Titan's Tales

Excuse the cheesy title but I was bored heh. Anyways I posted the bio of this character in the ideas section and figured I may as well share my first story with him as well- please feel free to criticize me, hit me with a wrench, or what have you if you got an idea for me to change or if I'm doing anything right- I haven't written a story for fun in eons and just want to try to join this community. There's not much in the way of plot at all yet, I just want to know if I'm doing ok in regards to characters and basic structure of writing so this is more of a test run for me to see if I can do anything.

http://asuroth.deviantart.com/art/A-Titanic-Adventure-Begins-116841587

Edit: oh and I'd like to thank Zoekin for encouraging me to write originally...its partly why I based my character in Miragia Forest near where Katrika hunts!

And here's the next part of the series I'm trying to write after much procrastination joyfully pouncing and reading anything anyone else does around here to avoid my own work! Anyways I'll save the rants and loads of talking and just do the link- I think I did enough of the rant in the comments section as is.

http://asuroth.deviantart.com/art/Meeting-the-Neighbors-118171383

...and yes I do love having Anna use the wrench as a weapon a lot, its fun to me alright!