Siva stories (origins and others)

Ravana3k wrote:

Zoekin wrote:

Thank you very much for all of the kind comments on the "Siva Origins" stories! I'm very pleased that so many people like them!

I promise to keep trying my best!

I think you'll do this

you guys really cheer me up. Let's rock!!!

Zoekin wrote:

Thank you very much for all of the kind comments on the "Siva Origins" stories! I'm very pleased that so many people like them!

I promise to keep trying my best!

Ok but don't push yourself so har

I'll be careful!

Part three of "Siva's Origin" has been posted (as many of you already know) and it was a LOT of fun to work on!
Cassandra is really growing on me! I can't wait to see her get what's coming to her! It's bound to be good! Nksrocks has some terrific ideas!

I really like it when people write in and tell me they just want to smack Cassandra one in the kisser! Then I know I've reached my goal of portraying her as a true villian!

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I really like it when people write in and tell me they just want to smack Cassandra one in the kisser! Then I know I've reached my goal of portraying her as a true villian!

If memory serves, it was less kisser-smacking than general spanking, and one cactus-raping.

But yeah, you're doing right well with it. I can't wait to see the rest.

GREGOLE wrote:

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I really like it when people write in and tell me they just want to smack Cassandra one in the kisser! Then I know I've reached my goal of portraying her as a true villian!

If memory serves, it was less kisser-smacking than general spanking, and one cactus-raping.

But yeah, you're doing right well with it. I can't wait to see the rest.

LOL the mighty cactus-raping...

The next outline will be up after christmas, and even a little explanation to what happened to Thirteen-Azrah and Cassandra in the 300 years of time gap in the story.

Cassandra's character has grown really good into the wise hands of Zoekin Too bad we won't see her for a while... (at least in my story)

Oh Ho!

I'd love for Cassandra to appear in one of my stories!
(smiles at the possibilities!)

Zoekin wrote:

Oh Ho!

I'd love for Cassandra to appear in one of my stories!
(smiles at the possibilities!)

Oh, but you can! Just wait until I will post that "time gap story" and then... she's all yours

nksrocks wrote:

Zoekin wrote:

Oh Ho!

I'd love for Cassandra to appear in one of my stories!
(smiles at the possibilities!)

Oh, but you can! Just wait until I will post that "time gap story" and then... she's all yours

Sweet!
*looks at Cassandra suggestively*
Cassandra-"Don't even think about it monkey boy!"

The "time gap filler" story is complete!

Now you will know where the hell went Azrah and Cassandra for 300 years...

Enjoy, and don't forget to tell me what you guys think about it!

It's on my DeviantArt journal http://nksrocks.deviantart.com/journal/16121193/#comments

Great stuff!
Now I know what happened to those two!
Cassandra deserves a REAL kick to the arse!

Zoekin wrote:

Great stuff!
Now I know what happened to those two!
Cassandra deserves a REAL kick to the arse!

Well, being hunted by GODS ain't enough?

Oh, yeah, she still has to recieve that "cactus rape", isn't it?

Well, I feel sorry for poor Siva! Trapped underground for hundreds to years! Eating who knows what. Poor little naga!

I can't wait for the Gods to catch up with Cassandra! I hope they make her mortal! (What worse fate is there for a DEATH?)

Katrika-"Bet GREGOLE can think of a few!"

Zoekin wrote:

Well, I feel sorry for poor Siva! Trapped underground for hundreds to years! Eating who knows what. Poor little naga!

I can't wait for the Gods to catch up with Cassandra! I hope they make her mortal! (What worse fate is there for a DEATH?)

Katrika-"Bet GREGOLE can think of a few!"

I'm sorry too, it's alwais hard when you gotta create parts in the story where your characters -suffers like hell- but this for sure makes them grow stronger (or in Siva's case... messes up the mind )

Well for Cassandra's fate... I'm open to suggestions. By the way, now that her duty into the story is done for now, you can use her!

Azrah (I mean, the actual Azrah): Gregole, give us the worst punishment you can imagine!

The fourth capter's outline... finally I posted it to Zoekin! It will take a while (it's really intense) dont miss it, guys!

GREAT GREAT GREAT!

I absolutely loved how the last chapter came out, thanx Zoekin!!!
here it is! !http://zoekin.deviantart.com/art/The-descent-of-Quetzal-74478905

"The descent of Quetzal" puts an end to the origins part (and to the no-vore part of the story...), so now I will work more on the character evolution and their personality/es with some bio! This means that the characters shown until now are free to do even some other adventures, for there are two years of time gap separating them for the present timeline!

So we have: Azrah and Cassandra still fleeing through dimensions, alwais aware to not be discovered by the gods, Quetzal that decides to take care of Siva to understand what has been done to her, and Siva moving her first "steps" into the world of Felarya, learning to hunt on the mountains and in the forests below.

If there's something you guys want to know about the last or the previous chapters, just ask!


Stay tuned for more!


By the way, if someone is in the mood to post down a comment --- just even to say if he liked it, it wouldn't suck. Really =_= I feel like a stupid to update this thread and barely see a response lately

Whoa.

Vore ahoy, captain! I smell very nice art ahead.

That was really a great chapter !

The idea of playing with the different voices of Siva while she remains unseen was very nice
An great vore scene as well ! Glad to see Siva eating healthy again XD

Karbo wrote:

That was really a great chapter !

The idea of playing with the different voices of Siva while she remains unseen was very nice
An great vore scene as well ! Glad to see Siva eating healthy again XD

Yeah, I wanted to play a little with her personalities, since I've never shown them properly yet ^_^
As for the healty eating... Well, 21 years after her sealing she has actually vored some adventurers... sad story =_=
It's a spin-off chapter I'm planning to write on my own, but I need a little time.

I want to explain even where has wandered Azrah, and tell the very reason that will bring him on Felarya...

Pendragon wrote:

Whoa.

Vore ahoy, captain! I smell very nice art ahead.

You bet!

But damn... it's a month I've done it, and still I lack the motivation to properly colour it!

I'm very glad that you are happy with this chapter! I really enjoyed writing it-especially the little hunt I got to take Quetzal on! That was fun!

I still can't believe that humans insist on camping in Felarya! No wonder Quetzal was exasperated!

At least Siva got to have a nice meal!