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PostSubject: Frost Peak on the wiki   Fri Oct 30, 2009 6:38 pm

On the wiki, Frost Peak reads as being south of the Great Marshes.

"Frost Peak is a seven thousand foot tall mountain, standing in the middle of a smaller mountain range to the south of the great marshes."

However, Soral Swamp is...

"The Soral swamp is situated just between the mangroves of Chidokai forest and the Great marshes further east, and is bordered on its north side by the Frost peak mountains"
So how can you be south of Frost Peak and west of the Great Marshes, if Frost Peak is to the south of the Great Marshes? Unless the Great Marshes encircle Frost Peak on its west, that's impossible. I recommend moving Frost Peak to the north of the great marshes. You know, like it reads on the map.
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PostSubject: Re: Frost Peak on the wiki   Fri Oct 30, 2009 6:46 pm

hey you've been promoted to "naga food" congradulations.

anyway that does seem kind of a problem, but you might wanna contact one of the wiki editors. i think oldman40k is one...
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PostSubject: Re: Frost Peak on the wiki   Fri Oct 30, 2009 6:54 pm

I got promoted? Whoo-hoo! Well, I'll do just that.
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PostSubject: Re: Frost Peak on the wiki   Fri Oct 30, 2009 6:55 pm

Didn't you notice that naga following behind you? Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Frost Peak on the wiki   Fri Oct 30, 2009 7:02 pm

quick stabs- RUN!

of course that wouldn't save you anyway, but hey, if you manage not to get eaten you might get promoted "roaming thug". of course the naga's may like you even more, so thats only more running you'll have to do...
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PostSubject: Re: Frost Peak on the wiki   Fri Oct 30, 2009 7:02 pm

... is it a wiki editor naga?

If not, then I'll take refuge... IN AUDACITY! YAAARGH! (draws a rocket launcher and a katana)
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PostSubject: Re: Frost Peak on the wiki   Fri Oct 30, 2009 9:12 pm

Yes this is right there is some serious glitches here ^^;

thank you for pointing it out Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Frost Peak on the wiki   Mon Nov 16, 2009 5:25 pm

I believe that this inconsistency has been fixed now. Please let us know if you find other inconsistencies.
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PostSubject: Re: Frost Peak on the wiki   Mon Nov 16, 2009 9:49 pm

i see some redundancies in explanations on the wiki. for example:

"Felarya is a strange and immense jungle world, situated at a crossroad between dimensions, making it dimensionally unstable. Lots of odd things happen there. For one, random worlds often connect themselves to Felarya for no apparent reason."

you dont need to have "...between dimensions, making it dimensionally unstable" we already know its a dimension from that, perhaps something like:

Felarya is a strange and immense jungle world, being located (improperly?) between dimensions makes it unstable.

something like that. having "dimensions" located so close to each other makes the statement sound off.
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PostSubject: Re: Frost Peak on the wiki   Tue Nov 17, 2009 6:39 am

The wording wasn't grammatically incorrect, but I adjusted it some to remove duplication.
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PostSubject: Re: Frost Peak on the wiki   Tue Nov 17, 2009 10:10 am

Mhh I went back to

"Felarya is a strange and immense jungle world, situated at a crossroad between dimensions, which make it dimensionally unstable"

because I think it made it easier to understand thet the world is unstable because it's situated at a crossroad between dimensions. What do you think ?
In anyway, please don't hesitate if you think there is further parts that could be better worded there Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Frost Peak on the wiki   Tue Nov 17, 2009 10:20 am

sure i just dont like repeating adjectives so close to each other.
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