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melancholy-melody13 Temple scourge
Posts : 618 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 32 Location : Under your bed
| Subject: Crisis Nightmare Sat Feb 16, 2008 5:13 pm | |
| In the vast world of Felarya there was a pretty blonde haired naga traveling through the forest looking around for a snack. She was humming happily to herself when she sensed something up ahead. Quickly and quietly, she approched this possible prey. Peering through some vegitation, she saw a lone neko sitting on a rock with strange markings on her orange fur. Crisis licked her lips. She loved the taste of nekos and couldn't have asked for a better treat! Skillfully, Crisis slithered around behind the neko, sneaking up until she was right behind her. Quickly, Crisis picked up the neko in one hand. "Hi there!" Crisis said cheerfully at the neko who for some reason wasn't struggling or even looked shocked.
"Ello ello." Said the Neko. "Mind putting me down? I dislike hights." Crisis was a bit confused to why her prey was so calm. She shrugged this thought out as her mouth watered.
"Sorry can't do that I'm hungry." Crisis replyed cheerfully, and to her surprise the Neko just smiled at her then said
"Oh thats to bad, because so am I." Suddenly Crisis felt very dizzy. Then, to her shock, she felt as though she was falling. The world around her swirled, making her slightly nausious. After a few seconds, she came back to her senses and looked at her hand. The Neko was gone. Looking up, Crisis saw the shock of her life. The Neko was now towering over her! How was this possible? Looking around, she noticed the Neko hadn't grown. She had shrunk! Squeaking with fear she tried to quickly slither off but the Neko wasn't gonna let that happen, she quickly picked up Crisis and raised her to eye level.
"You shoulda just put me down, little naga." Crisis Stuttered trying to form a sentence "W.... ww...whhat aree you???
Giggling, the neko calmly said "Your worst nightmare."
Before Crisis could protest she was thrown into the neko's mouth. It was dark and moist and she could still feel her tail hanging out of the nekos mouth.
"Let me out!" Crisis yelled, struggling, she could her the happy moan of the neko as she sucked on Crisis. Soon Crisis was completly soaked in the Neko's saliva. Thats when she felt the tongue begin to push her back. Crisis tried to wrestle her way out, but it was no use. Soon the powerful muscles of the neko's throat grabbed Crisis and she was slowly pulled down into the waiting stomach...
"AHHH!!!" Crisis screamed as she woke up. It was still dark outside and she was tightly coiled around a tree branch. Panting and covered in cold sweat. Crisis took deep breaths. "It was just a dream... it was just a dream." Then Crisis noticed a peice of orange fur in her hand. She stared at it for a while, then thossed it away. Quickly, she coiled back around her tree and tried to go back to sleep. She miiiiiiiight be going on neko-abstinance for a bit, now... | |
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Pendragon Grand Mecha Enthusiast
Posts : 3229 Join date : 2007-12-09
| Subject: Re: Crisis Nightmare Sat Feb 16, 2008 5:34 pm | |
| Haha! Very nice story.
I've always thought it would be cool for an ironic twist of fate like this.
Excellent. | |
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Spykeofkonoha valiant swordman
Posts : 181 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 40
| Subject: Re: Crisis Nightmare Sat Feb 16, 2008 5:35 pm | |
| Heh, an interesting short story. good job. | |
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melancholy-melody13 Temple scourge
Posts : 618 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 32 Location : Under your bed
| Subject: Re: Crisis Nightmare Sat Feb 16, 2008 5:54 pm | |
| - Pendragon wrote:
- Haha! Very nice story.
I've always thought it would be cool for an ironic twist of fate like this.
Excellent. Lol thank you thats what I was going for ^_^ | |
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melancholy-melody13 Temple scourge
Posts : 618 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 32 Location : Under your bed
| Subject: Re: Crisis Nightmare Sat Feb 16, 2008 5:54 pm | |
| - Spykeofkonoha wrote:
- Heh, an interesting short story. good job.
^^ Thank you! | |
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gwadahunter2222 Master cartographer
Posts : 1842 Join date : 2007-12-08 Age : 40
| Subject: Re: Crisis Nightmare Sat Feb 16, 2008 6:20 pm | |
| Nice short story I can tell you you one things for some nagas it was real | |
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melancholy-melody13 Temple scourge
Posts : 618 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 32 Location : Under your bed
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dreadis valiant swordman
Posts : 221 Join date : 2008-01-30
| Subject: Re: Crisis Nightmare Sat Feb 16, 2008 7:50 pm | |
| i laughed for like 2 minutes
so this is a naga nightmare...makes sense | |
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melancholy-melody13 Temple scourge
Posts : 618 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 32 Location : Under your bed
| Subject: Re: Crisis Nightmare Sat Feb 16, 2008 8:15 pm | |
| - dreadis wrote:
- i laughed for like 2 minutes
so this is a naga nightmare...makes sense Yay! ^^ lol yep | |
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Ravana3k Seasoned adventurer
Posts : 178 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 38 Location : Nuremberg
| Subject: Re: Crisis Nightmare Sun Feb 17, 2008 3:07 am | |
| Yeah THAT's a real nightmare xD | |
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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Crisis Nightmare Sun Feb 17, 2008 3:14 am | |
| I am not sure the abstinence will last very long XD | |
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Rythmear Survivor
Posts : 941 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 35 Location : The place you fear.
| Subject: Re: Crisis Nightmare Sun Feb 17, 2008 3:24 am | |
| It'll be one of those things she's forgotten within a few hours. | |
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melancholy-melody13 Temple scourge
Posts : 618 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 32 Location : Under your bed
| Subject: Re: Crisis Nightmare Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:45 am | |
| - Karbo wrote:
- I am not sure the abstinence will last very long XD
Yep lol knowing Crisis ^^ | |
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melancholy-melody13 Temple scourge
Posts : 618 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 32 Location : Under your bed
| Subject: Re: Crisis Nightmare Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:46 am | |
| - Ravana3k wrote:
- Yeah THAT's a real nightmare xD
When I first thought of the idea I was cracking up laughing for a good few minutes ^^ | |
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Shady Knight Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580 Join date : 2008-01-20 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Crisis Nightmare Sun Feb 17, 2008 8:24 am | |
| Just to know, did Crisis ever met Aimi before? | |
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melancholy-melody13 Temple scourge
Posts : 618 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 32 Location : Under your bed
| Subject: Re: Crisis Nightmare Sun Feb 17, 2008 8:29 am | |
| - Sean Okotami wrote:
- Just to know, did Crisis ever met Aimi before?
I have no idea, you'd have to ask Aimi's creator about that | |
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