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PostSubject: Dryad. development help appreciated   Dryad. development help appreciated Icon_minitimeMon Nov 16, 2009 8:42 pm

this is the development I have so far. this is the first time i've actually gathered this all into one place, so help is appreciated.

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Seevlyne: roughly 90 years old, her age matches her height. when she was young the bandits picked on her, and when she asked why they were doing it they told her its just part of the game. When she grew up and found that there were food sized bandits too she just ate them thinking it was her turn to be on the offense team.

She also moves around a lot being one of those nomadic dryads. she uses her mouth-vines to eat people in various ways, it depends what kind of vines attach onto the victim. it it's a smaller vine, it will most likely wrap itself around its prey, and drain the prey's energy before putting said victim to her mouth. If it's a larger vine, it might just swallow immediately, one advantage to this is that even if the character was swallowed with their clothes on, and cuts through the vine, there are still dozens of other vines that will attack them.

when she was in the fairy kingdom early on she made a bet with some fairies, and won. she was exposed to intense magic that warped her vines so that they will always have a mouth on the end of them, sometimes instead of a mouth, its a flower pod that deceives itself as a normal flower instead of a mouth.

at one point in her life, while she was moving to her next location she had a chat with cypress, and since then has developed a crush. ( permission given for the most part. just need a plausible way for seevlyne to have met cypress )

seevlyne has hair that are a bunch of thin vines. it resembles hair, but being vines they are much more durable. (i might just change it to leafy hair, or flowery hair)


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PostSubject: Re: Dryad. development help appreciated   Dryad. development help appreciated Icon_minitimeMon Nov 16, 2009 8:50 pm

Are the flowers used to lure potential prey in? If so, they should probably be brightly colored, or have some sort of luring function. Other than a set physical description, this looks good so far. And it may be a good idea to elaborate on the bandits a little more.
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PostSubject: Re: Dryad. development help appreciated   Dryad. development help appreciated Icon_minitimeMon Nov 16, 2009 8:57 pm

heh, they were all eaten. including the journalist recording the event X3

but what specifically do you mean with developing the bandits?
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PostSubject: Re: Dryad. development help appreciated   Dryad. development help appreciated Icon_minitimeMon Nov 16, 2009 9:02 pm

Well..from the sounds of it, you have two groups of bandits. Ones that picked on her earlier in life, and the ones that she ate later. Obviously the ones that got eaten need no explanation at all. But the first group (Presuming it wasn't the same as the second) could still be alive and around. Which could make for a future confrontation. And flowery hair would probably match the flower motif you have going with the vine mouths.
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PostSubject: Re: Dryad. development help appreciated   Dryad. development help appreciated Icon_minitimeMon Nov 16, 2009 11:19 pm

true. maybe some of the flowers have sprouted on the ends of the vines?

possible bark effects:

sleeping aroma,
trust-inducing aroma
a horrid smell that also burns
acid-ish atmosphere
throat locking. induces automatic gag reflex
(some others im trying to remember)
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PostSubject: Re: Dryad. development help appreciated   Dryad. development help appreciated Icon_minitimeTue Nov 17, 2009 1:50 am

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often she loves to eat people via the special vines she has.
More detail on this would be good.
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PostSubject: Re: Dryad. development help appreciated   Dryad. development help appreciated Icon_minitimeTue Nov 17, 2009 2:15 am

yeah, well its a skeleton, i'll think about it more, uh...later today at this point XD

so far though i think she sounds good.
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