I finally get it!

FurryKurry wrote:

I thought you said in the chat that it was because you had incorporated too much fighting? :O

i did. when i said precisely it meant i came to an understandin of what i am now supposed to do

While I did find some of it to be a bit over the top, you did have some great predators in your story. I liked both Rayne and Illiana for example. The way Rayne was described several times made her out to be an underdog of immense proportions, which was an amusing lilt to the normal Felaryan theme.