Need volunteers to help review a story

I have written a story and I would like to know if anyone is willing to review a 6-page story.

I'll give any details to those who ask.

I will, but I am not much of a spell cheacker or Grammer cheacker.

I'd rather email you the story instead of post it here or on DA, but it depends mostly on how you want to review it.

Can I?

hmm im gonna see who else volunteer. I dont want everyone to read it early or it wont be a surprise!

My grammar and spell checking skills are at your service.