!!! Siva stories !!!

SIVA STORIES is back

Do you guys remember anything about this story? Something involving Demi-goddesses, shinigamis, a bloodyvore naga, other dimensions...

here's the link to the newest chapter, the very prequel to the Felaryan story: http://zombynx.deviantart.com/art/back-to-Almeshia-115941442

This is the first chapter wrote down directly by me, hope you like it!

Warp above you have returned!

Welcome back Nks.

Thank you ^^

I'm back and ready to create!

By the way, I'll post here every detail or explanation drawing about the story so stay tuned ^^

Illustration about latest chapter: "back to Almeshia"




Info about Deaths:

-- The scythes --

This particular artifact, designed only for godly beings (or those who share their power) isn't very powerful or destructive.
It's given to all the Deaths from 4th grade up, and takes the shape desired from the user. Usually at 1st grade scythes are useless and never been used, for the 1st grade Death can create its own spiritual weapon at this level.

The scythe's only powers are to: open portals / gather and collect defeated souls / conduce easily spiritual or godly energy / serves as a catalyst like the wand or baton for a sorcerer.
So: all other effects or magic used through it depend only by the skills of the user.

-- Deaths home --

"Death" is an organization created by superior Gods in order to intervene in every case of special duty involving the soul realm and to keep the balance and equity in the whole area of influence. They escort personally the revenant souls to the respective afterlives if these refuse their fate, defeat spiritual creatures harmful for living species and basically do all the "dirty work" for the Gods.
Their HQ is the Kinassiah, a floating continent wandering in a dimensional rift. The continent is sliced in four sections, one for every direction (north, south, west, east) and is kept together by bridges and connected to the Sapphire Hall, in the middle. From the Sapphire Hall departs the "stairway to heaven" which brings to a huge crystalline structure of the form of a gigantic torus, home of the superior Gods.

-- Death grades, hierarchy --

6th - acolyte: this level is reserved for the weakest of the demi-gods (like, 70%+ mortal blood) or simple spirits exceptionally blessed by superior gods and allowed to live in the Kinassiah. Never used in battle nor for the gathering or souls, usually the commoners of the Kinassiah are all of 6th level. They work as servants or as lower assistants for superior grades.
This category is the more discriminated and rarely one of these is capable of studying magic or spirit control skills so they almost never climb the grades. They are not allowed to change sector of the Kinassiah or enter the Sapphire Hall.

5th - citizen: level reserved to demi-godlings (70% to 40% mortal blood) and the priests working directly under the supervision of Gods. These Demi-Godlings and priests usually gather all the information needed and direct from distance the work of Deaths.

4th - searcher: first, low, level of Deaths, used for the simple searching, gathering and escorting of souls.

3rd - combatant: can command troops of searchers for large operations of cleansing (like Cassandra on Almeshia). They're not too powerful but can handle a wide variety of spells. Assigned to the elimination of lesser spiritual beasts and revenants.

2nd - hunter: used for specific combat missions and act as a support for the 1st grade. Usually teams of 2nd grades are sent to fight the most dangerous spiritual beasts.

1st - master: masters can handle the most dangerous and deadly missions involving the fight to demons, rebel angels and lesser Gods that try to modify, or destroy, the course of souls. Or attack, and harm superior Gods. Usually master level Deaths don't live on the Kinassiah and are spreaded through the multiverse ready to take action.

0 - Superior Gods: pure Demi-Godlings (just 20%- mortal blood, like Quetzal) and Ancient Gods are belonging to this category, creators of the Death organization under the supervision of Thunder God "Tykos" Their words are law to the lower grades. Many of them treat badly commoners and Deaths alike, which bringed to the actual situation.

After the rebellious act of Cassandra, (1st grade) Azrah (2nd grade going for 1st), and many other 2nd grade Deaths, the social situation of the Kinassiah has worsened now, and all Deaths, from the lowest grade up, who show even a little too much indipendence or try to do anything that is out of their duty are severely punished, many tortured or even eliminated by the, now enslaved, agents from the first two grades.

