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PostSubject: Kral'koa Prison   Kral'koa Prison Icon_minitimeTue Aug 11, 2015 11:23 am

Kral'koa Prison is an strange new addition to the jungle of Felarya. First off it was built overnight into the top of a rock formation on the Border of The Green Hell and the Imorteith Tundra. Despite the noise that attracted all the predators in the area none of Felarya's denizens actually managed to get a glance of the Prison before it's construction was finished.

Though the bulk of the Prison is embedded into the rock formation three floors are actually above it, made out of an unknown metal alloy that has proved to be too strong for Felarya's Mightiest of Giants to dent or scratch. There are countless embedded Artillery and gun turrets around the Prison in addition to spot lights and alarms. The Guards strangely enough completely cleared the treeline in all directions of the Prison by 300 yards in Distance leaving an artificial field that any escapees would be highly visible to either the Prison's snipers or the voracious predators of Felarya.

Predators have attacked the Prison itself unsuccessfully, not one Guard has become victim to Felarya's predators. The Guards are creatures that call themselves "Nekirii." The Prisoners do include Humans and various other species of Human sized convicts that are completely alien to Felarya.

Jor'kinmu the Warden of the prison actually made it an more interesting landmark to the local giant predators. Via use of Communication Drones, machines meant to communicate in hostile territory without risking the life of an person spoke to various sentient giant predators. "Kral'koa Prison contains the worst of the Worst. Giant predators if you hear our Sierens come towards the Prison look around the Lights. Any escapee you find is your meal. Nobody escapes Kral'koa alive."

The Warden as the Local Predators refer to her is considered an friend of sorts due to the meals the escape attempts bring in. The Predators have seen the Warden through the Armored glass of her Office. And Heard her voice though the Communication drones that occasionally fly out from the Prison.

It seems the Nekirii's interest in Felerya has nothing to do with the Magic or hidden treasure or artifacts. Beings that spoke with the Warden got this for rational. "Your World in this Dimension is extremely dangerous and deadly. That's why sought it out. We came here because the Local Predators make it an ideal location for our Prison Facility. Our Inmates include serial killers, terrorists, War Criminals, Space Pirates and worse.  If any of them get out. I don't care if it's by a bullet or the stomach of some Hungry Giant. I want any and all escapees dead one way or another."
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PostSubject: Re: Kral'koa Prison   Kral'koa Prison Icon_minitimeTue Aug 11, 2015 12:17 pm

My only concern is what could actually be done with this idea. It seems kind of like an excuse for disposable, consequence-free vore. By making all of the potential victims the absolute worst of the worst there is no reason to actually root for them, or to give their potential deaths any real weight.

Also, in terms of building a prison (assuming they could put it anywhere via inter-dimensional travel) why not just stick it on, like, an airless, molten moon or something? The location and the way the Warden has interacted with the local preds seems like it was done to make a point.

A much more interesting way to handle this idea would be if those incarcerated within the prison were not actually criminals. Rather, they would be political dissidents, POW's, undesirable ethnic/religious groups, and so on. People who haven't actually done anything wrong but are being shunted off to a death-world prison by a repressive regime/occupying force. This would actually give us a reason to, well, care about this idea at all, and to root for the escapees. Without a reason to care it's just... kind of a thing where people who arguably deserve to die get eaten every now and then. Pretty boring all around.
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PostSubject: Re: Kral'koa Prison   Kral'koa Prison Icon_minitimeTue Aug 11, 2015 12:28 pm

Well there was a reason. More personal since your right. Seems odd to just choose Felarya. The Nekirii originated from a planet called Sal'tori. Which was similar to Felarya. The reason for the choice of Felarya was likely because it to the Nekirii seems like a tamer version of Sal'tori.

The Prison is the Worst of the Worst in terms of who's supposed to contained within. However that said that doesn't mean all of them are really guilty and there have been zero travesties of Justice.

There are tons of issues such as high tensions, the Fact that the Warden is actually deliberately encouraging the local predators to lurk close to the prison.

It is a Military Prison. And well the occasional shawshank redemption type cons do arrive. Note is extremely difficult to escape Kral'koa Prison not impossible.
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