left a list of which pages are left for him to check.

I've fixed the typo in the Ascarlin mines.

From the Oloonde lakeland: Some mermaids sometimes come the Jewel river and love to snatch unaware onlookers with a swift flick of their tongue.

Also: "Over the course of time, The water" That's an improper use of a capital letter.

Indeed; fixed.

I looked back, at it, I think the correction you should have made is "Some mermaids sometimes come FROM the Jewel River". The wording implies that they come from the Lake of Arrows and go to the Jewel River to catch people who go too close to the lake's bank, the complete opposite of what they should be. They should come from the river to hunt by the lake.

Quite so; fixed.

"Few in number, there mighty, pure white oaks are scattered throughout Felarya"

Should be they're mighty

http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Plant_life#Holy_Oak

Mr. I wrote:

"Few in number, there mighty, pure white oaks are scattered throughout Felarya"

Should be they're mighty

http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Plant_life#Holy_Oak

Actually, I think it's "these".

Indeed, it should be "these". It must have been a typo. I've fixed it.

(As a reminder, "they're" is a contraction of "they are". The word indicating possession is "their".)

Huh. Sounds like they both make sense to me if you say it out loud, but that could be just me xD

The Wiki wrote:

One of the soldier hold the rank of captain, and have second-highest authority under the two battlemages.

It should be "One of the soldiers holds the rank of captain, and has the second-highest authority under the two battlemages.

fixed, thank you ^^

Karbo wrote:

fixed, thank you ^^

And thank you for updating the University! ^_^ Will help when I go to write Axel, Tifana and other Isolon or Battle mage's bios.

While browsing the Wiki, I found something:

http://felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Science_and_Magic

Quote :

[First paragraph]
In Felarya, Science and magic are intricately intertwined in Felarya, and some [...]

One of those "in Felarya" is redundant.

Thanks; fixed.

While looking for something for Kharl the Chilotaur I got lost in the entries and was reading up on some and found this under Lykorpid:

The Wiki wrote:

It stand on six very strong, sturdy, talon-like legs that allow the creature to cling to tree trunks and branches, much like a spider.

That should be: It standson six very strong, sturdy, talon-like legs that allow the creature to cling to tree trunks and branches, much like a spider.

And...

The Wiki wrote:

Whenever an unsuspecting prey walks underneath it, the Lykorpid fail on top of it and proceed to devour it whole with its large circular mouth situated below its body, circled by numerous small eyes that gives the creature a very wide lateral field of vision.

Fails should be fall. XD I would be curious as to what failing on top of something would look like though.

Aslo there was:

The Wiki wrote:

One of the most remarkable trait of the Lykorpid is it chirps like a bird in order to deceive potential preys.

Two here. One of the most remarkable traits and preys I think should be prey.

Thanks; fixed.

Wiki wrote:

When they found out they were linked to the Negav dimensional gate, they reacted by setting numerous traps and defense systems around the arrival area in case some predators would someone be able to pass through.

Someone should be removed I think. ^^; It makes no sense.

Remember to specify the article, please. I've changed it to "somehow".

  Sorry! It was 2 AM and I sorta was out of it. I did wonder about that, but I went to sleep and didn't get to correct it. ^^; I'll keep in it mind from now on, thanks! ^_-

http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=The_Correctors#The_War

Second paragraph, "Some sequels can still be seen today" should probably be "Some consequences".

Also, the link to "http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Chronology#The_Era_of_Mirages" just goes to the Chronology page, without any extra direction.

Nyaha wrote:

http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=The_Correctors#The_War

Second paragraph, "Some sequels can still be seen today" should probably be "Some consequences".

It's a Gallicism. :)In French, the word "séquelles" means "aftermath". I've corrected it accordingly.

Quote :

Also, the link to "http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Chronology#The_Era_of_Mirages" just goes to the Chronology page, without any extra direction.

That can't be fixed, unfortunately, because of the current structure of the Chronology page. It's not subdivided into linkable sections.

French snack wrote:

Quote :

Also, the link to "http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Chronology#The_Era_of_Mirages" just goes to the Chronology page, without any extra direction.

That can't be fixed, unfortunately, because of the current structure of the Chronology page. It's not subdivided into linkable sections.

Which is why I think the link should be fixed so it isn't misleading, right?

http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Fauna4#Localith

I was reading the Localith, being quite impressed till I came across two errors. One was a grammar error:

The Wiki wrote:

A rare creature, and one of the larger known aquatic one

The second "one" should be ones. Plural.

The second error was:

The Wiki wrote:

When prospective prey gets too close to its head, the Lacolith will suddenly open its immense mouth, producing a brief, but almost irresistible current, sucking the unlucky creature right into its maw. Ironically, they pose little threat to divers, who are simply too small for the creature to bother with

I think it's inaccurate to say that a Localith doesn't pose ANY threat to a diver. If something is sucking water into it's mouth, via water magic or just a very strong current, it's going to suck up small things nearby too. I understand that perhaps it mean that in the context they don't hunt human sized prey, but non the less I think there should be some more specific info there saying that. ^^;