Welcome to he world that is........Felarya

You fall with a thump as You land into the Stomach,

Your dazed for a second as you try and see where you are, but you can see nothing but darkness.

You last remember the Blond haired Naga shoving you into her mouth,

Suddenly a loud gurgling sound feels the air as the acids pour in.

You scream as you try to stand up to get out of the acid, but instead you slip and fall into the hot burning acid

You scream out in pain as you feel yourself slowly dissolves into a soup for the predator.

Your skin is slowly dissolved off your bones by the incredible acid.

The next thing you feel is your insides burn and dissolve as the acid travels down your burned throat.

You scream out but no one is there to help you now.

You frail around in the darkness that is the Stomach of the Naga, Trying to fight of Death but it is no use.

You have become a meal for this Predator and there is nothing that can save you know.

Your last waking Moments are of Pain as blackness takes a hold of you. You slip beneath the acid unconscious.


Welcome... To Felarya

It's just the traditional Felaryan welcome (which is also the traditional Felaryan goodbye)

I'd use a spell check if I were you. There were a couple of misspelled words and a lot of incorrect capitals and sloppy punctuation. With some work it could be OK.