More about the Kinassiah


The ground of the Kinassiah is filled with an intricate web of temples dedicated to most of the Gods existing, the most ancient ones (the ones at bottom, usually) are filled with treasures and, obviously, terrible traps and guardians.
Kinassiahn authorized adventurers and Deaths from 4th grade up can freely get access to the temple web, by the four towers, one for every island. Deaths usually train themselves here, and lots of those who overestimated themselves and tried the lower levels have been declared missing or annihilated.

The temples are naturally born from the ground as a religion rises up. At first there's just a little sanctuary on the surface, then, gradually, this one sinks and grows in the shape of an underground tower.
The more that religion grows, the more the temple gets complicated, with statues, relics and treasures.

The time they take to reach the bottom and be expelled in outer dimensions usually is the exact lifespan of that particular cult.
Kinassiah, so, serves even as "dungeon creator".

Ho shit you're alive!? I thought you had died or vanished or got eaten or something, well welcome back and I gotta check those storys out sometime! ^^

Moonlight-pendent wrote:

Ho shit you're alive!? I thought you had died or vanished or got eaten or something, well welcome back and I gotta check those storys out sometime! ^^

I'm quite alive thx ^^

Be pleased to! After all, it's there to be readed, isn't it?

Into next chapter will start finally the Felaryan part of the story with all the characters!

nksrocks wrote:

Moonlight-pendent wrote:

Ho shit you're alive!? I thought you had died or vanished or got eaten or something, well welcome back and I gotta check those storys out sometime! ^^

I'm quite alive thx ^^

Be pleased to! After all, it's there to be readed, isn't it?

Into next chapter will start finally the Felaryan part of the story with all the characters!

Yays! I love Siva and I've missed her!... I gotta draw her sometime, I'll add that to my huge ass list of shit I gotta do soon ^^

Moonlight-pendent wrote:

nksrocks wrote:

Moonlight-pendent wrote:

Ho shit you're alive!? I thought you had died or vanished or got eaten or something, well welcome back and I gotta check those storys out sometime! ^^

I'm quite alive thx ^^

Be pleased to! After all, it's there to be readed, isn't it?

Into next chapter will start finally the Felaryan part of the story with all the characters!

Yays! I love Siva and I've missed her!... I gotta draw her sometime, I'll add that to my huge ass list of shit I gotta do soon ^^

Be pleased to ^_^ take it easy and finish the stuff you must do first, I can wait
oh, yeah, doesn't need to be bloody vore... I've finally understood once for all that I was overdoing a little XD But hell. That was quite original.

Useful stuff to know about Siva's actual condition: (Zoekin take a look, it's useful)

Since she has been set free from Quetzal (and the personality known as "Beast" was defeated) The original Siva is in charge and controls normally her body.
The whispers of "Ripper" inside her mind alwais try to break this feeble stability. If original Siva loses the "mental fight" against Ripper this one takes control of Siva's body. When she falls in this condition, it's just a matter of time until "Beast" awakens again for a while. If this condition isn't stopped at all, and Beast's rage is free to grow according to the context, there could be even a deeper state of mind, causing another mutation into Siva.

basically her mind is sliced in three, distinct, parts

MIND SURFACE
--- original Siva: this one is usually the one in charge. Doesn't have any knowledge about Felarya, maybe, just feeble memories from when she still were a Fire Naga. She hasn't any kind of mutation in this state. It's a normal (just a little more air-headed and childish) giant Naga.
She remembers almost everything about the happenings on Almeshia, even if so much time has passed. (unluckily, has almost forgot about Azrah)

EDGE OF THE ABYSS
--- Ripper: A tricky, naturally evil personality born in the years of sealing in the cave. Quite unstable, but this condition could be turned to advantage, for she has, obviously, the same little knowledge of "original Siva". Think of a good way to trick her and she could be by your side.
Though, hunting or fighting (or witnessing violent events) without anyone to intervene in the surroundings, could cause a lethal lack of control, leaving the Beast in charge. Though, every time Siva becomes Ripper, it's not sure that she'll become Beast automatically. Usually she'll be back to "original Siva" after a little time.
Ripper's mutation level is low, the hands of Siva turn into sharp claws.

