DarkOne
Survivor
Posts : 967
Join date : 2012-04-27
Age : 40
Location : Smart predators don't reveal their positions
 |  Subject: The Ballard Of Crisis And Gary  Sun Apr 24, 2016 3:21 am | |
| The Ballard Of Crisis And Gary Crisis and Garry crossed paths one day;
the sky was clear, the birds were gay;
Crisis’ eyes were all ablaze;
As Gary tried hopelessly to avoid her gaze.
He knew the look; he knew the score,
He had seen that face from a predator before.
Garry cringed in fear and dread
As Crisis drew near, smiled and said:
“Let’s do it, let’s do it, eat you while the time is right!
I’m feeling
Appealing,
I’ve really got an appetite.
I longer
I hunger—
For the little fella with a woolly grey jumper.
Let’s do it, let’s do it today!”
But he said…
“You can’t do it, you can’t do it!
You shouldn’t eat live meat.
I’m petty
And sweaty
I just am not that sweet.
I am not fit,
And I must admit:
I’ll probably just make you feel sick.
You can’t do it, you can’t do it today.”
So she said…
“Let’s do it, let’s do it, please don’t be so dumb
I’ll be fine,
As I dine,
I’ve got a strong tumtum.
I’m starving
I’m charging!
I wouldn’t mind vigintuple servings!
Let’s do it, let’s do it today!”
Then he said…
“You can’t do it, you can’t do it,
Eating people is plain wrong.
I must quarrel,
It’s immoral;
Your tum is where I don’t belong.
It’s not abstract—
It’s a fact —
I don’t want to be in your digestive tract!
You can’t do it, you can’t do it today.”
And she replied…
“Let’s do it, let’s do it, you are just talking food!
You’re yummy,
for my tummy
You got to change your attitude!
Don’t chide me,
Remind me;
What do I have to do to get you inside me?
Let’s do it, let’s do it today.
Then he squawked…
“You can’t do it, you can’t do it,
there’s better things to do,
Go wonder
over yonder
And find someone to screw;
it isn’t jolly,
This folly—
If you’re good I’ll read you a bedtime story!
You can’t do it, you can’t do it today.”
And she excitedly said…
“Let’s do it, let’s do it, you inside me will turn me on!
It’s exciting,
in this lighting,
Why else would I sing this song
Don’t be silly,
It will be merry;
To have you rolling around in my belly,
Let’s do it, let’s do it today.
And he yelled…
“You can’t do it, you can’t do it,
This will cause me great pain,
it’s dreadful,
you devil,
How many ways do I have to explain?
I am panicked,
You’re manic—
I rather jump into something volcanic!
You can’t do it, you can’t do it today.”
But she then proclaimed…
“Let’s do it, let’s do it, this is a vore fiction!
It’s expected,
so don’t dissect it,
This is a ridiculous depiction,
It’s not complex,
This fiction’s effects;
Are primary concerned of subtext relating to sex,
Let’s do it, let’s do it today.
And he screamed…
“You can’t do it, you can’t do it,
This is just distasteful;
I don’t like it,
so please quit,
This kind of fiction is wasteful;
don’t chose me,
Don’t use me,
Mother sent a note saying you must excuse me
you can’t do it, you can’t do it today.”
And she expelled…
“Let’s do it, let’s do it, what is it that you’re here for?
It’s unfeasible,
You’re unreasonable,
Making me work in other fiction is a chore,
So what’s next,
I am perplexed,
I can’t see myself working in any other context,
Let’s do it, let’s do it today.
Guess what?....
She did it, She did it,
The poor guy was out of luck,
She ate him
kind of grim
He’s digesting in crisis’ gut;
She’s happy,
Poor chappy—
We’ll see him again when she next goes crappy,
She did it, She did it today. | |
|
jedi-explorer
Felarya cartographer
Posts : 1474
Join date : 2011-12-06
Age : 36
Location : Fantasy Land ^_^
| | Subject: Re: The Ballard Of Crisis And Gary Sun Apr 24, 2016 1:03 pm | |
| *Stands up and yells excitedly* Bravismo!! Most excellently preformed and well written portrayal of how cruel and yet comical the how entangling the food Web of Felarya is. I could see this as an- no! The main act of the Negavian Theater! With many a repeat preformance! Again Bravismo! Encore! Encore!! | |
|
dragon808tr
Survivor
Posts : 936
Join date : 2014-10-30
| | Subject: Re: The Ballard Of Crisis And Gary Sun Apr 24, 2016 8:35 pm | |
| Woah! Nice poetry! It feels like a 2 person play and I read it as such! I really enjoyed this, especially the parts of digestion. I dont have any critiques beyond that really! It would be so cool to see more like this!  | |
|
Sponsored content
| | Subject: Re: The Ballard Of Crisis And Gary | |
| |
|
