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Shady Knight
Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580
Join date : 2008-01-20
Age : 34
 |  Subject: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised)  Sat Aug 23, 2008 12:45 pm | |
| Okay, I revised this story arc and changed the style of the writing, as well as some plot elements. Even if you read it before, I recommend you read it again, as the writing style is (hopefully) more cinematic.
Chapter I - http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-I-95794989 | |
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Shady Knight
Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580
Join date : 2008-01-20
Age : 34
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:40 pm | |
| Chapter II - http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-II-97301104 | |
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The Joker
Clown Prince of Crime
Posts : 2388
Join date : 2008-07-17
Location : Traveling through time and space in a police box.
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Sun Sep 07, 2008 2:36 pm | |
| Great story so far! Looking forward to more! | |
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Shady Knight
Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580
Join date : 2008-01-20
Age : 34
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Wed Sep 24, 2008 12:40 pm | |
| Chapter III - http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Uknown-III-98806992 | |
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The Joker
Clown Prince of Crime
Posts : 2388
Join date : 2008-07-17
Location : Traveling through time and space in a police box.
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Wed Sep 24, 2008 2:36 pm | |
| *laughs* Ah, poor guys. If I were in there shoes, I would have abandoned all hope and ran around in circles flailing my arms around in the air yelling random gibberish. | |
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Shady Knight
Lord of the Elements
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Join date : 2008-01-20
Age : 34
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Wed Oct 08, 2008 12:32 pm | |
| Chapter IV, also the last chapter - http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-IV-100106392 | |
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Shady Knight
Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580
Join date : 2008-01-20
Age : 34
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Sat Oct 25, 2008 11:32 am | |
| Decided IV won't be the last. So...Chapter V - http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-V-101643427 | |
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Shady Knight
Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580
Join date : 2008-01-20
Age : 34
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Tue Nov 25, 2008 1:53 pm | |
| Chapter VI - http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-VI-104605657 | |
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Shady Knight
Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580
Join date : 2008-01-20
Age : 34
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Tue Dec 30, 2008 2:33 pm | |
| Chapter VII - http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-VII-107897301 | |
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Shady Knight
Lord of the Elements
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Age : 34
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Mon Jan 12, 2009 5:59 am | |
| Side chapter this time, and a big one.
Chapter 7.5 - http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-7-5-109208743 | |
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Shady Knight
Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580
Join date : 2008-01-20
Age : 34
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Fri Jan 23, 2009 11:23 am | |
| Alright, this one is more of a transition chapter, so it's gonna be less detailed overall.
Chapter VIII - http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-8-110444479 | |
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Mickilla
valiant swordman
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Join date : 2008-03-19
Age : 36
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Fri Jan 23, 2009 5:41 pm | |
| Looks good. The ending was timed well and the addition of new characters was very interesting. Keep up the good work. | |
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Shady Knight
Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580
Join date : 2008-01-20
Age : 34
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Sat Mar 07, 2009 8:28 am | |
| It's been a long time, but the story is back!
Chapter 9 - http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-9-115092320 | |
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Shady Knight
Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580
Join date : 2008-01-20
Age : 34
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Sat Apr 11, 2009 2:24 pm | |
| Chapter X - http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-10-118898538 | |
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Shady Knight
Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580
Join date : 2008-01-20
Age : 34
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Thu May 21, 2009 11:26 am | |
| Chapter XI - http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-11-120989511
Chapter XII - http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-12-123130653 | |
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Archmage_Bael
Mara's snack
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Join date : 2009-05-05
Age : 35
Location : Shatterock Caldera
| | Subject: Re: Felarya - The Land Unknown (Revised) Thu May 21, 2009 11:30 am | |
| i should start at the beginning instead of reading random chapters -_- | |
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