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 |  Subject: Potter's Service Wagon related OCs  Sat Mar 07, 2015 7:47 pm | |
| This seems like as good a place as any for this... Characters related to the Potter's Service Wagon! Susumu (m) - Owner of the Store. - Spoiler:
Height: 6' 2"
Race: Inu
Appearance: A sickly looking inu who's face almost always seems to be relaxed with some form of smile. He generally has extremely messy light brown hair which hangs past most of his back, as he only ever cuts hair that falls in directly front of his eyes. When he gets serious about something he puts his hair in a slightly less messy ponytail. His clothes are typically always covered in some for of mud or clay. Rarely Susumu is spotted with clean hair and clothes.
Personality: In short, A prankster. Susumu enjoys playing pranks and setting traps, With the severity of the traps escalating with how much he dislikes the individual in question.Those that he likes are treated with the occasional tiny prank, while those he dislikes are often lead on elaborate goose chases, which often lead to a fairies stomach, or if they're lucky, a potentially dangerous magic trap set up by one of his friends. Susumu simply does what he wants, and is often quite stubborn about these things unless someone he likes changes his mind.
Susumu is the owner of the Potter's Wagon Shop.
Junko (f) - Fairy - Spoiler:
Height: Shorter than those around her.
Size range: 9" to 80' approximately
Race: Fairy
Appearance: Whatever seems the least likely to draw attention. She is generally wearing clothes that match her surroundings colors, but rarely will fly around without clothes when in areas that fairies are more common, but those occasions are extremely rare. Her hair falls past her shoulders, and she uses magic to change its color to whatever seems to be the most common in the area.
Personality: Nervous, shy, and opportunistic. Junko is quite dangerous if she catches you by surprise, but otherwise she's very easily dealt with. If she notices anybody looking at her she will often try to hide. Should her attempt to hide fail she's quite easily flustered and gullible. Additionally, if she takes too long to swallow somebody, and they're in any condition to talk, She can be easily talked out of a meal. Similarly, If somebody spots her as she has someone in her mouth she's likely to release her meal and flee.
Should She be left unseen she'll try to snatch a quick meal, but simply acknowledging her will cause her to stop any attempts. She'll often talk to herself to get worked up enough to make a quick attempt at whatever she need to do at the moment.
Junko is currently being "employed" by Susumu at the Store and is providing the magic for his various schemes.
Not the entire crew for the wagon yet, but it's a start. |
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Mortis
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| | Subject: Re: Potter's Service Wagon related OCs Tue Mar 17, 2015 12:12 am | |
| Yo! Welcome to Felarya. Sorry that I'm the first to reply after all this time but things are generally slow here and there isn't much to comment on but I will comment on what is there.
First of all while this is a character bio, it would help to include details of what Potters service wagon is and more specifically how it fits in with the characters. Just would be nice to have some more information to work with.
Susumu is fine as a character, same as Junko but I do have my questions. And here they are:
>Junko is a fairy. Susumu was a lone pot merchant, I assume, up until he hired her. Junko is apparently known for eating people when she gets the chance despite her being timid. So what I want to know is how did she come to be in his empoyment? Hiring a fairy is no easy task, especially one that hides and eats people that are off guard. How did Susumu manage to avoid being eaten? What reason did Junko have to accept his offer? And how do the two of them act around each other? What kind of relationship do they have?
>What use does Susumu have for magic? Based on what I have read, the only use he would have is to make pots with magical traps but is this the only reason? Apparently he has schemes but what are they?
>How did Susumu come to found his shop? Based on his description he does not seem like a businessman at all and it isn't obvious how he acquired the funds necessary to make his (several) pot shops possible.
>Lastly, what motive does Susumu have to deliberately annoy the Jar'el? This seems like something that should be explained or at the very least hinted at.
Those are the questions raised when I read over these bios. Expanding them and adding more backstory and information such as how the two interact and feel about one another and how and why Susumu came to be a pot merchant on an anti-Jar'el mission. I hope this helped you. I hope you have fun here. ^^ The community is very nice but obviously your post was overlooked. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Potter's Service Wagon related OCs Tue Mar 17, 2015 5:26 pm | |
| You raise some good questions. I suppose I should have posted a link to the original post about the shop for some background huh? ^^" https://felarya.forumotion.com/t3805-the-potter-s-service-wagonI'll just give some quick thoughts about some of the questions for the moment and get back to you on some of those. As far as Junko's accepting the job, I'd place the timing as right after any failed attempt to eat Susumu, and it probably involved being bribed with being the fairy at the end of some of Su's pranks along with other factors(That i need to think up). I'll work on your other questions some and post some actual answers later. ^^" And thanks, I've been lurking around the chatbox, so plenty of fun has been had already. |
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| | Subject: Re: Potter's Service Wagon related OCs Tue Mar 17, 2015 9:17 pm | |
| Glad you are liking it here. ^^ I tend to look over the forum at around 6AM, which is around midnight for most of America. As such I hardly ever see anyone in the chatbox. ^^' | |
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