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Merku
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PostSubject: Merku's Stories.   Merku's Stories. Icon_minitimeTue Jun 05, 2012 9:54 pm

Okay as a note each story will be in it's own spoiler to condense this a little and keep things nice and tidy.
Please leave comments, opinions, rants and raves. I will add new stories on an "Meh" Basis. If your a fan thank you. If not or you don't like my works.. Just be polite about your complaints.

The Enchanted Journal of Jarger'rakii.
Chapter 1: The Warlock's apprentice.
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Chapter 2: Journey's preparation and a little bribery.

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Last edited by Merku on Tue Sep 11, 2012 6:10 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Added a new chapter.)
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PostSubject: Re: Merku's Stories.   Merku's Stories. Icon_minitimeWed Jun 27, 2012 4:18 am

well I think it's starting nicely ^^ I'm curious to see what they are doing in Negav and what is their aim here. My main remark is the tense you are using is a little odd I think ? the fact you are using "would"
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