ABYSS
--- Beast: A monster guided just by feral instinct, when it's in control, every other personality is sent to unconsciousness until the end of this state. Maybe, they could be awakened just with a direct act into Siva's soul.
The defeating or of the physical body normally stops the worsening of this state, bringing her back to normal.
Without any control, this beast attacks everything in sight, friend or foe alike. In this condition, minute by minute the evoked power potential grows more and more in her body (the powers absorbed by Azrah to become a Death came from here)
Beast mutation level involves the full body, Siva's face is turned into a feral mask, the teeth become shark-like and grow almost from ear to ear, directly on the hardened skin. Her muscles are forced to the limit and maybe even change biological composition.
Beast doesn't know any spell or magic but the amount of spirit and magic energy flowing from her in the advanced state act like an aura of powerful radiations, burning everything on its path.

ANIMAE
When even the condition of "Beast" reaches the limit because of the overload of spiritual and magic energy something terrible is evoked into Siva's body. But there is no information about this yet.



Any questions? Any doubts?

Have fun --- a little special comic about the next chapter XDDD

Hehe great designing here ! ^_^

And this last little comic is just priceless !

Important post:

...Seems like Zoekin gave up and has made an important choice, change account on DA and stop writing... let's hope just for a while.
I don't know the real reasons and actually, I don't want to be invasive and force him to tell me why, or try to convince him to get back... it's his choice and I shall respect it.

I truly can't understand depression or such worries because of my way to live, and think.
We can choose to feel bad or not after all. About everything. It's a matter of self-control amount.

Anyway. This is the stories thread category, so let's talk about that.

This event will slow down Siva Stories a lot...
Ha. To think I just came back and started again to work on it... bad timing, I guess

So I ask the novelists of the community to give a hand, or support the story. I can't write properly a novel, it's a matter of language knowledge. I lack it. I mean, look at the special chapters wrote down by myself. They suck XD
I damn love my characters, Siva, Quetzal, Azrah, Cassandra... I just want to share their stories with you guys and I need help to do that the right way.

SO: here's the favor I'm asking to you people.
If there's someone out there with enough willpower and a little spare time to help, let me know.
Don't worry, this is an eeeasy and light work, like for Zoekin, I'll send a detailed outline "chassis" about the story next chapters. You'll have just to fill up a bit and there is even enough free space for personal stuff. I've never pretended things to get written the way I want to, and never complained about personal add-ons in the stories, so there's even a lot of freedom for your creative brains.
I mean, I'm not searching for just a simple re-writer... I'm in search of someone to SHARE the stories with, and simply create together.

About any doubts or questions about the outline, there's this forum or DA
Don't have any fear to ask something, even to make a change on the outline and so, the whole storyline. I'm here to discuss ^^
Plus, it would be a real SHAME to see the characters slowly fade away again if this stillness condition will get too annoying.

I hope to get some positive response

The chosen writer shall get free artwork requests from my new DA account (link below).

Hmm. I'm not sure the level of writing you'd want...I'm not the best. (You can look at My Stories Thread for a quality check). I'd be willing at least to do editing and be an idea bouncer.

Jætte_Troll wrote:

Hmm. I'm not sure the level of writing you'd want...I'm not the best. (You can look at My Stories Thread for a quality check). I'd be willing at least to do editing and be an idea bouncer.

In first, thanx for answering

It seems that Zoekin has the intention to finish the next chapter as promised, so there's no need for another writer yet ^_^' thanx for showing up anyway

----EDIT----

Zoekin is actually working on the next part, I'm horribly waiting to know if my outline was clear enough (I've sent him a mess, not a message XD)

Prepare for epic.

It's posted!

6th chapter of Siva Stories: PANDEMONIUM

http://zoekin.deviantart.com/art/Pandemonium-119628567

Epic fight, and lots of copyright infrangement for Azrah, Siva and Quetzal!

i think that this story was fantastic cant wait for next.

bigman27622 wrote:

i think that this story was fantastic cant wait for next.

I'm working on it. I just have to decide if to make a "pause chapter" between a mess and the other... so people could see even the other sides of my characters (no, they don't fight --- and vore all the time, lol)

Uh, about your signature... that's real

Siva's worsening condition (necessary to fully understand the next chapters)

I quote Siva's mental words:
"It's happening again, alwais when I sleep,
Right after crossing the line
I dream to fall, for a time that seems eternal.
Then I'm there.
Where my soul is.
Where I face the others."

