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dresete Helpless prey
Posts : 26 Join date : 2011-11-10 Age : 30 Location : Spain. Castle and lion
| Subject: new story Sun Apr 22, 2012 2:03 pm | |
| Hello, i will create a new story but i have not image of monster of felarya (Normal monster). if you can give some image of monster i can create it. | |
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hhhat09 Veteran knight
Posts : 317 Join date : 2012-02-26 Age : 31 Location : Somewhere that isn't the Shore, New Jersey.
| Subject: Re: new story Sun Apr 22, 2012 2:13 pm | |
| ...Monster? Like a naga or a kensha?
Also, the wiki is your best-est friend | |
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Anime-Junkie Loremaster
Posts : 2690 Join date : 2007-12-16 Age : 31 Location : The Country of Kangaroos and Criminal Scum
| Subject: Re: new story Sun Apr 22, 2012 2:25 pm | |
| As I said to ScoobyofDoo; posting a thread like this and providing no information isn't going to get you anywhere. People aren't going to do all the work for you, you've got to do some yourself. You have to provide information so people understand what kind of thing you're looking for. Otherwise the thread will just be people asking questions that you should have answered in the first post.
A 'normal monster' doesn't make me think of anything. You need to provide details. | |
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Archmage_Bael Mara's snack
Posts : 4158 Join date : 2009-05-05 Age : 36 Location : Shatterock Caldera
| Subject: Re: new story Sun Apr 22, 2012 2:48 pm | |
| I'm with AJ, a "normal monster" is pretty vague, especially in felarya. Now, chances are I wont be too against your idea anyway, so don't be afraid to post what you're thinking.
If it is something that's pretty flimsy, we'll try to help you refine it. | |
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Nyaha Eternal Optimist
Posts : 3845 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 31 Location : Canada. ^.^ Goooooo Snow!
| Subject: Re: new story Sun Apr 22, 2012 3:47 pm | |
| Perhaps he means something that is non-sentient and common in Felarya. There's lots of those that can be found in Felarya, but it mainly depends on what area you're writing in. All you have to do is go onto the wiki, look up the location your story is going to take place in, and see what kinds of fauna can be found there. ^.^ | |
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Archmage_Bael Mara's snack
Posts : 4158 Join date : 2009-05-05 Age : 36 Location : Shatterock Caldera
| Subject: Re: new story Sun Apr 22, 2012 5:58 pm | |
| or flora. some of those plants are pretty monstrous. | |
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dresete Helpless prey
Posts : 26 Join date : 2011-11-10 Age : 30 Location : Spain. Castle and lion
| Subject: reply1 Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:09 am | |
| But in the wiki have not image of normal monster but i can image the monster with the description. And sorry, my english is not good. | |
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dresete Helpless prey
Posts : 26 Join date : 2011-11-10 Age : 30 Location : Spain. Castle and lion
| Subject: reply2 Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:16 am | |
| i refer "normal monster" A monster that has not human traits. ej:(Lampi, mumansi, gluteux.) I think that if my story have more monster it posible that i can "enter my character in the world of Felarya easily than i have not image." or maybe can i create my monster? | |
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dresete Helpless prey
Posts : 26 Join date : 2011-11-10 Age : 30 Location : Spain. Castle and lion
| Subject: reply3 Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:24 am | |
| I am going speak of my story: Some day in the night a naga was caring her baby. An strange human had attacked her and she died. the following day Desna ( My character.) found the baby. In principle he was frightened but he decided care of baby and began looking for a new mother. | |
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Anime-Junkie Loremaster
Posts : 2690 Join date : 2007-12-16 Age : 31 Location : The Country of Kangaroos and Criminal Scum
| Subject: Re: new story Mon Apr 23, 2012 6:15 am | |
| If you're looking for wild animals, monstrous or not, then check the Fauna section of the Felarya wiki. It contains quite a few dangerous creatures.
In future please take note of the "edit" button on your posts. Please edit your last post instead of immediately posting another one.
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hhhat09 Veteran knight
Posts : 317 Join date : 2012-02-26 Age : 31 Location : Somewhere that isn't the Shore, New Jersey.
| Subject: Re: new story Mon Apr 23, 2012 12:00 pm | |
| Imagination and reading, you dont need pictures man | |
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dresete Helpless prey
Posts : 26 Join date : 2011-11-10 Age : 30 Location : Spain. Castle and lion
| Subject: reply: Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:51 pm | |
| Ok, i can draw the monster. thanks, i can begin the story. I am going to upload the drawing when i can. i had afraid that i could miss drawing a wrong monster. | |
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dresete Helpless prey
Posts : 26 Join date : 2011-11-10 Age : 30 Location : Spain. Castle and lion
| Subject: begin: Wed May 23, 2012 8:13 am | |
| http://desecot23.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4ytjgj I begin the story. It is not well draw although i hope that you like this. | |
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parameciumkid Hero
Posts : 1201 Join date : 2011-11-21 Location : SPAAAAAACE
| Subject: Re: new story Wed May 23, 2012 3:31 pm | |
| Oh I see! You're starting a manga! I recommend you get an editor, since by your own admission you don't speak English well. Also look into having the words typed, by yourself or by your editor, as unless you have really neat handwriting (which you don't) it'll make it much less difficult to read. The concept of a human finding a baby naga and taking care of it is a pretty interesting one, so keep trying your best and I'm sure your manga will succeed! | |
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dresete Helpless prey
Posts : 26 Join date : 2011-11-10 Age : 30 Location : Spain. Castle and lion
| Subject: editor? Mon May 28, 2012 6:43 am | |
| It is a editor to improve my draw or a person that it license my draw? | |
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Ilceren Moderator
Posts : 677 Join date : 2012-05-10 Age : 34 Location : Spain
| Subject: Re: new story Mon May 28, 2012 7:05 am | |
| An editor is a person that corrects what you write. That is, points out spelling and grammar errors. Among other things. | |
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dresete Helpless prey
Posts : 26 Join date : 2011-11-10 Age : 30 Location : Spain. Castle and lion
| Subject: thanks Mon May 28, 2012 11:58 am | |
| Thank you, i dont know how to activate the amender though i can use the dictionary. I continue my maga in 5-12 parts. | |
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