Announcement!

I will restart my stories from the start as I wrote myself in a corner. Basically, I messed up with the development of my OC, so I will have some introduction chapters that will have nothing with Felarya for a little while. Also, my magic system will be known only to my characters to avoid creating confusion. The plot will remain unchanged for the most part, but it will be altered with my character being *hopefully* part of Felarya and not the contrary. I will also try to tone him down; he will still be powerful, but only by maturing. In short, his powers won't be strong from the start, it will grow stronger just like he will grow stronger physically and mentally. He will still have a Demon Form, but no dark side; the Demon Form is only when additional power is needed and it's temporary; like Hyper Mode. Again, as he will grow up, he will be able to stay longer in that form longer. But it will be the least prominent form, I prefer his Armored Form.

I apologize for the inconvenience, but it's best that I start over than continue the way I am heading. There will be no Chosen One crap, he just gained newfound powers, like it was the result of an accident. There will be no Soul Split thing either; just so you know, I will try having my character interact in Felarya instead of making it. But I will need your support, so don't hesitate to point out were I need improvement and where I really did a good job.

By the way, my side story featuring my three predators will remain. I currently don't know what to write for the third part, so hopefully I will come up with something.

EDIT: On second thought, screw the Demon Form. I'll go for the Armored Form only.

Well, if you say so Sean. Your char was always cool, but if you're taking time to revamp him, you have my support.

i liked it the way it was but it did have its problems i noticed

as long as the rapest fairy is still there you wont here many complaints from me. but i shall attempt to help if i notice anything off


i wish you good luck in this

dreadis wrote:

i liked it the way it was but it did have its problems i noticed

as long as the rapest fairy is still there you wont here many complaints from me. but i shall attempt to help if i notice anything off


i wish you good luck in this

Véronique will stay, but she won't do it this time. That was only a throwaway joke.

[quote="Sean Okotami]"Véronique will stay, but she won't do it this time. That was only a throwaway joke.[/quote]

damn...it was funny

besides who wouldnt mind being raped by one of felarya's female demi humans(without being eaten afterwards so vivian isnt included in this)

im assuming that she will still pursue sean so it should still be funny if you dont reuse that part


EDIT *FIXED*

dreadis wrote:

[quote="Sean Okotami"Véronique will stay, but she won't do it this time. That was only a throwaway joke.

damn...it was funny

besides who wouldnt mind being raped by one of felarya's female demi humans(without being eaten afterwards so vivian isnt included in this)

im assuming that she will still pursue sean so it should still be funny if you dont reuse that part[/quote]Oh yes, she will still be crazy about him.

Sean Okotami wrote:

I will restart my stories from the start as I wrote myself in a corner.

Alas, another has suffered from the poor fate of "Corner Writing".

Good luck with rewriting.

EDIT;

Sean Okotami wrote:

besides who wouldnt mind being raped by one of felarya's female demi humans(without being eaten afterwards so vivian isnt included in this)

Rape BAD.

Malahite wrote:

Sean Okotami wrote:

I will restart my stories from the start as I wrote myself in a corner.

Alas, another has suffered from the poor fate of "Corner Writing".

Good luck with rewriting.

Wrote myself in a corner because I fucked up the start. ^^; But hey, it was my very first fiction ever, that was to be expected.

It now starts on Earth and will have nothing to do with Felarya for a little while, just to give my characters development.

That last part you quote was dreadis, that was only a throwaway joke I made in Chapter 8. I won't do it again.

Malahite wrote:

EDIT;

dreadis wrote:

besides who wouldnt mind being raped by one of felarya's female demi humans(without being eaten afterwards so vivian isnt included in this)

fixed because im the one who actually said that

Well good luck to you, it takes a lot to start over !

good luck

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besides who wouldnt mind being raped by one of felarya's female demi humans(without being eaten afterwards so vivian isnt included in this)

Everyone?
The definition of "rape" is to be forced into intercourse against one's will. If you like it, it's not rape.

Learn your english! XP

GREGOLE wrote:

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besides who wouldnt mind being raped by one of felarya's female demi humans(without being eaten afterwards so vivian isnt included in this)

Everyone?
The definition of "rape" is to be forced into intercourse against one's will. If you like it, it's not rape.

Learn your english! XP

THE WIKTIONARY wrote:

The act of forcing sexual intercourse or other sexual activity upon another person, without their consent and/or against their will.

it is possible to not consent and like something at the same time. courts have said that many times.

I have a new announcement, read it there.