Siva's soul shrine

Siva would never admit she has direct contact and interacts with her others sides, Ripper and Beast here, it's her secret, and even if willing, Ripper prevents her to talk about it interfering in her mind.
It happens often when she sleeps, her primary personality dives deep inside to a strange place, with the appearance of an immense, dark cave, with walls infected by organic matter. Here and there, eyes and fangs pop up from the living flesh randomly.
The only source of light is this humongous statue on an elevated disc platform, which face resembles Sivas appearance. The statue, symbol of her soul, is partially covered by the flesh, indicating the worsening condition of her mind state and indicating the overwhelming will of "Beast"

Here is a picture of how the shrine should look like



Originally Ripper didn't exist. In the beginning, from Almeshian facts on, there were just Siva and Beast, there was nothing to be referred as Ripper.
Ripper, as said, was "born" during the years of sealing in the Ascarlin caves.
Actually, he/she's the succeeded will of beast to be self-conscious, so he stole Siva's knowledge and communication capability and the "Ripper" personality was created. Slowly the overthrow process against the entity "Original Siva" is growing, letting her fall every time easily into the berserk state so common when "Beast" is in charge.

(self-made question)
Then, how did she resist for so long into the cave, without passing the line and letting Beast take control?

It was because of Cassandra's godly seal. Actually, the "minion" meant in the third chapter, since the seal it's governed and kept functioning by a spiritual entity. Though that girl is really a bitch, unaware of Siva's real condition has made a good thing that granted Siva's survival, for she has placed a seal that limited Siva's potential. Every time she became beast, and tried to bring down the cave walls to get out, the seal was sending a blast of energy inside, where Siva was. As already explained, if phisically knocked down in the first minutes of berserk state, Beast personality is momentarily annihilated and Siva's body falls unconscious.
So Quetzal, breaking the seal, has unleashed this real peril around Felarya.

Kinassiahn deities, more clarifications

Hah-hem.
Since I don't want to look like one of those who create just uber-powerful stuff (that wasn't my intention) I decided to clarify a little the condition of the Gods I refer of in Siva stories...

Here is what was in my mind originally, tell me what do you think guys. There's even some bonus info about their magic.

Kinassiahn deities, like the pure demi-godling Quetzal, her father, Dios Tykos, and the demi-godlings affiliated to "Death" organization, are basicly not that powerful. Compared to Felaryan standards (the guardians) they're surely ridiculous. Talking about the pure demi-godlings, could be compared to A level mages, with the only difference that they have direct connection with the power of nature or source of magic they use, so they don't need to use any elemental evocation formula nor channel the elemental powers. They don't "cast" the spells, they "are" the spells.
The standard for the gods of the universe/dimension that originated them was kinda low because a lack of spiritual energy, caused by its uniformed distension in all the upsaid universe, without particular concentrations.
Pure Kinassiahn gods are just a little different, because they mastered the art of immortality, but even so, with a weakpoint: the ban from existence could dismember them into the outstanding chaotic currents outside of the multiverse (that's what Azrah tried to do in "Deaths: Ascent and Fall" special chapter, but due to his lack of potential, he epicly failed, starting the persecution of Deaths). A real completed God from another, more spiritually charged, universe system, could keep itself alive, though he couldn't come back with his own strenght from that condition.

It' s beautiful ! I think you are improving in every single aspects of drawing
And the idea is definitely interesting ^_^

Karbo wrote:

It' s beautiful ! I think you are improving in every single aspects of drawing
And the idea is definitely interesting ^_^

Thank you
I'm still at mid-way to a good, professional level, ( expecially the speed ^^; ) but I surely noticed and actually enjoyed this "level up" of my drawing skills, now the next goal are well-made backgrounds... it will be a damn hard battle, but hell, I cannot retreat this time

What one of the ideas exactly? Siva's soul shrine or the update info about Kinassiahn Gods / Deaths / Demi-Godlings?

Re-post of the Quetzal Bio I've posted just earlier on DeviantArt.

