Still Young

http://nightgolem.deviantart.com/art/Still-Young-Prologue-93824472

Thats a prologue for a story for my character Bryo on how he is what he is and got to felarya, I like him and wanna do normal stories for him but first i thought it would make more sense this way, just to clear any confusion about him up for when I do. I don't want him to become big or important so i wont write him as such. Just.. I would rather have a background out for him then confuse people.. does that make sense?

I jus wanna see how it sounds so far and get some suggestions for the later chapters when he gets in. I do plan on having him meet a dryad but I'm not sure what kind or what area he would appear in. Any suggestions for that? I wanna look for a kind that can uproot itself and move around every once in awhile and would be willing to help a young confused plant get to the grove of carnivorous plants. It just seems like a place where a plant could stay safe until it at least changes to an adult.. XD ><; so.. some extra info about the grove or stories involving it that might help me with that part.. any help at all.. would be nice x.x

I have finished the First Chapter of still young. It is titled Birthday. I have gotten my details more figured out about when he finally gets to felarya where he will be and what the mother figure will be(a deertaur). But I am still open to suggestions or anything that could be helpful. Thank you!
http://nightgolem.deviantart.com/art/Still-Young-Birthday-154196027


[EDIT]
I have finished chapter two of still young. It is titled goodbye. It was hard to write because it was so depressing to write x_x but i felt energized by the comment on the first one^^; Looking for a sub editor or help like that with my chapters and prologue so i can fix any of my mistakes~ thank you.
http://nightgolem.deviantart.com/art/Still-Young-Goodbye-154541082