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°°ooOO++ QUETZAL BIO ++OOoo°°

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Complete Name: Quetzal Tykos (Manniskans)
Race: Kinassiahn storm demi-god
Element: thunder
Origin / Birthplace: parallel dimension 423, planet "Elevia". Born from a human woman (Renee Manniskans)
Height: 80"
Age: 1521 human years
Hair: short, light blonde
Eyes: azure.
Tail/frontal scales: Grass green tail, pale yellow scales
Likes: Siva (as a little sister in need of her protection), Vore human beings (doesn't like the taste and sensation given by nekos or other races), her element.
Dislikes / Hates: Cassandra, Azrah (before knowing the real events that happened to him from Almeshia to Kinassiah), unneeded bad acts, Beast (the source of Siva's mental problems), vulgarity.
BWH: in her old gone human form, 87-65-92. Same in Naga form, obviously proportioned
Living on: after discovering her divine origin, she lived mostly on Kinassiah with her godly father, Dios Tykos. She travelled on lots of planets and different dimensions. Now she established herself on Felarya, on Ascarlin mountains peaks, with Siva.

+++STORY+++

Past: from 1521 human years ago to (+ - ) 800 years ago

- Quetzal was born from the union of the God "Dios Tykos" and a human woman named "Renee Manniskans" on a far away medium-level fantasy based world, on a little village near to the sea. obviously, this planet was one of those under the influence of the Kinassiah. Her first years were peaceful, even though she didn't knew her father, but she already knew naturally that she was kinda different from the others. Countless times she gave proof of her innate magic powers, originally during the night when she was still a baby, little thundering light spheres (alike globular lightnings) floated around her bed. Quetzal, in her human life, was a heartful and cute girl, a trustful person and a fierce hater of evil acts.
Her mother, a poor shop owner, when Quetzal reached the age of 10, has sent (actually, selled her to keep on feet her activity) to the nearest magic academy, where Quetzal has lived all her remaining time as a human being, studying and applying every thunder magic formula known on that place. That time, she noticed that she was able to cast many of those spells even without speaking, or thinking,and without almost consumption of her magic potential... but kept it smartly secret, to not show herself even more different than how she was.
At the age of 17 years old, a huge war menaced to burn down all the nation, elvish barbaric hordes (on this planet - elves were the naturally violent race, alike orcs in many other worlds) were getting closer every day, burning the villages, raping, killing and leaving just ashes behind.
Even the students from the magic academy were mobilitated, and during the violent battle, seeing every of her friends fall, slayed by the arrows and axes of elves, the poor Quetzal, until that moment refusing every kind of violence even though her was an offensive element, had the worst emotional breakdown of her life.
This event caused her to unleash immediately every still of thunder magic sealed into her godly soul (during this exceptional condition, the amount of energy unleashed was like the cast of a hundred "Tempesta" spells, burning everything around her in a gigantic electric sphere 1 km-wide)
The sudden awakening of her godly powers revealed even her true form, half-way phisical and ethereal. The one so well-known of a beautiful, winged giant Naga.
The shock erased istantly every memory from her (the awakening process was meant to do that from the beginning) and she started hearing the call of the Kinassiah and her father, who, noticed her awakening as a godling, opened a portal in the sky over the battlefield. Following the call, Quetzal ascended in the light of million sparkles and disappeared from Elevia planet forever.

- From there on, she lived as a carefree and gentle goddess, even if her father Tykos trained her to be the most powerful Kinassiahn storm entity. Seeing her as a failure as a deity of such violent element, stopped her training almost at 70% but kept her with him anyway, for he became really affectionate and caring about her.
She was given the chance to travel through dimensions from her 300th birthday (referred to the day of her ascension, so that makes actually 317 years and a half) and flied freely from a place to another, fulfilling her curiosity about every kind of thing into many places. The first time she came to Felarya, a little more than 1000 years ago, was to study the Nagas, beings with a body so similar to hers, and learn more about them. She became really close with a giant Naga called "Irya", a really strong who taught her how to use properly her body, accept the violent side of her powers, hunt, and made her take the habit to vore, even if she has not such problems like hunger due to her nature. She enjoyed quite the feeling of little beings going down her throat alive, just to be dismembered and digested by thundering strikes in her electrified stomach (actually, most of those where ancestors of Nergavians).
Irya died heroically 700 years ago in a great battle against a dridder tribe, more than 100 years after Quetzal was gone back on Kinassiah again, this time, ready to fulfill her duty as a deity and make her father proud of her.

Recent past: from (+ -) 800 years ago to her appearance in Siva stories

- Until the rebellion of Cassandra Quetzal worked under her father's guidance as a Storm Goddess.

- Quetzal faced the events of the overthrow plans of Cassandra and her attack at the gods in first line, with her father. She was into the battle that wiped away most of one of the cities of northern Kinassiah, against the Death organization betrayers (like Azrah and Cassandra) who lost the battle. After this event, Gods started a huge repression and a control plan against the mostly innocent and unaware other Deaths, that have been pratically enslaved and now work costantly controlled by the Kinassiahn authority, and are severely punished, many even banned from existence, at every minimal indipendent act.
Quetzal firmly tried to oppose this decision from the beginning, such fierce repression was unneeded and would have bringed just more anger for the Gods into Deaths, but her enraged father didn't hear her advices.

- Quetzal came back on Felarya, after so much time, to take a break from her exhausting "work" as a storm goddess in many planets under Kinassiahn influence, and percepted the godly seal casted by Cassandra to imprison Siva, on the peaks of Ascarlin mountains... and so another important, vital part of her life began.

nksrocks wrote:

Thank you
I'm still at mid-way to a good, professional level, ( expecially the speed ^^; ) but I surely noticed and actually enjoyed this "level up" of my drawing skills, now the next goal are well-made backgrounds... it will be a damn hard battle, but hell, I cannot retreat this time

I admit I am curious how did you improve this much ? ( if it's not indiscrete of course ! )
Through art studies ? A certain person you met ( sometimes this can do wonder ! ) through self-imposed training ?

In any way, I agree that you have largely a pofessionnal level in drawing/inking now !

so basically siva has a multiple personality disorder which is cause by 3 things stress, lonelyness and amnesia

Karbo wrote:

nksrocks wrote:

Thank you
I'm still at mid-way to a good, professional level, ( expecially the speed ^^; ) but I surely noticed and actually enjoyed this "level up" of my drawing skills, now the next goal are well-made backgrounds... it will be a damn hard battle, but hell, I cannot retreat this time

I admit I am curious how did you improve this much ? ( if it's not indiscrete of course ! )
Through art studies ? A certain person you met ( sometimes this can do wonder ! ) through self-imposed training ?

In any way, I agree that you have largely a pofessionnal level in drawing/inking now !

Thank you, and no, it's not an indiscrete question, it's not surely some kind of secret.
Before improving this much (when I've had te old account on DA) I was kinda forcing myself to draw, and do it kinda fast due to my lack of patience... plus, I was trying to draw in a manga-style that didn't suit me, which was implied a lot for the lack of quality in my previous works... then, simple documentation like the "how to draw manga" advanced editions, watching anime (strangely, the one that helped me more was Lucky Star, LOL, mostly to learn to draw things in a more simplified and cute way) and finding my natural style and better inspiration sources have helped me to reach this level. Obviously even some "self-imposed" training was implied, even if I was mostly training in hentai which helped a lot for anatomy...

For the reaching of the right mental-state to do all this, maybe freedom was the secret, the fact that I was free to draw everything, and, even if it seems bad to say, without being bound to any community, requests and stuff for an entire year

zelda31 wrote:

so basically siva has a multiple personality disorder which is cause by 3 things stress, lonelyness and amnesia

These can be more the causes of her berserk outbreaks (mostly stress, depression [would mean a weakening of Siva, that would retreat in the backwards of her mind, letting mostly Ripper in charge] and loneliness) and her other, small psychological problems (I'm gonna write the complete and updated bio in short time, after Azrah Bio. It will all be written there)

Actually she doesn't have any amnesia problems, she practically forgot about her previous life as a Fire Naga and about Azrah (I mention the PANDEMONIUM chapter happenings) just because, though quite shocking and well-imprinted, the memories were too far away, and part of the fault goes to the progressive mental destabilization from the birth of "Ripper".

The multiple personality thing took origin from the first chapter, when the "Beast" spiritual entity, or the link to it, was injected into Siva by Almeshian scientists. Truth be said, it's a forced artificial schizophrenia, maybe more like possession than a simple mental sanity problem.